Taqdeer ka khel.angini.update part 50.1&2pg 73 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
@zee.thanks for lovely comments..😊
so true the twins are so cute..there will be more cute scenes of anmol-twins..😊
glad you liked anmol-ragini scene..there is more to come ..keep reading..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ah OK so now my tipani which i am late in giving..read all parts so i will include all parts related reply..
first of all my salutes to u for creating a suspense,thrill and softness together ,way u have weaved the story is simply awesome , you developed the characters so beautifully
loved how anmol is shown as some one so balanced yet so emotionally deep person , he has been awed by Ragini and her simplicity but depth of Love Will come soon as connection of two souls is something which is hard to suppress or miss
Rahul is one inter sting guy,hope he is positive though, i don't want him to be negative, i want him to be sincere but lets see what u have in store for us
How Will this marriage happen,only time will tell, how life will go on ..but one thing is certain ,its captivating and awesome storyline really interesting
hated that mean spirited mom and daughter duo..hope they get tongue lashing by anmol in future.
once again commendable work and wonderful sketch and presentation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
@sami..thanks lots for these words of appreciation.it really means a lot..😊
"loved how anmol is shown as some one so balanced yet so emotionally deep person , he has been awed by Ragini and her simplicity but depth of Love Will come soon as connection of two souls is something which is hard to suppress or miss"..like your take on anmol's character..so truly said..👏
as for rahul.lets just say he is an intrigue right now..
has ragini's destiny really changed with rahul?????..
yes destiny will play a big role in her life..who is in her taqdeer lets see..
thanks for reading and comments..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
@shanti..thanks for the comments..😊
rahul interesting character but wat's onhis mind ..you never know..
anmol is the one who can read him like a book..
twins are anmol's jaan..some cute scenes between them later..they will be an integral part of the story too later..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Very nice part Saveeta
Somewhere two people meet I think Anmol and Ragini were destined to meet and they have met
Rahul Anmol knows him well and somehow not be trusted Its too hard to predict whats your next move in teh story but very enjioyabkle

I hope Rajan ji reads this and uses it for a show with Apurva and Parul !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter four.

Anmol's bedroom..

After a restless night, anmol slept late this morning..

Muskaan and misal were already in his room..both had to say so much to him..they stayed put there waiting for anmol to wake up..

After sometimes ,muskaan talking in a low voice to misal….papa still sleeping..

Misal..we will come later .chalo..

muskaan said no I must talk to papa.all this time anmol was awake smiling at their small talks..

anmol just peek at the two and suddenly says BOO startling them..they screamed and next both were hugging him and all laughter..anmol hugged both and all smile as they were his soothing factor..

Muskaan..papa mujhe ek nayi teddy chahiye..I want that big big teddy bear...you know the big white one with a scarf..i want that..

Anmol..sure my baby will get it for you..for this he gets a kiss on his cheek.

Aur misal tumhein kuch nahin chahiye.muskan all ready to talk for him..

Misal….mein bolunga.. anmol all smile as muskan always had this habit to take the lead to talk for him and misal will not agree to it..

I need new painting books and colors..misal interest has always been painting..

Ok done tonight when I come home you will get your gifts..both saying YAY and anmol tickled them and as both are sensitive to tickling they wanted to escape from anmol's hand …just then his mom's entered the room..

Anmol's mom …yeh dono yahan hein..

anmol…good morning mama..

Good morning son ..chalo tum dono breakfast karna hein aur tum logon ko kindergarten bhi jaana hein.. papa ko fresh ho jaane do..

Once they are gone anmol thought gets back to ragini and rahul..the hurt feeling was still there..

Anmol..kaash mein ragini ko ek baar phir se mil saktaa..he sighs and leave to take his shower..

Anmol's office…

Anmol got busy in office morning and getting some free time after lunch decides to get the kids gifts..

He entered the mall and start looking for the big teddy of muskaan.he had his back turned ,when suddenly he got this feeling that ragini is around.looking back he was so right of his dil ki awaaz as there was ragini looking beautiful ..she had that cute smile on her face so fascinated by all the beautiful sarees..looking at the price tag ,her smile faded away and anmol so wanted to go and bring it back.anmol did not budge from his place and he kept admiring ragini ..she again had a smile when she touched another beautiful saree and anmol to capture this moment click her pic from his cell..…

Ragini too felt something and next she was face to face with anmol..yes anmol could not wait but to be closer to her ...

Anmol..hi remember me I'm anmol..

Ragini..jee and her heart beat was getting more faster..anmol being around does have this effect on her..they had an eye lock and so oblivious to the world..so much was conveyed in that moment..its anmol who break the silence first..

Anmol…aap akheli hein yahan.

Ragini..nahin rahul bhi hein ..woh.

Anmol..aap kush ho rahul se.. he could not resist but had to ask it..

Ragini just looked at him perplexed and the look in his eyes sure disturbed her … she had no answer for him..

Anmol in his thoughts...mujhe aap se kitni baatein kaheni hein agar aap suna chahe toh..

Anmol..ragini mujhe aap se…

Too bad rahul was already there..rahul was a bit surprised seeing anmol with ragini..he just greeted anmol and asked ragini to lets go..

anmol found it curious as rahul was always all talks…watching ragini leaving his heart pain was back..

Anmol..ek baar peeche dekho ragini..he waited and nearly lost hope when ragini looked back at him..

anmol felt relieved and he had a smile on his face and he was back to his errands..

in the car…

Rahul..anmol tum se kya keheha raha tha..

Ragini..jee kuch nahin aap ke baare mein pooch raha tha..in her heart ragini so wanted to know wat anmol was going to tell her before rahul came..his voice so soft to her and she was lost in her thoughts of anmol.

Rahul..ragini..he had to repeat twice then ragini came back to her senses ..kahan ko gayee thi..

Anmol's office..

Working on a project, he kept the file away and was lost in ragini's thoughts.how she looked back to him..looking at his laptop screen there was ragini's smiling pic as his screensaver..touching her face he said kya aap ko bhi wohi hua hein ragini..anmol still had hope ..

Rahul's guest house..

In ragini's room rahul kept all the shopping bags and asked ragini to be ready as he has a surprise for her tonight at 8pm.

Ragini..surprise..kya..

Rahul..well a surprise should remain a surprise and I cant reveal it to you..

You will not forget it this I can tell you..so be ready i will be back in an hour..

Rahul leaving ragini was in two minds ..one she was happy rahul giving her a surprise but on the other side shewas feeling anxiety..closing her eyes the face she visualized was of anmol..opening her eyes she looked around..she sat on the bed asking herself.

yeh mujhe kya ho raha hein..kyun rahul nahin anmol mere dil mein hein..

Time passes by ragini got ready wearing a beautiful blue embroidered saree with matching jewelleries..

Her state of mind was really confusing and she felt so restless..

Rahul enters the room and said wow you looking great.ragini gave him a faint smile..

Rahul..so ready for big surprise.lets go…

walking down the stairs ragini saw people gathering in the hall..getting conscious of wat's happenning and why so many people invited..

Rahul…ok ladies and gentlemen this is ragini...

here come I introduce you to my friends..one face ragini was looking for was not there anmol…

ansh who was already there too was waiting for anmol as rahul –anmol are friends..

sareen mansion..

anmol only got time to drop his briefcase on the couch the two angels were already In his arms..

Muskaan…papa you brought my teddy..

Anmol..winking at ashi ,oops sorry baby papa forgot about it..

muskan pouting and crossing her hands ..oh no papa that's not done how you forgot me and my teddy..

aashi.anmol..misal..her dadi were finding it hard to control their laughter watching muskan..

The driver entered with the packets and the big teddy and anmol signals him to keep it on the other couch...

Anmol..sorry baby…I promise tomorrow I will buy it for you..

Muskan..its ok.but I'm not talking to you..you forgot me..

Anmol looking at muskan , I saw an angel like you , ragini who took my breath away..i cant forget her nor you my little cute angel..

Anmol's mom..stop teasing her now.

Anmol hugging muskan ,papa will never forget you and points his finger to her teddy on the other couch..she hugged anmol and kissed him and rushed to take her teddy..

This is for you misal..your books..color pencils..both say thanks and kissed anmol and got busy in their talks..

This is for my aashi..

Aashi…kya baat hein bhaiya aaj bahut kush ho aur mere liye gift bhi..

Yes my princess I'm very happy today..in his thoughts i met my love today..

Anmol's mom ok you all its time for dinner now..muskan-misal yeh wahan rako and come lets have dinner..both jee dadima and took their place on the dining table..all the family was having a good time relating about their day..sch….after dinner he went with both kids and as usual read them their fav stories..they fell asleep and anmol kissed them goodnight and giving them a last look went out quietly..

Aashi was still busy with her sch work on her laptop…anmol came in her room and has a talk with her..few mins later he walked to his room..sirf aap ki kaami hein ragini mere parivar ko pura karne ke liye. …he took a big sigh and went to get his shower..

After a few mins , ansh called anmol but could not get through him ..coming out of the shower he was whistling as he was in a good mood ..no doubt he met ragini today and he was much more in love with her..his cell rang and he picked it up ..

Ansh..where are you?why are you late?

Anmol..a bit confused ask ansh where to come..

Ansh..dont tell me you forgot…rahul 's party and he is with ragini ..he is saying about a surprise may be his engagement with her..

The cell just dropped from his hand and the little hope he had got shattered..

A drop of tear and all he could say why ragini?..

There ragini too was feeling uneasy she was not liking the atmosphere at all...there was a bad feeling in her heart..her eyes looked at the doorway for one person..anmol…

Is ragini instinct right?..wat will happen in the party?..

tvmylove thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
oh no..you cant stop this part like this.. Please bring the next part soon.
I could image the whole part.. Specialy anmol meeting ragini. Awww... You have written it well dii. And thous kids are so sweet.. Continue it soon di.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
nice part saveeta. please continue soon thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Beautiful Saveeta..👏

So many things happening.. Anmol wanting to meet Ragini and when he meets he is unable to speak to her. rahul planning to get engaged to ragini and she may not be ready for it as there are so many things running in her mind..

The cuties twins ..Aww Saveeta Apu being that Anmol Sareen and talking to thse cuites were excited to get their gifts..

Will Anmol reach in time and see whats happening at Rahul's place I am so excited
Each of your update is like a serial episode !!
Brillant !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome so rahul's intensions r honorable it seems but effect of that depth ...wow ..good suspense stil continues dear keep it up

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