Pyaar to hona hi tha- NEW FF- Part 40A- Pg 34!! - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please continue soon..
Can't wait !!!! :-))))
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amit really nice part cont soon
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Hello guys, here is Part 8. Sorry, its been a while since I posted the update but I was extremely busy with school. Hope you enjoy the update!

PART 8

It was 6 in the evening and everyone was busy getting ready for the party tonight in which Ragini and Anmol were participating. Kids were in Gunni's room as Gunni was getting them ready. Alekh went to check up on Sakshi in her room. He was surprised to see her not ready.

Alekh: Sakshi tum abhi tak tayar nahi ho?
Sakshi: Woh Alekh ji aap log chale jayiye; meri tabiyat bhi thodi theek nahi hai.
Alekh: Lekin Sakshi, tum akele kaise rahogi. Chalo main bhi rukta hoon.
Sakshi:Nahi nahi Alkeh ji, aap meri liye apna program mat cancel kijiye.
Alkeh: To phir kuch nai sunna mujhe, tum tayar ho jao aur hum sabh chalenge.

Sakshi nodded while Alekh went to check up on the kids. Ragini, on the other hand was getting ready in front of her dressing table. Draped on white sari, hair all parted towards right, exposing her back; Ragini was looking geogous, Anmol thought as he walked in the room. He was just left speechless; how can be she so perfect in every manner. His thoughts were abrupted by Ragini who snapped her fingers in front of him.

Ragini: Kahan kho gaye aap?
Anmol: Aap is saari main bahut achi lag rahi hain.
Ragini smiled and blushed; her smile made it obvious that she appreciated Anmol's comment.
Ragini:Waise aap bhi is suit main ache lag rahe hain.
Anmol: Well thank you, abh aapne bol diya to mujhe tasalli ho gayi. Abh humain chalna chahiye; mummy ji wahan wait kar rahi hongi.
Ragini: Jee aap bachon ko le aayiye main abhi aayi.

Anmol left the room whereas Ragini was putting remaining clothes away in the closet. She felt something as she was scruffling her saris around; sure enough it was a pendant wrapped in a paper. With lots of curiousity, she took out that paper and was more amazed to see a pendant falling out. Her eyes scanned the letter; each and every word which sure enough surprised her but more than that, she was feeling as if she has witnessed the best thing ever. It was Anmol who expressed his state of mind and poured all his emotions in this very letter. She refreshed her memory to the night of the karwachauth when Anmol was confessing his love but was interupted by Tammy. Unknowingly, a smile appeared on her face and she whole heartdly looked at the pendant with utmost respect; afterall it was a gift from Anmol. The man who provided a hope of ray in her dead life after Ranvir's death; someone who supported her in her every decision and most importantly, he fulfilled his responisibilties as a father to her little angels along with all other relationships that he was attached to because of her. He had given her other gifts before but this was special as it was accompanied by his letter. Without thinking much, she turned around to face the mirror while putting that pendant across her neck. It suited well with her white sari with silver emberoidery. She stared at her pendant and blushed seeing her's and Anmol's name together; AR. She thought why Anmol didn't approach her personally to give her this precious gift but then knowing him, he probably wanted to give her surprise. She decided to surprise him by wearing it to the party. It was now 8 pm and the dance competition had started; few couples performed and Malti and Vinu had also performed. Everyone was glad to see them perform but Ragini was getting nervous as they were to perform next. Anmol gazed at her with a smile knowing that she is getting nervous.

Announcer: Now, ladies and gentleman, last performance of the everning will being presented by Anmol and Ragini Rajvansh.

Everyone welcomed them to the dance floor by cheering them on. The dance floor was all dark except from a limelight only focusing the couple. Anmol was lost in her eyes as she never looked so beautiful before. His hands were around her waist and she was staring back at him with her hands on his shoulder. The music track began and they danced forgetting that everyone else is watching them. The white light shun on them reflecting a moonlight and they were completely enjoying the dance. Anmol suddenly noticed the pendant around her neck and his smile just widened and his eyes were glittering due to tears in his eyes. Ragini never saw him happy but she was glad that she was able to bring a smile to his face and she also accepted his gift with love.

Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain
(Anmol spun Ragini)

Tumhein dekhke yaad aai
wohi bishri kahani
Deewane ka kissa
Ya phir ek deewani

(Ragini gazing in his eyes)
Dono sang sang rehte har dum
Esha yeh mene suna hai
Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain
Ishq hua

(Ragini hugged him and this line reflected their situation in real life; ISHQ HUA)

EVERYONE APPLAUDED

They were announced the winners of this competition as they had great chemisrty; Vasu was happy to see them both happy. Gunni congratulated her chachu and chachi and everyone else also congratulated them. Later, everyone was having dinner and interacting with other people in the party. Ragini and Anmol were just standing in the corner; not uttering a word as they were little awkward after the dance. A waiter brought a drink for Anmol and he drank it as he was thirsty after the dance competition.

Anmol: Ragini, aap kuch lengi?

Ragini: Nahi main theek hoon.

Anmol was about to talk to her about the pendant but he was interrupted by a waiter.

Waiter: Sir, aapko koi milna chahta hai upar kamre main.

Anmol: Lekin kaun?

Waiter: Pata nahi sir, mujhe to sirf message mila aapko bataane ke liye.

Anmol: Jee aap chaliye main aata hoon.

Anmol wondered who it could be that wanted to meet him upstairs in the room.

Anmol: Ragini, aap jake bachon ke paas dekhiye unhone kuch khaaya yaan nahi tab tak main dekh kar aata hoon.

Ragini: Jee magar jaldi aayiga.

Anmol left smiling whereas Ragini joined everyone else on the table. She was feeding Tammy and Khushi. Vasu asked about Anmol and Ragini informed that he is gone to meet someone upstairs. Vinu and Malti were teasing Ragini about her dance with Anmol.

Anmol knocked on the room and after hearing no response, he opened the door. He scanned the room but he found no one inside till he looked behind himself. He was shocked to see what he was witnessing. It was Shivani who came out of the washroom dressed in a night suit. Suddenly Anmol felt a little dizzy and his head was hurting.

Shivani: Aakhir tum aa hi gaye mere pass

Anmol: Main yahan tumse milne nahi aaya, mujhe to bas message.....

Shivani: Maine hi voh message bhijwaya tha aur voh drink bhi. Aur koi chaara nahi tha mere paas, maine bahut koshish ki tumhe manaane ki lekin tum nahi maane.

Anmol: Shivani, main tumhare jaal main nahi fasne waala.

Shivani: Relax Anmol, aage aage dekho hota hai kya.

Shivani put her hand on his cheeks but Anmol grabbed her tightly and while struggling, he fell on the bed and Shivani was on top of him. Being drunk and dizzy, he couldn't do much but he saw something that shocked him to death. The door was open and it was...........Ragini who witnessed all this. Shivani had a smile on her face and passed a smirk to Anmol who was too shocked to react. Ragini stood there emotionless and tears rolled down her eyes.

STAY TUNED AND PLEASE COMMENT!

Edited by Amitoz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
so well written.😊
love the full romance of angini..at last ragini put the pendant and knows about anmol's feelings for her..
nice scene and so romantic both dancing and winning the competition..something we missed in the serial but can visualise the scene through this part you wrote...
too bad their happiness did not last long as shivani played her dirty tricks again.
she succeded as anmol not in his sense due the drink and ragini witnessing all this..
a shock for both and which will lead to some emotional trauma for both..
the suspense is killing.waiting for next part..
good job...👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW Amit fantastic Yaar please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting part Amitroz,
I liked the dance part and Anmol and ragini gazingat each other
So sweet
And now Shivani coming to mess up their chances of being together
ragini hope u can see what is going on and not get carried away with Shivani's sweet talks
Believen in Anmol
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
wah wah re kya twist diya amazingly well written yaar so sorry pehle comment nahi kiya ur ff is absolutely a treat to read loved the j factor in ragi...ab aage kya hoga....🤔 jaldi update karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Amitoz, I loved to read you FF. It is absolutely fantastic.👏👏 I read all the eight chapters. Wow yaar.......plz continue.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Amitoz:

Gr8 Update Amit!👏👏👏👏 Loved the bit where Anmol can't get his eyes off Ragini dressed in that white saree😳, the Angini dance, their Eye-Lock (God! I miss it so much!😭😭), n that pendant-letter scene with Ragini realizing Anmol's feelings for her n wearing his gift😳😍...n Anmol's happiness on noticing that pendant on Ragini😃😳...Aww...How Sweet!🤗 Wish Shivani didn't have to ruin this moment😡...but she's gone to the extent of drugging Anmol!?🤢 Too Bad...want her to get out of Angini's way at the earliest🤢😡...can't think of Angini being separated!😭
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