Pyaar to hona hi tha- NEW FF- Part 40A- Pg 34!! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic part Amit ,loved it 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nicely written and penned down,so sweet way tehy showed alekh remebered ranvir is so cool...not like way serial mein they jsut shwoed in end he takes ranvirs name....please continue..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice Amitoz 👍🏼

I loved the way you have written how Aalekh remembers Ranveer..It's like this spontaneous recovery, in a very believable manner..
Unlike the crap which the CTs showed, yours was seriously good !!

Aalekh not remembering Ranveer was irritating me, but now I feel somewhat good :-)))))
Edited by Ashrozia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
@ Amitoz:

Gr8 update Amit!👏👏👏👏...i liked the way you've presented Alekh's perspective!😊..must sya you're a good writer!!😃😳...do continue soon!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here you guys, really SMALL update. I have ideas in my mind but was having issues with penning them down and couldn't decide in what order so i didnt wanna write dishonest update; will write what i feel and wat i can imagine myself in order for u all to understand. send in ur suggestions as to what would you like to see happening in the story and comments. thank you.

PART 7

Few days have passed now and Alekh had been going to office regularly. Shlok informed everyone that Alekh is having a speedy recovery and he will be perfectly normal very soon. Anmol had been supporting Alekh in the office and Alekh started to join Anmol in meetings giving his valuable suggestions. It was a new day and the morning had been hectic at Rajvansh mansion as everyone was busy in their various tasks; kids were waiting for breakfast as Ragini was in the kitchen preparing it for everyone. Men of the house were getting ready to leave for office and Vasu was busy arranging everything for the dance competition in the evening. Alekh and Anmol were also getting ready in their respective rooms whereas Shivani had been away since early morning; telling Shlok that she is gone to some photo shoot for the day. Anmol was in his room getting ready and since his arm got better, he did not have to wear the bandage; thus allowing him to get ready faster. He pulled a blue shirt along with a white tie from the closet and soon after he flung the shirt across his shoulders and wore it quickly. But he realized that one of the button was broken and he got little annoyed as he was already late enough for office. He turned around and was about to go get Ragini but he thought that she must be busy with kids and in kitchen therefore he took the initiative of taking the needle and thread to fix the button himself. He was struggling to put the thread through the tiny space of the needle but somehow he managed to do so and started to stitch the button slowly being unsure of what to do exactly. Ragini just walked in and she was staring at him as what he was trying to do but Anmol was busy enough in his task that he didn't sense her presence. Struggling with his task, he accidently slid the needle which ended up hiting his finger which was now bleeding a little. "Ouch", he said and that was enough to get Ragini's attention. She ran to him and without saying anything, she held his finger and took him near the bed; put his finger in glass of water.

Ragini: Aapka dhayaan kahan hai? Aur waise bhi aap yeh sabh kyun kar rahe the? Mujhe bula liya hota?

Anmol: Voh maine socha ki aap kitchen main busy hongi to bas isliye khud hi try kar raha tha yeh button jodne ki.

Ragini: Badi mushkil se aapki chot theek huyi aur abh yeh. Chaliye abh saaf ho gaya aur yeh shirt mujhe dijiye, main laga deti hoon button.

Anmol: Jee lijiye, aage se bilkul try nahi karunga.

Ragini just smiled at his innocence whereas Anmol was just admiring her when she was questioning him with such concern. She gave him the shirt and he quickly got ready. They both got to the breakfast table as kids were waiting to go to school.

Anmol: Good morning, everyone. Bacha party lets go, we are late.

Tammy: Papa, hum to kabh se wait kar rahe the aapki.

Khushi: Haan partner late to aap ho.

Anmol (smiling): Yes you are right, I am late. Abh chalo.

Ragini: Aap naashta to kar lijiye pehle.

Anmol: Nahi Ragini main office main kuch kha loonga, abhi bachon ko school chodna hai aur meri bahut zaroori meeting bhi hai.

Gunni: Chachu kya aap mujhe bhi library drop kardenge?

Anmol: Haan lekin make it quick.

Gunni: Okay aap chaliye main bas abhi aayi.

Ragini went outside with the kids along with Anmol. She made Tammy sit in the front and Khushi in the back. Anmol was still waiting for Gunni and as Ragini was about to leave, he held her hand. Ragini was surprised by his move and turned around to see smiling Anmol. She had questioning look on her face.

Anmol: Apko yaad hai naa aaj shaam ka program?

Ragini smiled and blushed as she knew he was referring to the dance competition tonight.

Ragini: Jee.

Anmol: To main kaam finish karke shaam ko jaldi aa jaunga; aap tayar rahiyega.

Ragini smiled and nodded while Gunni walked in.

Gunni: Kya baat hai Chachu, office jaane ka iraada hai ke nahi?

Anmol: Bilkul madam poora irada hai, chaliye baithiye.

Anmol smiled and said bye to Ragini and she waved bye to everyone and walked inside smiling.

Next update: Dance Sequence and a twist!



Edited by Amitoz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Guys I am having trouble with font, I paste the story here with font 2 but as u can see the font is diff between the story, anyone knows how to fix that? It changes when i post it, sorry for werid fonts.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
NICE PART WATING OF ANOTHER PART.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Wow Amit it was short but very sweet😃👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
WoW!! Amit really nice update..👏👏👏👏...sad it was so short though..😳...do update soon yaar, can't wait to read about the dance competition!😉...for your problem with the fonts, why don't try writing your entire FF first then select the entire write n give your font settings in one go...😊...should work...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
How sweet really keeping us glued to Angini !!
Please continue soon !!!

Waiting for the dance competition !!

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