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@helmet

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

beautifully written ...absolutely loved it!

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Sari

@Seebz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ashrozia
Oh damn!!!!!! What a great one Sari..And seriously, all the girls in this forum should stop being modest!
U write SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO well, and yet you say that you don't know?
The story was so nicely put..Everything about it brought a smile to my face..

Especially the Guni scene.."Sorry, I'm taken"..Awww, how cute..!!!!!
And what should I say about the proposal thingy..So, soooooooooo beautiful!
U truly are talented and a genius! U should write more..

I loved the words you use..So apt!!

I don't know whether girls complimenting Anmol put a smile on his face or no, but that whole scene sure did put a smile on mine..It was like my favorite scene from your FF!!
I loved it..Wish we get to see it someday..Girls complimenting Anmol, and Ragini jealous! 😳

I loved it dear, no LOVED it!!! It was GREAAATTTTTTTTT!!!! 😳 🤗

I'll come back to publicize one of my threads here 😆
I do want you to contribute for that, hope you would 😳

Hey Kezia, What's up! thank you so much for reading it🤗..Aww..You loved ...Thanks yaar...I am ..HAPPPPPPPY

..The idea came weeks ago and you have no idea...the amount of thinking I did..😆😆..I was nervous by the end as to would be liked or not...and getting positive response I am happy...I know haa! even I liked that scene I mean I had thought of it a bit differently but glad you liked the current version of it....I am a genius..Thank u! 😊...If time allows I wouldn't mind writing a scene for Vasu and Anmol and idea matters too..so I'll surely try if I get something in my mind..😊

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Sari

@Seebz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SanKi4eva

Seebz can u please please stop giving us such terrible Scenes..please!....wh..wha..what?😲..Well I love writing terrible scene..Yaar Sanju 😆😆😆

i mean they are forcing me to imagine it and leaving me wanting for more...Heh!...they force you to imagine and is it that bad?...Aww..Thank you🤗..For liking it...wanting more I know this is exactly what I feel when I read your 'Anmol Journal'😃

Gosh it was like magical...It was😳...don't make me cry😭 ..yaar I am not good at Romantic stuff but glad it made you happy😊

u know the part i loved the most was this

Ragini closed her eyes as Anmol left a kiss on her forehead and embraced him...'The Breaking Dawn' witnessed 'The New Begining' in her life.

You know I badly wanted to fit 'The new begining' phrase in my OS..and new begining with new day is just something I thought of!😊😆

this was simply superb! it was AMAZING...m almost done with my confession scene will post it in a while 😃....Really..would surely read and comment 😊..I am sure it will make me imagine..the FF😡😆

I WANT MORE AND MORE!!! seebz FF start karo na please 😃...Well..Sanju Can't promise that...With my college and all I don't know about that....but I'll see and you can call me Sari😊

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Sari

@Seebz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

@Pratibha-Aww..thank you so much..I know Haan!..who thought it would happen but she confessed finally.. 😊 @Anjana-Thanks a lot!!..yaar..BTW You can call me Sari..😊

Really..I am happy to know that you felt happy while reading it...😊..what?..Your mom pinched you!😲😳..My bad..I hope she was not mad at you or me..Omg..where would I go after so much appreciation from my fellow Friends.I am blushing...LOL☺️...and A hug for you🤗..Thanks once again😊

@Su-Aww🤗🤗...What's up?..I am glad that you loved it!!

@Poonam-Aww...So many hearts..Thank you so so & so much!!🤗..WOW...can't believe this is happening..I feel like a celebrity already..😊..Thanks for thumbs up! as well...Yaar jahan reality work nahi karti wahan imagination kaam karte hain...when I had that idea in my mind I thought of sharing it with all of you!😳

@Narangi_77-Thanks a lot😃

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Shanti

@shanti05

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

👏👏👏👏👏

Seebz beautifully written
Wow just so nice to actually picturize the whole scene infront of you

Creative plzzz see our beautiful writers and give us a scene like this!!!👏

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Sari

@Seebz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

aww..Shanti thank you so much!!!!!🤗

I am glad you got the time to read and comment.😊

When creatives don't show what we want then imagination shows us what we want ..isn't it??😉😆

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

🥳...What A Rocking Update That Was Sari!👏👏👏👏👏...You're Such An Amazing Writer...🤗...I've Been Eagerly Waiting For Your Post n What An Awesome One It Turned Out To Be!!👏👏👏👏👏...Love the Way You Describe Your Scenes Including the Backgrounds n Atmosphere of the Scene!😳...feels Like I'm Watching A Movie!😃...The Way You Explained All The Ups n Downs In The Lives Of Anmol n Ragini Was Beautiful!👏👏👏...n Their Emotional Turmoils Within Was Fab!😍...n The Confession In The End Was An Icing On The Cake!...I'm Out Of Words To Tell You How Much I Loved reading Your Write Up!😳😳...You'll Make A Gr8 Script Writer Yaar!👏👏👏👏...Already Waiting For Your Next Work!!😳😊

Cheers

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Sari

@Seebz

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Awww....Chandrika🤗🤗..I am so touched😭😳..I just wish I had words to express the gratitude I fell towards people who not only read and leave the comment too..I appreciate people take time to read as well....and I tried to think and followed the train of my thoughts😳. I am glad u liked confession😊...thank you so much😃

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