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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its not exactly a romantic scene and is petty clichd lol but i 'll try ot make it bit uncliched 😲🤣 aand well i thought of this yesterday but typed it today so there maybe thoda kuch jhol ismein 😆 it and i can actually imagine it so clearly but can't pen it down it the same way..i cant even describe their expressions, feelings n all properlylol so bear it lol

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Its morning and Anmol is in their bedroom...getting ready for office in hurry, considering he is already late for it. He goes near the cupboard and gets his shirt out...(the cupboard gets silly at times)

And he puts it on , looks at his watch and starts fastening his shirt buttons at very fast pace so much so tht when he reaches 3rd top button he pulls it out accidentally and says "gr8..ab iss button ko bhi abhi tutna tha..." in dismay. While ragini comes near the door from kitchen and sees&hears him talking to himself, anmol doesn't notice her as he quickly turns towards the cupboard to get another shirt but the cupboard is silly now and doesn't open as he struggles with it he says "yeh cupboard bohot chalu hai boss". Ragini enters the room with cuppa tea tray in her hand and looks away and on at him. He notices her presence..looks at her and says "is almari ka kuch karna padega, door toh kabhi kabar khulta hi nahi" at this ragini answers "haan, shayad bohot zyada purana ho gaya hai isilye..aap dnt worry main carpenter ko bulake change karwadooingi" anmol responds "jee..thik hain. Ab lagta isi shirt ko fix karna padega" And moves toward the side cupboard of the bed where all the sewing stuff is, gets the box out and gets string and the needle...tries to put the thread in the needle hole..ragini is looking at his tries...but anmol fails and hmphs. Ragini moves towards him and puts her hand forward, hesitantly...while looking down and says "layiye main kar deti hoon" anmol just looks on at her and gives her the thread and the needle. She puts the thread in the needle easily and hesitantly, reluctantly moves her hands towards his shirt (his chest is bit visible as the 3 top buttons are open). he sees her hesitant look and assures her "main kar loonga agar apko thik nahi lag raha hai"

"Woh...nahi main kar deti hoon aur aapko late bhi ho raha hai" and starts sewing. He is just looking at her focused face which is just shimmering with light..for a bit while and she gets conscious of him looking at her and unwillingly looks at him and his stare breaks and he strts looking away and lets out a sudden "OUCH!" ragini gets scared and worried and asks "hey bhagwan..i'm so sorry..mujhe carefully karna chahiye tha, mujhe maaf kar dijiye aap ko zor " looking at her seriously worried face he relives her saying "main toh bas mazzak kar raha tha aap seriously mat ljiye aur nahi worry kijiye woh i'm sorry agar maine aapko dara diya toh" just then raginiquickly responds aur nahi toh main toh..." and stops"woh bas dar gayi thi..hilaos her mundi and starts sewing agn. He smiles at her worry as he can feel tht my pain matters to her and smiles and kho goes in her. She just unwillingly and still tensed nt out of his worry, his mazzak doesn't fouces much on the sewing and acci'ntally she needles her finger "ouch" in very low voice but anmol notices it and impulsively holds her hand, frantically worried gets her hand(finger) near his lips just then reality hits him and stops and looks at ragini's shocked and uncomfortable face. He lets go of her hand and says "uh-uh..aapko sambhal ke sina chahiiye tha aapko dawa lagani chahiye, layiye main kar deta hoon" at tht ragini answers" jee nahi main kar doongi itni zyada bhi nahi laga hai aur aapko late bhi ho raha hai isilye aap mujhe finish karne dijiye" though still in shock of his hand hold moment, gives a hesitant smile and he gives the smile back in worried tone. As ragini is finishing she unknowingly entangling her hair in the button(somehow:S dnt knowlol) and sees for a scissor to cut the thread but it ain;'t there so she leans into near the button to cut it off with her teeth..(he could feel her breath on his chest).

"ho gaya" exclaims ragini and moves away but only to get pulled back by her hairs which are entagled in the button which forces her to get back to where she was..right near in front of Anmol.😆

Ragini looks at anmol and anmol looks at ragini. Ragini's heart is beating faster(it was beating faster as well b4 forgot to add it inbtwn😆). She starts to untangled it quite frantically, only to struggle and tangle it more 😲😆. Anmol is looking at her hesitant and frantic struggle, asks her to stop by indication of his hand says "ek minute main untangle karta hoon" ragini lets off her hands and lets him. And he gently & carefully untangles her hair and smiles and so does ragini(hesitantly fofcourselol) and moves towards the table on which she put the tea while anmol gets ready and puts on his coat, takes his bag and just as he is off ragini stops him and says "chai to pike jayiye..jsnit hoon aapko late ho raha magar apne nashta bhi nahi kiya kam se kam chai toh pilijiye" and he looking at her gives up for her..:) puts d bag down and gulps down the tea quickly and smiles at her and she smiles in return with her head down. And off goes anmol, just as he reaches the door he stops turns back.

" thanky you, ragini". anmol says.

" thank you kisliye?"ragini asks confusingly.

"woh aapne meri is bad morning ko ek dum good nahi very good morning badal diya" he smiles and goes out saying"main chalta hoon"

"bye" ragini also smiles to herself.

"very good nahi BEAUTIFUL!😳"*firaos his over his head*anmol in soft tone says to himself in glee outside the room(corridor) and walks off.

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WOAH! It came out bitlong na neva thought it wud be...thought of writing it as it seemed a short scene but turned longer, always happens with me. 😡😆

Anways thank u for reading:)) dnt know if i wrote it gud but.. Hope u guys like it. :D


Edited by --sarar-- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Awesome me grinning cheek to cheek I hope we get scenes
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
@--sarar-- :
its not funny its very sweete & romantic....
uff all u girls r coming up with one after another minblowing FF,that I cant stop my self to imagine this scenes with open eyes🤪
great job.
will deff wait for what happend after this button scene❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
@sarar-Thanx a lot for reading and appreciating the scene. I am lucky people like the terrible stuff 😆..I just was not sure so I thought It wasn't good.
Coming to the point Sarar, Your scene is really amazing. I know we have scene a loty of button scene but your scene was simply marvelous it was nice and cute So keep up the good work!!
Edited by Seebz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
guys i have posted prt 2 of Hum Tum on pg 5 of the same thread...as it was a req from u ppl 😃
it's a short one...let me know how it was
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
aww sarar awesome scene re.....its not at all chliched re..life is full of predictable situations ,yet every situation is unique in its own way loved ur scene and i demand for that scene in the serial...ASAP creatives please kuch karo....
sana ur scene was awesome .....read it and enjoyed it too..hai mera bechara anmol.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
sami hun ma name is sanju, drling =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Very nice Sarar i really liked it👏👏👏👏👏 .This needle thread scenes as many times we see we never get bored ,we feel it is new every time
Edited by ANJANA - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
If any one can write the scene about Angini's Marriage anniversaery ,it would be really nice.we don't know how they married .was it simple temple marriage or register marriage but they have some day which atleast Anmol will remember as special day & Ragini's reaction will be nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
@sarar super duper cool. Yaar how sweet ragini is sewing the button on to his shirt and anmol saying that you have made my day. Beautiful. I think our forum is full of awesomeeeeee writers.👍🏼

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