~Salekh Love Stories~ Home Alone (pg 34) part 5&6 - Page 4

Originally posted by: yanks28

Wow anybody home? *hears an echo*...guess it's just me...

Anyway HAHAZ🤗..and all those who might be slightly interested...I'm gonna post my Salekh suhaag raat Fan Fic on Fanfiction.net soon... it's in 3 parts...

WARNING.
IT'S MATURE MATERIAL...I leave no doubts about what is happening between those two...it's basically what happens AFTER In Lamhon Ke Daman mein ends....also, it happens inside a house...It's not X-rated and I dealt with it as tastefully as possible..but again...read only if you want to read it...it is a mature fic...the end is very sweet and emotional...and I gave them a morning after scene...and a nice conversation about their journey together...

So here's chapter 1....enjoy and REVIEW.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997037/1/Salekh_Suhaag_Raat_Sadhnas_POV

The link its not working for me. Can you plz help?

Originally posted by: parul74

The link its not working for me. Can you plz help?

Here try this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997037/1/Salekh_Suhaag_Raat_Sadhnas_POV

if that doesn't work go to Yanks' story on page 3... Click on the link... You will see her other story, but on the top right hand corner there should be a link to Yanks' profile on fanfiction.net, click on that and there will be a link to her second story

Hope it helps.. If not pm me... I will copy and paste the story for you.

Btw: this is a mature story... So please read yanks' warning

happy readin :)

@yanks
will PM you my review

Let's just say that I read the story 5 hours ago and just woke up from my fainting spell and am still blushing lol

Post the next part please ... Need to know what happens

Originally posted by: hahaz

@yanks
will PM you my review

Let's just say that I read the story 5 hours ago and just woke up from my fainting spell and am still blushing lol

Post the next part please ... Need to know what happens

So recovery time is 5 hours...hmmm. You might need an oxygen tank handy for the next part(s)🤢...there are 2 parts left...☺️ Yeah I was blushing while writing it...but I thought it was appropriate because these two have been a couple for two years...and this aspect is what was missing and I honestly think that they have the ability to have the most intense physical relationship EVER because of their journey together...their sufferings...their unique love...the curiosity for one another...chemistry...all of it combined makes for one dhamaka SR!

The next part is hot. Make sure to wear protective head gear...I don't want you falling off your chair and hurting yourself...lol

Originally posted by: parul74

The link its not working for me. Can you plz help?

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2355659/Yanks28

try that, and then click on 1. Salekh SR Sadhna POV

I would like a DISCO NUMBER to be played of Salekh...

Originally posted by: yanks28

So recovery time is 5 hours...hmmm. You might need an oxygen tank handy for the next part(s)🤢...there are 2 parts left...☺️ Yeah I was blushing while writing it...but I thought it was appropriate because these two have been a couple for two years...and this aspect is what was missing and I honestly think that they have the ability to have the most intense physical relationship EVER because of their journey together...their sufferings...their unique love...the curiosity for one another...chemistry...all of it combined makes for one dhamaka SR!

The next part is hot. Make sure to wear protective head gear...I don't want you falling off your chair and hurting yourself...lol

Originally posted by: suprise007

@ bold - Totally agree,

I read it n i have to say WOOOOOOOOOOW, the way u described feelings and emotions👏👏, they kinda of reminded me of bella and edward a little, u know in breaking dawn when thye did the u know wot😆, i'm glad u gonna do the morning after cos CT ruined it for me on that one, i can' believe they didn't do the morning after, if anyone deserved it it's SALEKH,the best part for me is the end when sadhna is filled with tears, i can completely imagine sadhna feeling like that, in short i loved it, n yanks u r killing me with half parts😆😆

Thank you so much for reviewing. Yeah Breaking Dawn was ok until the minute she gets pregnant. I wasn't too fond of the honeymoon on the private island actually...I don't know why...I felt the setting was just too grand...I mean I know the Cullens are rich but the setting needed to be simpler.

I know I'm killing you...lol...but you guys need a breather...the next part is extremely hot...I'm sitting here staring at it myself. I can't believe I wrote all of that. But don't worry...I am not all that much into just them "doing that"...I added a few sweet words...and the very last part is my attempt to bring it back to SALKEH...their journey...the purity...the love...

Yes I give them a very poignant morning after scene and a very deep, meaningful, totally necessary conversation before they fall asleep too...about their journey together and what they went through being apart from one another...that will be part 3.

I've already uploaded chapter 2, but it is not available yet...FanFiction says it will take up to 30 mins...in advance, once again...

WARNING: Intensely physical, sensual, erotic...suggestive and so on..read at your own risk, I'm not forcing you...if you read it...please REVIEW IT.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2355659/Yanks28

Once that chapter is up, Under Salekh SR it will say Chapters :2 instead of 1...so just be patient!😉

Originally posted by: hahaz

Here try this: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5997037/1/Salekh_Suhaag_Raat_Sadhnas_POV

if that doesn't work go to Yanks' story on page 3... Click on the link... You will see her other story, but on the top right hand corner there should be a link to Yanks' profile on fanfiction.net, click on that and there will be a link to her second story

Hope it helps.. If not pm me... I will copy and paste the story for you.

Btw: this is a mature story... So please read yanks' warning

happy readin :)

Thank you!!! Just read it. and also the shower scene. I must say everything is written so sensuously, but in very good taste. Suites Salekh some much. Oh and the shower scene I could totally imagine them. Okay I need a breather now. WONDERFUL work. Look forward to reading the rest.

Originally posted by: parul74

Thank you!!! Just read it. and also the shower scene. I must say everything is written so sensuously, but in very good taste. Suites Salekh some much. Oh and the shower scene I could totally imagine them. Okay I need a breather now. WONDERFUL work. Look forward to reading the rest.

Thank you...makes the panic attack I had prior to writing the SR fic...and prior to post it worth it...😛 When you write...your writing is like your baby...sending it out for the world too observe is very scary!

I'm so happy with the response for the shower scene...It was original so I was hoping it wouldn't be unrealistic for Salekh...and also the SR...man...the 2nd part which went up today...I revised it tons of times...!