~Salekh Love Stories~ Home Alone (pg 34) part 5&6 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28



Usually I know my story is pushing boundaries if I start sweating and having a fast heart rate while writing it. Like my waist scene fic...I took out some stuff from it...the first draft was very risque... How about if you write the rated R one...send it to me first? HEHEEHHEHEHE. I know yaar Alekh these days...bas kya karen? What's the next one about anyway?

Also I didn't know you were posting from an iPhone! You're right that is very hard. I'll start that YouTube thread sometime this week. I'll try. A lot of stuff coming up for school so I'm jam packed...but even with the
sound system on my laptop dead...I still YouTube a lot (I just made that into a verb)...and I have a lot of Salekh YT favs...so many scenes yaar! The great thing about them is that their pre-Alekh normalcy scenes are just as precious as the post-normalcy scenes...

I don't get where the Salekhians all are. I feel like all of a sudden Salekh support is at an all time low. 😭

I'll tell you some of the ideas I have for my next one...a Salekh night out...dinner at a very private restaurant somewhere...a Salekh walk on the beach, under the moonlight...a long Salekh conversation at night in their room...that one is gonna be very angst-y and emotional...and....*drum roll*...Sadhna gets denied for a couple of weeks in terms of you-know-what...not on purpose, Alekh is just busy at work...which leaves her feeling hurt and insecure...and yeah...Alekh makes up for it quiet well. 😉






Lol the last one is already making me blush... Lol. Yeah the one that just wrote is raunchy... But not as raunchy as it could have been... I edited alot when I was writin it... Omiting some choice words and actions lol.

Yeah man writing from an iPhone is really hard. Putting in the codes for color and font are a pain in my behind. Anyways take ur time with the YouTube thread... I have a whole bunch of pre-normal scenes which i love and old SBS videos as well with Salekh.

Yeah don't really know how salekh support is so low... But the support for them has always been cyclical... Maybe because they didn't get the normal love story... But that's one of the reasons I love the
... Unique love story for a unique couple

Ok my only other idea is a story of how Alekh and Sadhna could meet if they were in the US... Still in my head though
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really enjoy reading your stories.
I have an idea for a story, but I am not good w/ words at all.
The idea is (now that Alekh is rich again) Alekh takes Sadhna to a private island where there is NOONE else expect them. They start their journey by going on a private yatch to the island and things flow from there.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hahaz



Lol the last one is already making me blush... Lol. Yeah the one that just wrote is raunchy... But not as raunchy as it could have been... I edited alot when I was writin it... Omiting some choice words and actions lol.

Yeah man writing from an iPhone is really hard. Putting in the codes for color and font are a pain in my behind. Anyways take ur time with the YouTube thread... I have a whole bunch of pre-normal scenes which i love and old SBS videos as well with Salekh.

Yeah don't really know how salekh support is so low... But the support for them has always been cyclical... Maybe because they didn't get the normal love story... But that's one of the reasons I love the
... Unique love story for a unique couple

Ok my only other idea is a story of how Alekh and Sadhna could meet if they were in the US... Still in my head though



Our thoughts come with their very own censor board! LOL.

The Salekh love story is all about anticipation...it's so heartwarming...it's very rare for two people to just LOVE each other so much before their relationship crosses to a physical level...I don't get how people won't like it. Oh well...at least I have you guys on this board.

Hmmm in the US- WELL we sure can bet on some raunchiness if that was the case. HAHA! I have a lot of ideas...I don't know if I can write about all of them...but if you want I can share them with you and then you can give some of them a go. I wanted to do one where Salekh have the entire house to themselves...*wiggles eyebrows*...haha no seriously...I'm the biggest tease in the world.

About my last fanfic idea which made you blush...I'll never go THERE...but we'll see. I'm still having an internal debate with myself about how to word everything in that...I want it to be appropriate to their personality traits too. I might be writing a few which are HOTTER than my waist scene one...and get a bit riskier...

How about you write one where Salekh are separated for a while...like Alekh has to go on a trip or something...reunions after separations between such couples are always very sweet.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: parul74

I really enjoy reading your stories.
I have an idea for a story, but I am not good w/ words at all.
The idea is (now that Alekh is rich again) Alekh takes Sadhna to a private island where there is NOONE else expect them. They start their journey by going on a private yatch to the island and things flow from there.



That is a good one. It sounds like the last Twilight book...Edward and Bella have their honeymoon on a private Island somewhere in South America...they are there for a few weeks...that's where everything happens between them...it's pretty nice in the book...maybe Alekh takes Sadhna to a real honeymoon...just them this time...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: parul74

I really enjoy reading your stories.
I have an idea for a story, but I am not good w/ words at all.
The idea is (now that Alekh is rich again) Alekh takes Sadhna to a private island where there is NOONE else expect them. They start their journey by going on a private yatch to the island and things flow from there.



Ooh that sounds soo cute!! I can imagine a shirtless Alekh and a shy Sadhana in the sand (see how all thoughts about Alekh become dirty)... Lol. I really hope that you will write it... And this is my first fan fic too... I am sure ur fanfic will be amazing... Just start writing it when u have time and ur creative juices will just flow.

And if u need any help or support or a proof reader... You can always go to me or Yanks ( who is an amazing writer)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@yanks sorry I can't quote anymore..lame phone
Lol as long as I have just one other person I can drool over Alekh with I am good lol.

I am an avid reader of Harry potter fan fictions... And always wondered how these writers could turn the most simple things into something dirty... Lol but now that I am writing about salekh.. I can't help but do exactly that lol

No! U have to write that fan fic... Sounds freaking amazing... Just tone it down a little... I am curious to see how u write about sadhana's desperation lol

I will post the other story on here today or tomorrow.
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Hahaz I wrote 3 fan fics... one is about Sadhna's desperation...it actually turned really emotional and full of angst! I couldn't keep it just about Sadhna's erm...desires...for long...but I feel the climax is pretty emotional and romantic and true to the Salekh relationship...which is based on purely love and the fact that those two cannot live without one another...the problem is...it's a whole fan fic...it's pretty long...longer than my first two that I posted here...so you tell me what to do with it...

The 2nd one is basically Salekh's SR...what happens AFTER the lights go out...woooo...lol...I don't think I'll be posting that one here...lol...but I DEFFO for sure want you and anyone else who's interested to read it...so I'll be putting it up on FanFiction.net...it doesn't describe IT...well it SORTA does...from Sadhna's perspective...but in a realistic and non raunchy/x-rated way....

The 3rd one is purly naughty Alekh and it's my first one written from BOTH Sadhna and Alekh's perspectives...it happens in the Salekh bathroom....wooohooo! LOL..well ok basically it's Sadhna in a towel right outta the shower...Alekh plays with her mind a little and it's pretty hot... I won't be posting THAT one here either...it's not long but I'm afraid to offend anyone...

I really wanna write another one...I need ideas though...what do you Salekhians wanna read? How HOT should it be?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yanks28

Hahaz I wrote 3 fan fics... one is about Sadhna's desperation...it actually turned really emotional and full of angst! I couldn't keep it just about Sadhna's erm...desires...for long...but I feel the climax is pretty emotional and romantic and true to the Salekh relationship...which is based on purely love and the fact that those two cannot live without one another...the problem is...it's a whole fan fic...it's pretty long...longer than my first two that I posted here...so you tell me what to do with it...

Please post it yanks. I really wanna read it...your fanfics are awesome.😃
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@yanks... Wow ur fanfics sound amazing and very garam garam! Lol

Ok for the desperation one... I think u should definitely post it on here... just break it up into 2-3 parts... I will write part 1 or 2 on the thread topic so people know.

Omg sadhana SR!!!! I so want to read that!! Lol but if it is way too "mature" I would advise you not to post it here... U can just post it on fanfiction.com and put the link here with a warning or have ppl pm u for the link

Shower FF... Great minds must think alike because I wrote a similar scene lol...I edited mine down alot so I could post it here... Maybe you can do that to yours as well. And if not we can link it to fanfiction.com... And always discuss it here

Dude let me know if u want to post ur shower scene or I u want me to post mine.

Also I had an idea for a story... Basically it's sadhana getting multiple hickeys from Alekh and trying to hide them from ppl. I kind of have the story written in my head, but if u want to try to write it that would be cool since I am in the middle o finals right now

Oh and another story could be alekh and sadhana in the home alone... But ppl keep showing up at their house and alekh is getting frustrated. Lol

Let me know if u post any stories up so I can change the thread title
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hahaz

@yanks... Wow ur fanfics sound amazing and very garam garam! Lol

Ok for the desperation one... I think u should definitely post it on here... just break it up into 2-3 parts... I will write part 1 or 2 on the thread topic so people know.

Omg sadhana SR!!!! I so want to read that!! Lol but if it is way too "mature" I would advise you not to post it here... U can just post it on fanfiction.com and put the link here with a warning or have ppl pm u for the link

Shower FF... Great minds must think alike because I wrote a similar scene lol...I edited mine down alot so I could post it here... Maybe you can do that to yours as well. And if not we can link it to fanfiction.com... And always discuss it here

Dude let me know if u want to post ur shower scene or I u want me to post mine.

Also I had an idea for a story... Basically it's sadhana getting multiple hickeys from Alekh and trying to hide them from ppl. I kind of have the story written in my head, but if u want to try to write it that would be cool since I am in the middle o finals right now

Oh and another story could be alekh and sadhana in the home alone... But ppl keep showing up at their house and alekh is getting frustrated. Lol

Let me know if u post any stories up so I can change the thread title



Yaar go ahead and post your shower scene...I'm dying to read it! Basically here's what I've done...I've posted 1 FF on Fanfiction.net so far...the Salekh shower scene...I'm gonna link you with that one soon...

The Sadhna suhaag raat needs a better intro so I'm working on that, and then I'll post that here...but the link from FanFiction with a warning...it's really not gross or anything...but like you said...don't need to offend anyone...

The 3rd one is that LONG desperation/major angst fic...that one is also going on FanFic.net ASAP...

So basically all three of them will be on FanFic.net...and I'll post the links here with a warning where necessary....

YOU IDEAS ARE HOT. Keep coming up with them...and if you want go ahead with the hickey one...I'm gonna have finals in two weeks...basically when I write...it all comes to me at once if the story is really worth it...so I write fast...within a couple of hours I'm done...so it's really not that time consuming for me...I don't think there's any story that I've taken more than a day on so far...Also Hahaz I NEED YOUR ADVICE. In two of my fics, Sadhna's outfits at night need to be described...and as hot as the fics are, I felt weird describing a woman whose shown sleeping in a sari...all of a sudden sleeping in teeny tiny Victoria's Secret lingerie...so I need advice, what should someone like Sadhna be wearing to bed...I want it to be one piece...easy access...LOL...

So ANYWAY HERE GOES!

Guys...this is my FanFIc #4, the 3rd one is a desperation one but I can't post that yet, I need to read over a few things...but this one is HOT...so warning about that...if you're offended by HOT Alekh who is not afraid to give his wife a good look...then please don't click the link...it's kind of short and from BOTH POV's...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5989379/1/Salekh_FanFic_4_Alekh_is_very_naughty

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