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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Yanks28
Good piece of work as usual though I have not read Salekh SR on fanfiction yet. Will read it and let you know soon. Truthfully speaking I have recently been wondering1) why is Sadhana not shown as Passionate a lover as she really is.2) she wants Alekh as much as he wants her or even more than him in my POV. 3) she does stare at him a lot . You just answered in your FF. Sadhana in shower/victoria nightwear good reading seriously. I want to read Sadhana's Secret Fantasy with her husband(believe me see has some) it does not have to be x-rated just something naughty. Something where Sadhana seduces Alekh. Hahaz is right writing on your iphone is a pain.ritu.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritukaprithvi

@ Yanks28
Good piece of work as usual though I have not read Salekh SR on fanfiction yet. Will read it and let you know soon. Truthfully speaking I have recently been wondering1) why is Sadhana not shown as Passionate a lover as she really is.2) she wants Alekh as much as he wants her or even more than him in my POV. 3) she does stare at him a lot . You just answered in your FF. Sadhana in shower/victoria nightwear good reading seriously. I want to read Sadhana's Secret Fantasy with her husband(believe me see has some) it does not have to be x-rated just something naughty. Something where Sadhana seduces Alekh. Hahaz is right writing on your iphone is a pain.ritu.



Oh yeah, she definitely wants him. You could tell how much by the way she hugged him on their SR, but the killer was when she pulled away.(I know it television....) The look was Alekh's face was something.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritukaprithvi

@ Yanks28
Good piece of work as usual though I have not read Salekh SR on fanfiction yet. Will read it and let you know soon. Truthfully speaking I have recently been wondering1) why is Sadhana not shown as Passionate a lover as she really is.2) she wants Alekh as much as he wants her or even more than him in my POV. 3) she does stare at him a lot . You just answered in your FF. Sadhana in shower/victoria nightwear good reading seriously. I want to read Sadhana's Secret Fantasy with her husband(believe me see has some) it does not have to be x-rated just something naughty. Something where Sadhana seduces Alekh. Hahaz is right writing on your iphone is a pain.ritu.



You people and your fancy gadgets! 😆😉LOL...it's ok, I have two iPods and I currently have one of them blasting away...but my phone is pretty simple...Sony Ericsson..😃

Ritu, I guess that's Sadhna...personally I try to put myself in her shoes...I think once she fell in love with Alekh...she had to control the extent of her desires for him..and her dreams and expectations...I would too...because she didn't know if any of them would ever even come close to coming true...so I doubt she ever let herself go beyond a few romantic situations...I'd be afraid of the let down...and in a way she almost did get let down...when Alekh left her side...her dream of even spending a lifetime with him was shattered...thankfully things were mended...

Also Sadhna is a very shy and modest girl...I agree...she wants him more than he'll ever know...and she probably does have many fantasies with her husband...

My next fic is pretty angsty...it's about Sadhna's desires...she wants her 2nd night with Alekh and he kind of gets really busy with work and for a while he silently turns away from her, just to see her reaction...in my fic I made Sadhna feel very hurt about this...she becomes insecure for the first time...I incorporated the burns on her back too...

As far as the little fantasies she has for him..I'm trying to think of something...I wanna do many more fanfics because I'm in love with this jodi...but I cannot write a single thing which is not true to these characters...so once I think of a fantasy( or fantasies) which is appropriate to Sadhna...I'll get busy writing it out!

Also I think if I was Sadhna, the desires expressed by Alekh all of a sudden after years of yearning for mere looks and touches would throw me off a bit too...I would become pretty overwhelmed...I don't think Sahdna ever thought of satisfying Alekh...she wants him...but she never thought he'd have this set of desires from her and look at her with such...well...desire...lol...so she's probably busy thinking how she can satisfy HIM...Sadhna is a selfless character...so in her current state..she'd probably put aside her own desires and try to find ways to fulfill his.

Thank you for reading and reviewing...for those that haven't yet the SR fic yet...can't wait for you to read that one too...😊
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Oh yeah, she definitely wants him. You could tell how much by the way she hugged him on their SR, but the killer was when she pulled away.(I know it television....) The look was Alekh's face was something.



You mean that ultra EPIC WIN hug which left me 🤢. I was nothing after that hug. LOL. My roommate looked at me like "Um...you alright?"...I was totally finished after that hug...it was years of pent up frustration, desires, love, loneliness, longing, dreaming, separation, hurt, pain, need, wants, basically everything pent up into one SUPER WIN hug...I LOVED IT...

Yes when she lets go...Alekh is like "Oh snap"...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I really liked both your FF's . Took my time to reply because I read them twice for R&R. Loved the wet hair Sadhana Seduction Scene. This is what we are missing in Bidaai really. Sadhana seducing Alekh. She really will come up triumps as you mentioned(king of romance and ace bit). She is a closet romantic like most of us Salekhians. Likes to keep everything under wraps till the Prince comes calling. The hickey story will make good reading and should be written seems appropriate somehow with Salekh ( have you noticed how Alekh keeps his shirt open at the neck ) hickey to banta ha boss. Home alone a very good idea too this time show Sadhana Frustrated like hell. Alekh playing with her long tressess while keeping her waiting for something more. Sounds yum. How about Alekh in from a shower and Sadhna Drool time? Fantasies are made of these. I also use my iphone to write hence writing long posts not fun. Keep up the good work . Write more and post . I love anything and everything about Salekh . Just love that love story to bits. Ritu.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You mean that ultra EPIC WIN hug which left me 🤢. I was nothing after that hug. LOL. My roommate looked at me like "Um...you alright?"...I was totally finished after that hug...it was years of pent up frustration, desires, love, loneliness, longing, dreaming, separation, hurt, pain, need, wants, basically everything pent up into one SUPER WIN hug...I LOVED IT...

Yes when she lets go...Alekh is like "Oh snap"...



Oh am sure he thought of many other words than that 😆 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritukaprithvi

@ hahaz
I really liked both your FF's . Took my time to reply because I read them twice for R&R. Loved the wet hair Sadhana Seduction Scene. This is what we are missing in Bidaai really. Sadhana seducing Alekh. She really will come up triumps as you mentioned(king of romance and ace bit). She is a closet romantic like most of us Salekhians. Likes to keep everything under wraps till the Prince comes calling. The hickey story will make good reading and should be written seems appropriate somehow with Salekh ( have you noticed how Alekh keeps his shirt open at the neck ) hickey to banta ha boss. Home alone a very good idea too this time show Sadhana Frustrated like hell. Alekh playing with her long tressess while keeping her waiting for something more. Sounds yum. How about Alekh in from a shower and Sadhna Drool time? Fantasies are made of these. I also use my iphone to write hence writing long posts not fun. Keep up the good work . Write more and post . I love anything and everything about Salekh . Just love that love story to bits. Ritu.


he hickey story will make good reading and should be written seems appropriate somehow with Salekh ( have you noticed how Alekh keeps his shirt open at the neck ) hickey to banta ha boss.

Oh yeah, since Alekh is all about the waist and the neck. 🤣 😉
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Originally posted by: parul74


he hickey story will make good reading and should be written seems appropriate somehow with Salekh ( have you noticed how Alekh keeps his shirt open at the neck ) hickey to banta ha boss.

Oh yeah, since Alekh is all about the waist and the neck. 🤣 😉



The way he touches her waist in the SR scene...holy shizzz!!! My jaw hit the floor I swear...and her reaction was perfect too...you can tell she was completely under his spell...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ yanks28 I can't begin to tell you how hurt I felt when Alekh let go of her in Dec/Jan track . It nearly did me in quite frankly. Tears roll down when I think back to those days. I was brought up reading Mills&Boon Romances , Living Happily Ever After , Till Death Do Us Part variety. I am a Victorian Romantic I guess. Sadhana was hurt yes, she is afraid to open up ( very legitmate ) . But Alekh has been a very caring and loving spouse who has expressed his Love in many ways . He really is trying hard in my opinion if she encourages him at this moment and just let her feelings speak without worrying about the consequences for once and trust her instincts this once she may hit the jackpot. Sadhana should not worry about fulfilling his desires because where there is Love , nothing but your souls connect automatically and all voids fill. He has shown her that she fulfills his desires because he wants more. Yanks28 between you and me Why does everyone believe ( you know what ) happened only once ? Is it because it was shown on TV once only? I think RS just started the journey and left everything to our imagination after that in my opinion. Salekh will not tell us everytime you know.ritu.
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Originally posted by: ritukaprithvi

@ yanks28 I can't begin to tell you how hurt I felt when Alekh let go of her in Dec/Jan track . It nearly did me in quite frankly. Tears roll down when I think back to those days. I was brought up reading Mills&Boon Romances , Living Happily Ever After , Till Death Do Us Part variety. I am a Victorian Romantic I guess. Sadhana was hurt yes, she is afraid to open up ( very legitmate ) . But Alekh has been a very caring and loving spouse who has expressed his Love in many ways . He really is trying hard in my opinion if she encourages him at this moment and just let her feelings speak without worrying about the consequences for once and trust her instincts this once she may hit the jackpot. Sadhana should not worry about fulfilling his desires because where there is Love , nothing but your souls connect automatically and all voids fill. He has shown her that she fulfills his desires because he wants more. Yanks28 between you and me Why does everyone believe ( you know what ) happened only once ? Is it because it was shown on TV once only? I think RS just started the journey and left everything to our imagination after that in my opinion. Salekh will not tell us everytime you know.ritu.



Interesting Ritu...my favorite book is Bronte's Jane Eyre...the passionate, sweeps you off your feet, blinding romance which creates a magnetic chemistry between those two people...I'm into that.

I agree...it could have happened more times since then...but Alekh is very caring and in tuned to Sadhna's feelings...he might be holding out and waiting for her burns to totally heal...he doesn't want his touches to be painful to her...so it would be even more romantic to me if this time, Alekh has to wait a little...

Yes the Dec/Jan episodes leave me feeling shattered...I can't even begin to imagine Sadhna's pain in those epis...when she asks Alekh ke agar aap theek hote, kya aap mujse shaadi karte? His silence and his statement that "mein us waqt paagal tha"...us ke baad to aurat khatam hi ho jaati hai...I rewatched that scene recently and I swear I felt like vomiting...

Honestly I always believed that because of the level of trust between these two...really who knows Alekh better than Sadhna...their physical relationship would be incredibly intense...iy is easy to believe that with time, Sadhna will let go of all her inhibitions too and know that she is what he wants...and that anything she does will satisfy him...she is his satisfaction....I mean Alekh is such a lucky guy...she ALWAYS desired him this way...he must realize that now...that I wasn't normal, I never looked at her the way I do now for the first two years of our marriage, but this girl still wanted me. That must drive him crazy...HE MUST WANT TO SATISFY HER...make up for all the lonely nights....

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