~*Akele Hum Akele Tum*~RagVir FF'Chapter8 (pg 21) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Kya kahu yaarrrrr......
Faboulus.....Ragvir hain hi
aisa romantic couple......
Lekin bohut acha likha hain di apne... 👏

Please cont soon and PM me.... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kamuralee

Sanuuuuuuuu🤗. yaar fantasticcccccccccc. Hayeee ye rahul virani to jaan leva hai, like hrithik roshan 6feet broad shoulders 😍Mast mast hai teri first chapter. Yaar jaldi updatekar. and you are looking awesomeeee with long hair black sari, sanu ye ttu he hai na?😆 You are superb, do you know that.

Aww Sukuuuuuuuuuuu🤗thnk you thnk you thnk youu me blushingggggggggggggg😆Haan SUku bilkul 100 % main hoon aopni height mention kerna bhool gayi 5'3 i know short haii😆😆,..Thnk u Suku for ur wonderful commentsssss...ab dekhna Ranvir ki entry hogii aur next chap i will update very soon pehle chance pe dance kerungi pjhir yeh😃Muah

Originally posted by: sweetkanu

ohoooooooooooooo......mrs.......mahajan..............nice chap...........
antwayz.when u and mr. mahajan got married???????any proof😆............he is mine..jst joking saniha nice chao aur tune shaadi mei invite bhi nahi kiya😕

Mrs Mahajan😆Thnk you Kannuuuu🤗🤗Main mrs Mahajan bus bangayi shaadi bari mushklils eh uyi tab hi bulaa nahi paayi yaar😆haan proof bhi jaldi milegaa😉😆do read the next chap han😳

Originally posted by: boshaa

Kya kahu yaarrrrr......
Faboulus.....Ragvir hain hi
aisa romantic couple......
Lekin bohut acha likha hain di apne... 👏

Please cont soon and PM me.... 😛

Thankss Alottttttttttttt boshaa i will deffo pm you ...thnk u so muchj glad you njoyed reading itt😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hmm,Mrs mahajan we will not accept your hide marriage.You have throw party for us 😉.Ok .all of us will dance with your Mr.mahajan.😉😆
And yaar give me a supportive or villain role.😆😆. I also want to entry in "akele hum Akele tum"
But ,Anyways ,Nice thread Saniha .Good job ,Keep it up and continue it.👏👏I realy like introduction part .👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
memsahab aapka next chpt kab aa raha hai?
Posted: 15 years ago
#45
Waaahhhhhh Reeeee.....again another beautiful chaapppp.....
Yaarrr yeh Rahul thoo super duper entry maara heyyy...
Abbb yeh tho full twists and turns hey re.... Wonderul sweeeeeeeeetyyyyy
jusss too guuuuddd!!! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Saniha,i was busy with my college fest n xams for the past 2 weeks....i read this juz now....Waw Saniha! U became Ranvir's wife,huh? What an idea!!! And Ranvir madly in love with his wife n all:D ..I cant stop smiling after reading this....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please jaldi update karrooooo......
Cant wait.... 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnk u so muchh eveonee Muahh i m back n i will update the next chap soooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Jaldi update saniha .Can not wait to see your update.

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Chapter 2
Namastey Uncle his voice was deep and husky,he bowed down to take Ashirwad from Prakashchand.Namastey Beta kesey ho?Prakashchand hugged him.Main acha hoon Uncle aap sunaayein aap kesey hain he said softly.Main bilkul theek hoon aaiye na beta ander aaiye.He sat on the Sofa beside Mihir.Arey Kaushi ji Rahul agaya hai Kuch thanda zara jaldi bhijwaa dijiye Says Prakashchand.Bauji main maa aurmalthi ko dekhta hoon Vinu moves to cal Kaushi.Yakeen hi nahi aata waqt kesey tezi se beet jaata hai,2 saal kesey beet gaye pata hi nahi chala Kyun beta?says Prakashchand.Rahul smiles and Tulsi says Bilkul theek kaha aapne Bhai sahab waqt to waaki hi mein bohat tezi se guzar raha hai.Mihir interrupts and says aur ab waqt aagaya hai ke jo baat hamare beech do saal pehle huyi thi hum uske barey mein sochein.Rahul is looking here and there he is actually finding Ragini.Kaushi comes with a tray and sees Rahul Arey Rahul says Kaushi ecxcitingly.Hello Auntie Rahul stands to take ashirwad.Khush raho..Beta aap bethiye na..Arey Kaushaliya Bhabhi bus aap yeh tray idher table pe rakhei aur hamaare saath bethjaaiye bus says Mihir.Kaushi smiles and sits.Ragini kidher hai dikh nahi rahi hai?lagta hai aapne hamari bitya ko kahin chupadiya hai says Tulsi.Kaushi smiles and says arey main to idher udher ke kaamo mein Ragini ko batana hi bhool gayi ke aap log aagaye hain aap log rukiye main bulwaati hoon.
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Saniha moves forward .. Someone is walking behind Saniha,Suddenly keeps both hands on Saniha's eyes..Kaun hai?says Saniha confusingly.that Person coughs..Okayy i Got itt Saniha said with a Big Smile.Kya hai Sanhu tu hamesha samajh jaati hai she leaves her and says. Saniha turns around to face her Kya kerun tere Dark Vanilla Perfume smell se main kesey na pehchaanu ke yeh tu hi hai Suku.Sukanya hugs her looking very Pretty in her blue and Pink Churidaar and had Curled her hair.Acha Madam aap late kyun aayi hain Says Saniha..Jaani nikeltey nikaltey maasi ka phone aagaya kaha ke Maa ko main unke haan drop kerdoon..Bus Maa ki tayyari to tujhe pata haina aadha ghanta lagaaye unhone ready honey mein says Suku and both laughs..Haan haan btw auntie theek haina?Haan haan tujhe aur Ranvir ko bohat pyaar diya hai..Aww how sweet Saniha smiles.Acha Sanhu yeh sub chor WOWW teri Saari to bohat hi khoobsurat lagrahi hai says Sukanya.Acha sach mein?Aur main main Saniha says posinglyy..Sanhuu tu kesi lagrahi hai yeh to tujhe Ranvur bata chuka hoga Sukanya winks.By the way aapke woh nazer nahi aarahe hain.Woh kaun?Ranvir?asks Saniha.Haan to aur main kya apne woh ko yahaan dhoondungi😆.Oh Pata nahi main bhi Ranvir ko hi dekhne jaarahi thi kaafi der se mujhe bhi nahi dikhey...Chal dhoondtey hain😆Haan College mein bhi Tera Ranvir gayab rehta tha yaad haina Sanhu.Hehe Haan Suku College kaisey bhool sakti hooon woh life ka bohat h memoreable time tha.And Suku you know Whom i miss the most?
Jisey tu College time pe her waqt Miss kerti thi woh to ab tere saath hi hai ab koi new entry haikya Sanhu Sukanya says teasingly.Saniha hits her and says Noooo main uski baat kerahi hoon jisme bina Ranvir mere saath nahi hotey
Sanjuuuuuuuuu..Sukanya phone rings..Suku pehle tu apna phone utha Aunty hongi.Sukanya takes out her phone from her Purse.Sanhuu uper waale ne teri sunli
Matlab?Saniha is confused.Helloo Darling Sukanya picks up the phone..Abhi hum tujhe hi yaad kerahe they aur tera Phone aagaya..Lambi umer hai Hamari Rockstar ki na.Saniha excitedly says Sanjuu..Sanju ka phone hai ..Sukuu mujhe de naa mujhe de.Ok Baba yeh le baat ker.
Sanju....... Kesi hai Kahan Hai?Tune mera phone kyun nahi uthaaya?maine kitne phone kiye tujhe..per tu to jab gayab hoti haina to bus..dekha Suku tu Sunrahi haina maine to isiliye kaha tha na jab yeh airport pe bhi thi ke bus formality ke liye humein phone kerti hai..
Sanhuuu,,,,Tu nahi badal saktii baap re main kuch boloon ya tu hi bolegi?Says Sanju(we can only hear her Voice guyz)Ooops thought Saniha..Ahem Haan Madam boliye.Kesi hai tu Sanju?
Sanhu main theek hoon..aur yesi saw ur missed calls and texts msgs..Sorry Baba couldnt take ur calls mera phone meri friend ke haan bhool aayi thi main..abhi jesey hi liya tujhe call ki but tu hai ke apna phone nahi uthaari thi to Suku ko milaaya yeh poochne ke liye ke tu kahan hai and luckily tu mujhe uske saath hi milgayi.Ohhhhhhh Phir theek hai maaf kiya tujhe 😉😆hehe abhi hum tujhe hi miss kerahe they Sanju.Chal jhooti i know dono saath men ho Mast kerahe hogeye na Gosh i missss u guyzz..We Miss u tooo Sanjuu Jaldii se waapis aaaja yaar Says Saniha.Haan meri jaan bohat jald aaongii Shaadi kerne maine India hi aana haii..Tu fiker na ker hum jaldi milenge..Aur Ranvir kesa hai?Tujhe tang to nahi kerta na?Tang kerey to jhat se mujhe batana😆
Sanju woh theek hai aur haan ager usne Tang kiya to tera naam hi kaafi hai🤣.
Oh Damn Sanhu i have to rushh now meri class ka time horaha hai..Says Sanju..Ok Sanju tu class attend ker mere haan bhi aaj ek choti si Party hai hum baad mein baat kertey hain Okay
Take Care,Love you !! Byeee Sanhu...they cut the phone,
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Pata nahi yeh Ragini aur Dhara abhi tak kamrey se baaher kyun nahi nikley hain.
Kaushi enters in the Kitchen and there she sees Dhara and Malthi talking.Dhara
tu idher hai to Ragini kahaan hai?Auntie woh to tayar horahi hai,Uski Tayyari
dekh dekh ker main bore hogayi thi subha se dresses change ker ker ke
dikhaarahi hai aur usey abhi tak yehi samajh nahi aaraha ke woh kya pehenke
neechey aaye..Malthi and Dhara laughs😆.Hey Bhagwan yeh Ladki says Kaushi.
Abhi tak tayar nahi huyi..Jaa Dhara tu usey jaldi bulaake le laao woh wahan
Tulsi ji bethke Ragini ka intezaar kerahi hain,Rahul bhi aagaya hai aur yeh Ladki
hai ke iski tayyariyaan hi khatam nahi huyi ab tak.Ragini bhi na main hi dekhti hoon
isey Kaushi about to leave while Dhara interrupts.Arey arey Aunti Wait!aap araam
se mehmaano mein jaake bethein main hoon na..main Ragini ko leke aati hoon,
Theek hai Beta tu hi jaake le aa mager jaldi haan.Yes Yes Aunti Dont Worry says Dhara.
Dhara standing out of Ragini's bedroom Knocking the door hard.
Tu aaj darwaza kholegi ya nahi?Kaprey select kiye?Woh Pink hi
best hai main kerahi hoon ab tu baaher aaja.Ragini Auntie ne
mujhe seriosuly tujhe bulaane ko bejha hai yaar i am not joking.
Nahi Dhara mujhe pata hai tu mujhe disturb kerne ke liye aayi hai
Isiliye main tujhe baaher nikaala tha.Ab main derwaaza nahi
kholoongi we hear Ragini from inside.To tune sochliya hai?
Kya yeh tera aakhri faisla hai?asks Dhara angrily
Haan i know woh log nahi aaye hain says Ragini
Ragini ki bachi open the door main aakhri baar bolrahi hoon
tera Rahul neechey betha hai uski band bajaadungi tu baaher aati hai
ya main usko yahin uper le aaun..Ragini gets scared
and finally opens the door.
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Uff Kahan hain Ranvir??Suku mujhe Ranvir ki yehi baat nahi pasand
ab is waqt kahan gayab hogaye yeh😕Says Saniha.Uff Sanhu tension
mat le Kahan jaayega yahin kahin hoga ya kya pata aaj bhi tujhe koi Surprise
milne waala hai ahem ahem😉😆 says Sukanya romanticly.Saniha blushes and
says Nahi i am sure woh kisi phone call pe busy honge!You know Subha se bohat busy
hain Says Saniha.Hmmm..!!Acha Sanhu tujhe Ranvir ka woh tujhe Propose kerne
waala Surprise to yaad hi hoga na.Kesey College Farewell mein teri Performance
mein jhat se entry maarke Propose kiya tha😳😳Aww Ranvir sach mein best hai Sanhu.
Haan woh din main kaisey bhoolsakti hoon..Saniha starts thinking of that Day
Flashbacks begin.(Okay now lets have a look at how Ranvir proposed Saniha)
!!Farewell Day!!
And now comes Our Next Performance By our Dea Student
Saniha!!..
Ranvir still in his Dressing room was waiting for the Hosts to Announce Saniha's name..
And now he Un-zipped his leather Jacket,brushed his hair with his fingers,Wearing Blue jeans,White T-shirt,Red Jacket and walked out of the Dressing room towards the hall
(we still havent seen him all)
Saniha begins to Perform..
This is the song and Same picturisation..
Aaj ke ladke I tell you, kitne lallu what to do
Koi mujhe poochhe how are you, koi mujhe bole how do you do
Kabhi koi mujhse na kahe, oh my darling I love you
Aaj ki ladki I tell you, nakhre waali sun le tu
Hey aaj ki ladki I tell you
(Achha?)
Nakhre waali sun le tu
Na main poochhoon how are you, na main boloon how do you do
Abhi yahin main kehta hoon, oh my darling I love you
Aaj ke ladke I tell you, kitne lallu what to do
Roz mile chhupke chhupke, pyaar kare chupke chupke

Haan roz mile chhupke chhupke, pyaar kare chupke chupke
Arre main kab kisi se darrta hoon, main to tum pe marta hoon
Main kaise yeh maanoon, chal mera haath pakad le tu
Lo haath pakadke main boloon, oh my darling I love you
Aaj ke ladke I tell you, kitne lallu what to do
Achha to chal pyaar kare, saat samandar paar kare
Hm, tum kya karoge
Ae achha to chal pyaar kare, saat samandar paar kare
Tere saath na aaoon main, raste mein doob na jaaon main, jaa
Pyaar mein jo doob gaye, yaar vahi to paar hue
Hm, aisa hai to sun soniya, oh my darling I love you
Hey, aaj ki ladki I tell you
Aaj ke ladke I tell you
Arre na main poochhoon how are you
Na main boloon how do you do
Abhi yahin hum kehte hain,
oh my darling I love you
Oh Maa Darlingg I Love Youuuuuu
Oh Yeah!!
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4TneAbzpF7A[/YOUTUBE]
Preview:Its Dark and a Spotlight is on this Handsome Young Man
Wearing a White Suit,Black Shirt inside,and Wearing eye-sight glasses.
Mike in his hand says
Tumsa koi dusra us zameen pe hua,To rab se shikaayat hogi
Tumhaari taraf rukh kisi gair ka hua To Qayamar se Pehle qayamat hogi.

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