~*Akele Hum Akele Tum*~RagVir FF'Chapter8 (pg 21)

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

👏👏👏👏...Awesome Saniha! Loved the update...the storyline's getting interesting!😊...looking forward to the next part already!😳😉

Cheers

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just_in

@just_in

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#122

Lol saniha aaj lagta mood mein thi tu.😆😆

Ragini and dhara r very cute together👏👏

Baake chapter baad mein padke comment karunge.😆😆

Edited by just_in - 15 years ago

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

@KinSanj

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#123

oh ho sanhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..

my god yaar kitna fun packed chpt tha..hhehehe..

oho Karan aur mera aisa song eh...hmmmm...M blushing..lol

aur humari chocolate cake ki fight 🤣 yaar agar soch mei hota toh aisa ho sakta tha..hehehe....kyunki i do that with my sister all the time 😆 my sister would like pour pour pour and i would be like nah it's enough 😆

hehehe..u know me soooooooooooooooooooo Well 😆😳

aur yeh kya yaar tujhe aur chakkar? what's in ur mind yaar? bata bata? 😆

Ragini kitna bolti hai 😆 mujhe toh woh shahidkareena ka train scene yaad aagaya...mujhe ranvir ke expressions clearly nazar aa rahe hai..

aaur janaab aapki friend itne dino baad aayi hai 😆 usse jaake aat karo na..Ranvir ke saath phone pe chipki rehti ho...kya yaar...

but SanVir ka romance 😳 cute Cute...hehehe...

I sooooooooooo can't wait for the ext chpt...awww Ragini making a wish like sanhu does...m sure ranvir will be smiling to see this 😳

bas yaar mujjhe ran se jaldi milwado...aur wait nahi hoga mujhse 😆

yaar ek funny cheez likhti tu wahaan..u know jab tu phone pe baat karke humare saath baith ti hai...and we ask ki kya hua why u so shy aisa kya keh diya..tujhe likhna chahiye tha "peep...peep...peep" and u could've added a dialogue of u teasing u as to what this meant 😆...then u could've wrote "kuch nahi horn baja...aur peeche se awaaz aayi "Oh Bhai Sahab raastey mein kyun khare ho yeh koi gher hai tumhaara.." 😆

that would've been funny na?

lol....

fantastic chpt yaar..can't wait for the next one

BIG HUG!

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preet

@preetgurti

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Awesome sanhu aaj pore mood main thi tu yaar very nice kamal tha chapter very rocking and fast pace mazza aagaya yaar

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Sanvir bahut hi sweet hai very nice romance yaar

sanju karan yahan bhi mazedaar hai spl the song sanju pe kafi suit karta hai right sanju ye song to tere liye hi bana hai re

😳😳😳😳😳

yaar sanju karan cake ke liye lad rahe hai

heeeeeee

very good

dhara aur ragini bahut hi zayada cute hai kya bonding hai very nice very nice

THUMBS UP sanhu

sanhu is chapter main tere sare trats dikh rahe the yaar srsly

loved it its awesomeeeeeeee dude

precap is beautiful

dekho agey kya hota hai yaar

post next chapter soon

A BIG JHAPPI

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432525

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#125

saniha teri FFto mast hoti hai yaar very intresting aage kya hoga i am very excited

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priya

@pankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#126

Uff itni lambi . Sach mein aaj toh full mood mein thi 😎.

How i will read it. Plzz dear is nanhi jaan par thoda toh raham karti.🤣 Ok i will comment after raeding 😳

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priya

@pankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Now let me start my bhaashan dear. 😆

At first fantabulkatic chap sanhu. Awsome. Well edited.👏👏👏👏👏 RAGI-DHARAA's part was just so funny. RAGI said DHARAA aaj 2 minutes ke liye chup rahegi is the shocking news🤣. And then after this DHARAA's expression 😆😆😆.

Aur woh RAHUL😳. Sapno mein bhi aane laga hai. 😳😳

RAGI is in love . She is going on vacation 😍.

And airport scene 🤣. 10-15 bags of all different sizes 🤣. And then her argument with paani awla. she wikl omplain to INCOME TAX officer for 2 rs. "Garib ho toh kya lootego- agar garib aayehga kharidne toh usase bhi 2 Rs ak nuksaan hoga- paper mein likhkar do ki fir aisa nahi karoge"🤣🤣🤣🤣.

And SANHU is cooking cake for RAN. but everything is spoiled. 😭. And why r u ignoring to RAN. he is cutie pie na. so take care of him😳. dont ignore him😃.

And RAGVIR's first meeting------fighting😕😕😕😕. She throw bottel's water on him. 😆😆.

But she went to sayy sorry but RAN was not ready to accept her apology but after this she talked to him rudely😭. She put a blame on cutie pie😭😭😭.

But both songs were too good.

But what is this MUHURAT ak chakkar. itni jaldi engagement aur SHAADI.

Nooooooooooooooooo. It cant be possible. it cant happen. RAGI wil marry to this man😭😭

But precap is so cuteeeeeeeeeeee😳😳😳😳

RAGI is standing near the water fountain and throwing a coin on wishing pool just like SANHU and RAN is watching her😳. i loved it dear. Keep it on 👍🏼

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vasundhara

@dharaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#128

sanhu toone mujhe chup rakhaa?? :-O
u must be the pehla insaan jisne mujhe chhup rakhaa kahin pe 🤣

have to read ur FF as well Ye gande exams kyu aa gaye had missed so much

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Saniha

@SaniaKaSidShukl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: SanKi4eva
oh ho sanhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..
my god yaar kitna fun packed chpt tha..hhehehe..

oho Karan aur mera aisa song eh...hmmmm...M blushing..lol

aur humari chocolate cake ki fight 🤣 yaar agar soch mei hota toh aisa ho sakta tha..hehehe....kyunki i do that with my sister all the time 😆 my sister would like pour pour pour and i would be like nah it's enough 😆

hehehe..u know me soooooooooooooooooooo Well 😆😳

aur yeh kya yaar tujhe aur chakkar? what's in ur mind yaar? bata bata? 😆

Ragini kitna bolti hai 😆 mujhe toh woh shahidkareena ka train scene yaad aagaya...mujhe ranvir ke expressions clearly nazar aa rahe hai..

aaur janaab aapki friend itne dino baad aayi hai 😆 usse jaake aat karo na..Ranvir ke saath phone pe chipki rehti ho...kya yaar...

but SanVir ka romance 😳 cute Cute...hehehe...

I sooooooooooo can't wait for the ext chpt...awww Ragini making a wish like sanhu does...m sure ranvir will be smiling to see this 😳

bas yaar mujjhe ran se jaldi milwado...aur wait nahi hoga mujhse 😆

yaar ek funny cheez likhti tu wahaan..u know jab tu phone pe baat karke humare saath baith ti hai...and we ask ki kya hua why u so shy aisa kya keh diya..tujhe likhna chahiye tha "peep...peep...peep" and u could've added a dialogue of u teasing u as to what this meant 😆...then u could've wrote "kuch nahi horn baja...aur peeche se awaaz aayi "Oh Bhai Sahab raastey mein kyun khare ho yeh koi gher hai tumhaara.." 😆

that would've been funny na?

lol....

fantastic chpt yaar..can't wait for the next one

BIG HUG!

Sanju itne din net nahi tha tab main yeh sub kerahi thii werna u knw na i run from writing big chaps🤣Aww me so glad tujhe tera aur Karan ka scene acha laga

heheh samajh nahi aaraha hai bohat kuch socha hai dont know wht to do pehle Sanju Karan Saniha Ranvir pe ek song picturise kerne ka in a club socha tah then i felt nahi story lambi hori hai its time to show the real main episode now😉

that would've been funny na?Yaaaaaaaar Awwwwwwwwwww🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 omg sANJU kya kerti mera demagh abhi exact teri disha mein nahi ghoomraha haii abhi practise keri hoon aainda yeh ghalti bhi nahi hogii 😉🤣 hahah wesey it was real tooo Cute n Funnyy hahahah🤣

Thankss ALOT sANJU JAAAANUU..Cake scene to hum teenon ki chemistry dikhane ke liye thaa

and yess hahahaha yaaar script ki demand haina main tujhe time de to rahi hooon but Pati ka khayal bhi rakhna perhta haina try to understand babess🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Saniha

@SaniaKaSidShukl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: killerkinrul
Awesome sanhu aaj pore mood main thi tu yaar very nice kamal tha chapter very rocking and fast pace mazza aagaya yaar
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Sanvir bahut hi sweet hai very nice romance yaar

sanju karan yahan bhi mazedaar hai spl the song sanju pe kafi suit karta hai right sanju ye song to tere liye hi bana hai re

😳😳😳😳😳

yaar sanju karan cake ke liye lad rahe hai

heeeeeee

very good

dhara aur ragini bahut hi zayada cute hai kya bonding hai very nice very nice

THUMBS UP sanhu

sanhu is chapter main tere sare trats dikh rahe the yaar srsly

loved it its awesomeeeeeeee dude

precap is beautiful

dekho agey kya hota hai yaar

post next chapter soon

A BIG JHAPPI

Preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Thank u thnk u thnku thnk youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet for ur lovely Comments like alwaysss and itna bara chap isliye milgaya cuz my internet was off it wasnt wrking sahi se kaafui din se tab himaine roz uthke chap likhti thii😆😆😆hahahah glad you all njoyed it thnks alott itna perhne ke liye..and for sure aagey bht saara dhamaka,surprise aur bht kuch honey waala hai so stay tuned😉

@Ysh_sharama:Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thnks alotttttttttttttt hon..glad you liek reading it alwayss love u thnksss

Originally posted by: pankhi
Now let me start my bhaashan dear. 😆
At first fantabulkatic chap sanhu. Awsome. Well edited.👏👏👏👏👏 RAGI-DHARAA's part was just so funny. RAGI said DHARAA aaj 2 minutes ke liye chup rahegi is the shocking news🤣. And then after this DHARAA's expression 😆😆😆.

Aur woh RAHUL. Sapno mein bhi aane laga hai.

RAGI is in love . She is going on vacation 😍.

And airport scene 🤣. 10-15 bags of all different sizes 🤣. And then her argument with paani awla. she wikl omplain to INCOME TAX officer for 2 rs. "Garib ho toh kya lootego- agar garib aayehga kharidne toh usase bhi 2 Rs ak nuksaan hoga- paper mein likhkar do ki fir aisa nahi karoge"🤣🤣🤣🤣.

And SANHU is cooking cake for RAN. but everything is spoiled. 😭. And why r u ignoring to RAN. he is cutie pie na. so take care of him. dont ignore him😃.

And RAGVIR's first meeting------fighting😕😕😕😕. She throw bottel's water on him. 😆😆.

But she went to sayy sorry but RAN was not ready to accept her apology but after this she talked to him rudely😭. She put a blame on cutie pie😭😭😭.

But both songs were too good.

But what is this MUHURAT ak chakkar. itni jaldi engagement aur SHAADI.

Nooooooooooooooooo. It cant be possible. it cant happen. RAGI wil marry to this man😭😭

But precap is so cuteeeeeeeeeeee

RAGI is standing near the water fountain and throwing a coin on wishing pool just like SANHU and RAN is watching her. i loved it dear. Keep it on 👍🏼

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HUGSSSSSSSSSSSS Pankhi for ur wonderful comments first of alll...me blushingg itney achey comments perhke heheh mehnat waste nahi huyi merii😉hahah haaRagini ke saare scenes bohat soch samajh ke likhe maine..yaaar Creative team pe bharosa rakho..wont disappoint you😉But as i said earlier this FF will be very unique and different so just wait and watch..aagy kya hoga abhi Ragini ka kaisa attitude hai aagey kyah oga..all this willl be full of twist and turns trust me😉Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost abhi to RagVirk i kahaani shuru hi nahi huyi haii its just thebegining babesss😃😆😉ehehe...Once again thnks alott gal uu njoyedd it keeep on readingg n commenting like thiss😆😆hahaha

Originally posted by: KinshukKiGJ
sanhu toone mujhe chup rakhaa?? :-O
u must be the pehla insaan jisne mujhe chhup rakhaa kahin pe

have to read ur FF as well Ye gande exams kyu aa gaye had missed so much