~*Akele Hum Akele Tum*~RagVir FF'Chapter8 (pg 21) - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
Pankhi saniha ke iraade to kuch aur hi hain.
Raat ka naasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Sorry saniha😳
If u mind I will edit.
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Posted: 15 years ago
No prob dear. sanhu mind nahi karegi. Aur agar karegi toh 🤔. Ham milkar manaa lege 😎. Waise sanhu i have also a beaitiful song for u 😳😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
will the lady in question respond before we end up turning her ff into a chat thread.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pankhi

@sanhu---- Thanxxxx ki kiss nahi hogi 🤗.

And about pre-cap---- To ye baat hai. Audience ka khyaaal......??????? Nice idea. lage raho.
BTW i also have one idea------
Main bhi ek FF likhti hu aur tumhe KINNY ki loving sister ka role dungi 😎. Woww Kinchu ki sweeet sister sanhuuuuuuuuu😍😍😍😍😍.
Kaisa lagaa mera idea. nice na 😆😆😆😆😆

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Ager aisa kiya na i will stop writing FanFICS💔🥺
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Originally posted by: just_in

Pankhi saniha ke iraade to kuch aur hi hain.

Raat ka naasha abhi aankh se gaya nahin
Sorry saniha😳
If u mind I will edit.

Oooops Ooops no way not at all mindkerne ke liye Mind chaiyeh jo mere paas kahan hai mera Mind to all the way Kinny mein atka wa hai🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
sanhu kahaan hai?
YM Pe aaja!
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Posted: 15 years ago
t was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee but again the same preview..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why?
anyways it was really nice!!!!
and
Preview:Ragini is singing and dancing.."Yeh ishq haaye bethey bithaaye Jannat dikhaaye Haan
Oh Raamaa..Ranvir is looking at her with a big Smile

wat is this
i was dying 4 this preview and again the same thinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
anyways it roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
muahhhhhhhhhh
with love
priya kinshuk mahajan
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Updating the next chap tonighttttttttttttttttt
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Awesome updates Saniha!👏👏👏👏...Keep them coming!
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Chapter 5

Ragini is packing..Dhara enters ohoo kya baat hai packing to aise horahi hai jaisey tu ek din nahi balke ek maheene ki trip pe jaarahi hai.

Haan tujhe kisne bataya!!Ragini says sarcasticaly..Grrrhhh dekha apna favorite top rakhna to main

bhool hi gayi..Ragini makes Dhara sit on the bed and moves towards her closet.Dhara picks up the Magazine which is kept on the side-table.Kerle Kerle apni packing main ab chup hi bethungi says Dhara cutely.Ragini hears this and giggles.Maaaaa......Maaaa..Maaaaa Jaldi aaao Ragini shouts.Dhara is stunned.ke ab isey kya hua she remains silent.Kaushi enters the bedroom looked all worried hey bhagwan!Kya hua Ragini?tu theek to hai she says while touching her face. Kya baat hai kuch bol to sahi.Ragini is in shock state and she does'nt speak until Dhara shakes her.

Kuch to bol?Pagla gayi hai kya..!!!Shouts Dhara

Ragini kya hua beta?says Kaushi

Maa..Dhara..Dharaa..Ne bola ke who kuch der chup betheygi..Ye to Chamatkaar hogaya na Maa.. Ragini says teasingly.Kaushi takes a deep breathe Hey Bhagwann..she hits Ragini lightly..Tum dono ka kuch nahi hosakta.Jaldi neechey aake dono kuch khaalo 4 bajne waala hai Ragini tujhe 5 baje tak nikalna bhi to hai..Uff tere Bauji ki chaaye choole pe rakh ke aayi thi aur yahaan aake bhool hi gayi..she leaves quickly murmuring..Pata nahi kab bari hogi yeh.

Dhara is still freezed..She is only staring Ragini with that I'll Kill you look.Ragini could'nt stop laughing.Bus Bus ab aise ghoor ghoor ke na dekh Dhara..Mujhe nazer lagjaayegi..Ragini moves towards her Dressing-Table.

You know what Ragini?Tu na bohat zaada smart na ban..ager mera mun khulgaya na to tu pachtaayegi bachu.says Dhara.Ragini is busy brushing her hair.She is wearing a nice Pink top with Blue jean jacket and Blue Capris.Ragini puts her hands on Dhara's shoulder and says meri chutki tera mun to kabhie band nahi hosakta to don't worry main tujhe kabhie tera mun band kerne ko kahungi hi nahi..aur jahan tak baat Smart honey ki hai to well..Kaun kitna smart hai who mujhe bolna ki zarurat nahi.Ragini winks.Dhara removes Ragini's hand with attitude Chal na over-acting band ker.Ragini smiles ,holds her cheeks and says tere bina ek din kaise guzrey ga samajh nahi aaraha hai.Dhara has a big smile on her face now.

Achaaa..dhara says surprisingly.

Ismein hairann honey ki kya baat hai?Says Ragini

Haan Haan…din nahi guzreyga aaj kal to sapno se baaher aane ka time nahi hai madam ke paas aur yeh kehrahi hain ke mere beghair din kasiey guzrega ..Wah Wah Wah..says Dhara teasingly waiting for Ragini's answer.Isey kya hua?yeh kahan gayab hogayi ab?says Dhara who could'nt see Ragini beside her now.She turns back towards the window and says..Oh God..!!!Please!

Not again….Ragini is again lost in Rahul..standing near the window...day dreaming .Suddenly Ragini sees Rahul coming towards her wearing Black jeans,Baby blue Polo T-shirt.She is all blushyy..Rahul yahaan pe is waqt.She is speechless.He is comin closer..closer…closer

HOSHH MEIN AAAAAA….Dhara shakes her.Main Rahul nahi Dharaa…. Hooooonnn

Ragini comes back to her senses.Rahul..Rahul kahaan gaya.

Oh God!!Tera kuch nahi hosakta..Ragini makes sad face.Chal Ragini kabse Auntie neechey bulaarahi hain.Tu Chal main aati hoon says Ragini.Ok Baba Dhara leaves.Ragini thinks about Rahul..how he tried to hold her..and almost Kiss her last night.She hears Kaushi calling her.Ooops she comes out of her dreams and hit her herself..Ragini neechey jaane ka waqt hogaya hai its better main Rahul ke baarey mein baad mein sochun.She leaves the room shyly.

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Sanju thori aur chocolateto daal na says Saniha.Sanjana is adding chocolate and other stuff in the Bowl while Saniha keeps on mixing it.Yeh Sukanya tere room se Recipe book lene gayi hai ya soney?says Sanjana.God knows lagta hai sach mein sogayi. Bus Sanhu itna chocolate perfect hai says Sanjana.Nahi Sanju tune to kuch daala hi nahi aur daal na says Saniha.Nahi Sanhu aur nahi maine kaha na this is Pefrect.No Sanju aur Daal.Saniha tries to snatch the chocolate powder.Sanhu chorde tu zaada kerdei Sanjana does'nt let her take the choco Mix.Sanju de na..Nahi Sanhu I Cant tu hamesha ki terha Cake kharab karegi noo I wont let you do that.Saniha and Sanjana are looking at each other fighting over Chocolate.

Damnnn..!!!!!!!Sukanya interrupts.Tm log andhey ho kya?Grhhhh main do minute ke liye kitchen se baaher kya gait um log ne..Oh Godd hato yahaaan se tum dono.

Sanjana and Saniha are sochked..wondering whats wrong with Sukanya?Kya hogaya Suku Cake ek dum perfect banraha hai says Sanju.Zara neechey dekho Miss Perfect Cake Baker Sukanya says with anger.Saniha and Sanjana look down to give a look at the bowl.

Both are shocked.Hawwww Saniha starts babbling and says Sanju yeh kisne kiya.Sanjana notice that the they poured the whole pack of cocoa powder in the mixture Sanju has that Oh my gosh wth look on her face.Staring the mixture which is completely spoiled.Sukanya staring Saniha and Sanjana.Ab kuch bolo chup kyun ho tum dono

Sanhu maine tujhe kaha tha tu chocolate chocolate kerke mujhe confuse na kerna says Sanjana anxiously.

Ab to hogaya yaar..! Saniha bit her lip.But saari ghalti teri hai Sanju tujhe to dihaan rakhna chaiyeh tha na.Before both starts to argue again Sukanya comes and stands between them Bus Bus Bus is se pehle tum dono aur koi masla khara kero its better main hi phirse batter banana shuru kerti hoon.Tum dono wahan jaake khari hojaao.Sanjana and Saniha notice that teacher look on Sukanya's face.Both burst out laughing and says Ok Miss Sukanya.Anything else they say teasingly.Sukanya runs to hit them.All three are having fultoo Masti together.

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Kya?Yeh to bohat hi achi baat hai..Ji aap bilkul chinta nahi kijiye.Main Ragini ke bauji ko turant is mohrat ke baarey mein batati hoon aur phir aapse baat kerti hoon.Ji Zaroor Aap bhi Rahul Ji ko meri teref se bohat poochlijiye ga.Ji Ab main rakhti hoon ji.Jai Shri Krishna,Kaushi hung up the phone with excitement.

Bus kero bhabhi mere pait mein aur jaga nahi hai..Bus der horahi hai says Ragini with her mout filled with food.Arey Ragini achey se khaale werna jhoot to main bolti nahi Maa hi sochengi main tujhe kuch khaane hi nahi diya aur sub kuch khud khaagayi.Dhara and Ragini laughs.Maa kahan rehgayin mujhe nikalna bhi hai aur Bauji kahan hain?asks Ragini.

Kaushi ji comes all excited..Maa.. Kiska phone tha?Arey beta Tulsi ji ka phone tha who darasal..

PrakashChand enters and interrupts Kya baat hai Kaushaliya ji aaj to bari khilrahi hain aap?Ragini beta tujhe der nahi horahi hai kya?Ragini stands up and moves towards PrakashChand ji Bauji main bus Nikalrahi hoon.Arey aap dono baap beti khud hi baat kertey rahenge ya meri bhi sunenge Kaushi said smilingly.

Oh Haan Maa kiska phone tha ..Jaldi se batado main late horahi hoon.Ragini asked.

Who Tulsi Ji ka phone tha aur unke pandit ji ne ek bohat hi shubh Muhrat nikalwaaya hai.Bus who kehrahi thi k eek baar mujhse aura apse baat kerlein to jald se jald Bacho ke Sagayi hojaaye says Kaushi.

Arey Wahh…Matlab Chat Mangni aur Pat Biya shouts Malthi.Oops Sorry Bauji woh kya kehte haina ex ex…Dhara interrupts Excitement Bhabhi.Haan wohi wohi says Malthi.

Prakashchand Smiles and says Ye to bohat hi achi khaber hai per mohrat hai kab ka?

Ji who agle hafte ka hi hai says Kaushi.Agla hafta per saari tayyariyan ek haftey mein hojaayengi asks Prakashchand.Ji Maine bhi yeho socha per Tulsi ji ne to mujhe kuch kehne hi nahi diya kaha ke bus ab who aur intezaar nahi kersakti aur phir shayed Rahul beta ko bhi kuch kaam se waapis London jaana hai to tab hi says Kaushi.

Prakashchand looks at Ragini who is blushing.He puts his hand on Ragini's head and says Tu Khush haina?Rahul tujhe pasand to haina?Bauji mujhe der horahi hai abhi nahi nikli to pohanchne mein der hojaayegi she says Shyly.Kaushi and Prakashchand look at eachotehr and smiles.Dhara chal der horahi hai mujhe tujhe aur kuch kaam bhi batane hain jaldi chal she takes ashirwad from Bauji and Maa and leaves Quickly.Oh Haan Ragini mujhe tujhe aur kuch designs deney hain byee Uncle ji bye Auntie ji.Pohanchtey hi khaber kerdena Ragini Kaushi shouts.Okay Maa Kerdungi

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Saniha,Sanjana and Sukanya sitting on the Dining table.WOWWW Sach mein itni mushkil se yeh Cake bana but I must say Miss Sukanya ke haatho mein to jaadoo haii says Saniha.Haan Yaar Australia mein sub kuch mila hai per Sukanya ka haath ager kisi bhi recipe mein lagjaaye to uski bat hikuch aur hoti hai says Sanjana.Thank you Ladies Hum bohat Khush huye hamaara Ashirwaad tum dono ke saath hai Sada suhaagan raho baliket says Sukanya in a funny tone.All three laughs.ab Coffee milegi Sanhu ji?asks Sanjana.Nahi milegi jab tak tu humein Karan ke baarey mein nahi batayegi tujhe paani tak nahi milega says Saniha.Haan exactly Sanju tu kabse terpaarahi hai yaar bata na ke Karan ne tujhe propose kaisey kiya?jahan tak mujhe yaad hai who bus tera dost hi tha na?then how come this Pyar Vyar Happened asked Sukanya.

Okay Okay Okay Baba Batati hooon batati hoon per Coffe to leke aao yahaan se to utho says Sanjana..Grhhh ok bhai tu nahi maan ne waali Tum dono room mein pohancho main bus do minute mein Coffee leke aayi ok?is that fine?asks Saniha.

Haan meri jaan but tu kehti hai to main teri help keroon says Sanju?Nahi Nahi Nahi Sanju hum dono saath kitchen mein gaye to phir Cofee hum dono nahi Sukanya ko banana paregi Saniha winks.Yeah Right .Sanjana and Sukanya moves to the bedroom while Saniha goes into the Kitchen.

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Ranvir is sitting in his meeting with his clients..looking at the clock.He is looking very handsome wearing Grey shirt,Black Vest and Black pant.His Coat hanging on his Seat.8 bajgaye hain meeting se pehle bhi Saniha ko phone kiya tha per usne uthaaya hi nahi..meeting khatam hotey hi usey call kerunga shayed Busy hogi wonders Ranvir.Sir What about this site?Sir??ask a client oh Yeah Sorry lets carry on….

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Yeh Sanhu kahan rehgayi abhi tak iski Coffe nahi bani asks Sanjana who is lyin on the bed.Sukanya is sitting next to her says Arey haan shaayed aahi rahegi hogi tu yahi ruk main dekh ke aayi.Haan okie.Sukanya leaves.

Saniha is taking out the Mugs from the cabinet suddenly she stats feeling very Drowy.She puts her hand on her forehead.Sukanya enters in the Kitchen and sees Saniha standing with her hands on her forehead as if she is about to Faint.Sanhu kya hua?Sukanya holds her and says tu theek to hai?Oh Haan haan suku I m ok..Bus pata nahi ekdum aisa laga jaisey Chakker sa aagaya ho but I m fine now.Coffee ready hai busmain nikaal hi rahi thi.

Sanhu are you sure?teri tabyet to theek haina?tu hamesha ki terha tabyet kharab hoti hai to doctor ke haan nahi jaati hai says Sukanya.Arey Suku don't worry halka sa chakker hi aaya tha I am sure yeh zaada excitement se hua hai ab fuzool baatein sochna band kero Coffee leke upper chaltey hain.

Thank God aap dono Coffee leke upper to aayin teases Sanjana.Haan Madan yeh le Coffee aur chal shuru hojaa how you guyz met and all.says Sukanya.Saniha looks at the Clock and sees its 8:15.Wait Guyz mainek minue Ranvir ko chek kerloon.She takes out her Cell phone from the drawer and sees Ranvir's missed Calls.Oh Damn she calls back quickly but his phone is switched off.Then she sees a text msg by Ranvir.."Hey Darling!I've reached meeting mein hoon will call you as soon as the meeting gets over.Love You".Saniha smiles.Haan Chal Sanju shuru hojaa.

Haan to hua yeh ke hum pehle University mein dost they.Woh uni ka one of themost hot n handsome ladka tha..Wowww says saniha …he was like always trying to talk to me but you know me main her kisi ko aisi hi ghaans nahi daalti says Sanju.Ohooo kya baat hai says Saniaha and Sukanya..acha phir phir kya hua phir….and they carry on…

Phityeh hua Sanajan carries on and we see a flashbackk
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Sanjuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Yeh Karan kitnaa Romantic hai yaaaarr shouts Saniha.
Haan Sanjuu tune to sahi ladka chuna..says Suku..they carry on talking while Saniha says acha its too late yaar hain main Ranvir ko phone kerke aati hoon..and she leaves.

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Ragini reaches to her Hotel.Bus Bus yahin pe rokdijiye.Wowww Kitni khoobsurat jaga hai carrying one hand-bag filled with her own cloths,her purse hanging on her wrist she steps out of the Cab.Arey behen ji aapka saman to nikaal lijiye says the Driver irritatingly.Haan Haan Bhaiya niklaarahi hoon aap to aise kehrahe hain jaise mera samaan nahi hai balke koi bomb se loaded bag hai..Huh..yeh lijiye paisey.Arey bacha idher aana she calls out the boy who was selling ice-cream nearby. zara meri help kerdo yeh mere saarey bags upper mere kamrey tak pohchaane mein zara help kerdo she begged.The little guy asks her to give her hand-bag. Laaiye..Arey nahi yeh nahi who gaari ke ander.He looks inside the car and is shocked to see aroung 10-15 bags.Large,small,medium almost all sizes.Yeh saara samaan aapka hai?asked the little boy annoyingly.Haan to yahaan mere saath kya tumhein koi aur bhi dikhraha hai?says Ragini.Chalo Chalo jaldi chalo der hojaayegi mujhe saare orders bhi deney hain hurry up.Theek hai behenji he takes out all the bags while Ragini waits for him standing ouside the hotel.Acha suno tum yeh samaan nikkaalo main zara wahaan se paani leke aayi who saamne theek hai?ji Madam ji.

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The meeting is over Ranvir leaves the office sits back in his car heading towards the Hotel.Saniha ka call kerke batadeta hoon ke saara kaam to hogaya.He picks up his phone and dials her number.Oh Damn..network fail..Shitt lagta hai yahaan Signal nahi aarahe hain.HmMmm Hotel pohanchke call kerta hoon.

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30 minutes later..Ragini is still standing at the stall argueing with the guy who was selling Water bottles.Behenji sirf do R ski to baat hai aur aap itna bara hungama kyun karahi hain?Baat Do Rupee ki hai to chori kyun kertey ho?Bolo?abhi tumhaari complain income tax waalo ko kerwaaun..hain bolo?says Ragini.Behenji dheeme boliye kisi ne sunliya to main kaam se jaaunga main ghareeb aadmi hoon.

Ghareeb aadmi ho?Ghareeb aadmi ho to logon ko lootoge?kal to koi aur ghareeb paani lene aayega to poore apne 2 rupee ka nuksaan kyun karega??bolo jawaab do?the little guy

Is really pissed ny Ragini's childish behaviour.He leaves all the bags there and moves from there.

Ranvir reached Hotel..Step out of the car..sees the beautiful View..Uff What a beautiful place..Saniha bhi na bohat ziddi hai ager haan kehdeti to we would have enjoyed.Ab yeh jaga khoobsurat ho na ho Who Cares.Pyaas lagrahi hai..he sees the a small shop nearby..looses his tie and heads towards the stall to buy some mineral water.

Pehle aap mujhe yahaan is paper pe likh kerdijiye ke aainda aap ainda kisi ke saath aisa nahi kerenge?kisi ko ghalat daam bataker koi bhi cheez nahi bechainge likhiye aur sign kijiye Says Ragini.Haan Behenji yeh lijiye maine likhdiya ab please mujhe maaf kerdijiye he begs and says Sorrry Main aainda aisa kabhie nahi kerunga holding his ears.Good yeh lijiye paisey.

Ranvir is walking towards the same shop.She takes the water bottle, turns around and bumps into Ranvir.All Water on Ranvir's shirt..His shirt is almost all Wet.Ranvir takes out his specs.Shit..

Ooopss Ragini puts both her hands on her face.Ranvir tries to clean his shirt with his hands.Ragini is staring with oh no look yeh maine kya kiya?she thought.Ranvir glanced up to see who did this to him .Expressionless she moves her hands from her face.Ranvir is ready to to accept her Sorry now.Pehle saara Paani phekdiya..poori shirt kharab kerdi ab jaldi Sorry bole to main yahaan se nikloon..he thought.Oh Hello MR?Aap dekh ke nahi chalsaktey kya Ragini said Rudely.He Paused. then turned around n looked back if she was talking to someone else.

Are you talking to me?he said pointing himself.Ji Haan to aur kis se baat kerungi..aap hi mere saamneyhain to aap hi se kehrahi hoon.Aap dekh nahi saktey they ke main peechey murne waali hoon..mera saara paani waste kerdiya…huh…Ranvir rolled his eyes god kaisi ladki hai yeh apni hi ghalti and mujhe blame kerahi hai..he thought.Anyway i don't wantto get into all this.He moves forward ..Excuse Me?Ek..i mean do mineral Water ki bottles dena.Yeh lo..arey sahib ji ek minute aapke poore 1 rupee aur 25 paisa bache hain wo to lete jaaiye.Ragini is lisning their conversation.Nahi yeh aap rakhlo says Ranvir .

Ranvir hands over the water bottle to Ragini and moves.Ragini is staring him..huh Kitna mean aur Rude ladka hai yeh.

Ranvir is drinking water when his Cell Phone rings...Ranvir has a big smile on his face .

.Helloo Sweetheart..Yaad aagayi meri says Ranvir lovingly.

Main aapko bhooli hi kab thi..says Saniha

Ahaan..kya baat hai bari romantic tone lagrahi hai?i got it raat hogayi hai kahin meri yaad to nahi sataari hai?says Ranvir

Saniha blushes..aapne dinner kiya?

Pehle meri baat ka jawaab do.bolo mujhe kitna miss kiya?asks Ranvir.

Nahi bolungii..jab aap waapis aajayenge tab batadungi ke kitna miss kiya aur kitna nahi..she says teasingly.

Ranviir makes a cute sad face..Arey yeh kya baat huyi?main yahaan itni haseen aur romantic raat mein tumhe yaad keraha hoon aur tum ho ke saath aana to dur mujhse pyaar ke meethey meethey do shabd bhi nahi bolrahi ho..yeh to saraser na insaafi hai.

Saniha could'nt stop her laugh..Acha Acha bus bus yeh diloges bolna aap band kero..i Miss you so so so Muchhhhhh pata nahi mujhe neend kaise aayegi..says Saniha romanticly.Ranvir blushes.

Dont Worry sweetheart ..mera kaam khatam hogaya haii main abhi nikal jaata hoon ..bus forun pohanch jaaunga phir tumhe araam se sulaadungaa..he whispers.

Stop it Ranvir..bohat mazaak hogaya.Aap aisa kuch nahi kerahe hain.abhi koi zaroorat nahi hai nnikalne ki kal subha nikaljaayega.Abhi aap araam se jaake Dinner kerein aur sojaayein.says Saniha

Peep..Peeep..Peep..theres a car behind Ranvir..Oh Bhai Sahab raastey mein kyun khare ho yeh koi gher hai tumhaara..

Oops!Says Ranvir...Saniha main tumhe uper room mein pohanchke call kerta hoon okay?

Ok Ranvir..Bye,Take Care,Love you.

Bye jaan..love you too..

Ranvir is about to enter the hotel..when he sees Ragini alone trying to carry all the bags..walking towards the entrance.

Pata nahi woh bacha mujhe pagal banake kahan chala gaya..huh suna tha Manali ke log bohat hi khule dil k hotey hain but main to jabse yahaan aayi hoon sub ke sub Khadooos hain..Huhh..

Ranvir walks towards her..Ragini suddenly fell on the floor with all her bags on her.Shitt.!!Aaj ka poora din hi bura hai.

She removes all the bags from her and notice a hand infront of her.

Need Help?says Ranvir offering her his hand.Ragini holds his hand and stand up.

Ranvir helps her in picking up the bags.Excuse me?says Ragini.Yes asks Ranvir.

Thank you so much...bus aap yahaan reception pe hi mere yeh bags chordein.

Sure and No Problem says Ranvir he leaves her stuff there in reception.they both check in..Ranvir takes his keys and heads toward his room..while Ragini is still in the reception area talking to the receptionist about something.

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Haan Haan maine kuch miss to nahi kiya na?asks Saniha

Nahi nahi pehle yeh bata itni shermaati wi kyun aayi hai..Aisa kya kehdiya tere unhone says Sanju teasingly.

Haaan Haan Sanhu bari laal laal hoke aayi hai..Sukanya n Sanjana winks.

Chup kero tum dono saniah says shyly..aisa kuch nahi hua woh mujhse baat hi keraha tha ke kisi aaake zor zor se horn bajaya and usne kaha ke main hotel mein jaake baat kerta hoon..thats it.says Saniha..ab tu apni story continue ker..Phir kya hua?

i mean sach mein Sanju Love boat sounds so Romantic..Tum dono saath mein Love boat pe gaye..Wowww says Saniha..

Haan uske baad kya kiya Karan ne asks Sukanya?

Haan Haan yaar main bhi to usi din uspe ek dum flat hogayii..uske baad ..

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Ragini is in her bedroom..Haan Dhara maine saare designs wahaan pohanchwaadiye hain..Bus i am all done ab chain ki saans li hai maine.Maa ko bhi phone kerdiya tha ke main pohanchgayi hoon.bus ab kal subha niklungii aur raastey mein ek aur bohat important kaam hai jo kerke hi back to Mumbai.

Ab aisa kya kaam hai asks Dhara.

Woh to main tujhe aaker hi bataungi..ab main thak gayi hoon Ragini yawns.

Good night..Ragini cutts the phone and goes off to sleep.

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Ragini wakes up early..gets ready looking very beautiful wearing a long Black Skirt with a nice black top and her hair open.She reaches downstairs with her only purse and hand-bag.waiting for her car and driver to come.

Her phone rings..its Dhara.

Hello..Dhara..says Ragini

heyaa..tu nikal gayi?asks Dhara

Kahaan yaar meri Gaari aur Driver abhi tak dur dur tak nahi dikhrahe hain..aadhe ghante se wait kerahi hoon...Arghhh.Mujhe raastey se apna dress bhi pickup kerna hai.

Dress?Konsa Dress Ragini asks Dhara,

Arey yaar ab tujhe bata hi deti hoon..Aaate we raastey mein woh Big Bazaar haian yahan ka famous waala wahan maine ek bohat hi sunder outfit dekha tha..aur bus maine wohi lena hai..to usko lene ke liye raatsey mein mujhe rukna hi rukna hai chaahe kuch bhi ho.

Ohoo..Kya baat hai akele akele sagayi ki tayaaryan ahaan..acha chal to tu leke hi aajana phir.says Dhara.

Haan yaar bus yeh gaari ka wait keri hoon driver aaye to main nikloon..Ok Ragini main bus breakfast kerne jaari hoon tujhe thori der mein call kerti hoon jesey hi gaari aaye mujhe bbatana..ok.Haan theek hai chal take care..and They hung up the phone,

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Saniha walking in her bedroom from here to there.Uff yeh Ranvir phone kyun nahi uthaare hain i am sure sorahe honge ab tak.

Ranvir picks up the phone..

Hey darling..main uthgaya hoon..aur bus fprun nikalraha hoon.Cant wait to see you

Uff thank god says Saniha..acha uthiye jaake nahaaiye aur naashta kiye bina mat niklega ok?

Kya baat hai mujhse milne ki jaldi nahi hai?asks Ranvir.

Ranvir...both laughs

Acha meri good morning Kiss mujhe aake milegi na?asks Ranvir.

sochke bataungi..Bye Love you.mujhe niklane se pehle batadena .she cutts the phone.

Uff kya ladki hai yeh..says Ranvir while leaving the bed and moves towards bathroom.

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Ragini is walking outside the Hotel.Oh God ab kya keroon 11 bajne waale hain aur main abhi tak yahaan.Oh Maa ka phone aaraha hai..unko bataungi to pareshaan hojaayengi..uhh kya keroon,Hey Bhagwan Help Me!and she picks up the phone.

Hello..Ragini beta tune phone uthaane mein itni der kyun lagadi..Kaushi speaking in a tensed tone.

Wo Maa..actually main ..wo main aapko phone kerne hi waali thi.

Acha tu yeh sub chor meri baat dihaan se sun..abhi abhi Tulsi ji ka phone aayatha who log aaj shagun leke hamare haan aarahae hain..tu nikal gayi haina?tu aur der na ker beta jald se jald gher pohanch jaa..says Kaushi.

What?Kya?Maa aaj shagun aur yeh sub?Itni jaldi?asks Ragini.

Haan ab tu sawal kerna band ker aur jaldi se nikal jaa..Kaushi says in a hurry,

Per Maa aaj aapko patanahi hai ke main yahaan Manali mein hoon..arghhh Maak o bhi aaj hi yeh sub kerna tha kal ka kehdeti she thought.

Ragini beta hum unhein taal nahi saktey..tu jaldi se nikal ja mujhe aur bohat kaam hain..ab main rakhti hoon..Kaushi hung up the phone.

Ragini is all worried..Hey Bhagwan ab kya hoga..she says while glancing over the sky.Mere hi saath kyun.She suddenly hears her phone ringing…Hellloo she picks up the phone quickly in anger.

Kahan hain aap bhaiya ji?aap se Manali lane aur waapis lejaaane ki baat pehle hi hogayi thi?11 bajgaye hain aur aapka koi ata pata nahi..mujhe yahan se nikal na hai aur aap abhi tak yahan mujhe pick up kerne hotel nahi pohanchey hain..Shouts Ragini.Wo Madam ji mujhe maaf kerdijiye per main aaj nahi aapaunga aap kahin aur bandubas kerlein..he says.

Kya?Ragini is complete red in anger.aapka demagh to kharab nahi hai?main is waqt kahan koi Mumbai jaaney waala Driver aur gaari dhundu?Is anjaan sheher mein..aap aisa nahi kersaktey..kuch bhi kerke aap mujhe Pick up kerne aajaiye..main aapko zaada paisey dedungii bhai sahib she begs. Hum bohat sharminda hai madam ji ..per meri patni ki tabyet achanak kharab hogayi haii aur main usey chorke nahi aasakta hoon he cried.

Ragini is out or words she hungs up the phone in anger..sits on the bench hopeless bitting her nails.

Haan Haan maine achey se nashta bhi kerliya hai aur main abhi abhi Hotel se baaher nikla hoon..ab car ki teref jaaraha hoon aur phir main gaari mein bethke seedha Mumbai apni Wife ke paas aaraha hoon..happy?Ranvir is looking very handsome..Glasses resting on his head.wearing blue Denim and White T-shirt.aur boliye madam aapko poori drive ki bhi details deta jaaunga..Ranvir laughs while talking to Saniha on phone. He is walking towards his car and when suddenly he feels someone's hand on his shoulder.He turns around to see who is it

Excuse me..says Ragini who look very upset and worried.

Saniha just hold on haan..Yes says Ranvir softly .Ragini doesn't know how to start..she is babbling.She has already heard Ranvir telling someone on phone that he is heading to Mumbai.Sirf yehi meri madad kersaktey hain wonders Ragini.

Helloo..asks Ranvir weirdly..aap kuch kehne waali thi.Any problem asks Ranvir.

Ragini is very very confused..she is feeling weird ..Kaise lift maangun she thought but she doesn't have any other chance so she goes..wo actually I just heard I mean ager main ghalat nahi kehrahi hoon to aap Mumbai…umm I mean she takes a deep breathe.Please Help Me..mere car driver ne mujhe end time pe dhoka dediya hai..mujhe kuch bhi kerke jaldi Mumbai pohanchna hai..and maine I m so sorry but aapki baat suni ke aap bhi Mumbai jaarahe hain.Kya aap Mujhe Mumbai tak lift desaktey hain..she begs.Ranvir feels a bit awkward,he doesn't know what to do.He makes a strange face and says look don't worry umm..just wait.Hello he moves away from Ragini and starts talking on the phone.

Ranvir maine sub sunliya..kaun bechari ladki hai.uski awaaz se hi who kitni pareshan lagrahi hai.Is everything okay?Saniha asks.

Pata nahi yaar yeh ladki ki maine kal bhi Help ki thi…kal kisi stall pe khare hoke lar rahi thi and I don't know what to do..matlab says Ranvir confusingly.

Ranvir kya keroon matlab?Help her..Aap kisi ko is terha museebat mein kesey choroge?Its just a lift Ranvir..aur who kehrahi haina ke unka driver nahi aapaya hai.. so big deal help her out na.

Haan I'll surely help her maine unhe yahaan se ek rent a car keradeta hoon Saniha..in that way who araam se gher pohanchjaayengi ok.

Nahi Ranvir..rent a car..No No No..usnemin bohat time lagjaayega..aur who bechari unko gher jaldi pohanchna haii..and wht the problem?aap bhi Mumbai aarahe ho to kya masla hai she aks.Masla yeh hai ke I cant break my rules..meri Car ki front seat pe mere saath meri Dharam Patni ji ke ilawa aur koi nahi bethsakta haii he says in a cute romantic tone.Achaa…to mere Rules yeh hain ke mere Pati ki car ki front seat pe sirf tab koi bethsakti hai ager main usey permission dedoonn and mera Order hai ke aap uski Help kerein..thts it Ranvir no more questions or answers.. I Love you..jaldi niklo wahan se I cant wait to see you..Byee she cutts the phone without listning to Ranvir anymore.But sunoo says Ranvir but Saniha is no more on the phone.Ragini is still waiting for Ranvir..she look real tensed.Excuse Me says Ranvir.Ragini truns around ..i think humein chalna chaiyeh ..cuz mujhee bhi jaldi pohanchna hai says Ranvir as he opens the door of his car.Ragini has a huge smile on her face..Suniye says Ragini.Main aapka ehsaan kabhie nahi bhoolungi..sach mein aap jesey log to bohat hi kam hotey hain..Thnk you God..thank you so much..she says.Its ok No Problem..aap bethiye.Both sits in the Car.

Oh Well main aapko apna naam to bataya hi nahi..mera naam Ragini hai Ragini Sharma..main yahaan Manali mein apni boutique ki kuch important kaam se aayi thi..phir kya hua ki saara kaam to time pe hogaya per end time pe mujhe mere driver ne dhoka dediya.By God uski patni ki tabyet bhi aaj hi kharab honi thi matlab usne mujhe kaha ki who mujhe time pe pickup kerega paisey bhi liye aur tab bhi nahi aayaa I mean kya yeh koi tareeka hai..Ranvir has just started to drive and he is already pissed..Oh God iski train to shuru hoke lagta hai rukne waali nahi Saniha yeh tumne mujhe kahan phasadiya..all the way to Mumbai kya yeh aisi hi bolti jaaygei he wonders with a real worried expression on his face.Ragini kept on speaking without even looking at Ranvir.she Finally took a break after almost 15 minutes.Haan maine to sub batadiya per aapne mujhe abhi tak apna naam nahi bataya..she asks excitedly.

Ranvir..Ranvir Rajvansh..he says in a low tone.Oh aur aapki unka naam kya hai pointing towards his cell phone.Btaiye bataiye shermaaiye mat Ragini asks in a funny tone.Ranvir has a weird smile on his face..Meri wo?he says laughingly.Arey haan aapki girlfriend maine to jabse aapko dekha hai bus aap apne phone pe hi chipke hotey hain she says.Hey Wait..Correct it ..Girlffriend nahi meri Wife Ranvir says.Ahaaan wohi wohi..jo pehle girlfiend hoti hai wohi to baad mein wife banti haina..same thing..she carries on looking at the beautiful view outside.Haaye yeh vaadiyan to bohat khoobsurat hain…This girl is crazy thought Ranvir.Acha aapko yeh to nahi lagta na ke main bohat zaada bolti hoon?she asks.Nahi bilkul nahi..aap to bohat kam bolti hain aur boliye na Ranvir says..Pata nahi yeh raasta kab khatam hoga he wonders.Aap jhoot bolrahe haina..she laughs main jaanti hoon main bohat bolti hoon aur I m sure aapko is waqt ghussa aaraha hai zaada nahi to thora but aaraha haina?boliye boliye?dekhein kuch bhi dil mein nahi rakhna chaiyeh jo dil mein aaye phataak se boldena chaiyeh TRUST ME.!!without speaking another word Ranvir raises the volume of music and kept on driving.Ragini keeps her finger on her lip and keeps her mouth shut.After a little while she shouts SHITTTT…Kya huaa?Ranvir stops the Car.

Wo kuch nahi actually mujhe who pyaas lagi thi…!!Ranvir takes a deep breathe God abhi aagey koi store aaya to paani khareedlenge.Theek hai Ragini sits back quietly and begins to think.Hey Bhagwan yeh insaan to achey hain per ek aur Help kaise maangun?kaise kahoon ke Big Bazaar se mujhe who Lehnga uthaana hai..Kitna khoobsoorat lehnga tha Sagayi mein main Rahul ke saanmne wohi pehnungi.Bhagwan koi hamatkaar kerdo key eh wahan pohanchke khud rukjaaye bus Big Bazaar aane hi waala hai she close her eyes and prays.Ranbir stops the car and opens his side mirror.Ragini is shocked yeh isne gaari kyun rokdi she wonders.

A guy wearing light blue shirt and pants with black tie (traffic polce uniform)come forward.Bus Bhai sahib gaari rokiye aagey kuch kaam chalraha hai ek ghantey ke liye saari gaariyo ko yahin rokne ka order hai .

Kya?Damn it…!! Ranvir says In anger.Per hum yahaan ek ghantey tak kaise bethein..humein jaldi hai asks Ranvir.Sorry Sir..problem hai saamne Big Bazaar hai aap wahan jaake apna time kill kersaktey hain he leaves.Ranvir hits the Car steering with his hands..Damnn!yeh kaam bhi abhi hona tha.Ragini is shocked..aaj Bhagwaan ne itni jaldi sunli..she said excitedly.Kya aapne kuch kaha?asks Ranvir.Oops!Nahi maine kuchnahi kaha ab ek ghanta gaari mein kaun betheyga..Suniye if you don't mind main bus 5 minute mein hoke aaun..asks Ragini.Why would I mind..jaaiye..per ager aap late huyin tomain aapko chorke chala jaunga he says with attitude.Ragini goes out of the car..while Ranvir plans to call Saniha and inform her.Suniye Ragini comes back over his mirror.Ji ab kya hua asks Ranvir.Wesey ager aap chahein to Aap apni wife ke liye yahaan se shopping kersaktey hain..Bye she says quickly and leaves.

Hmmm…Saniha ko call to kerdun..his phone rings..Helloo Sweetheart he said Softly.

Abhi main tumhe hi call kerne waala tha ke tumhara phone aagaya..lambi umer hain hamare pyaar ki..he says smilingly.Hmmm…says Saniha..Kahan hain aap?Ankhein band kero Madam main saamne dikhunga..says Ranvir.

Ranvir mazaak nahi kero tell me na kahan ho aap?aur wo jo ladki saath thi wo kahan hai?Drop kerdiya?asks Saniha.Oh to yeh poochne ke liye phone kiya hai ke main ab tak us ladki ke saath hun ya nahi..haina Ranvir says teasingly.Bhai maine to kaha tha saath aajaoo..zamaana kharab hai jaaneman aur tumhara Handsome pati ek sunsaan jaga pe akela phasa wa hai wo bhi ek ladki ek jawan,kunwari ladki ahem ahem..

Kyaa Kahaa??Saniha interrupts.Jawan,Kunwari aur aagey boliye poori bi data lene ko nahi kaha tha help kerne ko kaha tha she says in a weird tone.Ranvir tries to control his laugh.Arey meri kyaghalti hai?Hey Bhagwan abkya hogaa Saniha??tumhaare Pati ki izzat and he continues to tease her when Saniha shouts..STOP IT Ranvir..mera joke kerne ka mood nahi hai..i think mujhe phone kaat dena chaiyeh..Mujhe aur bhi kaam hain ..she says dully.Ranvir notice there is a sudden change in her tone..as if Saniha was jelous a bit.Areyy baat to suno..shouts Ranvir.Kya?Jaldi bolein muje bohat kaam hai. Says Saniha.Kya baat hai aaj pehli baar lagraha hai ke meri Biwi mere liye kuch possessive horahi hai?he said cutely.Hah…not at all..she laughs Mujhe sachm ein neechey jaake kuch kaam hai Ranvir aap kab tak pohanchrahe hain?she asks.Arey main yahan betha bore horaha hoon aur tum hoke meri fiker hi nahi hai?wah aisi patni kahin nahi dekhi jo apne pati ko kisi ke sath akela chorke gayab hojaaye.he says.Saniha laughs kyonke mujhe mere Pati ki koi Chinta nahi hai mai janti hoon wo kaisey hain ..so don't worry baby its okay ager aap zaada bore horahehain to us ladki ke saath Enjoy kerlein no problem with me she tries to control her laugh.Ranvir is angry Kyaa?acha Bachoo mujhe ghar aane do phir batata hoon thn he laughs..Acha aap bore kyun horahe hain?Are yaar raastey mein raasta band hai ek ghnate ke liye yahin phasna hoga..Ragini jo lady mere saath haina who to ander kuch khareedne ke liye chaligayin yahan saamne Big Bazaar pe..main yahaan bethke time Kill keraha hoon tumse baat kerke.Oh I am so Sorry Ranvir mujhe kya maloom tha aisa kuch hai aapne to pata nahi kya kya kehke mujhe daradiya she curled her lip.Kya?acha to akhir baat mun pe aagayi..Saniha smilesAcha Ranvir aap jaldi gher aajayein aapke liye bohat bara Surprise hai..she says excitedly.Acha really?Kya surprise hai he asks..Arey bhai sahib aap gaari se uterjaaiye yahan kaam hai kuch..Guard says knocking on Ranvir's mirror.Ranvir takes a deep breathe.Saniha I 'll call you back .Ok Bye they hung up the phone.Ranvir gets out of the car n decides to enter Big Bazaar.Wesey Ragini ne baat to achi ki tthii yahaan aahi gaya hoon to Saniha ke liye kuch acha khareeed leta hoon..usey Surprise doonga.

He steps in that Mela kind of place..There are lots of shops,food stalls,Choori Bazaar and Stuff like that.He hears a beautiful voice..someone singing and dancing with all those village people and Kids..Ofcorse its none other than Ragini.Ragini is Exactlly acting like Jab We Met Kareena lol

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V0lTXSFI90g[/YOUTUBE]

Preview:Ranvir carrying a shopping bag in his hand stops when he sees a small water fountain and a flower shop beside it.A Girl standing there making a wish the same way Saniha does.She turns back and it Ragini.

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