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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweetchilly1234

thank you guys, your comments make me wanna write more...I will update tommorow, it very late right now...Thans to everyone who enjoyed it...


Mrs. Hansija:

My real name is Ridhi. Neeta is one my friends' name


thnx...


cheers




thankss :)
my real name is aneesha
u have to continueee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Wonderful Ridz,

i loved the msg in his note😳.. please dont stop.. continue...

Yeh Dil Maange MORE😳..Hamesha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
AAlekhji fav line 'Tum baahar aathi ho ya mein Andhar aa jaaon😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
my scene:

Alekh makes food and sets the table for both of them he then takes sadhana to the dining table and makes her sit in a chair. He takes a plate and fills it with food then he feeds her. Sadi is so happy she says wow it is just like a dream i am so happy alekhji then alekh says mee to sweet heart. Then sadi takes a piece and feeds him,small portion of it falls on his cheek. Sadi tries to wipe it with her pallu but alekh says no not with that, she tries with her hand but he pushes it away and says nope not with that too then sadhana gets angry and says well alekjii what is this with what i should wipe it ,then allu points at her lips and says with that then only i will feel happy. She blushes and tries to walk away but alekh holds her hand and says i did so much for u can't u just do this small thing for me then sadi comes close to alekh bending her head in slow motion then she bends and wipes it with her lips then alekh kisses her lips ( both have a major liplock for some time 😆😆)then bell rings,sadi runs away blushing and alekh gets up angrily says yeh kabab mein haddi kaun hoga and opens the door to find ranvir and ragini . He says hi ranvir then ranvir says did we disturb u bhaiyya and winks at ragini 😉,then alekh just smiles ,sadi comes from the back and welcomes them inside then ranvir says yes bhaiyya common lets go in before somebody else notices then alekh says what then ranvir points to alekh's cheek and says bhabi's lipstick mark,waise bhabi nice color then sadi blushes and walks from there .ragini hits ranvir in the stomach and goes behind ragini. Then ranvir puts a hand alekh's shoulder so bhai how is everything going then alekh says fine till u showed up and starts hitting ranvir with pillows............................
to be continued ................................................................

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
woahhhh
amazinggg scenee
we have never seen salekh at dinner b4
i really love the scene
soooo romantic
phewww
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
thanks ,
i enjoyed writing rv's part. which part did u like?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
my cont part-
alekh is driving car and takes sadhna to a place where all over red-white decorations and all side red ballones having writtten sadhna is peresent.sadi bcums shock to see.she asks wa is this alekh sys my love 4 u.sadi sys this is not fair plzz drop me home.sadi turns and doesnt fidn alekh soon music of "jo khabo kyaalo mein"of jannat film strts.sadhna turns alekh sings and cums from behind stlyishly-
Jo Kwaabo Khayaloon Mein Socha Nahin Tha
Tu Ne Mujhe Itna Pyaar Diya
Mein Jab Bhi Jahan Bhi Kadi Dhoop Mein Tha
Teri Zulf Ne Mujh Pe Saya Kiya[here alekh plys wid sadhna's hair]
Haann…
Jo Kwaabo Khayaloon Mein Socha Nahin Tha
Tu Ne Mujhe Itna Pyaar Diya
Mein Jab Bhi Jahan Bhi Kadi Dhoop Mein Tha
Teri Zulf Ne Mujh Pe Saya Kiya

sadi was about to go bt alekh pulls her and hug-

Haan Tu Hai Haan Tu Hai
Meri Baaton Mein Tu Hai
Meri Kwaabo Mein Tu Yaadon Mein Tu
Irradon Mein Tu Hai) ……2
Irradon Mein Tu Hai

then alekh makes sadhna dance.sadi also know but lost in alekh's eyes
Yehhh…We Could Fall In Love
I Say… I Could Fall In Love
Yehhh…We Could Fall In Love
And I Say… I Could Fall In Love With You
then alekh hugs sadhna from behind nd does fully lcose dance and sings-
Koi Bhi Aaisa Lamha Nahin Hai
Jisme Mere Tu Hota Nahin Hai
Mein So Bhi Jaao Raathon Mein Lakin
Tu Hai Ki Mujhmein Sotha Nahin Hai
Tu Hai Ki Mujhmein Sotha Nahin Hai
Haan Tu Hai Haan Tu Hai
Meri Baaton Mein Tu Hai
Meri Kwaabo Mein Tu Yaadon Mein Tu
Irradon Mein Tu Hai) ……2
Irradon Mein Tu Hai

then in music sa r on candle-nite dinnes alekh had hold sadi's hand then slowly he tkes out various gift in which writtensooryno.1 sorry no.2 sorry no.3 up to no.10
and finally alekh kneels infront sadi nd mk sadi wearing a ring nd sings-
Hai Teri Innayat Tujhse Mili Hai
Hoonto Pe Mere Hasi Jo Khili Hai
Usse Mera Chehra Chupa Bhi Na Paye
Tujhe Paake Hasil Huye Jo Khushi Hai
Tujhe Paake Hasil Huye Jo Khushi

Haan Tu Hai Haan Tu Hai
Meri Baaton Mein Tu Hai
Meri Kwaabo Mein Tu Yaadon Mein Tu
Irradon Mein Tu Hai


then he makes sadhna stands and luvs her-
Jo Kwaabo Khayaloon Mein Socha Nahin Tha
Tu Ne Mujhe Itna Pyaar Diya
Mein Jab Bhi Jahan Bhi Kadi Dhoop Mein Tha
Teri Zulf Ne Mujh Pe Saya Kiya

(Haan Tu Hai Haan Tu Hai
Meri Baaton Mein Tu Hai
Meri Kwaabo Mein Tu Yaadon Mein Tu
Irradon Mein Tu Hai) ……2
Irradon Mein Tu Hai

then slowly at music ending allu moves to kiss sadi and scene shifts



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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
👏👏 great scene a big hug for u 🤗. I love that song from jannat it is so good but pictured on wrong person. Allu would have been the best !!!!!! simran great yaar!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Wow Priya and Simranji thank u so much for the scenes.. 3 scenes in one day.. Now this will make me go on till our next episode.. I could really feel those scenes as if real.. Lovely presentation...

Lovely scenes..

@ Priya i loved the RagVir touch u gave along with the awesome SaAlekh scene.. I love the bros.....

@ Simranji so happy to see u back with ur scene conti... Lovely song and aww cho chweet 'Sorry' from Aalekhji...

Please do continue giving us such sweet treats of SaAlekh..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
thank u for liking it !!!!!!!!!!!

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