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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
OMG Priya you updated a new scene? Maine tho abhi notice kiya ....Thank you so much yaar🤗... Very cute scene.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
its so romantic yaar....ahm ahm...continue...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
wow nice topic waise im meant to be doing uni work but...
My Scene-My Salekh Dream.
Alekh watches silently as ranvir decorates his room for ragini putting up pictures of the difernt moments of them together, looking at ragvir's wedding pic alekh has a flash back remembering his first wedding with sadhna. alekh is lost but suddenly he asks ranvir ' ranvir tumhne ragini ko paane kilye kya kuch nahi kiya, par muhje ek baat samhje main nahi aye ke tum apno ko kohne kilye taya the kyun?
bhaiya ragini ko maine apne zindagi mana liya tha aur hamesha manta hu,aaj main apne zindagi ko pakar itna khush ho ke jaan bhi de sakta hu us kilye, lekin agar maine logon ki baat suni hoti to aaj ragini ka sabse bada gune gar main hota,kyun ki pyar main bhi naye hot hai, aur maine uske sath anye kiya hota main apna pyar ko beizaat kiya hota.
Alekh has tears in his eyes and runs from the room, he goes downstairs and stops outside vasu's room he sees vasu looking happy talking to a smiling malika,he remember's vasu's words she once told him ' main maa hu na apna bacho ka dard samahj te hu' alekh says to himself 'lekin aap is beta ka dard nahi samahj payie mama' he leaves the house and goes to the site.
From far he sees sadi, he goes to her with out saying anything he takes her to the car as ssadhna asks him shocked 'sir aap kya kar rahen hai'. alekh drives igonring sadhna's questions. He stops outside the mandir where sadhna once ran away too. he goes inside sadi follows him, he looks at the idol's and says ' aap hazaron logon ke bhagwan hai, lekin main aapke gune gar nahi hu ise liya aaj main aapke ke samne mere ise bhagwan se maffi mangta hu (looking at sadi tears down is cheeks) he folds his hands 'sadhna main maafi ke laake nahi hu main ne jo kiya use ki saza yeh judaai, yeh tadap aur yeh tumahre pyar ki taras thi, us waqt main normal hoke bhi pagal ho gaya tha.aaj is pavitra jaga pe khade hoke main tumse vada karta hui ke tumse use ghar puri imaandari,samne aur izaat se aaogi, muma tumhi kud lagi use ghar main. 'sadhna is shocked tears streaming down her face. alekh goes towards her and says sadhna i love you, he wipes her tears, yeh paani in akhon main kabhi nahi ayengi. she hugs him tightly. 'chalo aaj beeti hua pal phir jajgate hai. he takess er hand and leads her out of the temple and begans to sing
Mm, pari pari hai ek pari, aasmaan se aa giri
Saamne mere khadi, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Hm, pari pari hai ek pari, aasmaan se aa giri
Saamne mere khadi, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya

he takes her to the dhaba they went to when he ranway. he sits on her the bed thing and orders 1 plate of food, he feeds her singing
Voh chaand taaron ki roshni hai
Voh mandiron ka diya
Us jaaneman ki bas ek jhalak ne
Paagal mujhe kar diya
Hm hm hm, voh mere saanson ki raagini hai
Voh mere dono jahan
Voh maang le jo mujhse kabhi to
Dil kya use de doon jaan
Hm, pari pari hai ek pari, aasmaan se aa giri
Saamne mere khadi, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya

she too feeds him. next he takes her outside the taj mahal, he points to something as she goes to look he takes something out his pocket, suddenly red and white rose petals fall on her from his hands (she simles so happy) as alekh sings
Jo muskuraake dekha mujhe to
Hua mera dil fida
Hai uske jaisi badi suhaani
Us naazni ki ada
Hm hm hm, usi ke khwaabon mein khoya rehta
Main aaj kal raat bhar
Subha subha jab main aankhen kholoon
Aaye mujhe voh nazar
Hm, pari pari hai ek pari, aasmaan se aa giri
Saamne mere khadi, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya
Haan, mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya.

they hug and alekh kisses sadhna on the forhead, he carries her back to the car. as they are driving alekh takes sadhna's hand puts it on the gear and changes it (like he saw ranvir do to ragini).
the car stops and begans raining so much, they abandon the car and find a little barn. alekh makes a fire. sadhna sits next to him and he puts his arms around her, alekh is thinking ' sadhna asks him kya hua? ' sadhna main soch raha tha, sab yeh sochte hai ke ragini ka sawlaan raang ek curse hai, aur tumhari wajah se uske zindgai maidukh ata hai lekin aaj muhje samahje main aya ke tumhara yeh gora rang ke vaja se tumahre zindgai main bhi dukh ataa hai, par log samajhte hai ke tumhare karam hai, lekin woh nahi jaante ke unke soch galta hai, jo unko lagat hai tum ragini ke saath karti ho who tumhare saath wahi karte hai. tumhe muhje sikhya insaan ko rang roop se nahi balki sansakar aur saf dil se pechana jata hai. sadhna has water in her eyes. she tinks this is my alekhji, yeh woh piya hai jisko milne kilye mere jiya taras ta tha.
'alekh ji mere pechan aapse hai,muhje ko fark nahi padata, log kya soche te hai, muhje fark padata to aap ke soch se. aaj mere zindgai ka sabse haseen din hai.thankyou alekhji. she holds his hand and they have staring session alekh leans towards her and she closes her eyes knowing when she opens them again the sun will be bright!

hope you guys like it and i know its a bit long so sorry!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
long? long is always good. we have no problem in that. we'll be extra happy.

Thank u so much yaar.. today after this divorce track, aisa ek scene padke idk kya kahoon. felt nice..thank u again
ASRdeewani thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
wah guys these scenes are just mindblowing
wowowowo
i love them
i just cant wait till salekh's lovestory starts!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
fantastic story do continue i loved it!!!!!!!!!! love stories should be long and romantic . even i can't wait for saalekh love track to start.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Alekh gives sadhana flowers and she takes the flowers and tries to go but alekh holds her hand and kisses it ,sadi blushes 😳 and turns the other side but alekh slowly gets up and kisses her neck and her right ear and says Darling itne jaldi kya hain and turns her face .He puts one hand on her waist and pulls her towards him and sings
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Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya
Abhii To Yahiin Thaa Abhii Kho Gayaa
Ho Gayaa Hai Tujhako To Pyaar Sajana
Laakh Kar Le Tuu Inakaar Sajana
Diladaar Sajanaa, Hai Ye Pyaar Sajanaa
" and dances with her . Sadi says "tumhe kya hogaya alekhji" then alekh says hmm and comes behind sadi and hugs her from the back and says pyaar .He keeps his chin on her shoulder and dances with her again. sadi tries to free herself but he says no way u can break apart from me jaanu. Then phone starts ringing, alekh gets irritated and goes to pick it up. It is vasu.She says " Sadhana where is alekh and starts shouting at her😡, allu pulls sadi and takes her saree ka pallu and keeps it on the phone and says THIS PHONE IS TEMPORARILY OUT OF ORDER and cuts the phone. Sadi says who is it alekhjii and why did u lie ,well darling it is ur saasu ma calling to know about her lost son called alekh but there is no body here with that name then sadi says it is very rude alekhjii and it is not funny ur mother is worried abt u and tries to go the phone to call her but alekh pulls her and they both fall on sofa. sadi is on top of alekh. Alekh puts a finger on her mouth and says no i am not a 2 yr old to get lost and i am not alekh rajvansh i am saalekh then sadi gives him a confused look,then alekh says well my love sadhana+alekh=saalekh so i am that now don't disturb me with such talk when i am in mood for some romanceeeeeeeeee and starts kissing her again.........................................to be continued
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Wow Priya, lovely yaar.. thank a lot. Vaise how well u showed Vasu character who is always behind Aalekh to knw where he is..

The same thing was shown in today's episode. Raat ko going to his room and wondering where he went..

please continue dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
wow priya fantastic, continue
sorry people, for some weird reason the website was saying it was unable to post the update, and didnt have time to update again...so, here it goes

we left off at Aalekh looking at the bathroom door and leaving the room. Sadhna in the bathroom, still unable to believe what Aalekh just did..She just keeps on having flashbacks of the kiss in the rain...Still completely wet. There Aalekh is in the living room, smiling thinking about the kiss, and his love for her. Keeps on looking towards her bedroom door, and than about the kiss, and smiles so cutely...His clothes all wet.

it has been about half an hour, Aalekh has changed his clothes, and he is wearing the undergarment on top(i think its called ganji/peticoat) with all his muscles showing, and pants. He starts wondering why Sadhna isnt coming out. He just keeps on looking towards the room. There Sadhna is afraid of coming out of the bathroom thinking may be aalekh is still outside. He decides to go in the room and check. He calls out Sadhna, Sadhna. She isnt answering him.

He knocks on the bathroom door, Sadhna tum theek to ho. Sadhna still flabbegasted from the kiss, and keeps on remembering it. Very shy to go out and face Aalekh. Aalekh: Sadhna tum kooch jawab kyun nahin de rahi. Kooch to kaho, Sadhna please bahar aajao. apne kapde change karlo tum bimaar ho jaogi. Bathroom se bahar aajao Sadhna. Sadhna still we, doesnt know what to do. She is dying from sharam, and doesnt even want to answer aalekh. Aalekh: Sadhna agar tum bahar nahin aayi to mein darwaza tod ke andar aajunga. Sadhna finally says something. Aalekhji nahin please.. Aalekh: accha to tum abhi bhi jo hua uske bare mein soch rahi ho, tum bahar aa rahi ho ki mein andar aajoon...aur agar mein andar aagya to jo hua woh fir se ho sakta hai. He has a naughty smile while on his face while saying this. Aalekh tries to push the door, and Sadhna is on the other side of the door going, please aalekhji.

Aalekh thinks about how he can bring her out. He snaps his finger, and starts walking away from the bathroom door. Sadhna heard footsteps going away from the bathroom door, ab uski jaan mein jaan aayi. There Aalekh slowly comes towards the bathroom door,and hides himself on the side. Than he screams as if he needs help. Sadhnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....Sadhna hears his scream and comes out of the bathroom, and runs outside. Aalekhji, Aalekhji looks here and there in the bedroom. Aalekh is standing with his hands folded beside the bathroom door, looking at her and smiling.

He says from the back, mein yahan hoon Sadhna. Sadhna turns towards him, and understands that he is upto no gud, and that was his prank. He stares at wet Sadhna from top to bottom, and she feels very shy. She looks down and here and there, still recovering from the kiss episode. He walks towards her and stands right in front of her starring her down. Sees a towel on the bed, and grabs it. And says, tum kaisi patni ho Sadhna, in a flirting manner. He says, tumhe dikh nahin raha ki mere baal abhi bi gile hai. Agar mein bimmar pad gaya to. He hands her the towel, and sits on the bed while she is standing all shy. he stares at her and says, ab kiski wait kar rahi ho. Mere baal sookhao naa. she is all wet herself, and she goes towards his head, and starts drying his head, all this while she is looking down, and he is looking at her extremely naughtily...He is sitting on the bed, and her standing and drying his hair. Slowly he bring his hands around her waist, and holds her by the waist. She extremely shy, tries to move away, and he pulls her down by her hands. she is leaning towards him, and he is holding her down by her hands, starring at her like a mad man. Than he slowly takes the towel from her hand, while holding her down with the other, while still starring at her. He pulls her harder, and sits her beside him on the bed. She is sitting on the bed facing him, looking down. while he looks at her face, and starts drying her hair with the towel. Sadhna gets extremely shy, and her lips are shaking in nervousness. He notices it, and notices the water on her face. he starts drying her face with the towel, running the towel from the forehead towards her chin..She doesnt know what to do, she is so shy that she feels like ki jamin fat jaye, aur sharam ke mare woh usme sama jaye. she is so nervous, and shy. Aalekh looks just keeps on starring at her wet face, while her eyes are down. he brings his finger towards her forehead, and starts running it from the forehead to her lips. all happening in slow motion. she doesnt know what to do. She is blushing, and tries to get up and leave. Aalekh grabs her arm, and pulls her towards him, and she falls on him on the bed. Both his arms around her waist, and her on top of him. Both have a starring moment, and Aalekh turns around so that now he is on top of her. He starts to bring his mouth towards her, to kiss her, while holding her in his arms. As soon as he approaches, she snizzes.

He realizes that she will get sick so, he moves from top of her, and says tum change karlo. Sadhna gets up still all blushing. He gets up, and looks at her. He says maine tumhare liye cupboard mein kooch rakha hai. Tum kooch deir mein dinner ke liye bahar aa jao, dinner aata hi hoga. Sadhna starts to leave, Aalekh: mein chahta hoon ko tum wohi pehen ke aao jo meine tumhare liye liya hai, aur isi liye meine tumhare sare kapde yahaan se hata diyein hai. Tum woh dress pehen ke hamari aaj ki dinner date ke liye ready rehna, he gives her a final stare, and goes out the door, and sadhna runs, and shuts the door quickly. Leaning on the door, she takes a big breath as if her breath had stopped.

if you want me to continue, please leave comments...


chilly
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
well done truely fantastic waise allu ne cupboard kya raka hain !!!!!!!!!!!!

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