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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am backkkkkkkkkkkkkk.....thnx girls for liking the story, agar mein india mein hoti to creative team join zaroor karti...hahah...jokes apart

so, we left off at Aalekh leaving the room...

Sadhna is all dressed up now in a lime green,and baby pink combination of salwaar kameez. She is scared to go out of the room but, thinks Aalekh ji ko bhookh lagi hogi. Mumhe bahaar jake kuch breakfast bana lena chahiye. Sadhna comes out of the room, and goes towards the dining table to prepare for the breakfast. She sees that there is no aalekh in the room anywhere. She thinks yeh Aalekhji kahaan chale gaye, abhi to yahin the. Unko bhookh lagi hogi, aur nashta kiye bina hi chale gaye. As she turns around, she sees something on a table. Its a note saying, meine tumhare liye breakfast table pe rakha hai, tum khale na. mein kuch kaam se bahaar ja raha hoon. kahin jane ki koshish mat karna, kyunki yeh farmhouse, jungle ke bicho bich hai, aur yahaan pe akele jana munasif nahin hai. Mein dopaher ke 12:00 baje tak aajaunga. Aur ek baat, apna promise to yaad hena, jo mein kahoonga woh tumhe karna padega; bhoolna mat, mera intezaar karna. By the way, tum is pink aur lime green dress mein bahot beautiful lag rahi ho, aur aaj subeh towel mein to pani mein se bahaar aayi hui jalpari ki taraah dikh rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ke bas tumhe dekhta hi rahoon, aur waqt wahin thum jaye. Accha, ab sharma na bandh karo, aur apne doopate se khelna bandh karo, aur choop chap meri acchi biwi ki tarah breakfast karo.

Sadhna puts the note on the side, and says: Aalekhji, joh aap chahte hai, ab woh munkin nahin, ab hamare beech bahot fasla ho chooka hai. Ab aap ki yeh sab baato ka mujh pe koi asar nahin padne wala. Aap ko to sayad pata hi nahin ki aapki shadi ki bate mummyji mallika ji se kar rahi hain. Isme mein kahaan hoon, mein to kabhi aap ki hote hue bhi aap ki nahin thi. Ab jab kuch hai hi nahin hamare beech, to in sab bato ka kya faayda.

Its around 11:00am, and Sadhna is lost in her thought. The clock strikes, and Sadhna realizes that Aalekh will return in an hour. She thinks I should fix something for lunch before Aalekhji comes. Unhe bahot bhookh lagi hogi. She starts to cut vegetables, and prepares Aalekh's favorite dish. The lunch is ready. She has placed everything on the dining table thinking abhi Aalekhji aate honge. The clock strikes 12:00pm. Sadhna decides to go to her room and freshen up. Before going she leaves him a note on the table. meine aapka khana banake rakha hai, please kha lijiyega. Aap jo chahte hain woh ab hamare beech possible nahin hai. Hamara rishta aur hum dono hi badaal chooke hain. Is liye behtar hoga ki hum apni maryada banayein rakhe.

Its 1:00pm Aalekh returns home. He smells the delicious lunch. He calls out Sadhna's name. she doesnt responds so, he thinks may be she is resting. He goes towards the table, and eats the food. while eating, his eyes fall on the note. He reads the note, and looks towards the closed room door, and says, mujhe pata hain meine tumhe bahot dookh diye hai Sadhna. Par mein hi ab tumhari zindagi khooshiyon se bharoonga. He leaves from the dining table without finishing his lunch, and just looks out the balcony glass door.

The time passes, and its 4:00pm. It has gotten very gloomy outside, and sort of dark outside. Aalekh is still looking outside though the glass, and starring into an empty garden. There in the room, Sadhna comes at her balcony window, and stares outside, and is thinking. She walks outside to her bedroom balcony, and Aalekh sees her. Aalekh is outside in his part of the balcony, and is looking at Sadhna. It starts to rain all of a sudden. Sadhna is still lost in her thought, and Aalekh still starring in her direction. Suddenly she looks in Aalekh's direction, and both just talk though the eyes. Both are wet, and song starts playing in the back. Kaisi hai ye deewangi, Aalekh starring at Sadhna, Kaisi hai yeh dil ki lagi. Both still in major eyelock. Kaisi hai yeh deewangi, kaisi hai yeh dilki lagi, dil kehta hai yahin rook jaye pal, tere mere pyarka. Sajna, Sajna (from movie gunaah). Both are in major eye lock, Aalekh just stares at Sadhna, and Sadhna at Aalekh. Aalekh sees wet Sadhna who is now wearing a purple saree, completely drenched. The song in the background. Aalekh is unable to control himself. He runs to her room, and starts banging on the door (song playing in the back), finally Aalekh breaks the door open with a kick. Sadhna standing at the balcony door all scared and wet. Song moves forward Har taraf ek toofan sa hai kaise saahil milega, bekhoodi bhi bahayegi kab tak, kab tak dil jalega. Aalekh starring at Sadhna with so much rage, and passion. He has no control over himself. He starts walking towards Sadhna, Sadhna moves towards the balcony backwards. He walks towards her in so much hurry like he just wants to grab her, and never let go. she moves back. (music still playing). song plays: har taraf ek toofan sa hai kaise saahil milega, as soon as Sadhna moves back, Aalekh grabs wet Sadhna by her waist in the balcony, and she tries to pull herself away from him as she knows he is upto naughtiness. He grabs her hair with the other hand, pulling her hair so, that her body is leaning in his one hand, her hair is pulled by the other hand. aalekh looking down at her while holding her with so much passion. The song plays moves forward har tarf ek tuffan sa hai kaise sahil milega, bekhoodi bhi bachayegi kab tak, kab talak dil jalega, he looks towards her with so much passion in his eyes, and rage, and starts kissing her on the neck like a mad dog. The song plays: mana mushkil hai aashiqui, Sadhna moves back, he comes forward, she turns around, and he grabs both her hands from the back, (mana mushkil hai aashiqu, yeh ishq hi to hai bandagi), he starts kissing her neck having his hands wrapped around Sadhna from the back. (dil kehta hai yahin rook jaye pal tere mer pyaar ka.) toward the end of this passion, he goes around her, and faces her, and grabs her face with both hands, and he kisses her (he got his kiss people heheh)... A major lip lock, Both lost into each other. The song ends Sajna....Sajna.....Sadhna comes to her senses, her eyes wide open while Aalekh still kissing her lips. She pushes him, and is flabbegasted at what just happened. Aalekh just stares at her. She runs from there, and locks herself in the bathroom. Aalekh still standing in the balcony, looking up at the sky while its still raining, running both his hands through his hair. He walks into the room, looks at the closed bathroom door, and leaves out of the room.

If you want to know what happens in the next 24 hours let me know. Listen to the song from gunaah to actually get the feel of this scene.


Cheers,

Chilly


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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
woah chilly
what a hot scene!
wow alekh and sadhna in the rain
cant control
its tooo muc
please please continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
thnx for liking the scene...hehehe....i was blushing while writing heheheh, but, had to do it for you girls hehehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
awesome scene allu's passion wow i wish i was sadhana 😍. But anyway pls do continue it is too good. i loved it!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Okie here goes my new scene

Alekh and sadhana are so lost in each other when a car passes by them and knocks them down alekh gets angry and decides to go after it but sadhana holds him and says no then alekh holds her waist and pulls her towards him and says " Anything u say jaanu" and gives her a cute smile 😃. She says apart from romance can't u think of anything else then alekh says well now the situation demands i cant help it and winks at her 😉. They both are walking holding hands and talk about their first meeting . Alekh says u know sadhana when i saw first at that time i had a strange feeling in my stomach i didn't now what it was but now i know it is love at first site by the way u looked too good that day then sadhana says hmm so u loved me so much then alekh says ofcourse. Talking like that they reach mamjii's house but find it locked then sadhana checks her purse for a spare key and finds it . They both go inside alekh closes the door behind he asks sadhana for a glass of water after drinking water he tells her he is soo hungry . sadhana goes to kitchen and tries to cut vegetables when alekh comes silently behind her and puts his hands on hers and helps her cutting the vegetables then sadhana blushes and says what is this alekhjii then alekh says i am just helping u my lovely wifey and gets mischievous he kisses her left cheek ,her neck sadhana is all lost when she accidentally cuts her finger then alekh holds it and washes her finger and keeps a band aid he says what is this sadhana pls be careful and kisses her cut finger. sadhana has tears in her eyes alekh sees it and wipes her tears and says is it paining very badly then sadi says no it is ur love and care that is making me cry i always had dreams like this but now everything came true it is so unbelievable then alekh hugs and says this love darling ...............................to be continued....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
thank you so much Priya for the great post and hats off to all the lovely creations dear friends. Please do continue writing...

Originally posted by: simransalekh

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to be contd..
if u like plzz leave comments and i will cont very soon as there is a song-sequence here😳



Simranji please continue your story..

Just love all the scenes as it perfectly matches with the current Alekhji who silently and madly loves Sadhana ...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Priya continue...tum continue karo...hay hay...januuuuuuu....kash mujhe itna hot and happening pati mil jaye hahaha....lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
seriously even i want a pati like him but i am just 19 so i have to wait for some more time to find my prince charming...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
story continued........

Alekh makes sadhana sit in a chair and asks her how to mix roti flour then sadhana says it k alekhjii lets eat some thing from outside then alekh says no i want to cook for u , u took good care of me when i was not well now it's my turn so tell me darling . Then sadi tells him how, he is struggling with mixing it and has some flour on his nose and hair ,sadi sees this and laughs then alekh comes to her and keeps some flour on her cheek and says now it's even and laughs then sadhana takes a handful of flour and runs behind alekh they both are running when sadi looses balance and is about to fall when alekh runs swiftly towards and holds her, they have a major eyelock then sadhana puts all the flour on alekh's face ,alekh gets angry and says wow this is what i get for helping my wife and walks off from there then sadhana comes behind him and puts a hand on his shoulder and says i am so sorry alekhjii i didn't mean to hurt i was just having fun then alekh turns behind and pulls her towards him and says mee too jaan and rubs his face on hers so all the flour which is on his face is now on her also .Sadhana says what is this alekh jii? and goes to wash her face then alekh comes and splashes all water on her and she is all wet , alekh then comes close to her and sadhana pushes him and runs out of the room. He goes behind her but she closes and changes her clothes while alekh is standing near the door , sadi opens the door after sometime but doesn't find alekh so she goes to the kitchen but there also alekh is not there , then alekh says i am here my angel behind u then sadi and may i ask u what u are doing there? then alekh kneels down and gives her some roses and says beautiful flowers for a more beautiful lady sadi blushes.....................to be continued........................................

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
hmm sooo sad no replyyyyyy

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