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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: priya98

hey make it so romantic that from the beginning till the end i should blush !!!!!!!!

okk here i goooo
after the competition had been over,ragini cums and hugs to ranveer.ranveer is so happyy by this alekh also hugs ragi nd congrats her.sadi is watching all this by standing in a corner.she had given money to vineet aand operation has been started there.ragini looks to sadhna by lovely way and alekh so..sadi had tears os happy nd goes from there.ragi wasa bout to say sumthing to alekh but alekh sys main jaanta hu ragini tum kya kehna cha rahi hu..aaj iss pyaar ke din na sirf tum hi ranveer ki khushi lutaaogi balki main bhi kisi ke zindegi mein pyaar bhar donga hamesha-hamesha ke liye....alekh moves towards green room.rv sys wow bhiya really aaj toh aapki prem ki naiyya par hi ho gayi.alekh sees the green room has not so many girls.so he slightly enters.he finds sadhna's room sadi is sitting there putting of her eaarings.meanwhile,alekh enters.sadi stands nd sys alekh ji aap yaha..sadi turns anoder sidealekh cums closer to her.sadhna tunrs to say sum words ki she finds alekh had kneeled down and has open his hand to sadhnna is sying main jaanta hu bahut hi bura husband hu main,lekin kya karon pyaar bhi tumse baht karta hu aaj ranveer ne iss aankhri imtahan se guzerne ko kaha toh samajh aaya ki iss zindegi ke har imtahaan mein tumhara saath chahiye yeh alekh rajwansh sadhna rajwansh ke bina adhura hai[this dialogue echoes]bolo sadhna will u be my valentine forever??sadhna had tears as well as allu also..sadi tunrs anoder way,,she sys alekh ji sab khatam hu chuka hai aur mummyji bhi mujhe kabhi nahi apnaayegi..alekh holds sadi'shoulder nd make her turn and sy par nain tumhe hamesha ke liye apne mann aur tann se apna chuka hu[sann.san song plys]suddenly lights off.sadhna was going outside ki allu pulss her off sadhna's backside chunri falls her hair blows in air..alekh lifts her face.and sys in romantc voice,"I Love You,Sadhna Forever And Ever"[music of latika's theme plays]sadhnaeyes r blinking in moon light.alekh makes sadhna's face closer.alekh is slowly going to kiss sadhna's lips.he is so close...to sadhna.sadhna runs behind a step but alekh holds herhand and slowly moves his hand over sadhna's hand to sholuder and kiss on her neck-shoulder side sadhna blinks again.sadi turns and closely hugs alekh.alekh do the same...they r like in love-heaven.alekh then kiss on sadi's cheek both side.and sys i will never let you go and now i will mk u al special feeling of love ..and kisses on her both eyes....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
omg simmii
that scene was just just
i have no words!
i want to see scenes like this in bidaai
wahh i love the way alekh appologised...
and the romantic scenes in the moonlight
wow simran i love it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
since everyone is writing one, and congrats for having unity of all the fans, here is my creation.

So here we go...

Malika calls Aalekh after his conversation with Ranveer.
Malika says Aalekh ji hamari meeting jo aaj raat 8 baje hone wali hai woh bahot zaroori meeting hai, par ek emergency aa gayi hai, aur mujhe emergency ko attend karna padega. Hum is meeting ko cancel nahin kar sakte warna bahot bada nuksaan ho jayega. Kya aap chale jayenge hamare farmhouse par. Aalekh gets an idea, and says Malika ji me meeting to attend karloonga par aap ki company ka representative wahaan hon zaroori hai. Malika says ki, pata hai aalekhji, par in files ke saath mein kisiko trust nahin kar sakti, aur Sadhna bhi chooti pe hai.

At the other end, Sadhna is done with competition. She has lost but, Ranveer and Ragini upon finding out the truth hands all the money over to her, and look at Vasu disgustingly. All go to hospital, and mami is fixed now.

Back to Aalekh and Mallika. Aalekh: mallika ji, agar sadhna chooti pe hai to kya hua, aap unhe bula lijiye. I am sure woh aapko mana nahin karegi. Unko yeh kehna ki unko aapki jagah pe meeting attend karni hi hogi. Mallika comes to her crapy self again, and agrees to whatever Aalekh says. Aalekh has a smirk on his face after the conversation.

Mallika calls Sadhna at the hospital, and tell her that u have to come right away. I dont want any excuses, and tells her to bring extra clothes with her as the meeting is out of town at her farm house. She tells her to be at the office in 15 minutes. Sadhna explains the situation to mamaji and leaves the hospital. She is still dressed in the competition clothes.

Sadhna reaches the office. She doesnt find Mallika there. She calls her, and Mallika tells her to go outside with the files in her cabin. There is a car waiting for her outside which will take her to the farm house. Sadhna rushes outside, and sees a black car. She goes opens the door, and sees Aalekh inside.

She goes aap???? Mallika madam kahaan hai? Aalekh is mesmerized by her, and just keeps on looking at her. Aalekh pretending to be angry, tell her to sit in the car as we are being late for the meeting. Sadhna thinking, but, quickly sits in the car. Aalekh drives off. They are in the outskirts of the city going towards the Farm house. Its raining. Aalekh keeps glancing back and forth at Sadhna, and sadhna is feeeling a bit weird. Aalekh keeps on looking at her and at the road. Sadhna pretends to sleep. Aalekh puts on loud music.

Sadhna: Aalekhji yeh aap kya kar rahe hain
Aalekh: meine kya kiya, tum so rahi ho, aur mujhe neend na aa jaye isi liye meine music laga diya to isme kuch galat kiya (he says flritingly)
Sadhna looks the other way
Sadhna's hand is sitting on the gear stick, and Aalekh sees this. He starts getting naughty, and puts his hand on top of hers, and starts to change the gear. Sadhna looks at him in shockingly, and tries to remove her hand. But he presses it really hard with his hand on top of it.

Sadhna removes her hand. They reach the farm house.

The deligates are there, and they have the meeting. Aalekh orders Sadhna to get something to drink for everyone. Sadhna goes into the kitchen while Aalekh watches her go. while she is gone, Aalekh quickly finishes the meeting with the deligates and gets them to leave.

Sadhna comes out of the kitchen with drinks, and sees there is no one in the room. She gets panicked and wonders where everyone went. She looks here and there. From the other end of the room Aalekh watches her, and just stares at her ever so lovingly. Sadhna sees him, and gets nervous. She asks: Aalekhji sab kahan gaye. Aalekh: meeting khatam ho gayi aur sab chale gaye. Sadhna: chale gaye matlab? yeh meeting to do dino tak chalne waali thi naa. Aalekh: haan woh kuch documents missing the, to kisi aur din baki ka kaam ho jayega. During the conversation, Aalekh is slowly walking towards where Sadhna is.
Sadhna realizing this starts walking backwards. Aalekh still keeps on walking towards her with so much passion, and naughtiness in his eyes. Sadhna crashes into the wall, and Aalekh closes himself on her with his both hands on the wall on either side of Sadhna. Sadhna: aalekhji please, and turns her head to the side...Aalekh: brings his finger on Sadhna's face, and runs it along her face, and says: kyun dar lag raha hai Sadhna. Sadhna looks at him with her eyes wide open in surprise. Sadhna struggles, and Aalekh just keeps on getting closer with his body leaning against Sadhna, and his both hands holding her arms. Sadhna; aap aisa kyun kar rahe hai, aap to mujhe chod chooke hai na, to ab yeh sab theek nahin hai. Aalekh: accha...kya theek nahin hai Sadhna. meine kaha chali jao, aur tum chali gayi..tum rook bhi to sakti thi na sadhna (he says this while playing with her). Sadhna: Aalekh ji please chod di jiye, and a tear falls out of her eye. Aalekh sees and brings his lips closer to her cheek, and kisses off the tear. Sadhna pushes him away and runs to another room, and closes the door.

If you like it, I can continue let me know....
Edited by sweetchilly1234 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sweetchilly1234

since everyone is writing one, and congrats for having unity of all the fans, here is my creation.

So here we go...

Malika calls Aalekh after his conversation with Ranveer.
Malika says Aalekh ji hamari meeting jo aaj raat 8 baje hone wali hai woh bahot zaroori meeting hai, par ek emergency aa gayi hai, aur mujhe emergency ko attend karna padega. Hum is meeting ko cancel nahin kar sakte warna bahot bada nuksaan ho jayega. Kya aap chale jayenge hamare farmhouse par. Aalekh gets an idea, and says Malika ji me meeting to attend karloonga par aap ki company ka representative wahaan hon zaroori hai. Malika says ki, pata hai aalekhji, par in files ke saath mein kisiko trust nahin kar sakti, aur Sadhna bhi chooti pe hai.

At the other end, Sadhna is done with competition. She has lost but, Ranveer and Ragini upon finding out the truth hands all the money over to her, and look at Vasu disgustingly. All go to hospital, and mami is fixed now.

Back to Aalekh and Mallika. Aalekh: mallika ji, agar sadhna chooti pe hai to kya hua, aap unhe bula lijiye. I am sure woh aapko mana nahin karegi. Unko yeh kehna ki unko aapki jagah pe meeting attend karni hi hogi. Mallika comes to her crapy self again, and agrees to whatever Aalekh says. Aalekh has a smirk on his face after the conversation.

Mallika calls Sadhna at the hospital, and tell her that u have to come right away. I dont want any excuses, and tells her to bring extra clothes with her as the meeting is out of town at her farm house. She tells her to be at the office in 15 minutes. Sadhna explains the situation to mamaji and leaves the hospital. She is still dressed in the competition clothes.

Sadhna reaches the office. She doesnt find Mallika there. She calls her, and Mallika tells her to go outside with the files in her cabin. There is a car waiting for her outside which will take her to the farm house. Sadhna rushes outside, and sees a black car. She goes opens the door, and sees Aalekh inside.

She goes aap???? Mallika madam kahaan hai? Aalekh is mesmerized by her, and just keeps on looking at her. Aalekh pretending to be angry, tell her to sit in the car as we are being late for the meeting. Sadhna thinking, but, quickly sits in the car. Aalekh drives off. They are in the outskirts of the city going towards the Farm house. Its raining. Aalekh keeps glancing back and forth at Sadhna, and sadhna is feeeling a bit weird. Aalekh keeps on looking at her and at the road. Sadhna pretends to sleep. Aalekh puts on loud music.

Sadhna: Aalekhji yeh aap kya kar rahe hain
Aalekh: meine kya kiya, tum so rahi ho, aur mujhe neend na aa jaye isi liye meine music laga diya to isme kuch galat kiya (he says flritingly)
Sadhna looks the other way
Sadhna's hand is sitting on the gear stick, and Aalekh sees this. He starts getting naughty, and puts his hand on top of hers, and starts to change the gear. Sadhna looks at him in shockingly, and tries to remove her hand. But he presses it really hard with his hand on top of it.

Sadhna removes her hand. They reach the farm house.

The deligates are there, and they have the meeting. Aalekh orders Sadhna to get something to drink for everyone. Sadhna goes into the kitchen while Aalekh watches her go. while she is gone, Aalekh quickly finishes the meeting with the deligates and gets them to leave.

Sadhna comes out of the kitchen with drinks, and sees there is no one in the room. She gets panicked and wonders where everyone went. She looks here and there. From the other end of the room Aalekh watches her, and just stares at her ever so lovingly. Sadhna sees him, and gets nervous. She asks: Aalekhji sab kahan gaye. Aalekh: meeting khatam ho gayi aur sab chale gaye. Sadhna: chale gaye matlab? yeh meeting to do dino tak chalne waali thi naa. Aalekh: haan woh kuch documents missing the, to kisi aur din baki ka kaam ho jayega. During the conversation, Aalekh is slowly walking towards where Sadhna is.
Sadhna realizing this starts walking backwards. Aalekh still keeps on walking towards her with so much passion, and naughtiness in his eyes. Sadhna crashes into the wall, and Aalekh closes himself on her with his both hands on the wall on either side of Sadhna. Sadhna: aalekhji please, and turns her head to the side...Aalekh: brings his finger on Sadhna's face, and runs it along her face, and says: kyun dar lag raha hai Sadhna. Sadhna looks at him with her eyes wide open in surprise. Sadhna struggles, and Aalekh just keeps on getting closer with his body leaning against Sadhna, and his both hands holding her arms. Sadhna; aap aisa kyun kar rahe hai, aap to mujhe chod chooke hai na, to ab yeh sab theek nahin hai. Aalekh: accha...kya theek nahin hai Sadhna. meine kaha chali jao, aur tum chali gayi..tum rook bhi to sakti thi na sadhna (he says this while playing with her). Sadhna: Aalekh ji please chod di jiye, and a tear falls out of her eye. Aalekh sees and brings his lips closer to her cheek, and kisses off the tear. Sadhna pushes him away and runs to another room, and closes the door.

If you like it, I can continue let me know....

👏too good yaar pls continue i loved it .omg i loved allu's naughtiness . great work😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: simransalekh

okk here i goooo
after the competition had been over,ragini cums and hugs to ranveer.ranveer is so happyy by this alekh also hugs ragi nd congrats her.sadi is watching all this by standing in a corner.she had given money to vineet aand operation has been started there.ragini looks to sadhna by lovely way and alekh so..sadi had tears os happy nd goes from there.ragi wasa bout to say sumthing to alekh but alekh sys main jaanta hu ragini tum kya kehna cha rahi hu..aaj iss pyaar ke din na sirf tum hi ranveer ki khushi lutaaogi balki main bhi kisi ke zindegi mein pyaar bhar donga hamesha-hamesha ke liye....alekh moves towards green room.rv sys wow bhiya really aaj toh aapki prem ki naiyya par hi ho gayi.alekh sees the green room has not so many girls.so he slightly enters.he finds sadhna's room sadi is sitting there putting of her eaarings.meanwhile,alekh enters.sadi stands nd sys alekh ji aap yaha..sadi turns anoder sidealekh cums closer to her.sadhna tunrs to say sum words ki she finds alekh had kneeled down and has open his hand to sadhnna is sying main jaanta hu bahut hi bura husband hu main,lekin kya karon pyaar bhi tumse baht karta hu aaj ranveer ne iss aankhri imtahan se guzerne ko kaha toh samajh aaya ki iss zindegi ke har imtahaan mein tumhara saath chahiye yeh alekh rajwansh sadhna rajwansh ke bina adhura hai[this dialogue echoes]bolo sadhna will u be my valentine forever??sadhna had tears as well as allu also..sadi tunrs anoder way,,she sys alekh ji sab khatam hu chuka hai aur mummyji bhi mujhe kabhi nahi apnaayegi..alekh holds sadi'shoulder nd make her turn and sy par nain tumhe hamesha ke liye apne mann aur tann se apna chuka hu[sann.san song plys]suddenly lights off.sadhna was going outside ki allu pulss her off sadhna's backside chunri falls her hair blows in air..alekh lifts her face.and sys in romantc voice,"I Love You,Sadhna Forever And Ever"[music of latika's theme plays]sadhnaeyes r blinking in moon light.alekh makes sadhna's face closer.alekh is slowly going to kiss sadhna's lips.he is so close...to sadhna.sadhna runs behind a step but alekh holds herhand and slowly moves his hand over sadhna's hand to sholuder and kiss on her neck-shoulder side sadhna blinks again.sadi turns and closely hugs alekh.alekh do the same...they r like in love-heaven.alekh then kiss on sadi's cheek both side.and sys i will never let you go and now i will mk u al special feeling of love ..and kisses on her both eyes....

👏fantastic i really blushed aur lights scene toh mindblowing tha my god u really wrote a wonderful scene . iam read it 5 times already and i am can't stop reading more and more. really u r a star ⭐️ my friend well deserved star⭐️.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
thnkss priya😳 thnks so much i made it spe 4 my frnds😉 and thnks aneesha too😳😉 and sweetchilly plzz yeh kiya plzz ocnt kar aisa sa scene toh padne ka mann karta hi reheta hai plzz dont kill us by waiting must cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks to priya and simran for liking my post. You know I feel like I should make them make me the creative head of the show..You will have hot scenes everyday, promise...hhaahaaa...jokes apart....here is the story...

so I left off at Sadhna running to another room and closing the door...
Aalekh: goes Sadhna, Sadhna
Aalekh in his naughty way gives the ever amazing naughty smile, and runs his hand through his hair in a style.

Sadhna is in the room, all blushing but, still a bit upset Aalekh, and scared of his naughtiness. She is thinking ab kya karun, yeh sab to chale gaye. Bahot raat ho gayi hai, ghar bhi to nahin ja sakti. Aur bahar bhi bahot andhera hai. Aur bahaar Aalekh ji pata nahin kya kar rahe honge. She is in a dilemma, and playing with her dupatta...

She decides to go freshen up, and go to sleep.
She goes to sleep, and its around 2:00am in the clock. She gets thirsty. There is a jug sitting on the night table. But there is no water in there. She is very thirsty, and scared of going outside as Aalekh might be there. she looks at the clock, and thinks oh Aalekh ji to jaldi so jate hain. To ab tak to woh gehri neend mein honge, mein choop chap bahar jake, kitchen se pani le aati hoon, ise pehle ke woh jaag jaye.

She is in a netted black night gown. She goes out slowly, looking here and there. She walks out of the room, scared to wake Aalekh. On the other hand, Aalekh is lying on the sofa in wearing his night pants, and no shirt, just the under garment on top. Showing his muscles and hands.
Its dark in the room, and very quiet.

He realizes that Sadhna is in the room so he smirks, and pretends to sleep. Sadhna passes by the sofa thinking Aalekh is sleeping. She enters the kitchen and goes towards the fridge. She takes a water bottle out of the fridge, and starts to open it. The bottle is sealed tight, and she is struggling with it. All this while the fridge door is open, and the light is shining through it, and Sadhna is standing by the fridge door. Aalekh sees her struggling and smiles.

Her back is facing the room, and her face towards the fridge. Aalekh slowly comes into the kitche,, Sadhna oblivious to his entry, still struggling with the bottle. Aalekh stands right behind Sadhna, and gets even more naughtier. He slides his hands from sadhna's shoulders down to her hand, he is standing as if he is hugging her from the back. His hands slowly going down Sadhna's arms on both sides, and going towards the bottle. Sadhna in shocked/surprise expression, not knowing how to react. His hands are now on Sadhna's hands, and trying to help Sadhna open the bottle while his face is on Sadhna's shoulder, and his both hands pressing against Sadhna's trying to open the bottle. Sadhna looks all shy, looks down while he is doing this. She is trying to find a way out of this situation, a way out of this dilemma.

Aalekh takes his time in opening the bottle with his hands on Sadhna's, and his face facing towards her while she is looking down, and his face nearly touching hers. His eyes just staring at her with so much passion. Its a slow motion scene with romantic song playing in the back. The bottle is open, and Sadhna looks towards it but, Aalekh is still in the same position. He brings his face even more close towards her, and Sadhna pushes him away, and the water falls. She starts to leave, and Aalekh grabs her arm while looking at her from the back.

Sadhna: Chod dijiiye Aalekhji, (looking down)
She tilts her head towards him a little, and says: please chod dijiye
Aalekh nods no while starring her down still holding her hand...
Sadhna tries to go, and Aalekh pulls her towards him extremely powerfully. Now Sadhna uski bahon mein, and her facing his. She is struggling, and Aalekh is looking down at her (like he is gonna eat her). He is starring her down like anything while, twisting her one hand at her back, hanging tightly on to her very close to him. everytime she stuggles, he presses her even harder against him, and twists her hand. Both have major eye lock. Sadhna tries to whisper, Aalekhji please mujhe chod dijiye, and he brings his finger forward to her lips, and says shhhhhhhhh in slow motion. Both are starring at each other, major eyelock people, and Aalekh moves his lips towards her slowly, in slow motion. Sadhna starring at him, he is very close to her lips, and as soon as he is about to kiss, she turns her face, and he ends up kissing on her cheek. Sadhna extremely shocked at what Aalekh did, and what he is upto. She is trying to leave, but, Aalekh doesnt want to let her. She pushes him hard, and he stumbles towards the back while she runs towards the room. He says: kiss to mein le kar hi rahoonga Sadhna. Abhi to ek din hi guzara hai hamara yahaan, mere paas aur ek din aur ek raat hai, tumhe mera banane ke liye.


ahm ahm people....if you like it comment...I like sweet comments from poepl for me to continue...let me know if you want to know what happens in next 1 day 1 night thats left...ttyl...keep on commenting to keep this thread fresh so, more people can read it...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
oh my god
i dont know what to say
i cant breathe, i need oxygen
wowowowowo
OH MY GOD
i love it
so much
so much so much
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
woah you need to write some more
that was flippin fantastic...
i love how cheeky alekh is.... u really really need to be on the creative team..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
thanks mrss..hansija...hahahah...i wish i was on the creative team..will bring their trp, and all the rps up in one week...no questions asked..hahahha...I am happy you liked it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mindblowing. fantastic,
man i was out of breath!!!!!
i am dying to know what will happen next.
jaldi update karo yaar!!!!

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