||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143

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brba

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Posted: 15 years ago

#391

Hi ur ff s superb....n ur a quick updater...
keep it up...sure u ll get more readers...

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sukanya.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#392

Sanju Yaar MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!! Both the jodis were rocking.......... But as Just in said ragvir keliye dil mange more😆.

Sanju jaldi kar yaar, we are all impatiently waiting for the next episode😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#393

omgggggg,sanju diiiiiii,greattt jobb diiiii.....awesomee diii..nice chapterrrrrrrr........ragvir partttss r mindblowinggggg😍........cantttttttt waittt for next chapterrrr...jaldii postt karnaa....😊😳

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#394

thank you to all my darlings 🤗

Just wait and watch, the next chapter will be fulfilled with romance and laughter 😉

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: nasco
amazing update yaar!!
ranvir is slowly falling for ragini

ragvir bag exchange cracked me up lol!!
just imagine kinny's face how cute it wuld be??

aalekh sadhna icecream scene was great
precap is interesting!!😆

this is his face, his eyes are widened with surprise 😳 hehehe ab tu hi soch kitna cute lag raha hoga woh 😳

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Saniha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: s.sanj90
thank you to all my darlings 🤗
Just wait and watch, the next chapter will be fulfilled with romance and laughter 😉

to just cant waitt😃

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#397

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lattooo ho gayii sanjuuu lattoooo

BLUSH Scream BLUSH BLUSH Scream Scream
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Scream Scream Scream Scream

sanjuuu now I wan to eat ice cream mammmaa 😭 mujhe Ice cream chahiye and I also want guy like aalekh who will buy me my ice cream........ bol sanju mere liye aisa ladka dhoondegi naa wel Mai aur kya boloon yaar you toh naa me ko imaginary world mei daal dia hai a world filled with romance UFF yeh Ranvir Ragini bhi naa man gaye bhai they just need an excuse to fight kabhi toh yaar inko thora pyaar se baat karao
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Simran Shriya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: s.sanj90
eveyrone thank you all for reading my FF and making ti sucessful...
i just want to let everyone know that this is only the beginning there's alot more to come...this just doesn't end here...it'll get better and better. just wait anf watch 😉

no thnks sanju woh kya kare hum log sabhi bahut hi greedy hai😉jaha bhi acche logo se likha gaya supervv ff padte hai wahi kiche chale aate hai😆😳

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#399

heheh i'll update the next part in a little while...

it'll be fulfilled with fun...aap sab enjoy karoge...infact thoda lamba bhi hoga pehle se 😊

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Sanjana Singh Chahal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#400

Chapter 18

It's morning. Ranvir wakes up, and goes to the bathroom to wash his face. He then turns is music on loud and begins to workout. Ragini is disturbed by the music, and she gets irritated. She covers her ears with the pillow, but the music is too loud to ignore. Ragini gets out of the bed full in anger, and leaves the room. She bangs on ranvir's door, and yelling "EH LANGOOR, MUSIC KA VOLUME DOWN KAR" Ranvir is unable to hear the bang on the door, due to the loud music. Ragini bangs on the door real hard and yells "EH DJ...MUSIC BANDH KAR." Ranvir finally hears something, and opens the door. He sees ragini standing there. Ranvir says "Kya hai? Kyun gala phad ke mere kamre ke baahar chila rahi ho?" ragini is irritated and says "kyunki tu behra hai, isiliye itna chila rahi hoon. Music ki volume down kar. Samjha." Ranvir says "Main workout kar raha hoon, aur bina music ke main workout nahi kar sakta." Ragini yells "TOH KYA ITNA LOUD VOLUME RAKHNA ZAROORI HAI? TUMHE NAHI SONA TOH MAT SO, LEKIN YAHAN PE KUCH LOGON KO SONA HAI. SUBAH KE 6 BAJE, ITNA LOUD MUSIC LAGA KAR, MERI NEEND KYUN HARAAM KAR RAHE HO?" Ragini is tired from yelling 😆. Ranvir says "hogaya? Ab ja" ragini continues to yell "VOLUME NEECHE KAR WARNA'" ranvir puts his finger on his lips and says "ssshhhhh..." ragini quiets down and says "KYA?" the volume is down ranvir says "Volume down hogaya hai, ab apna volume bhi neeche kar." Ragini realizes that the volume is down. Ragini says "dobara meri neend kharaab ki na, toh dekhna kya haal karti hoon tumhara."ranvir waves her bye. Ragini leaves in anger, while ranvir smiles sarcastically. He closes her door and gets back to his working out.
Ragini lies on her bed and tries to get some sleep, but is unable to. Ragini gets up and throws her pillow on the side and says "saari neend kharaab kardi meri. Uss langoor ko toh main chodungi nahi. Samjhta kya hai apne aap ko. Ab kya karoon? Neend toh aayegi nahi, walk pe hi chali jaati hoon." Ragini quickly gets out of the bed, grabs her shawl and leaves to go for a walk. Ragini knocks on saniha's door. Saniha opens the door after a while and says "ragini tum? Itni subah, kya baat hai?' Ragini says "saniha mere saath walk pe chale gi?" saniha says "kamaal hai, main bhi walk ke liye hi nikalne waali thi. Chal." Ragini and saniha leave for a walk.
Ranvir comes out of the bathroom wearing a pink full sleeve shirt, along with blue jeans. He has his first 3 buttons open and sleeves rolled up half way😳 Ranvir throws his towel on the bed and goes in front of the mirror. He begins to brush his hair, his phone rings. Ranir cheks the phone it is aalekh. Ranvir answers the phone. Aalekh says 'Hey bro, kaisa hai? Manali theek pohunch gaya?" ranvir says 'haan bhaiya, main abhi aapko phone karne waala tha." Aalekh says "aur bata kaisa hai manali?" ranvir says "bhai abhi toh theek se dekha nahi, kal competition ke baad hi ache se dekhunga, aur phir bataunga. Waise yahaan thand hai, but bohut khoobsurat hai." Aalekh says 'Acha theek hai, main tujhe kal phone karunga theek hai. Abhi main office ke liye nikalta hoon. Bye.' Ranvir says bye to aalekh and hangs up. Ranvir leaves for rehearsals. Nisha is waiting outside the resort along with everyone, ranvir comes running. Nisha says "Late again.!" Ranvir apologises once again. Nisha says "Never mind, come on get on the bus." Ranvir quickly boards the bus and they leave for the venue where the competiton is to take place.
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Kaushi calls out to Malti. Malti comes rushing down the stairs. Kaushi says "Malti, beta tum tayaar ho?" Malti says "Ji ma main tayar hoon." Kaushi says "Toh chalo, vsundhra ji humara wait kar rahi hongi. Aaj pandit ji ke paas jaana hai na." Malti says "Ji ma mujhe do minute dijiye, main zara apna purse le aaun." Kaushi nods yes and malti quickly rushes to get her handbag. Kaushi calls out to malti once again, malti rushes down with a handbag and says "Chaliya ma." Kaushi and Malti leave for the rajvansh mansion.

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Nisha is giving out everyone their costumes. Nisha gives Ragini a white lehnga. The waist border line of the lehnga has heavy work done with pink and white stones. The choli is plain and baby pink in color. Along with a white dupatta with white stones all over. Nisha says "Ragini, tum yeh try karo." Ragini smiles and nods. Nisha gives Ranvir a white kurta pyjama that has a metallic look. Nisha tells him to try it on, and shows him the way to the makup room, but Ranvir accidently goes the to the opposite way. Ragini is in the females make up room and is trying out her costume. She is trying to tie the strings of her choli but is unable to. Ranvir opens the door without knocking and sees ragini there. Ragini quickly turns around and sees Ranvir standing there. Ranvir is slowly moving towards ragini, ragini is moving backwards. Ragini is leabing on the wall, and is unable to move any further. Ranvir is getting closer and closer to ragini. Ragini's breathing get a littler heavier. Ranvir slowly holds her hand and pulls her towards himself. Ranvir slowly puts his hands around ragini and ties her strings of the choli. Ragini is looking down, ranvir just watches her and is moving towards her. He slightly moves her hair away from her face. Ragini is slowly looks up and sees Ranvir is getting closer to her, Ragini closes her eyes, and ranvir does to. Ragini yells "RANVIR. TUM SUN RAHE HO YAH NAHI?" Ranvir comes back to his senses and looks around and realises that he was dreaming. Ragini is yells "tum mein zara si bhi manners hai yaha nahi? Tumhe itna nahi pata kisi bhi kamre mein aane se pehle knock karna chahiye. Aur by the way yeh ladies make up room hai, you shouldn't even be here." Ranvir is confused and looks at the door and sees that he has entered the wrong room. Ranvir gives Ragini and blank look. Ragini has that "I can't believe this guy" look. 😆 Ragini says "RANVIR...tum jaane ka kya loge?" Ranvir looks around and says "I am sorry" Ranvir leaves the room and closes the door. He is outside the make up room and thinks about what he just imagined and says "Ranvir tu paagal ho gaya hai." He leaves to find his make up room.

Ragini is on the stage, waiting for ranvir to come so they can do their final rehearsal. As ranvir is coming on stage he think "ragini ki taraf mat dekh ranvir, ignore her" Ranvir sigh in relief. Ragini gives him an angry look, while Ranvir tries to avoid making an eye contact with her. Nisha says "Ready?" Ranvir and Ragini nod yes. Nisha says "MUSIC" The song Sajna hai mujhe begins to play and Ragvir rehearse. (guys I'll describe the proper dance during the actual competiton 😉) Ranvir and Ragini are dancing. Ranvir is trying to avoid looking at Ragini. Nisha interupts "STOP THE MUSIC" the music stop and Ranvir says "Kya hua ma'am?" Nisha says "Ranvir tumhara dhyaan kidhar hai? Mujeh baar baar yaad dilana hoga tumhe ki mujhe Romance chahiye. Par tum toh ragini ki taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe ho. Kyun?" Ranvir looks uncomfortable. Nisha says "C'mon answer me?" Ranvir doesn't answer. Nisha says "dekho ranvir aaj last day hai practice ka, don't ruin it now please. Mujhe ek perfect performance chahiye. PERFECT PERFORMANCE. Mujhe kal jeetna hai samjhe." Ranvir nods yes and nisha says "C'mon do it from the top." Ragvir take their positions. Nisha says "MUSIC" Ragvir begin to dance one more time and this time ranvir gives his best and so does ragini. At the end of the performance everyone is cheering, nisha is really happy with the performance and says "That was fantastic. Now this was a power packed performance. kal aapko isse behtar karna hai, aur humare college ke liye trophy jeetni hai." RagVir nod. Nisha turns around and says it to the other group aswell. Nisha says "Guys, can we our group performers on stage please." The other group goes on stage and begin to practice their dance.

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Kaushi and Malti are at the mandir along with vasu. Vasu says "Pandit ji, yeh humare bete aalekh ki kundli hai, aur yeh saadhna ki. In dono ki kundli dekh ke bataiye ki shaadi ke liye sabse shubh mahurat koun sa rahega." The pandit looks at the kundlis and says "Dekhiye, in dono ki shaadi ke liye agle mahine ki 12 taareek ko bohut shubh hai, warna 6 mahine tak koi bhi shubh mahurat nahi hai." Vasu says "agle mahine ki 12 tareek ko...yaani dedh mahine baad. Kaushalya ji aap ka kya khayaal hai?" Kaushi smiles and says "Agle mahine ki 12 taareek bohut achi rahegi." Vasu says "Hum bhi yeh hi soch rahe the, hum aur intezaar nahi karna chahte." Kaushi and vasu smile and vasu says "Pandit ji agle mahine ki 12 tareek pakki." Vasu and Kaushi give dakshna toh the pandit. Kaushi says "acha pandit ji hum chalte hain." They say bye to pandit ji and leave.
Vasu says "hum abhi inderjit ko phone karke bata dete hai." Kaushi nods yes. And kausbhi gives PC a call and informs him about the date. Pc says "Yeh toh achi khabar hai kaushalya ji, humein tayaariya shuru kar deni chahiye." Kaushi says "Ji, main ghar aake aapse baat karti hoon." Pc says okay and hangs up.

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Inderjit informs aalekh about the wedding date. Aalekh seems a little disappointed. Vinu says "Kya bata hai aalekh? Shaadi ki itni jaldi hai kya? Arrey bhai dedh mahine kit oh baat hai, who toh yun guzar jaayenge." Aalekh feels a little shy and says 'Excuse me." Aalekh leaves the cabin and vinu says "ladkiya aise mauko pe sharmaati hai yeh toh pata tha, lekin ladke bhi sharmaate hai, yeh aaj pehli baar dekh raha hoon." Inderjit and Vinu laugh.

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Aalekh enters saadhna's room looking disappointed. Saadhna says "Kya hua aalekh? Aap itne upset kyun lag rahe ho?" Aalekh sits down on the couch and says 'Kya yar saadhna, tumhe pata hai pandit ji ne humari shaadi ki date deh mahine ke baad nikaali hai. DEDH MAHINE. Can you believe it?" Saadhna smiles and sits on the edge of the couch aalekh was sitting on and says "Aalekh dedh mahine yun beet jaayenge, dekhna tum." Aalekh says "Yun beet jaayenge matlab? Arrey pehle toh yeh pandit ji koun hote hai humari wedding ki date fix karne waale. Ki toh ki, lekin dedh mahine baad. DEDH MAHINA. Mujhse itna wait nahi hoga." Saadhna begins to laugh. Aalekh says "tum hass rahi ho? Yahan mera hare k pal tumhare bina guzaarna mushkil ho raha hai aur ab mujhe dedh mahina aur wait karna hoga. GREAT." Saadhna takes aalekh face in her hands and makes him turn to face her. She says "aalekh, ab itna toh wait karna hi padega. Dekhna tum yeh dedh mahine palak jhapakte beet jaayenge." Aalekh says "sach?" Sadhna nods yes. Aalekh blinks and says "dedh mahine beet gaye kya?" Saadhna and Aalekh laugh. Saadhna ives aalekh a hug and says "Tum paagal ho aalekh." Aalekh says "kyun yeh paagal pasand nahi hai kya?" saadhna smiles and says "issi paagal se toh pyaar hai mujhe." Aalekh says "Really?" saadhna laughs and says "really" Aalekh and saadhna have a cute moment. Aalekh says "I Love You Saadhna." Saadhna says 'I Love You Too." Saadhna backs away and says "ab kama karein? Yeh office hai." Aalekh says "Chalo bhai kaam karo." Saadhna smiles and they get back to work.

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It's night. Ranvir is lying on his bed and thinks "Yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Main uss jungly billi ke baare mein itna kyun sochta hoon? Ranvir tu paagal hai. Tu kuch aur kar." Ranvir begins to look for something, he sees a magazine and begins to read magazine, but he keeps getting back into Ragini's thoughts. Ranvir throws the magazine away and irritatingly grabs his blanket and puts it over his face as he lies back down. 😆 Ranvir begins to dream (Om Mangalam song is playing from kambhakkt ishq) he imagines himself with ragini in that song (it's the same as the actual song 🤣) Ranvir gets up screaming "NO" Ranvir is sweating and he's breathing heavily. Ranvir says "yeh toh sapno mein bhi peecha nahi chodti. Oh God! HELP!" Ranvir wipes the sweat of his face with his hands. He look at the side table and grabs a glass of water. He drinks it all up in one go and feels a little relaxed. 😆 ranvir gets worried and says "Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath." (his face looks like he's going to cry any moment in a cute way though 🤣)

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Saadhna is on her bed, her phone rings. Saadhna answers the phone. Aalekh says "Kya kar rahi ho? Main bhi kaisa stupid sawaal pooch raha hoon, ofcourse tumhe mujhe hi yaad kar rahi hogi, aur kya. Right?" saadhna says "wrong. Main tumhe yaad nahi kar rahi thi, time hi nahi mila." Aalekh gets angry and says "Kya?" saadhna tries to control her laughter. Aalekh says "Theek hai. Main phone rakhta hoon, tumhare paas waqt nahi hoga na." Saadhan says "arrey baat toh suno, tum bhi na bilkul budhoo ho, arrey yaad toh tumhe main tab karti na, jab bhulti." Aalekh says "haan haan, ba sab yeh hi sun na..." Aalekh reaslises what saadhna had just said and he says "Kya kaha?" Saadhna smiles and says "tumhe yaad toh main tab karti na jab main bhoolti." Aalekh smiles and says "toh tum mera mazaak uda rahi thi huh?" Saadhna lets out a cute laugh and says "koshish kit hi." Aalekh smiles and says "saadhna yeh dedh mahine kaise guzrenge yaar. Yahan toh ek pal guzaarna mushkil ho raha hai." Saadhna says "Gzar jaayenge." Aalekh says "acha yeh batao ki shaadi ke baad tum honeymoon pe kahaan jaana chahogi?" Saadhna smiles shly and says "Jahaan tum le chalo." Aalekh says "nahi tum batao." Saadhna says 'Nahin tum batao." Aalekh says "main kaha na Tum batao." Saadhna says "theek hai...ek kaam karte hai hum dono apni apni choice batate hain. Ek saath." Aalekh says okay. Saadhna says "1...2...3" Aalekh and saadhna both say "Mauritius" Saadhna and aalekh laugh. Aalekh says "lo hogayi problem solve. Kal hi main tickets book karwata hoon. The sooner the better 😉" Saadhna smiles shyly. Aalekh says "sharmaana bandh karo saadhna." Saadhna is surprised and says 'nahi toh...main kaha sharmaa rahi hoon." Aalekh says 'acha? Tum nahi sharmaa rahi." Saadhna says "nahin." Aalekh says "nahi sharmaa rahi?" Saadhna smiles and says "acha baba, kar rahi thi lekin thoda sa." Kaushi calls out to saadhna. Saadhna says "aalekh mom aa rahi hai, main aapse baad mein baat karti hoon. Okay bye." Saadhna hangs up without listening to aalekh. Aalekh says "MOM...!" 😆 aalekh begins to lighly hits his phone with his forehead 😆 and says "Kuch nahi ho sakta mera." Aalekh grabs his blanket and covers his fae with it as he lies on the bed.

Precap : Ragini and Ranvir are performing. The judges give a standing ovation.

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago