||~*FF: Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na*~||~ RR&SA|Ch51 pg143 - Page 38

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just_in thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lol that reminds me we have never had a scene were ranvir is just admiring ragi. Waiting to see how you describe it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanju di, aisa koi cheez hai jisme aap perfect na ho??πŸ˜† πŸ€—
Di amazing part as always πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Ranvir is such a sweetheart, kitne pyaar se sorry bola haayeee 😍 flat ho gayi hamesha ki tarah πŸ˜† di dance toh bataa diya but song kaunsa hai??? thoda aur imagine karna hai πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Di please update the next part soon, i am sying to read about RagVir's manali trip, it looks RagVir will have loads of funny, chhed chhad waale romance now πŸ˜† 😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
Oooh! Sanju...nice update!! Waiting the next part already!! Gr8 Work Pal!
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Posted: 15 years ago
ohhhhh myyyyyyy godddddddddd,Ragini is wearing black jeans, with a white singlet top, and a denim jacket. Along with silver hoop earrings. Her hair is pinned back from the front, and are open from the back.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.................anddd,Ranvir is wearing blue jeans with a high neck light blue shirt (like the one he wore in tujh mein rab dikhta hai, but in light blue).....🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒

wowwwwww, sanju diiiii,u r a greatt writerrr......niceeeeee chapterrrr....anddd preview padhke tohh,canttttttt waittttt 4 nexttttttttt chapterrrrr diiiiiiii...........jaldiiiii postttt karnaaa plzz.....u r dπŸ‘ bestttt.......great jobbbbπŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi ur ff s awesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘... im eagerly waiting 4 d next update...
bt one small request im poor in hindi😭 so plz plz do write in english...

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow awsome yaar gr8 omg yeh alekh to bohut hi romantic hai wow i fully imagine this gr8 sanju sorry i m again late 2 reply gr8 again rs for saalekh and yeah hw sweetly sadi kisses aluu oh ho gr8 behcare ko inamm ka pata hi nahi tha and yeh alekh is so awsome guy i want this allu and nad yaar manali trip this is one of my fav place really cant wait for their trip hope ragvri wins plzz sanju cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lattooo ho gayii sanjuuu lattoooo

BLUSH Scream BLUSH BLUSH Scream Scream



Absolutely amazing...Great work Sanju
Loved the part especially where Ragini calls ranvir a Langur

And saadhna aalekh ke kya kehne..... Wah WAH yeh dono toh sabse aage nikal gayeee

LE Jhappi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 17

Ragini is reading a novel, she begins to feel sleepy, ranvir is listening to his ipod, with his eyes closed. Ragini dozes of while reading the novel. Ranvir's ipod freezes, and ranvir begins to reset his ipod, he tries to turn it on but doesn't work. Ranvir says "ab yeh isse kya hua...oh god please work. Ranvir gets irritated and throws his ipod in his bag which was placed right next to him on his left side. (Ranvir's BG music is playing throughout the staring scene) Ragini catches ranvir's eyes, Ranvir sees her sleeping. He found her so beautiful sleeping. He is taken over by ragini's beauty. Saniha sees ranvir looking at ragini, and has a mischievous smile. Saniha clears her throat, ranvir comes in his senses. Saniha says "Kya dekh rahe ho?" Ranvir says "...k...k...kuch nahi..." Saniha says "kuch nahi? I thought kit um ragini ko dekh rahe the." Ranvir hesitatantly says "r'r...r...ragini ko? Nahi toh, main toh woh'woh...woh pahaad dekh raha tha, dekho." Saniha turns around and sees mountains there. Saniha says "really? Well pahaad toh tumhari side pe bhi hai. Dekho." Saniha points to the other side, Ranvir turns around and sees mountains there. Ranvir says "uhhh main toh yahaan dekha nahi...ache hai na?" Saniha smiles, and ranvir smiles back and then turns around. He sighs and says in a low voice "dude, ragini ko kyun dek raha tha. Stupid." Ranvir hits himself on his head and begins to look out the window. (Ranvir's BG music is playing) Ranvir wanted to look at ragini, so he would see a glimpse of ragini and then look away.

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Saadhna is at home getting ready for her date with aalekh. She wears a one-shoulder white sequin knee length cocktail dress. There's silver contrast detail on bodice and strap. She wears silver colored studs. Saadhna has her hair clipped back, along with a side fringe. Saadhna is looking at herself in the mirror and says "no bad saadhna." Saadhna smiles. Her phone rings, it's aalekh. Saadhna smiles and answers the phone. Aalekh says "main tumhara neeche wait kar raha hoon, jaldi aa jaao." Saadhna says 'abhi aayi." Saadhna quickly takes her handbag and leaves. Saadhna is rushing to the door as she says "Ma Aalekh aagaye, mian chalti hoon." Kaushi says okay and tells her to enjoy themselves. Saadhna rushes out of the house. Aalekh is leaning on the car, with his arms folded. He's wearing blue jeans, along with a white shirt. His top 3 buttons are open πŸ˜‰. Saadhna begins to walk to the car as soon as she sees aalekh. Aalekh smiles at saadhna, saadhna smiles back at him. She reaches the car, aalekh keeps looking at her. Saadhna feels shy and says "aise kya dekh rahe ho?" Aalekh says "you're looking so beautiful" Saadhna feels smiles shyly and looks down. Aalekh walks closer to Saadhna, and removes the clip from her hair. Saadhna looks at Aalekh. Aalekh says "khule baal zyada ache lagte hain" saadhna smiles shyly. Aalekh opens the door for her. Saadhna sits in the car, aalekh quickly sits on the driving seat, and drives off. Saadhna is looking out the window, while aalekh keeps looking at saadhna. Saadhna notices that aalekh is staring at her. Saadhna says "aalekh, saamne dekh ke chalaiye please." Aalekh looks to the front and begins to drive, but after a while he begins to look back at her again. Saadhna chuckles and says "Aalekh!" aalekh says "Kya yaar? Main apni magetar ko dekh raha hoon, arrey bhai haq hai." Saadhna smiles and says "saamen dekhiye." Aalekh comes to a stop. Saadhna looks around and says "aalekh hum club jaa rahe hai?" aalekh nods and says "haan. Chalo" saadhna comes out of the car and says "par tumne toh kaha tha ki dinner pe jaayenge." Aalekh says "haan jaayenge, lekin baad mein. Ab chalein?" Aalekh brings out his arm and saadhna holds his hand and they walk in the club.

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The finally reaches to their resort. Everyone gets out of the bus. Ranvir stretches and says "finally...phunch gaye." The driver open the boot on the side. Everyone takes out their luggage. Nisha checks everyone in and gives everyone their keys to their cabins. Ranvir and ragini's room are opposite each other. Ragini puts her bag in the bed and says "pehle fresh ho jaati hoon." Ragini ties her hair in a bun and clips it. She opens her bag and sees boxer shorts and is surprised to see them. On the other side ranvir opens his bag and takes out a singlet top and is surprised to see them. Ranvir says "yeh kya?" ranvir digs in the bag and sees that the bag has dresses and all. Ranvir is shocked and says "Yeh ladkiyon ke kapde? Mere kapde kahaan hain?" on the other side Ragini digs through the bag and finds all guy clothes. Her eyes widen with surprise and says 'Mere kaprde kaha hai?" Ragini begins to think and she realises that ranvir was carrying the same bag as hers. Ragini says "kahin mera bag ranvir ke paas'" Ragini's eyes widen, she quickly throws the clothes back in the bag, and ranvir does the same, they both open the doors of their room at the same time. Ranvir say "...uhhhh I think yeh tumahara bag hai." Ragini says "...aur yeh tumhara." They exchange their bags and rush back to their rooms. (A must imagine scene 🀣)

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Aalekh and saadhna are drinking, saadhna is drinking orange juice while aalekh is having coke with vodka πŸ˜‰. Aalekh asks saadhna for a dance and saadhna agrees to it. (the song main tera dhadkan from ajab prem ki gazab kahaani is playing) both sing and dance, it's as same as the actual song πŸ˜‰. (the song finishes). Saadhna says "Aalekh bohut bhook lagi hai, chalo na kuch kha le. Saadhna and aalekh leave the club. Aaleh says "kahaan jaana hai?" Saadhna thinks and says "kisi ache se restaurant mein chalte hai na, bohut bhook lagi hai." Aalekh says "theek hai, gaadi mein baitho." Saalekh sit in the car and leave.

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Ragini is sitting on her bed, wearing plain black silk pyjamas along with silk black top with thin straps. It has black lace on the neck border. She's has her hair clipped in a bun, wearing glasses with thick black rectangular shaped frames. Ragini is reading a novel, she hears a knock on the door. Ragini opens the door and sees it's saniha. Ragini says "Hi saniha, come in." ragini invited saniha in, but saniha says "nahi ragini, main toh tumhe dinner ke liye bulane aayi hoon, chalo." Ragini says "acha main aati hoon." Ragini quickly grabs a black shawl and leaves with saniha to have dinner. Ranvir is already there sitting on the table, along with his friends. He's wearing navy blue pyjamas, that has 2 white strips on both sides along with a navy blue hoody, that has addidas written on the front, and two white strips on both arms. Ragini serves herself food and looks for a seat. Saniha says "Ragini yahaan toh jagah hi nahi hai." Ragini sees there are few seats at the back, ragini and saniha walk to the seats. They pass by ranvir. Ranvir's eyes follow ragini. Ranvir's friend Raj notices that ranvir is looking at ragini and asks "Kya hua ranvir?" ranvir looks back and says "Kuch nahi" he thinks to himself "ranvir tu paagal hogaya hai..." and begins to eat again. Ragini is finished eating and says "mera toh paet bhar gaya." Saniha says "haan yaar, maine toh kuch zyada hi kha liya, itna acha jo tha." Ragini laughs and says "chal yaar main toh chalti hoon soney, bohut hi thaki huyi hoon, aur kal subah rehearsals ke liye jaldi uthna hai, parso competition jo hai." Saniha says "Haan yaar, mujhe toh theek se steps bhi yaad nahi rehte, waise humara group dance ko toh pata nahi, par duet round toh tum aur ranvir hi jeetne waale ho, dekhna." Ragini gives a blank look to saniha. And says "good night" Ragini gets up and leaves to her room.

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Saadhna and aalekh have had their dinner and are walking on the streets holding each others hand. Saadhna insists for an ice cream. Aalekh says "Ice cream?" Saadhna nods and aalekh agrees. They come to an ice cream parlor. Saadhna says "Mujhe butter scotch khaani hai." Aalekh goes and buys butter scotch ice cream in a cone for her and a plain vanilla ice cream in a cone for himself. Aalekh gives saadhna her ice cream. Aalekh puts his arm around saadhna's waist and says "Chalein?" saadhna and aalekh are walking. Saadhna offers some of her ice cream to aalekh, aalekh takes a bite from her ice cream and he offers her his ice cream, she takes a bite. (cute scene) Saadhna checks her phone and sees that it's 11pm. Saadhna says "arrey baap re, bohut late hogaya hai. Aalekh chalo." Aalekh says "Kya hua?" Saadhna says "tume dekho 11 baj gaye hai, bohut late hogaya." Aalekh sighs and says "okay chalo." Aalekh and saadhna get in the car and leaves for home. Aalekh stops his car in front of saadhna's house. Both get out of the car, saadhna is about to rush inside, but aalekh grabs her hand. Saadhna turns around and says "chodo..." aalekh nods no. saadhna says 'kyun?" aalekh slowly pulls her towards him. Saadhna says 'Aalekh chodo." Aalekh points his finger to his cheek. Saadhna nods no and says "chodo." Aalekh says "nahi chodunga." Saadhna is trying to get away from his grip, but Is unable to. Aalekh says "koshish karlo." Saadhna gives in and quickly gives aalekh a kiss on his cheek and says "ab chodo mujhe." Aalekh smiles and let's saadhna go. Saadhna smiles back at him and says "Good night" Aalekh says good night to saadhna and watches her go inside. Aalekh is slowly moving backwards and into his car. He drives off when saadhna goes inside.

Saadhna enters her room singing "Kuch yaar nazar nahi aata, ghar baar nazar nahi aata, sansaar nazar nahi aata, jab pyaar hota hai." She throws her hand bag on the bed and falls backwards on the bed and begins to think about her date with aalekh, the dance, the walk, ice cream. She smiles slightly and gets up to change.

Aalekh reahces home and is whistling, he throws his keys on the table and rushes to his room. He quickly goes and changes into his black pyjamas and black singlet. Aalekh sits in his bed and begins to read a magazine, but he isn't really concentrating on reading the magazine, he's much more thinking about saadhna. He closes his eyes and thinks about all his moments with saadhna, and dozes off to sleep.

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Precap: Ragini is trying out her costume for the competiton. Ranvir enters her room without knocking 😲 πŸ˜† 🀣

Edited by s.sanj90 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lol wish the rr staring scene had gone a bit longer. The precap seems interesting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hehe it did go for long actually...lekin ab zyada description mein nahi gayi main...it went for atleaat 2 minutes πŸ˜‰

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