Originally posted by: s.sanj90
okie here's my karwa chauth scene that i'd love to see between our ragvir 😳
it's the night before karwa chauth.ragvir are in their room after finishing with their dinner.ragini wants to sleep as it is late already and we have ranvir wanting to talk to her. but ragini is busy setting up the bed.
Ranvir: ragini tum meri baat sun rahi ho yah nahin?
Ragi: boliye...
Ranvir: woh main yeh keh raha tha ke...
Ragi is too busy she is putting away the cushions...ranvir stops her and sits on the bed and makes her sit with him
Ranvir: tum sun nahin rahi?
Ragi: ranvir, aaj nahin please...hum kal baat karein?
Ran: kyun?
Ragi: dekhiye 10 baj gaye hai, aur mujhe kal 4 baje uthna hai....
Ran: 4 baje? woh kyun?
Ranvir is confused.
Ragi: bhudhu ram kal karwa cauth hai.
Ran: oh...acha...tum mere liye vrat rakhogi 😳
Ragi is shy
Ran: acha yeh toh tumhara pehla karwa chauth hai na
Ragi nods.
Ran: toh phir mujhe tumhe kuch gift dena chaiye haina? bolo kya doon?
Ragi: nahi ranvir, mere paas aap ho, mujhe kuch nahin chahiye.
Ran: acha baba theek hai, main apni pasand ka kuch leke aunga tumhare liye 😊
Ragvir look at each other.
Ran: acha ab tum so jao, subah jaldi uthna hai na?
Ragi nods cutely
Ran gets up and goes to his side of the bed, ragini is about to sleep.
Ran: ragini...
Ragi: ji?
Ran: zara idhar aao.
Ragi gets closer
Ran: thoda aur
Ragi gets a bit more close
Ran: thoda aur.
Ragi: ranvir kya hai?
Ran: aao toh sahi.
Ragi gets a bit more close.
Ranvir kisses her cheek
Ran: good ngiht.
Ragi has a cute smile
Ragi: good night
They go to sleep.
It's 4 am and ragi's alarm goes off.
Ragini gets out of her bed and goes to have a shower.
Ranvir wakes up aswell!
Ragini comes out of the bathroom she sits and starts to get ready.
Ranvir is looking at ragini through the mirror and then pretends to sleep again.
ragini looks at ranvir throught the mirror and touches his reflection
Ranvir opens his eyes a little.
Ranvir: ragini.
ragini moves her hand back from the mirror and thinks.
she turns aound and sees ranvir asleep.
Ragi: main bhi na...!
Ragi starts to get ready again
Ranvir opens his eyes again lightly
Ranvir: ragini.
ragini comes to a stop and she gets up and walks to the bed.
she looks at ranvir who has his eyes closed.
Ragi: ranvir....?
Ranvir still doesn't open his eyes
Ragini smiles and is about to leave, but ranvir quickly gets up and grabs ragini's hand. Ragini is surprised
Ragi: mujhe pata tha, aap jaag rahe hai...
Ranvir has a naughty smile on his face
Ragi: ranvir chodiye na, neeche sab intezaar kar rahe hain
Ranvir: arrey tumhe yaad hai na ma ne kal kya kaha tha, ki main tumhara khaas dhyaan rakha karoon, peechle kaafi dino se tumpar theek se dhyaan nahin de paaya main toh isiliye unhone mujhe daanta tha, aur bhabi ne bhi toh kaha tha na, ki dewar ji mere jiji pe dhyaan dijiye ab aap.
Ragi: ranvir toh main kahaa mana kar rahi hoon, lekin ab toh chodiye neeche sargi tayaar ho rahi hogi...mummy ji se milna hai...bohut kaam karna hai..chodiye
Ranvir: nah, main nahin chodunga.
Ragi: sadhna aa jaayegi
Ranvir: toh kya bhabi ka haath pakadoon?
Ragini laughs
Ragi: please...
Ranvir nods no, he starts to pull her towards him
Sadhna calls out to ragini.
Ranvir gets scared and quickly lets go of ragini's hand.
Ragini runs out their room
Ragi turns to look at ranvir when she reaches the door
Ranvir has his usual killer look
Ragini smiles shyly and walks out the door.
ranvir gets up goes to bathroom brushes his teeth (looking cute) washes his face and goes dwnstairs.
all the ladies are in the kitchen...and all the men are on the dining table
Ranvir: good morning everyone
ranvir sits with aalekh.
everyone: good morning.
ranvir turns to look at ragini, ragini si busy setting up the plates.
Vasu comes near the dining table
Vasu: suniye ab aap sab uthiye aur hall main baith jaaiye, humein khaana hai!
Inderjit: chalo bhai sab utho...inhe apni sargi khaane dete hain
They all leave.
Aalekh is about to get up but ranvir stops him and gets him to sit down with him
Ranvir and alekh are sitting down.
Vasu: ab ap dono ko kya hua?
Ran: woh...uhhhhbbb....mum woh....main....woh...ra...uhhhbb...
Ragini looks at ranvir and smiles
Vasu: main woh bandh karo aur hall mein baaki sab ke saath jaake baitho
Ranvir gets up and aalekh is sitting there innocently...
Vasu: aalekh ab tumhe kya hua?
Aalekh: mamma woh mujhe ranvir ne bola baithne ko....
Ranvir comes running back
Ran: chaliye bhaiyaa...
Ran takes aalekh with him sadhi and ragi laugh...vasu smiles.
in the hall...
Ranvir: aap sab yahaan baithe hai...
Inderjit: arrey yahaan nahin toh aur kahaan?
Ranvir: dad...aap bhi na...bhai humari biwiya humare liye vrat rakh rahi hai, toh humara farz banta hai na ke hum unhe apne haathon se sargi khilaaye..
Everyone look at each other....
Inderjit: baat toh tum theek keh rahe ho...
Ranvir: always...ab chalo unke chalke khilaate hain
All the men get up and go to the dining room.
Ranvir: rukiye aap sab...
All the ladies trun around.
all the men go to their respective partners
and they feed them..
Ranvir takes a jalebi from the plate and feeds it to ragini.
Ragini takes the jalebi from him and feeds it ranvir (haaye it would be soooooooooooo cute to see this)
They finish eating
(there's much more i want to write but i'm saving that for my other scene 😳)
It's afternoon...all the ladies are getting mehndi done.
Ragini is sitting down getting her mehndi done.
Ranvir is wearing a sherwani 😳 he is getting the decorations done!!!
Ranvir notices ragini getting mehndi done.
he looks at her, ragini looks at ranvir and smiles.
Inderjit: arrey ranvir tum yahaan ho, arrey jaake upar dekho sab decorations kaisi chal rahi hai.
Ranvir: ji papa
ranvir goes to check the decorations...
Vasu comes to ragini
Vasu: ragini beta..
Ragini: ji mummy ji
Vasu: beta yeh tumhare liye, hum chahte hain ki aaj shaam ko tum yeh pehno...aisa hi humne sadhna ko bhi diya hai. kyun ki hum chahte the ki meri dono bahuein aaj same kapde pehne
Ragini smiles and tries to grab it, but she realises she has mehndi on her hands..
Vasu: oh tumhare haathon mein toh mehndi lagi huyi hai, koi baat nahin hum kisi se kehke tumhare kamre mein rakhwa dete hain
Ragi smiles
vasu: uhhhh...guni beta.
Guni rushes to vasu
Vasu: beta yeh ragini chahi ke kamre mein rakh aao...
Guni takes it from vasu and puts it in ragvir's room.
It's evening...
Ragini is busy checking to see if eberything is set right for the ladies when they arrive...
Ranvir is calling to ragini, but ragini says no.
ranvir gets a angry - like in a cute way..and he leaves to his room.ragini smiles....
vasu calls out to her
Vasu: beta ragini jao jaake tayaar ho jao, sab aate hi honge...
Ragini: ji mummy ji.
Ragini goes to her room, ranvir is sitting on the bed. he looks at ragini come in and turns around.
Ragini: ahem ahem....uhhhh ranvir dekhiye meri mehndi kaisi hai.
Ranvir looks at ragini and then looks away.
Ragini goes to the other side but ranvir looks away again...
Ragini sits besides him, ranvir moves to the side.
she moves closer to him, ranvir move away again, ragini moves closer to him, he move away again...and suddenly we realise ranvir on the floor 😆
ragini giggles.
ranvir gets up and is about to walk away, but ragi grabs his hand.
Ranvir turns around
Ragini: itna gussa? woh bhi humse...
Ranvir doesn't reply.
Ragini gets up to face ranvir.
Ragini: sorry (she holds her ears)
Ranvir looks the other way
Ragi goes to the other side and apologises again
Ranvir: main tumhe tab tak maaf nahin karunga jab tak tum mujhe 3 baar I love you nahin kehti.
Ragini: acha? aur agar main nahin bolu toh?
Ranvir: toh...toh main tumse baat nahin karunga.
Ragini: acha theek hai...kehti hoon
Ranvir: jaldi bolo.
Ragini: I......LOVE.....abhi mood nahin hai...!!!
she walks off
Ranvir: hey ragini....soch lo baad mein pachtaogi...abhi toh akele kehna tha..ab tumhe sabke saamne I love u kehna hoga...
Ranvir walks out of the room...ragini smiles and turns around.
she picks up her dress and goes to get ready.
ranvir is downstairs...
Vasu: arrey beta ranvir...zaraa upar jaake dekho ragini tayaar huyi ke nahin...
Ranvir: uhhhbbb...ji mum...
ranvir goes upstairs...in the room ragini is having trouble tying her choli...ranvir reaches his room and opens the door...
ragini gets scared and quickly turns around.
Ranvir looks at ragini...he goes near her...he gets closer and closer...ragi is moving back and more back...ran gets close ragini looks down...ran puts his arms around ragini...he ties the choli. and leaves her.
ragini looks at ranvir...
Ran: mum na bola hai jaldi tayaar hoke neeche aa jao...sab aagaye hain...
Ragi: ji...
ranvir is about to walk out buh ragi calls out to him, ranvir smiles, makes a serious face and turns around
Ran: kya hai?
Ragi: abhi tak naraaz ho?
Ran: haan (ran crosses his arms and makes a cue angry face)
Ragi: uhhhhh...
ragini is about to say i love u to him but sadhna comes...
Sadi: jeeji chahiliye na neeshe sab aapka intezaar kar rahe hain...
Ragi: haan aayi...
ragi is about to leave but ranvir gets a hold of her hand
Ran: soch lo...ab tumhe sabke saamne mujhe i love you kehna hoga woh bhi 3 baar....
ragvir leave the room (ragi is looking gorgeous in a maroon lehnga, sadhna is wearing the same)
everyone is downstairs the lady reads the story and the meaning of karwa chauth,!
Ladies are sitting down and chatting...
A lady: arrey vasu, koi naach gaana hoga? bhai tumhari bahu ka pehla karwa chauth hai..!
Vasu smiles.!
Sadhi: mere paas ek idea hai..kyun na hum sab antakshri khelein?? isse time bhi paas ho jaayega aur enjoy bhi karlenge..
Everyone agrees, Ran enters
Ran: bhabi idea toh acha hai, lekn aise maza nahin aayega...competition hona chahiye...
Sadhi: competition?
Ran: hmmmm....hum is antakshri ko thoda twist denge...boys ek taraf aur girls and aunties ek taraf 😆 toh twist yeh hoga ki jiski turn hogi woh gaayega lekin saath mein dance bhi karega...
Sadhi: arrey wah dewar ji kya idea hai....theek hai...toh start karte hain...jeeji shuru kariye
Ragi: main?? nahin sadhna main kaise?
Ran: lo yeh toh pehle haar maan gayi...
Ragi looks at ranvir and back at saadhna
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ko0HW4VLvk
Ragi starts to sing aaja aayi bahaar
heheh they sing the maine pyaar kiya medley....only few songs from there like inteha hogayi, ruk ja oh jaane waali, jahaan main jaati hoon wohi chale aate ho and so on..
and ranvir is throwing notes at her to say i love you...and all..he's folding hands in front of her..
and ragi finally sings kaate nahin kat te din yeh raat kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat lo aaj main kehti hoon I LOVE YOU!!!
ranvi smiles..and jumps with excitement 😆
everyone looks at him...aalekh comes down stairs and says chaand nikal aaya..
everyone runs upstairs...but there is no moon..aalekh laughs...!!!
sadi: aalekh ji...
Aalekh: sorry...
everyone are waiting for the moon to come out....
Ranvir sings yoon shabnami pehle nahi thi chandni...!!!
ragini is shy....and is smiling...
the chand comes and he sings the part dekho chand aaya chand nazar aaya...!!!
and all the girls do theri pooja...
ranvir picks up the glass to make ragini drink it, ragini takes another glass from the table for ranvir - they both drink water from each others hand
ranvir picks up meethai to feed ragini, ragini breaks the barfi and feeds it to ranvir. they both feed each other....cute scene...
ragini touches ranvir's feet...
ranvir gives a kiss on ragi's forehead 😳
Ran takes out a little box and opens it. Its a whitegold diamond ring.
He holds ragi hand and puts it on her wedding finger. Ragi is shy. Ran kisses her hand. Ragi smiles.
Everyone go downstairs. Ragvir come downstairs holding hands
Ran: ragi ruko main khana leke aata hoon.
ranvir goes and only fills one plate and takes ragini to a corner and he feeds her - they both feed each other - vasu walks by and sees ragvir she smiles and goes away...
okie guys this is my karwa chauth scene...aage likhna chahti hoon but this is the main thing...!!!!
aage ka aur beech ka i'll post in the ragvir romantic scene thread 😊