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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RagVir4eva

Hey Sanju, very nice scene yaar... 👏 👏 👏... you really had me lost in thoughts, as I was picturing this entire scene... It was really very cute, and I would love to see this in the serial one day... I can't wait to read the rest of this story, as now I am sure that the romance has just begun... yeh to sirf trailer thaa... "picture to abhi baaki hai mere dost"... to tu please jaldi se is picture ko poora kar, main besabri se intezaar kar rahi hoon... once again, very nicely written, with great details... I could picture every part of the scene, every expression every dialogue... keep it up yaar... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

haaye jeenu...
choooooooooooooooooo chweet yaar..pata hai jab main likh rahi thi...i started to imagine the dialogues and all...and if i liked it then i would write it down..😆
ji haan the romance has just begun..picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!
jaldi se?
arey iss picture ko toh parts mein likha jaayega..!
toh thoda toh wait karna hoga na...!
abhi woh ghar jaayenge..and all!! toh bohut kuch likhna hai yaar!!!
kal iska 2nd part upload ho jaayega 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: smitha80

WOW,WOW,WOW Sanju.Really,no words!!!!AWESOME!!!!I can totally imagine Ranvir being cute during that bathroom scene.OMG,just loved it!!!!Aur tumne tho dialogues bhi bilkul waise lika jaise Ranvir and Ragini says!!I gave up on creatives to show something good between Ragvir.I think if u gals can write this way I die happy lol.

OMG smitha...itne dino baad tum!!!
where were u yaar?
awwwwwwwww..thank u shoooooooooooooooo much yaar...m soooooooooo glad u liked it!
hehe well i imagine the scenes...and think of the dialogues and imagine if this is how he would say it...looks like it's working..hehe!
thank u shooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwww sanju di 🤗
it was amazing seriously amazing...i can totally imagine RagVir doing fun stuff like this, they were adorable in ur scene and so were SaAalekh...i wish this was shown in bidaai, it would have been so sweet..but *sigh* no expectations from them
but ur scene was chhooo chhoo chhoo chhweet 😍
i was totally lost in it
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

awwww sanju di 🤗
it was amazing seriously amazing...i can totally imagine RagVir doing fun stuff like this, they were adorable in ur scene and so were SaAalekh...i wish this was shown in bidaai, it would have been so sweet..but *sigh* no expectations from them
but ur scene was chhooo chhoo chhoo chhweet 😍
i was totally lost in it

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..gj choooooooooooooooooooooo chweet yaar!!
yeah m expecting sumfin like this buh we knoe it won't happen...!!!
if it does..we have to really wait for a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sanju,was in India for my sis's marriage and came back last week.I just saw glimpses of Bidai and thought it would have been better by now but nothing happened lol.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: smitha80

Sanju,was in India for my sis's marriage and came back last week.I just saw glimpses of Bidai and thought it would have been better by now but nothing happened lol.

awwwwwwwwwwww...okay!
did u have fun?
come in the kinny CC 😊
we completed 12 CC's
c'mon join us there!!!
we miss u!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: s.sanj90

Hey guys here's another ragvir scene by me 😊

It's morning, ragvir are sleeping. Ranvir wakes up b4 ragi.
Ranvir looks @ ragini, Ragini has hair on her face, ranvir moves them away and continues to watch ragi asleep lovingly. He turns the alarm off so ragi won't wake up. He kisses her forehead. After a while Ragini slowly opens her eyes and looks @ ranvir, who is looking @ her very sweetly.
Ranvir: good morning.
Ragini: good morning'aap itni jaldi uth gaye? (sounding sleepy)

Ranvir: ragini'7 baj gaye hain!
Ragini is surprised and quickly get up and says "Kya? 7 baj gaye? Hey bhagwaan (ragini looks @ the clock and picks it up) yeh alarm krun nahin baja?
Ranvir: alarm isliye nahin baja kyunki maine bandh kar diya tha.
Ragini: Kya? Lekin kyun?
Ranvir: array tum itni pyaari lag rahi thi sote huye aur main nahin chahta tha ki tumhe koi disturb kare'chahe who phir yeh alarm kyun na ho.
Ragini: ranvir'kya karoon main aapka'dekhiye aaj aap office ke liye late ho jaayenge'chaliye, jaldi se tayaar ho jaaiye.
Ranvir: ragini'tum bhool rahi ho..aj "Sunday"hai'aur Sunday ko bhi office?
Ragini: oh main toh bhool gayi'
Ranvir: hmmmm'

Ragini: khair..lekin aap naha toh lijiye!
Ranvir and ragini get out off the bed, Ragini gives him his towel.
Ranvir goes inside the bathroom and closes the door..he quickly opens the door again
Ranvir: aji sunti ho
Ragini turns around and smiles
Ragini: ji.
Ranvir: zara yahaa to aana..(he's says it soooooooooooo cute)
ragini goes closer to ranvir.
Ragini: ji'
Ranvir: zara andar toh aana

Ragini: kyun?
Ranvir: array meri help karo na!
ragini looks @ ranvir
Ragini: ofcourse'aap andar chaliye..main aati hoon'hmmm..(she sais it sarcastically)
Ramvir smiles excitedly and quickly goes inside the bathroom..and ragini slowly walks towards the door..and grabs the door quickly and locks it from outside.!
ranvir si surprised..he quickly runs towards the door'ranvir is knocking on the door.
ranvir: ragini'darwaza kholo'please!
Ragini: nahin..ab yeh darwaza tabhi khulega jab aap nahaa lenge..
Ranvir turns around and leans on the door'he has a very cute angry face'
ranvir is thinking'he gets an idea! He starts to scream!
Ragini gets worried..she rushes to the door.

Ragini: ranvir kya hua? Aap chila kyun rahe hain?
Ranvir: ragini..mera paun slip hogaya hai'bohut zor se lagi hai mujhe'.dard ho raha hai'
ragini is thinking if it is ranvir's trick..ranvir screams again sounding like he's in a lot of pain.
ragini quickly opens the door and enters the bathroom, but she doesn't find ranvir..ranvir quickly grabs ragi from the baq!
ranvir: hmmmm'.aakhir aa hi gayi tum bathroom mein!
ragini:ranvir'yeh kya hai'chodiye mujhe..!
ragini is trying to get away but is unable to. Ranvir turns her around so she is facing him
Ragini:ranvir, asia mazaak karte huye aapko sharam nahin aati?

Ranvir: acha ji'.aur apne pati ko bathroom mein lock karte huye tumhe sharam nahin aati?
ragini smiles, while she is trying to get away from ranvir.
Ragini: acha baba'sorry!
Ranvir: khaali sorry se kaam nahin chalega madam'aapko iski sazaa milegi!
Ragini: acha baba, lekin aap chodiye toh sahi!
he doesn't leave her!
ragini: acha bataiye kya karma hoga mujhe!
ranvir roles his eyes and looks cutely and ragini, ragini gets it that ran wants a kiss.!
Ragini: bilkul nahin..!
ranvir: toh theek hai'main bhi nahin chodney waala!
Ragini tries to get away for ranvir..she gets an idea..she looks @ the door.
ragini: mummy ji'aap?
ranvir quickly leaves ragi and turns around and finds no1.
ragini pushes him away and runs, Ranvir falls in the bath tub, and gets wet.
ragini runs out of the bathroom, ranvir quickly gets up and runs after ragini.
ranvir grabs ragi from the waist, and s spinning her around'vasu is standing outside their door and watches ragvir.
Vasu: ahem ahem'
ragvir look towards the door and find vasu standing there.!
Vasu: hmmm..lagta hai hum galat waqt par aagye! Khair hum baad main aa jaate hain..
Vasu is about toleave but ranvir calls out to her
Ranvir: nahin mom'hum toh bas aise hi'uhhhhbbbb'.kuch kaam tha kya?

Vasu: haan, humein aap dono se kuch baat karni thi.
Ranvir: ji mom kahiye'?
Vasu: ranvir'tum aur aalekh toh din raat apne kaam mein itni busy rehte ho, lagta hai aap dono koyeh yaad hi nahin hai ki ab aap dono akele nahin ho.
ranvir and ragini look @ each other and then look @ vasu.
Vasu: isiliye inderjit aur humne yeh faisla liya hai ki tum aur aalekh apni apni biwion ke saath goa jaa rahe ho. Ek hafte ke liye!
Ranvir has an ecstatic smile on his face.
Vasu: toh aap dono packing kar lijiyega, aaj sham 5 baje ki flight hai.
Ranvir: mom'.I love you so much (ranvir hugs vasu as he says it)
Vasu: theek hai theek hai, ab hum chalet hain'aap dono pack karlijiye!
Vasu leaves,ranvir turns around and had a mischievous smile!
Ranvir: hmmmmm'..(he slowly walks closer to ragini, ragini is moving back as ranvir get closer to her) Ragini is against the wall and ranvir is really close to her. Ragini tries to move away from the side,but ranvr blocks her way with his hand, she tries to get out from the other way but ranvir blocks it with his other hand. Ragini is looking @ ranvir who is sooooo close to her. Ragini looks down shyly. Ranvir is really close to her, ranvir chuckles and whispers in her ear, ab chod raha hoon, goa mein nahi chodne waala. He gives a little peck on her cheek and leaves to have a shower. Ragini shyly watches ranvir leave. He turns around and winks @ her. Ragini smiles.


ranvir comes out of the bathroom,and watches ragini who is almost done with the packing.

Ranvir: hmmm'packing ho gayi ragini?
Ragini: ji.
Ranvir: acha tum jaake nahaa lo, baaki ke kapde main pack kardeta hoon,phir dono naashte ke liye neeche chalengey.
Ragini: ji'
ragini goes to have a shower, as soon as ragini closes the door, ranvir takes out all ragini's sarees and packs jeans, skirts, shirts and dresses and packs the rest.!
ragini comes out of the shower.
Ragini: ranvir, chalein neeche?
Ranvir: haan chalo'!
ragvir leave for breakfast.!
everyone is sitting on the dining table, saadhna is serving, ranvir sits next to aalekh!
Ragini helps saadhna with serving!
Ranvir: good morning bhaiya!
Aalekh: good morning, packing hogayi.?
Ranvir: ji bhaiya'aapki?
Aalekh: haan ho gayi!
Ranvir looks @ ragini and saadhna who are busy serving
Ranvir: bhaiya
aalekh: hmmm'
ranvir signals him to come closer!
aalekh moves closer to ranvir
Ranvir: bhaiya, aapne who kapde pack kiye, jo aap bhabi ke liye laaye the.?
Aalekh nods yes @ ranvir, they both have a mischievnous smile on their face!
Ranvir: ab aayega mazaa
they both move baq, ranvir and aalekh notice ragini and saadhna staring @ them.
Ranvir and aalekh smile @ them and get baq to their eating.!

Ragvir and saalekh catch their flight to goa'.they have landed now and have reached their hotel!
Aalekh: aap dono yahi rukiye, main aur ranvir check in karke aate hain.
Aalekh and ranvir go and check in.they get room next to each other.!

Both the couples leave together, they have reached their rooms, ranvir and aalekh look each other and smile, both the couples go inside their rooms.! Ragini moves the curtains away and loves the beautiful view'
Ranvir: ahem ahem'
ragini turns around to look @ ranvir
Ranvir: kya hua madam? Kahaan kho gayi?
Ragini: ranvir dekhiye na, kitna sundar lag raha hai,
ranvir walks towards the window.
Ranvir: haan lag toh raha hai (he hugs ragini) lekin tumhari tarah nahin.
ragini smiles shyly!
Ranvir: acha main jaake fresh ho jaata hoon,tab tat um tayaar ho jao,phir humghoomne challenge theek hai?
Ragini nods yes!
ranvir goes!
meanwhile saadhna is unpacking, and pulls out a skirt. She is a bit confused'she searches through the bag and finds no sarees or suits at all.
Ragini is doing the same, she notices the same thing.
both of them look @ all the western clothes. Both say
Sadhna: aalekh ji..(she rolls her eyes)
Ragini: ranvir (she rolls her eyes)
Saadhna: jiji ke paas zaroor sariya hongi!
Ragini: saadhna ke paas sariya hogi
Both of themopen the door @ the same time and walk out,they notice each other!
Saadhna: jiji aap,main abhi ap hi ke paas aa rahi thi.
ragini: main bhi tumhare paas aa rahi thi'acha saadhna tumhare saariya hai na?
Saadhna: kya baat kar rahi ho jiji? Aap ne bhi saariya pack nahin ki?
Ragini: ki thi lekin ranvir'.(ragini notices saadhna's face) ek minute'aapne bhi'? Matlab tumhare paas sariyan nahin hai?
Saadhna nods no and says: mujhe aalkh ji ne kaha, ki saadhna tum jaake nahaa lo,packing main karta hoon
Ragini: mujhse bhi ranvir ne yeh hi kaha.!
sadhna: iska matlab yeh humari patiyo ki shaitaani hai'!
Ragini: haan'
they both looks @ each other and go to their rooms
Ragini: ranvir..
ranvir: yeh sweetheart

Ragini: yeh kya hai?
she picks up a skirt and shows it to ranvir.
Ranvir: kya?
Ragini: yeh..meri kapde kahaan hai?
Ranvir: ragini'yeh tumhare hi kapde hain!
Ragini: ranvir..meri saariya kahaan hai?
Ranvir: woh toh ghar mein hain'
Ragini: ranvir aap'ab main kya pehnoo?
Ranvir: ummm'tum yeh pehnogi..!
Ragini: nahin!
Ranvir: arrey in kapdo mein kya kharaabi hai? Ache toh hai!
Ragini: ache hai toh inhe aap hi pehaniye'!
Ranvir: ragini..yeh kya keh rahi ho tum (hehe he says it to cutely)
Ragini: aap dono ka plan tha yeh!
Ranvir: dono.? Koun dono?
Ragini: main aapki aur jija ji ki baat kar rahi hoon'aap dono ne humare kapde badal diye'!
Ranvir: ragini'tumhe in kapdo se kya takleef hai?
Ragini: ranvir'acha nahin lagta'duniya kya kahegi?
ranvir: arrey ragini sab ladkiya aise kapde pehanti hai! Aur tumne mujhse shaadi ki hai yah duniya se?
ragini: aap se ki hai!
Ranvir: toh phir'apne pati ke liye itna nahin kar sakti tum..? please ragini, meri liye pehanlo..please?
Ragini agrees to it and goes to change.
ranvir is happy, he goes to saalekh's room and knocks on the door.!
Aalekh opens the door and ranvir sees tensed aalekh (in a cute way) and laughs
Ranvir: kya hua bhaiya?
Aalekh: hona kya hai'mahabharat chal rahi hai'tera kya hua?
Ranvir: hona kya hai..ragini toh maan gayi!
Aalekh: kya? Ragini maan gayi? Tune use kya kaha?
Ranvir: kehna kya hai..bol rahi thi ki duniyakya kahegi..maine bhi bol dia ki tumne mujhse shaadi ki hai yah phir duniya se, bas'phir kya'usse maine kaha ki mere liye hi pehanlo'aur who maan gayi!
Aalekh: acha' maan gayi?
Ranvir: aur nahin toh kya' chaliye aap bhabi ko keh dijiye ki ragini bhi pehan rahi hai..!
Aalekh: acha tu jaa, main ek aur baar koshish karta hoon!

ranvir leaves. aalekh closes the door and turns around!
sadhi is sitting on the bed angry!
aalekh: Saadhna'tum batao toh sahi ki in kapdo mein problem kya hai? Puri duniya pehanti hai!
Saadhna: toh'? Aap yeh bataiye aapne mujhse shaadi ki hai yah phir duniya se?
Aalekh: arrey? Yeh toh meri line thi.
Saadhna: kya?
Aalekh: nahin kuch nahin'uhhh..sadhna please..pehan lo'meri khaatir..please'
sadhna looks @ aalekh!
Aalekh: please'dekho ragini bhi maan gayi hai'tum bhi maan jao'please!
saadhna gives in after aalekh begs her to wear them! She goes to change!
ranvir and aalekh are waiting downstairs for ragini and sadhna.!
saadhna and ragini come out of their rooms and looks @ each other, and compliment on how they look'
they both go downstairs' aalekh and ranvir look @ their wives who are looking gorgeous!
Aalekh: saadhna'tum bohut khoobsurat lag rahi ho..
Saadhna shyly looks down!
Ranvir: hmmmmm'(he brings his mouth near ragini's ear and whispers) tum bohut Hot lag rahi ho
Ragini smiles and says: jaanti hoon 😊
ranvir's eyes widen (hehehe cute)
the 4some leave together'they had a booked a table for four.
and get chatting away!
waiter comes to take their order. Ranvir orders for soft drinks!
the waiter leaves, aalekh winks @ ranvir, ranvir nods and excuses himself.!
Ranvir: main abhi aaya'
Ranvir quickly goes to the same waiter and gets him to mix vodka in two of the soft drinks. (for him and aalekh)
ranvir comes back and joins with them.!
after a while, the waiter comes and serves them drinks!
they drink as they talk!
ragini and saadhna said they would like to have another soft drink! And ranvir and aalekh order the same again!
Ragini and saadhna feel a little high!
Ranvir and aalekh are confused, and look @ their drinks and look back at their wives who feel high!
Ranvir and aalekh are shocked to see that they were drinking plain soft drinks while saadhna and ragini drank the vodka!
ranvir and aalekh look @ each other
ranvir: bhaiya'marr gaye'!
aalekh nods yes and then looks back @ saadhna and then again @ ranvir!
aalekh: ab kya karein?
ranvir: ab jo karengi yeh hi karengi!
they both turn to look @ their wives and don'tfind them there'!
they get up and look around!
and they see their wives on the dance floor!
aalekh and ranvir go to get them'
ranvir: ragini chalo wapais apne hotel chalte hain
Aalekh: saadhna..chalo
Ragini and saadhna: nahin humein nahin jaana!
ranvir and aalekh look @ each other.!
ragini and saadhna grab their husbands hands and start to sing'(they sing the song saiya ji baiyaan chuda ke nahin jaana from masti)
the song ends'ranvir and aalekh manage to take saadhna and ragini out'they are walking on the beach! Ragini and saadhna are soooo happy they manage to get away from ranvir's and aalekh's grip and run on the beach!
aalekh and ranvir watch ragini and saadhna cutely!
ragini and saadhna are running, playing in the water (looking soooooooooo cute)

Ranvir: bhaiya' yeh dono toh gayi kaam se!
Aalekh smiles and looks back and saadhna!
Aalekh: ranvir'aaj tak maine saadhna ko itne khush kabhi nahin dekha!
Ranvir: maine toh ragini ko aise pehle bhi dekha hai! (he sais it in a low voice)
Aalekh: hmmm'kuch kaha?
Ranvir: nahin bhaiya'bas'aise hi..kuch nahi'who bhabi bohut khush lag rahi hai!
Aalekh: haan'aur ragini bhi 😊
they continue to watch ragini and saadhna, who are lost in their own little world!
ragini and saadhna notice ranvir and aalekh sitting there staring @ them.
they run to them.
Ragini: ranvir chaliye na'
saadhna: aalekh ji aaiye na..dekhiye ktine maza aa raha hai!
Ragini and saadhna grab ranvir and aalekh's hand and run aling with them'
they start playing in the water'and have a good time..(sweet scene)

to be continued'



WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SANJU DIIIIIIII😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: IFUU



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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.........................................!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
will be there!!Yup had a great time!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sanjju i wil reasd u rcsen toniteee i m sure aweosme hogaaaaa

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