FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 15

Part 23:

It was two weeks after the honeymoon. Manya was seated in her room, combing her hair. Akash bounced in the room and grabbed her hand.
A: Manya, chalo!!
M: Kahan?!
Akash laughed and picked her up in his arms, racing to out the room. Manya laughed as she watched him grin in excitement. He raced to the room next to theirs and spread his arms out.
A: TADA!!!!!
Manya gasped. The room was beautifully decorated in light red, leaving options for either gender for the baby. Teddy bears, toys, and a cute little crib surrounded the room.
M: Akash, yeh sab..?
A: Yeh sab mere baby ke liye!
M: Lakein, Akash, itni jaldhi..?
A: Itni jaldhi mathlab? I think its not at all jaldhi. Akhir hamara baby hoga, yaan hogi...we have to be prepared, right, jaan?!
Manya nodded as he laughed and held on to her tight.
A: Lakein yeh sab kuch nain. Baby ke liye surprise ho, aur uski ma ke liye na ho?
M: Mathlab?
A: Mathlab, Cinderella, ke aaj shyam hamare naam! I want to take my wifey to a wonderful candlelight dinner!
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Akash sat on the table, waiting for Manya to show up. Light of the candle flames sprung in the lightly dark room. Akash looked up as threw the flames he saw Manya approached. He stared, almost smiling in love, when she appeared wearing a cute black and red sari. She sat down in front of him.
M: Kya?
A: Tumhe patha hai tum kitni khoobsurat ho?
Manya smiled shyly.
A: Hanso muth, meri bhi tareef karo!
Manya rested her chin in her hand.
M: Haan..teek lag rahe ho...I guess...
A: WHAT?!?!
Manya giggled.
M: Fine, fine. Tum..achai lag rahe ho...for...you know, a father...
A: Father tho aise keh rahi ho jaisi burri baat hai!
Manya leaned over.
M: Soch lo, Akash. Burrai ho jao ge...
A: Cinderella, apne baby ko apne haathoon mein paker, tumhari khushi dekh ker, main sochoon ka jaise mujhe abhi ek nain zindagi mili!
Manya smiled and stared back at him. He put his hand ontop of hers when suddely a voice interrupted them.
Voice: Akash?
Akash and Manya turned and gasped. Roopa stood there, wearing a cute purple dress, smiling. Akash stood up and embraced her in a friendly hug.
A: Roopa! KAhan thi tum?
R: Kuch nain. Apne Dad ke saath...oh, hi Manya!
She bent down and gave Manya a hug. Her eyes suddenly fell to Manya's sindoor and manglsutra.
R: Yeh...
Akash grinned.
A: My lovely wife, Manya Rathod!
Roopa stared at them. Manya looked at Roopa's face and instantly realized that Roopa was in pain.
M: Roopa, woh..
A: That's nothing! Main tho..BAAP BANE VAALA HOON!! Isn't that great, yaar?!
All the color drained from Roopa's face. Manya glared at Akash to shut up. Roopa smiled weakly, her pain evident.
R: Oh..congrats, Akash..
Manya was about to talk when pain struck her stomach. She grabbed it and screamed, suddenly feeling darkness cover her eyes...
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Manya opened her eyes in the hospital, blinking. A doctor looked at her and smiled.
D: Good morning, Manya.
M: Uh..morning..Akash..kahan hai?
D: Mr. Rahod bahaar hain. Would you like for me to call him in?
M: Haan, woh...pehle aap batayein ge meri tabiyat kyun kharaab hogayee?
The doctor's smile faded.
D: Woh..uh..it's normal in pregnancy, Manya. Aap rukiye main aapke husband ko bulata hoon...
A file slipped out of his hands as he walked outside. Manya stood up, weakly, and picked it up. She opened it and stared in shock as she read the words under Condition: In this case, there are 90% chances that only the baby will survive for the mother is too weak...or she can get an abortion before due time.
Manya's heart sank tightly as she stared at the words in disbelief. Flashbacks of the baby's room swirled in her mind. Akash laughing...saying how he wanted to become a father...
Manya raised the curtain and looked out to Akash, who was standing with Roopa, laughing. Manya looked at Roopa laugh and playfully hit him as he pointed to a baby's picture...
Humsafar hum se ab
Chod de umeedein
Saath hum kya dein gey
hum mein ab dam nahin...

noooooo.....dont let manya or the baby die plzzzzz!!!!

nnnnnnoooooooooo this cant be happening!! 😭 😭 😭

plzzzzzzzz reallyy manya our akash ka baby mata die hona dhana in ur storyyyy plzzz

omg that part was really well ritten..but i really hope that maanya or the baby dosn't die i hope that the file is of someone else's and maanya is just confusing it with hers

noooooooooo don't make roopa and akash togetther and manya die or the baby plz we alredy have those 2 together =(

sad
Cant wait to know wht u come up with next

Haiila pplzs dont worry 😆 Well, since SZ has been done, this will be the last part 😕 😭

Last Part:
Manya watched as the doctor went to Akash and whispered something in his ear. She reached out to stop him but she had already seen the color drain from Akash's face...
Akash stepped inside the room, his eyes revealing hidden pain. Tears slipped down Manya's cheek as she hugged him tightly.
A: Mujhe koi bacha nahin chahiye. Mujhe meri Manya chahiye.
M: Akash...
She cried into his shirt.
M: Hamara bacha..hamari khushiyan..
Akash laughed a bit to lighten her up.
A: Aye, Jaan. Meri ghalti hai. Main hi tumhe ke raha tha tum motti ho..
Manya buried her face and hugged him tightly. Roopa stepped in from behind, listening in.
R: Manya..?
Manya looked up, her face drained in tears. She hugged her tightly.
R: Kuch nain hoga, Manya.
The doctor stepped in.
D: We know you're in great pain, Manya. But its still not too late for an abortion. Kyunki agar yeh delivery hoti hai, tho then there are no definite chances that the baby or..you..may live..
M: Chance tho hai na?
A: Manya, no--!
Manya grabbed Akash's hands.
M: Nahin, Akash. Hamare kuch sapne hain jo iss bache se jurre hain. Agar yeh bacha na raha, tho main jii nahin paoon gi!
A: Aur agar tumhe kuch ho gaya, tho main mer jaoon ga!
Manya looked into Akash's eyes.
M: Kya tumhe hamare pyar per barosa hai?
Akash held her hands tightly and pressed his forehead against hers.
A: Apne se bhi zyada..
M: Tho phir apni iss jaan per barosa rakho..
A: Nahin, MAnya...yeh risk hai...you're too weak to give birth..
Manya smiled.
M: Tum ho na. Hum dhono milker sab teek ker dhein ge.
D: Are you sure about this, Manya? There could be great dangers ahead. Soch lo--
M: Main soch chuki hoon, doctor. Mujhe yeh bacha chahiye..
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Two months later, Akash came upto Manya in their room. She smiled at him as he placed breakfast in front of her.
A: Ayeee jaan! Here you go!
M: Mujhe bookh nain ai, Akash...
A: Manyaaa!! Khaati ho yaan...
Roopa laughed and stepped in with Om.
R: Khaathi ho yaan Akash ki jaan lo gi?!
Manya laughed and stood up to greet them. Om stared at her stomach, almost shy.
M: Hi, Om.
Om: Hi, Manya. Hi, Akash..
Manya looked at him.
M: Kaise ho?
Roopa grinned.
R: Bil kull teek hai.
M: Aur yeh tumhe kaise patha?
R: Kyun kiii...
She raised her finger to reveal a shiny diamond ring. Manya and Akash gasped as Om laughed.
M: No way!!
R: Way. Hum ek doosre se--uh..
Om: Aray sharmaati kyun hai!
He laughed and placed his arm over her shoulders.
Om: Hum ek doosre se pyar kerte hain! Aur iss bache ka naam bhi humhi theh kerein ge!
Manya's smiled disappeared. Akash looked at her and understood what she was thinking. Would she even be able to see those moments?
He placed her arm around Manya as well.
A: Aye, jaan, ab kamzor muth paro.
M: Nahin hoon. Kyunki tum mere saath ho, na?
Akash nodded and held her hands tightly.
A: Aur agar hamara pyar sacha hai, tho yeh bacha bhi hoga!
Manya shook her head at him.
M: Nahin, Akash. Aise muth kaho. Kyunki agar mujhe kuch ho bhi jaye na, tho yeh yaad rakhna ki hamara pyar vakaii mein hii sacha hai..
A: Tumhe kuch ni hoga, Manya. Kyunki sache pyar kerne vaale itni jaldhi saath chod ker nain jaate..
Roopa smiled and held Akash's hand and placed it in Manya's tightly.
R: Hum dua kerein ge, Akash. Kii Manya aur tum hamesha saath raho...
Om nodded.
Om: Aray fiker muth karo. In dhono ko kuch ni hoga!
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A few months later, Manya entered the baby's room. She stepped on a toy and it began to sing "I love my mommy."
Tears filled her eyes as she held her stomach, feeling the baby inside. Akash stepped in from behind and hugged her from the back.
A: Fikr muth karo, jaan. Main hoon na.
M: Hamesha ke liye, na?
A: Na. Hamesha ka waqt bhi kum per jaye ga hamare pyar ke liye...
Manya grabbed him in a tight hug as he patted her softly.
A: Aye, jaan, rau gi tho meri jaan nikal jaye gi. You have to be strong, Manya. For us.
Manya nodded.
M: Jab tum paas hote ho tho--
Her face suddenly twisted as she felt pain. Akash stared at her.
A: Manya...!!!
Manya fell in his arms, screaming. Akash grabbed her up in his arms and raced to the hospital.
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Akash stood outside, his head in his hands. From inside the room the doctor stepped outside.
D: She's really critical, Akash. Aur abhi baby oos position mein nahin aya. She'll have to suffer some more pain, aur iss waqt mein...kuch bhi ho sakta hai...
Akash stared at the door from where he could see Manya laying down. Her eyes were closed, almost in pain. She was breathing heavily. He walked slowly to the room as the song played,
Tune Saath Jo Meraa Chhodaa Deevaanaa Teraa Mar Jaayegaa
Tune Saath Jo Meraa Chhodaa Deevaanaa Teraa Mar Jaayegaa
Tune Naataa Jo Tune Naataa Jo Tune Naataa Jo
Mujhse Todaa, Deevaanaa Teraa Mar Jaayegaa...
He walked inside the room and held her hand tightly. She smiled through her pain and held his hand as a tear slipped down her eyes.
M: Aye, Prince Charming...
Akash fell on top of her, his head on her chest. He cried silently.
M: Aye, Prince Charming! Apni Cinderella ko--ko--kam--kamzor kerna chah-chahte ho?
Akash cried harder as he heard her pain. He shook her head. Manya smiled and wiped away his tears.
M: Jo bhi hua na, yeh yaad rakhna ki tumhari Manya tumse bahut pyar keri hai...aur agar tumne kabhi kisi aur ke baare mein socha bhi na--
A: Woh tho main pehle se hi--
He stopped talking and noticed he couldn't joke around anymore. He held onto her as she let out a scream and the doctors rushed in...
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Akash was leaning against the white walls when a doctor stepped out.
A: Doctor, how is she?!
D: Akash...
A: doctor, tell me...humne...humne ussai bahut healthy rakha tha...kya, kya woh kaam kiya? Huh?
D: I'm sorry, Akash..
Akash stared at the doctor in shock.
D: You may see the room for yourself...
Akash slowly walked to the room. When he opened it, he didn't find anybody in there. Suddenly he heard a baby's muffle. He stood still, and then suddenly turned around.
There stood his Manya, still looking tiny and maybe even weaker, but with a cute sleeping baby in her arms. Akash stared in disbelief as Manya walked towards him.
M: Aye, Prince Charming. Hamari zindagi mein koi mehmaan aya hai...
Suddenly, just as she said this, balloons burst in the air. She grabbed Akash tightly as Akash held his baby in his arms. A note flew from the door. Manya picked it up and read,
I'm sorry, Manya. Shiyad main tumhe paa nain saka..per tumhari khushi mein apni khushi zaroor doonda ga..Karan.
Manya smiled as Akash stepped behind her.
A: I'm the father of a baby girl...
Manya smiled. Akash kissed his daughter and placed her in a crib. He went to Manya as Manya smiled at him. He smiled flirtatiously again.
He picked her in his arms, laughing.
M: Akash! Dhiyaan see!!!
Akash laughed and put her on the bed, jumping on next to her. He picked up his daughter and they both held on to her, smiling...
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gr8 fanfic -- i have go to say that i never commented on ur work - but i just couldn't let this go - ur such a fantastic writer and i hope u continue to write - im looking forward to reading another fanfic of urs in the future

plzzzzzz contuiee ur storyy butt ur reallyy good with makingg storyy