FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 13

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Okay, Part 20:
Manya and Akash stepped out of the airport in Florence. Manya gasped as beautiful statues and mimes covered all of Florence.
M: Its beautiful, Akash!
A: Not more than you, jaan...
Manya blushed as Akash grinned. A black limo came and stood in front of them.
M: Limo? Hamare liye?!
Akash stared at the limo.
A: Actually, jaan, mujhe tho limo yaad hi nain rahi...maine tho socha bhi nain tha...kisi aur ki hogi...
But the limo door opened and the driver smiled at them.
D: Mr. Rathod?
A: Er..yes, but how do--
D: This limo is for you. Please have a seat.
A: I think you're mistaken. We didn't order a limo--
D: Please have a seat, your ride awaits...
Akash and Manya looked at each other but sat down in the car. The limo pulled away, stopping in front of a big, glassy hotel.
A: Our reservations were in a different hotel though--
M: Akash! Its wonderful!!!!
A: Pagal ho? Wonderful ki bachi, they've got the wrong people...!
M: Tum chalo tho sahi!
They entered the beautiful hotel and praised it. It was like a dream; beautiful red carpet, decorations, everything.
A: Yeh sab...?!
An employee guided them to a suite. Akash stared in surprise as the suite was beautifully decorated.
M: Wow!
A: Okay, aisi baat nain ai ki that I can't afford this, jaan. Because I can. Per yeh sab--
Manya grabbed his arm.
M: Akash! Tumne yeh sab kiya hai na!
A: Uhh...not really, Cinderella. Our reservations are in another beautiful hotel...
Empl: We are aware that you do not have any reservations here from yourself. But everything will be clear soon, sir. We are inviting you to a special honeymoon party tonight at 8 o'clock sharp, downstairs. Please come.
M: We will!
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Akash laid on the big bed, tossing a ball from one hand to another hand. He looked impatiently at the bathroom door.
A: Kya, Manya! Jaldhi karo na!
M: Arahi hoon!
A: Tum jitna bhi sajo Manya, akhir kitni pyari lag sakko gi?!
M: OH! Pehle tho bahut baatein banate thay, ki main chand sitaroon se bhi pyari hoon! AB?!
Akash laughed as the door opened. He looked up and suddenly stopped smiling, his mouth hanging wide open. Manya stepped out wearing the msot gorgeous red gown, her hair curled from the bottom, and beautiful red heels.
M: Kya hua?
A: You look--tum...
Manya blushed as Akash stood up.
A: Kise impress kerne ka iraada hai, jaan?
M: Kyun? Tum impress nain hue?
A: Main tho pehle se hi mer mitta tha, aur ab...
M: Aur ab kya?
A: Aur ab tho saans laine ki bhi fursat nahin hai...
Manya smiled shyly as Akash picked her up in his arms and headed out.
M: Akash! Log kya kahein ge!
A: Sab ladke jealous honge kyunki tum meri baahoon mein ho!
M: Acha? Aur ladkiyan?
A: Woh tumse jealous hongi.
M: Because I look so pretty?
A: Nah, yaar, because I'M the one holding you!
M: Akash!
She laughed and hit him playfully. They went downstairs to an even more decorated hall with flowers, balloons and every dream you could imagine of.
M: It's gorgeous, isn't it?
A: Hmm...
Everyone was dancing. Manya and Akash stood together, staring into each other's eyes. A voice startled them.
Voice: You two are the cutest couple right now, you know that?
They both turned and saw two people smiling at them. (The people are Mahi and Shabd from Maayka).
A: Uh..thanks..
Mahi: You're welcome. India?
M: Yeah...yeh aapke husband hain?
Mahi smiled as Shabd hugged her.
S: I hope so, kyunki she's looking damn gorgeous!
Akash nodded.
A: That she is!
Manya turned and glared at him.
M: Acha?
A: Nain, main tho bas tareef ker raha tha, you know...like a..uh..friend..
M: Rakhi banvao ussai phir khul ke tareef kerna!!
Akash, Mahi and Shabd laughed and introduced each other.
S: So, yeh party aapke liye rakhi gayee hai, how do you feel about that?
M: Hamare liye? Kyun?
S: Shiyad kyunki aap itni haseen lag rahi hain, Manya ji!
Mahi: KYA KAHA?
Shabd playfully stuck his tongue out as if saying, "Oops!"
Akash hit him playfully.
A: Yaar, abhi mile hain aur abhi se hi ek doosre ki biwiyan achi lagne lagi!
As Shabd burst out laughing, Manya glared at him.
M: Mathlab?!
Akash hugged her and laughed, slapping Shabd a five.
Mahi: Shabd! Lakein sach mein, Manya, yeh party bahut hi khoobsurat hai! Aur sab tum dhono ke liye hai!
M: Nain, Mahi, I think you're mistaken...hamare liye kyun hogi?
S: Because we got a memo ke yeh Akash and Manya Rathod ke liye hai. And aren't you two Akash and Manya Rathod?
A: So we are!
Shabd laughed and shrugged.
S: Lakein phir yeh rakhi kis ne hai?
Manya and Akash shrugged as the song Tumse Hi came on.
Empl: Will all couples please step to the dance floor?
Manya and Akash smiled and went with Mahi and Shabd. Akash held Manya's hand and spun her around, letting her back rest on his chest.
Main jahan bhi jaata hoon, tumse hi mil jaata hoon..
Shabd and Mahi danced as Shabd let his hands rest on Mahi's waist as she smiled shyly. They swayed softly...
Akash spun Manya back around and did the same dance as Shabd and Mahi...
Suddenly, the lights went dim...
Empl: And now please welcome the host of this party, the one who has set this beautiful evening for Mr and Mrs. Rathod!
Everyone clapped as Manya and Akash looked up, confused.
A: Kaun hai, yaar?
Suddenly, a person stepped into the light. Manya gaped Akash's arms as rage spilled from his eyes. Out came, wearing a black tux, a bandage being revealed through the top of his open shirt, smiling...Karan!!

Precap:
Karan grinned at Akash and Manya.
K: Yaad rakhna, Akash. Yeh India nahin, Florence hai. Agar tumne mujhe haath lagane ki bhi koshish ki na, tho mujhe kuch ni hoga..magar tum..

oh no! yeh kahaan se agaya! anyway I hope they can escape him again!

karan! kebab me hadi! 😳
i hope he doesnt ruine there honeymoon
btw love the part 😃 continue soon 👏

SO CUTE 😳 😳 gREAT IDEA PUTTING SHABD AND MAHI IN IT
FOR SOME REASON I KNEW IT WOULD BE KARAN WHO DID ALL THIS

OMG THAT WAS SOOO GOOD NOT EVEN KIDDIN IT WAS AMaZING and i thot it was really cute how mahi and shabd showed up

i liked the idea of Karan it adds suspense

omg!!!! i hate karan in this FF. continue soon!

OMG I made Karan a villain 😆 Anyways, thanks for the comments! 😉

Part 21:
Manya stared hard as Karan smiled warmly at the crowd. Akash suddenly raced upto him, grabbing his collar. Karan jumped back.
K: Easy, Akash, easy!
M: Tum tho--
K: Tumne kya samja, Manya? Tum mujhse itni asaani se peecha churra lo gi?
Karan grinned at Akash and Manya.
K: Yaad rakhna, Akash. Yeh India nahin, Florence hai. Agar tumne mujhe haath lagane ki bhi koshish ki na, tho mujhe kuch ni hoga..magar tum..
A: Magar main kya, huh? You think ki main ek coward ki tarha tumhein hamari zindagi yoon--
K: Aray, maine kiya kya hai?! Tum dhono ke liye party arrange ki hai! You should thank me!
M: Tumhe kya chahiye, Karan?
Karan glared at her.
K: Jo mujhe chahiye tha, woh kisi ne cheen liya!
A: Jo tumhara hai nahin, ussai koi cheene ga kya?!
Karan glared into Akash's eyes. Akash gave him a bitter laugh.
A: I pity you, Karan.
K: Acha? Aur woh kyun?
M: Kyunki tum oos aag mein kadam rakh rahe ho jo tumhe raakh ker ke rakh de gi?
K: ACHA? Kidher hai woh aag?
A: Hamare dil mein, Karan. Dho pyar kerne vaaloon ke beech mein jo aata hai na, jal ker raakh ho jaata hai!
Karan stepped in between them two.
K: And yet I'm alive!
Manya laughed.
M: Aur tumhe kya laga, Karan? Ki hum kuch nain ker payein ge? I cuold report you right now for harrassing me and giving me ment--
Karan raised his hand.
K: Merna tho humne hai na, Manya? Tho phir kyun na saath merein?
Manya edged closer to Akash.
A: Mathlab?
K: Mathlab yeh...
He bent closer to them and whispered,
K: Yahan ek bomb hai, Akash. Jo kisi bhi waqt pat sakta hai!!
Shabd from the other side heard this and yelled it out. Everyone started to run from here to there, shouting. Almost everyone exited the building. Manya's hand suddenly slipped from Akash as Akash got lost in the crowd.
M: AKASH!
Karan laughed as he stood outside the door. Almost everyone had gone.
K: Yahan koi bomb nahin hai, Manya!
M: Ma--mathlab?
K: Mathlab? Mathlab yeh!
He suddenly dropped a stick of fire on the hotel ground, laughing.
K: Akash tho na jaane kaha hai, Manya. Tum mere saath chalo!
Manya stared in horror as she heard Akash's voice just as the fire leapt from one place to another, surrounding the hotel. Karan placed out his hand for Manya, laughing bitterly.
Manya stared at the fire. Heat thrilled upon her. She stared at Karan, and then picked up a stick of fire that had landed and shoved it at him.
K: MANYAAA!!!
As Karan became surrounded in flames, Manya stared at him in tears.
M: Bahut dard hui na, Karan! Aur socho tumne mere Akash ke saath kya kiyaa!!!
K: AKASH AKASH AKASH!!
M: KYUNKI MAIN AKASH SE PYAR KERTI HOON! Mera pyar kya, tum tho meri hamdardi ke bhi kaabil nahin ho! Thookthi hoon main tumhare jaise pyar per!
She turned and raced into the flames, searching for Akash. Fire surrounded everything, sticks falling here and there. Manya suddenly saw Akash pushing against a piece of wood blocking his way.
M: Akash!
A: Manya!
They raced towards each toher just as a bolt of fire fell in between them.
A: Manya, tum jao!
M: Nain, Akash! Tumhe chod ker main nahin jaoon gi!!
A: MANYA! Tum dhervaze ke paas ho, tum jaaoo!!!
Manya shook her head. She ducked as another piece of wood, covered in fire, landed near her feet.
A: MANYA!
He took off his jacket and covered his arms, running through the fire. He leapt on Manya, holding her tightly.
M: Akash!
A: Chalo yahan se, Manya!!
They both ran to the door, only to see Karan still standing there. He stared at Akash and Manya, their hands locked together as they stood, no fear in their eyes of whatsoever.
A: Sache pyar ki jeet hii hoti hai, KAran!
M: Aur tumne jo kiya ussai pyar nahin; junoon kehte hain!
Karan glared at them and fell to his knees, suddenly crying.
K: Maine bhi pyar kiya! Lakein mujhe nahin mila! KYUN?! KYUN!!!
M: Kabhi zindagi mein oos ka intezar kerna, Karan. Ussai cheene ki koshish muth kerna!
Akash held Manya's hand and held it on his heart.
A: Aaj hum bas koi premi nahin hai, Karan. Pati patni hain!
He took a spot of his blood and filled Manya's "maang."
A: Jo khoon se rishta banta hai, woh kabhi tootha nahin hai.
M: Aur hamara tho aisa rishta hai jo Khuda bhi kabhi todna nahin chahe ga!
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Manya smiled at Akash as he sat down next to her on a bed, in their originally reserved hotel.
M: Bas, Akash. Ab vappas chalte hain!
A: MAnya!
M: Really, Akash, ab..
A: Abhi tho hamara honeymoon shuru hua hai, jaan. Please aisa muth kaho...
As he stood up and applied a bandage on his hand, Manya smiled secretly.
Tumne kitni daffa apne pyar ka izhaar kiya hai, Akash..ab meri baari hai..saara Florence dekha ga..that Manya loves Akash..., she thought...

wow nicee one again Akash and Manya won love figth with karan

Cute😳
True love always wins

yup true love always wins! nice update! continue!