Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
love ur ff! keep whrittinggg! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
its soooo amazinggg parttt i feel sad for akash i hope story take twist turn i want akash happyyyyy not saddddddd
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Posted: 17 years ago

here are the suits

karan's shervani

now akash's shervani

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

the girls suits
roopa's lengah

now manya's lengha

sorry guys but i havr to post part11 tomarrow, it is to late nw i hope u understand cos it is 6 in the morning but i promise i will post in the evining and i hope i like the suits and plzzzz comment on whether u like them or not

thank u😉😉😉

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

roopa's lengha will be up later cos it is not showing rite nw so i hav to change it😕

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Akashh Sarvinii soo damm coollllll and karan sarvinii alsoo cooll Manyaaaa langaa soo damm hotttttttt
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice outifts!!!! u have really good taste!
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thanks for liking the suits and my taste, and very sorry once again cos i might not be able to post tody cos i have been tooo busy, and i am to tired ti write and i have to wake up early tomarrow so i have to go sleep kinda early like bout 1 or 2 o clock 😆 😆 😆 😆 but roopa's suit will be up today and if it isn't then u can come n slap me 10 times 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry for the late updates guys, but i have ben very busy, i will post part 1 of 11 today but part 2 will be up 2mrow ok 😳 oh n sorry once again, n roopa's dress will also be up today
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys this is part 11 and sorry for the delay I have been out, and about, and I have been to busy, so I am very sorry again for the delay

part 1 of 11
In the envelope were brochures of, places around the world, they had Italy, Spain, France, America, and loads more.
O: yeh…
OD: yeh kuch places hai,
O: haan bauji, likin kiss liye
OD: yeh tum dono ke honeymoon ki liye, ab yum dono deside kerlo, kya kerna hai aur kaha jaana hai
M: lekin hum kaise deside kerainge
O: fikar math karo biwi sahiba, tumhara pathi hai na, vo sab kuch sambhal le ga.

Later, that day manya was in her room putting her cloths in the cupboard, when om sneaked up from behind her and put his hands on her waist, manya jumped up and shrieked, when she turned around she saw om, standing there, laughing at manya's reaction, manya leaned over to the bed, grabbed a pillow and hit it across om's head, om just stood there in shock, but also grinning. Om walked closer to manya and leaned against her. Manya just walked back, nervously, until she was leaning against the wall. Om walked closer to her and leaned down slightly, manya just looked into his eyes, when om leaned down he got hold of a pillow from the bed and he brought his face near manya's

M: om tum pagal hogey ho kya.
O: haan manya main tumhere pyar main pagal ho chukka hoon
Om brought the pillow up and he was just about to hit manya when someone grabbed hold of the pillow from the back.
it was om's mom
OM: beta kya om tumhe tang ker raha hai
M: ji mummy ji
om's mom got the pillow and hit om with it, jokingly, then sh passed the pillow to manya
OM: lo beta, ab iski achi dhuliye kerna
manya got hold of the pillow and continuasly hit om with it, laughing, when om's mom went out of the room, he snachd the pillow from manya and picked her up in his arms, he stood on the bed, with mmanya in his arms.
O: eh havalharni giradoon
M: om nehi, please
O: mujhe toh badla lena hi hoga
M: om nooooooooo
but it was to late om had thrown manya on the bed, manya got mad and pulled his leg so that he would fall next to her.
O: manya, mujh tumhe kuch hikana hai
M: kya
O: pehle ankhe band karo
M: lekin, om
O: band kerti ho ya
manya closed her eyes and when she opened them infront of her, were two tickets to paris.
M: om yeh,
O: humare honeymoon ke tickets
M: om, humare honeymoon, oh god mujhe yakeen nehi ho raha hai ki main honeymoon per jarahi hoon
O: main bhi araha hoon
M kya toh pkir honeymoon cancel,
O: teek hai, main yeh tickets cancel kar raha hoon, aur bauji ko keh doonga ki tum honeymoon par nehi jana chahti ho
om got of the bed and he was about to walk out to go tell his dad, when manya got hold of his arm and pulled him onto the bed again
M: aggar ithna insist ker rahe ho toh main chali hi chahti hoon, lkin sirf bauji ka mann rek ne ke liye
O: toh tum mere saath nehi jana chahti ho, teek hai main kisi aur ke saath chala jaunga
M: agar tum humare honeymoon per kisi aur ko leke jaoge toh main uski haath pauon kaat ker tumhe kila doongi
O: (laughing) tumhe sach main lagta hai ki main apni khoobsurat iwi ko chor ker kisi aur ke paas chala jaunga
M: nehi main sirf clarify ker rahi thi, aur anyways tum kisi aur tum vaise bhi kisi aur ke saath nehi ja sakto ho
O: kya tum yeh chahti ho ki main kisi aur ke saath jau
M: nehi main toh sirf batha rahi thi
om laughed and hugged manya, while he was hugging her a maid came storming in the room,
Maid: sahab voh maaji aur bauji.........

thank u n
plz comment 😳 😳 😳

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago

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