Mohbat Kabhi Maine Ff Part 17 ENDING!!!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
its soo amazing story and Manya dress soo beautifull and her sandels
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
that was so good plz write soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
plzzzzzz contuied part 9 and manyy more parts plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
hi guy's i just want to ask for an apolagy because the dress u saw up there has been changed to roopa's dress and i saw a georgous dress that would look georgous on manya so i will post that in a sec
so SSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

now this is manya's dress and i promise i won't change it

and these are manya's shoes

hpoe u like them n sorry again. and i will post tomarrow

thank u

Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice dresses u have put on for manya and roopa beautiful
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Manya dress soo dam hot and beutifull sendles plzzzzzz contuied nexttt part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
aaaaaaawwwwww thanks for liking manya's dress and shoes and roopa's dress and shoes and i will continue part 9 in afew hours but i will do it today and thank u ssooo mmuucchh again i am very very happy that u liked my ff
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Edited by ~~BaBy~AnGel~~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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here is part 1 of part 9 (part 2 will be up tomarow)

arter reading the diary, she put's it down
P: (to her self) manya tum ithni achi ho ki main tumhe batha nehi sakti, tumne kya kya nehi kiya doosroon ke liye, doosroonke ki kushioon ke liye apni kushioon ko dabadiya, doosroon ke sapno ke liye apne sapno ko kurbaan kardiya, shayad is duniya main tumhare jaisa insaan nehi hai, lekin ab tumhari baari hai maangnay ki, aur tumhe yeh haq main doongi, om ka pyar tum maango gi nehi, issi liye om ka pyar main tumhe doongi, aur akash ko yeh raaz main nehi yeh diary bathaey gi

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~the wedding day~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

roopa and manya were in thier rooms getting ready, while akash and karan came with the baraat, a they came in threre were a crowd of people waiting for thier suhgath they came in wearing very cute shirvani's.
K: ithi ladkian maine pehli baar dekhi hai
A: arre yaar ab yeh sari ladkiaan pakainge
K: in se bhag ne ka koi raasta nehi hai
A: aggar hota toh main yaha tumhare saat nehi karra hua hota
Ki: yeh kya ghusar pusar ho rahi hai yaha
K: kuch nahi, ab andaar chalain
akash and karan were about to walk inside when kiran and priya put their arm's infront of them blocking thier way
P: pwhle paise do phir andaar jao
A: pumhara naam sehi raka gaya hai, SAALIYOON
P: humare naam ki burai kar na band karo aur paise nikalo
karan put his hand in is pocket and took out about 5000 rupees.
A: yeh kya yaar tunne paise kyun diye
K: tumhara toh patha nehi lekin mujhe roopa se shadi kar nehi hai
A: ab paise mil gay na ab toh jane do
Ki: nehi abhi akash jeeju ne bhi dene hai
A: hello yeh jeeja kaun hai aur by the way mujse paise nehi milainge
P: teek hai toh tum dono ko roopa aur manya nehi milainge
K: akash zaada bhao math ka aur paise de na yaar
akash sighed and reeched down in his pocket, and put a chillar in the girls hands
Ki: yeh fair nehi hi yeh cheeting hai
A: hello tumne paise maange they toh maine de diye na, aur tumne yeh nehi kaha ki yumhe kitne paise chahiye, bikaarian kehi ki
all the boy's laughed and pushed the girls to a side entering the hall, that was beutifully decorated eith flowers and lights.
akash and karan went and sat down on the stage getting photo's taken with thier friends and families. priya went up to montu(manya's little friend) and asked him to give a letter to akash. montu went to akash and gave him the letter, akash got the letter and opened it. the letter said...

akash kya tum mere kamray main ah saktay ho please mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

love manya

after giving the letter to montu, priya ran upstairs, and she saw manya and roopa in roopa's room getting ready. so she went into manya's room and put he diary on the bed. after she put the diary there she saw om come in so she quickly put thr blanket on it.
O: priya tum yaha kya kar rahi ho
P: main manya ko goodbye kehnay ai thi
O: manya ko goodbye kyun
P: kyunki shadi ke baad main vapas londen ja rahi hoon
O: kya lekin tunne mujhe bathaya kyun nehi
P: main vo tumhe bathane hi vali thi
O: teek hai, lekin tu manya ko bye abhi kyun keh rahi hai
P: kyunki tehrke mujhe mauka nehi milega
O: lekin tu ithni galdi kyun ja rahi hai
P: meri chutiyaan toh khatam ho gai hai na, aur mom dad chahtain hai ki main ek ladka dekloon shadi ke liye, aur vapas ja kar us ladke ko thikaney lagana toh hai
O: ab tak kitnay choro ko thikanay lagaya hai tunne
P: patha nehi kabhi gine nehi hai ladka kabhi vapas nehi aya
priya and om laughed, om hugged priya and went back downstairs, priya quickly took the blanket of the diary and followed om downstairs. akash was comming up the stairs when he bumpped into gopu.
A: hi gopu, ajj tu kaha rehta hai yaar
G: kehi bhi nehi, yaha vaha bhatak tha rehta hoon sanju ke peechay
A: acha yeh batha ki tumhara intution kya kehta hai ki ajj kya hoga
G: mera intution yeh kehta hai ki ajj kuch bohth bara hoga, aur kisi ne khuaboon main bhi nehi socha hoga ki aisa din ayega, aur aj tumhe ek bohth bara faisla bhi karna parega.
gopu went downstairs leaving akash confused. akash contiunued walking up the stairs. about 2 munites later akash reached manya's room and saw that she wasn't there. he was about to walk out when he saw thee diary on the bed he walked upto the bed and picked up the diary. akash opened the diary and started to red it.....................................................
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
so much suspens caint wait 😳 loved the part continue sooon 😃

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