~||Let it Be||~A Randhir OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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An OS from my side...something that was going on in my mind...😆

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"Randhir please come back to the team..." Said Sahil..."we really need you.."

Randhir heard Sahil say , as he walked off towards the library, ignoring whatever Sahil said...

Two hours later, Randhir sat on his bed fiddling with his Rubik cube, smiling thoughtfully as he remembered how turn by turn each of the Dream Team members had come to request him to come back to the team...after he had refused to return even when their mentor Abhay Ranawat had asked him to...

Convincing Abhay Ranawat , his worth, had been hard for Randhir, but not that hard also...infact he had enjoyed this challenge...the challenge actually made him use his genius mind in ways he had never fathomed he could, and that was the reason why he almost made a near perfect replica of the Dream Team car all alone...off course there were flaws in the design...but he was working on it to perfect it...his brilliant plan of proving that he alone was equal to the entire Dream Team put together was revealed when Abhay Ranawat had got a call from one of the Dream Team organizers...He was the person to whom Randhir had approached with his own blue print and a prototype of the Dream Team Car...Ranawat had called Randhir to his cabin, and on questioning him, Randhir told him the truth...he impressed Ranawat with his minute technical details about his solo project and his innovative ideas...Ranawat was convinced that the Randhir who always strived to make himself better than before, that Randhir whose mind worked in ways no one could ever imagine"is back... Ranawat thus, asked him to re-join the team but on a condition that he would allow every member of the Dream Team to contribute individually...

Randhir just smiled at him, and nodded his head in agreement...he then replied " Sir, I am happy that you have reconsidered me to be a part of the team...that I have been able to prove my worth to you...but in these past few days what I have learned alone, was something I could not do in all these years...i have also learned one thing...my worth cannot be measured by whether I am a part of any team or not...whether I win any competition or not...I am worthy only when I can contribute something, which can have an impact over people , on someone, or something...something which will bring about a change...may be revolutionize...I am glad I was a part of the Dream Team once...and I am happy that I have been able to convince you that I am worthy enough to gain back my place back in the Team...but I have realised that being a part of this Team is not my dream anymore...i just wanted to prove my worth and I am happy that I have proved it...may be working alone will give me the satisfaction, I never got before...may be I am wrong...may be I am being selfish...but this time I want to choose this path...i will repent if I have to...but then again maybe I will revel in my decision...so thank you sir...but I am letting this opportunity pass..."

Ranawat listened to all that Randhir had to say...he just smiled at him and said..." I won't stop you from taking your decision...but please do give a second thought..."

Randhir nodded at him and left the cabin...

As the Dream Team got to know about Randhir's refusal to come back to the team...they began to form their own judgements...for Vidushi , it was Randhir's selfishness, his arrogance that stopped him from coming...for Parth , it was because Randhir wanted the Dream Team to suffer and it was a part of his revengeful plan sabotage the team...for Sahil and Yoyo, it was because Randhir was plain upset for being ignored by the rest of the team for so long...for Sanyukta, it was because he was a loner, and maybe he was still upset for having been ousted from the team in the first place...but she had an inkling that Randhir's reasons were far more deep...

Randhir looked up from his Rubik cube when he heard the soft voice of Sanyukta calling him...

"Randhir, please come back to the team...we need you...the team is falling apart...we have intelligence, hard work, brains, tactics...everything...but we need that touch , that only you possess...the mind of a genius...I am sorry...if you feel that we have tried to make you feel small...inconsequential...unworthy ...for you are not...you never were...we always knew your value..."

Randhir just smiled at her and made her sit down beside him...taking her hand in his , he said.. "I know you mean well...out of everyone, I trust you...I believe you , that you never doubted my capability or my worth...but please understand and make them understand...its time to work without me...to work without "the mind of a genius" as you said...call it my arrogance, my selfishness, my stupidity...but that's the way it is...sometimes we all have to sacrifice something...i am asking you all to sacrifice me..."

As he was saying all these the whole Dream Team came into the room...

He looked at each of their faces, he knew that may be he has snatched away their dreams...for they depended on him, to fulfill their dreams...but he felt tired...tired of letting everyone exploit him...his mind...his brilliance...his prowess...he felt tired of letting others bask in his glory...he felt tired...just tired... it was time to let the others prove their worth...to let them work their own way to fulfill their own dreams ...sans him...

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Please read and leave your comments...i seriously dont know what i have written though 😆...but i feel it will serve the DT right if this happens 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! beautiful written frm randhir point of view. i love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress

Unress...
I really wish cvz and writers cud think of something deep and logical like this..
U hv presented Randhir 's state of mind and his ultimate motive so logically and perfectly that I really wish it was like this this in the show ..i wish he was not doing it out of revenge.. In the show..
And i loved what he did in the last ...letting the opportunity go.. ..
Coz he has realised his own wworth that he cf do anything if he is focused ..
By not letting others use his intelligence and getting credit ...
Like in that book.. Umm.. Bhool gyi.. Wat was the name of book .. 🤔

Anyways... Awesome os.. And i really really really loved it. <33
All n all .. I wish u were the writer of show.. I really wish .. . one reason toh u know ..
Other... That if lucky u wd hv gt the chance to work with other talented writers of shows of same production house... Like writers of mdg... 🤣 ..
*runs *... 🤣


Love<3
Lichu
Edited by -Medly- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wrackspurt

An OS from my side...something that was going on in my mind...😆

*******

"Randhir please come back to the team..." Said Sahil..."we really need you.."

Randhir heard Sahil say , as he walked off towards the library, ignoring whatever Sahil said...

Yes yes He should ignore everyone 😡 I so want this ignoring thing to happen in the show too.. all are bloody selfish 😡 😡

Two hours later, Randhir sat on his bed fiddling with his Rubik cube, smiling thoughtfully as he remembered how turn by turn each of the Dream Team members had come to request him to come back to the team...after he had refused to return even when their mentor Abhay Ranawat had asked him to...

Convincing Abhay Ranawat , his worth, had been hard for Randhir, but not that hard also...infact he had enjoyed this challenge...the challenge actually made him use his genius mind in ways he had never fathomed he could, and that was the reason why he almost made a near perfect replica of the Dream Team car all alone...off course there were flaws in the design...but he was working on it to perfect it...his brilliant plan of proving that he alone was equal to the entire Dream Team put together was revealed when Abhay Ranawat had got a call from one of the Dream Team organizers...He was the person to whom Randhir had approached with his own blue print and a prototype of the Dream Team Car...Ranawat had called Randhir to his cabin, and on questioning him, Randhir told him the truth...he impressed Ranawat with his minute technical details about his solo project and his innovative ideas...Ranawat was convinced that the Randhir who always strived to make himself better than before, that Randhir whose mind worked in ways no one could ever imagine"is back... Ranawat thus, asked him to re-join the team but on a condition that he would allow every member of the Dream Team to contribute individually...


@blue , yeah! 😳 I loved that line

@pink This perfectly defines the genius Randhir

Randhir just smiled at him, and nodded his head in agreement...he then replied " Sir, I am happy that you have reconsidered me to be a part of the team...that I have been able to prove my worth to you...but in these past few days what I have learned alone, was something I could not do in all these years...i have also learned one thing...my worth cannot be measured by whether I am a part of any team or not...whether I win any competition or not...I am worthy only when I can contribute something, which can have an impact over people , on someone, or something...something which will bring about a change...may be revolutionize...I am glad I was a part of the Dream Team once...and I am happy that I have been able to convince you that I am worthy enough to gain back my place back in the Team...but I have realised that being a part of this Team is not my dream anymore...i just wanted to prove my worth and I am happy that I have proved it...may be working alone will give me the satisfaction, I never got before...may be I am wrong...may be I am being selfish...but this time I want to choose this path...i will repent if I have to...but then again maybe I will revel in my decision...so thank you sir...but I am letting this opportunity pass..."


@green..wow! wow! just wow! 👏 Paro 🤗 ..I so wish Cvs Show him like this..and Not as a mere Boyfriend Of Sanyukta the great 🥱

Ranawat listened to all that Randhir had to say...he just smiled at him and said..." I won't stop you from taking your decision...but please do give a second thought..."

Randhir nodded at him and left the cabin...

As the Dream Team got to know about Randhir's refusal to come back to the team...they began to form their own judgements...for Vidushi , it was Randhir's selfishness, his arrogance that stopped him from coming...for Parth , it was because Randhir wanted the Dream Team to suffer and it was a part of his revengeful plan sabotage the team...for Sahil and Yoyo, it was because Randhir was plain upset for being ignored by the rest of the team for so long...for Sanyukta, it was because he was a loner, and maybe he was still upset for having been ousted from the team in the first place...but she had an inkling that Randhir's reasons were far more deep...


@blue.. yes 🥱 🥱 this is all they are capable of 🥱 idiots 🥱

Randhir looked up from his Rubik cube when he heard the soft voice of Sanyukta calling him...

"Randhir, please come back to the team...we need you...the team is falling apart...we have intelligence, hard work, brains, tactics...everything...but we need that touch , that only you possess...the mind of a genius...I am sorry...if you feel that we have tried to make you feel small...inconsequential...unworthy ...for you are not...you never were...we always knew your value..."


@pink..yes thats true..but I dont want randhir to go back to that selfish team.. 🥱

Randhir just smiled at her and made her sit down beside him...taking her hand in his , he said.. "I know you mean well...out of everyone, I trust you...I believe you , that you never doubted my capability or my worth...but please understand and make them understand...its time to work without me...to work without "the mind of a genius" as you said...call it my arrogance, my selfishness, my stupidity...but that's the way it is...sometimes we all have to sacrifice something...i am asking you all to sacrifice me..."

@green 👏 perfect answer 👏

As he was saying all these the whole Dream Team came into the room...

He looked at each of their faces, he knew that may be he has snatched away their dreams...for they depended on him, to fulfill their dreams...but he felt tired...tired of letting everyone exploit him...his mind...his brilliance...his prowess...he felt tired of letting others bask in his glory...he felt tired...just tired... it was time to let the others prove their worth...to let them work their own way to fulfill their own dreams ...sans him...

@bold ..yes thats exactly everyone is doing 🥱

******

Please read and leave your comments...i seriously dont know what i have written though 😆...but i feel it will serve the DT right if this happens 😆


Paro 🤗
This OS is just brilliant 👏

very pleasant to read..For a Randhirian like me.. 😳

needless to say its very well written 👏 ...

Every Randhirian wants this track to shape this way..But we know we wouldn't get to see any such logical thing in the show.. 🥱

But It felt so good to read this..as if U echoed Our demands from this track 🤣 ..

Loved it <3 <3

I love U more :* 🤗
Edited by BornAries - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome it was...

Even i think randhir should do something like this..
DT deserve this...

Kitni buri tarah ignore kar rhe hai rd ko..😒

Beautifully written...
deserve a hug from me...🤗

keep writing such things...

Love
ayushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It portrayed Randhir's emotion's so well😳
His pov was just too good for words⭐️

Beautifully penned Paro di👏👏
Loved it😳

Love,
Asmu😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this is called a mind blowing os
I so lover it

Yr u nailed it
I so want sum thing like this to hppn

Enjoyed it

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaj me upar.. Or tu neeche 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Medly-

Ress

Unress...
I really wish cvz and writers cud think of something deep and logical like this..
U hv presented Randhir 's state of mind and his ultimate motive so logically and perfectly that I really wish it was like this this in the show ..i wish he was not doing it out of revenge.. In the show..
And i loved what he did in the last ...letting the opportunity go.. ..
Coz he has realised his own wworth that he cf do anything if he is focused ..
By not letting others use his intelligence and getting credit ...
Like in that book.. Umm.. Bhool gyi.. Wat was the name of book .. 🤔

Anyways... Awesome os.. And i really really really loved it. <33
All n all .. I wish u were the writer of show.. I really wish .. . one reason toh u know ..
Other... That if lucky u wd hv gt the chance to work with other talented writers of shows of same production house... Like writers of mdg... 🤣 ..
*runs *... 🤣


Love<3
Lichu

Well it was a random os seriously 😆...i am happy u thought its deep and all😆...i seriously want not only randhir but also sanyu to leave the team...specially after how the DT behaved with sanyu yesterday🥱...ah yes i loved that book Atlas Shrugged😳

And what was that abt the Mdg writers??...maar khaegi 😡...ya right lucky i will be...🥱...if i was the writer of the show...then toh kuchh aur hi dikhati 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wrackspurt

Well it was a random os seriously😆...i am happy u thought its deep and all😆...i seriously want not only randhir but also sanyu to leave the team...specially after how the DT behaved with sanyu yesterday🥱...ah yes i loved that book Atlas Shrugged😳

And what was that abt the Mdg writers??...maar khaegi😡...ya right lucky i will be...🥱...if i was the writer of the show...then toh kuchh aur hi dikhati😈



It seriously is... Much more thanthe sshow.. TThats y iI loved it <3

Arrey .. Mdg khatam ho gya.. Wrna apko pakka chance milta .. M sure... 😳 🤣
Yeah.. Got it 😈
..Isseriously wish u were writer 😈

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