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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Nyc 1 ash luv it aisehi vidarth likhte rehe n iske peheleka bhi acha tha :)

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Singularity

@Singularity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Thanks for the scrap! 😃

Fabulous piece! An apt title, by the way! 😉

I loved how SanDhir attempted to knock some sense into our thick-headed LoverBoy! 😆 Namit seems like a sexual predator, from how you described him. Will you be delving more into the brothers' past in your future drabbles? I would love to read more of what actually caused the friction between the two.

Deny how much ever you want, Parthy, you ARE jealous! 😆 Loved the nickname, by the way! Taichi Baba! 😆

Eagerly waiting for the sequel to this! 😃 You know why! 😉

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Yipeee we got jealous parth
U know from the time parth is behaving as a complete jerk to vids I was wtng to see table turns
He had so much fun in hurting her
Bt now ball is in her court

Really uska face dkhne layak hota h whenever vids is with namit
Burning like a coal

Yesterday fight when he was stopping her to go away with namit was superb

Poor boy kya kya kia use rokane k lia

Now I'm loving it

No matter how much he's insecure he's not going to admit he's jealous
Boys and their big fat ego

Arrrggghhh ladki haath se jyegi tbhi akaal ayegi

Really lovely drabble
Full on entertaining

Yr write sum thing on dream team I'm missing their spark

Love u
Keep smiling

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Moony87

@Moony87

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Friday fun in office.. Less work.. So commenting before weekend. 😆

My.. My.. Ash.. You are on a roll ..!!.. Awesome drabbles.. Ek se badhkar ek saare. Be it any character of the show.. You wrote on all and beautifully. Fabulous writings and flawless too. Waise to sabhi bahut acchhe hain.. Including Sandhir's.. But there are two drabbles that gave me a pleasant shock. To be honest those drabbles are something I never thought you'll ever write. And I am lucky to read these write ups. Thanks for giving me the link.

1. Title: Mind over Matter.

Thoughts of Sahil on each pair. Sahil hardly gets screen space (which is basically good for his role otherwise he would also be butchered by CVs) . So reading his thought process was a blissful experience. His descriptions about every couple is so apt. So perfect ⭐️. Smoooth like his dance moves. 👏 👏 👏 👏

Highlight of this drabble :-

Sahil /OC pairing. 😲 (This one line I read five times making sure if I am reading properly) .. You writing about an OC with Sahil took me back to the days when you had said you don't like people pairing established characters with their own trash original characters.. that it makes you hate those Original Characters. Lucky for Sahil and this OC girl.. Sahil is not paired with anyone in the show 😆. Double Lucky for this OC girl and Ish of your other FF (I forgot the name of that FF) .. for they get to be paired with Sahil. 😉

2. Title: Judgement.

Pairing: Parth centric

What a amazing piece of writing this is. 👏 ⭐️ Simply awesome. Focusing on Parth's morals .. was a treat to read. And you did full justice to it. What words.. What depth. Awesome work. His equations with everyone beautifully penned down. Yep he is a man of honor and commitment and that's a rare rare quality in today's guyz. Sadly people in the forum finds it irritating, annoying and unreal. 😔 .. You have dived wonderfully into his mind. 👏

Parth's pathos is that he is bashed for being a moralistic person.. What an irony when the whole country cribs about immoral politicians and ministers. The biggest joke being CVs showing that a person with morals and no over hunger for money will end up being a garage mechanic. 🥱 🤔

Highlight of this drabble :-

You gasped for not bashing Parth and I was stunned for the same. Have read this drabble 10 times till now. No gaali, no abuse to Parth. 😲 My goodness.. Must have been a mind paining experience for you to write this drabble.. Like Physically painful. 😲

Finally, jaise minorities ko reservation mein upliftment milta hai , Parth finally gets a positive drabble on 1% quota. 🤣. Ganga nahaa aayega Parth.. From not deserving Vidushi ... to using Vidushi ... to he is still not over Arpita yet... to he should die ... to he is a douchebag.. to now THIS.. What journey man.. 😆 😆 😆 😆 .. Sau Chammat ke baad.. Pyaar ke meethe bol mile use.. No wonder Ankit headed to Panchmani for a trip.. Jannat mil gayee use.. 🤣

Awesome write ups.. Sandhir, Vidarth, Kabir all shined. Keep up the good work. !!.. 👍🏼

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Gudakesha
-------------Reserved--------------

This effort needs a huge applause.
The first drabble on vidarth is simply awesome.
I dont read sandhir works usually. Since u have written i'll read them.
Till then this post is reserved...

Firstly, thanks. I don't know what I've done to deserve your applause, but I'll take it.

And secondly, I don't write Sandhir often or read them.

So you reading this means a hell lot to me,

Waiting for this to be unresed!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shreyad27
Nyc 1 ash luv it aisehi vidarth likhte rehe n iske peheleka bhi acha tha :)

Thanks for reading Shreya!

I'll try to keep up this time!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: FireNIce
Thanks for the scrap! 😃
Fabulous piece! An apt title, by the way! 😉

I loved how SanDhir attempted to knock some sense into our thick-headed LoverBoy! 😆 Namit seems like a sexual predator, from how you described him. Will you be delving more into the brothers' past in your future drabbles? I would love to read more of what actually caused the friction between the two.

Deny how much ever you want, Parthy, you ARE jealous! 😆 Loved the nickname, by the way! Taichi Baba! 😆

Eagerly waiting for the sequel to this! 😃 You know why! 😉

No problemo!

Coming up with proper titles is sorta like naming a baby, it has to be just right!

Glad you liked it!

Vidarth have always been like blind leading blind when it comes to advising SanDhir and I wanted to be role reversal lol.

Namit. Yesh. He's creepy, but there is something about that smirk I tell you. This guy has a delicious secret and I have many theories. May write something for Namit soon. I dunno.

Ah, Parth Namit Tashan, I find it bloody intriguing. Who knows, a teenage Namit and Parth might just...slip in somewhere.

TaiChi Baba is what Sandhir ppl call Parth, it was developed During Sarth Phase.

I don't hate Parth but somehow Namit calling Parth that seemed so proper.

There's a sequel to the sequel and I think I'll be posting something soon!

Enjoy!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Yipeee we got jealous parth
U know from the time parth is behaving as a complete jerk to vids I was wtng to see table turns
He had so much fun in hurting her
Bt now ball is in her court

Really uska face dkhne layak hota h whenever vids is with namit
Burning like a coal

Yesterday fight when he was stopping her to go away with namit was superb

Poor boy kya kya kia use rokane k lia

Now I'm loving it

No matter how much he's insecure he's not going to admit he's jealous
Boys and their big fat ego

Arrrggghhh ladki haath se jyegi tbhi akaal ayegi

Really lovely drabble
Full on entertaining

Yr write sum thing on dream team I'm missing their spark

Love u
Keep smiling

Yesh, He's getting his just deserts now and they are anything but sweet.

I've always prefered the AYM version of Parth rather than the sweet one.

Past few days have been a treat!

Glad you enjoyed the drabble!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Moony87
Friday fun in office.. Less work.. So commenting before weekend. 😆

My.. My.. Ash.. You are on a roll ..!!.. Awesome drabbles.. Ek se badhkar ek saare. Be it any character of the show.. You wrote on all and beautifully. Fabulous writings and flawless too. Waise to sabhi bahut acchhe hain.. Including Sandhir's.. But there are two drabbles that gave me a pleasant shock. To be honest those drabbles are something I never thought you'll ever write. And I am lucky to read these write ups. Thanks for giving me the link.

1. Title: Mind over Matter.

Thoughts of Sahil on each pair. Sahil hardly gets screen space (which is basically good for his role otherwise he would also be butchered by CVs) . So reading his thought process was a blissful experience. His descriptions about every couple is so apt. So perfect ⭐️. Smoooth like his dance moves. 👏 👏 👏 👏

Highlight of this drabble :-

Sahil /OC pairing. 😲 (This one line I read five times making sure if I am reading properly) .. You writing about an OC with Sahil took me back to the days when you had said you don't like people pairing established characters with their own trash original characters.. that it makes you hate those Original Characters. Lucky for Sahil and this OC girl.. Sahil is not paired with anyone in the show 😆. Double Lucky for this OC girl and Ish of your other FF (I forgot the name of that FF) .. for they get to be paired with Sahil. 😉

2. Title: Judgement.
Pairing: Parth centric

What a amazing piece of writing this is. 👏 ⭐️ Simply awesome. Focusing on Parth's morals .. was a treat to read. And you did full justice to it. What words.. What depth. Awesome work. His equations with everyone beautifully penned down. Yep he is a man of honor and commitment and that's a rare rare quality in today's guyz. Sadly people in the forum finds it irritating, annoying and unreal. 😔 .. You have dived wonderfully into his mind. 👏

Parth's pathos is that he is bashed for being a moralistic person.. What an irony when the whole country cribs about immoral politicians and ministers. The biggest joke being CVs showing that a person with morals and no over hunger for money will end up being a garage mechanic. 🥱 🤔

Highlight of this drabble :-

You gasped for not bashing Parth and I was stunned for the same. Have read this drabble 10 times till now. No gaali, no abuse to Parth. 😲 My goodness.. Must have been a mind paining experience for you to write this drabble.. Like Physically painful. 😲
Finally, jaise minorities ko reservation mein upliftment milta hai , Parth finally gets a positive drabble on 1% quota. 🤣. Ganga nahaa aayega Parth.. From not deserving Vidushi ... to using Vidushi ... to he is still not over Arpita yet... to he should die ... to he is a douchebag.. to now THIS.. What journey man.. 😆 😆 😆 😆 .. Sau Chammat ke baad.. Pyaar ke meethe bol mile use.. No wonder Ankit headed to Panchmani for a trip.. Jannat mil gayee use.. 🤣

Awesome write ups.. Sandhir, Vidarth, Kabir all shined. Keep up the good work. !!.. 👍🏼

Sachi bolu? There was a war in my head. Part of me didn't want to give you the link, because somewhere I thought that I'd bore you to death. You've always made me want to write deeper and neutral things. I'm not used to experimenting and this drabble month was about pushing myself, writing things I've never written. I'm happy I could give you a pleasant shock for once!

Sahil is an unexplored character. More space to make up things, and yet more of a challenge. Would people like my take on Sahil?

The thing about Pairing.

I meant I don't like Parth/OC when the cannon (accepted and offical version) is Parth/Vidushi.

Then that will make me hate the OC for being all that, especially if I ship the couple.

Some people like OC/established character, some people don't. Apna apna preference hota hai.

Since Sahil has no established partner, there is room to add in an Oc.

I won't do that with say Yoyo or Randhir.

For me while writing that Drabble the OC girl was the one pulling Sahil's leash.

About Parth.

I could write a huge thesis of what I feel, but I'll just say this.

I don't hate Parth, just hate how he is biased, treating everyone nicely and Vidushi differently.

It doesn;t really fit in with the "Sweet Saint and Acha Bacha" image everyone has of Parth.

A character like him is grey and open to interpretation, especially when what we know is a jumbled mess that makes no sense.

I'm not calling Parth a villain or something, infact, his moral code interests me a lot, and what I feel and think cannot be put in words down yet. When i try, I go to extremities. Darth or Adorth and I can't win. I've still got a lot to learn about people and I promise I'll try my best to not "Bash" Parth.

But it is hard, his moral code and his behavior doesn't tally for me. That's the honest truth.

Khair, I'm glad you enjoyed atleast 2/23!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

May 24

Title: WAR PAINT

Pairing: Vidushi/Parth

It was becoming harder and harder for him to stay away.

Ofcourse, it never had been easy to turn and feel his heart burn.

But right now his insides were on fire.

Not just any fire.

It was fire from the darkest pits of hell, eating away at anything that resembled control.

To hell with proper. To hell with everything.

How could he hold himself back when she was pulling at him, pressing exactly the right buttons.

She knew how to make him lose his cool, to strip away the things he'd learnt, how to talk, how to smile, how to make himself behave.

She ripped it all off, the things that he thought made him who he was and left behind what he really was.

Untainted and still so tarnished.

And the ruin had started to spread over everything he touched.

He'd held his tongue and swallowed his words for far too long.

Hoped she was smart. He knew she was smart.

But she'd failed him.

She'd been blinded by Namit's charms.

Just like the others who had been there before her.

Parth gritted his teeth.

No. He won't let it go so far.

He couldn't.

Vidushi was his, not Namit's.

She'd made her self his, by her own hand.

All he had to do was remind her what she'd done.

He'd never asked her to do it.

She'd taken the choice herself, of her own free will.

She couldn't back away now, not when he needed her to know.

Parth threw on a shirt and stomped out, his hair disheveled from running his fingers through it in sheer frustration.

His eyes searched for her all to familiar figure.

Not there in the canteen.

Not there in the basketball court.

Where the hell was she?

Surely not with Namit?

"Argh Sanyukta. Theek hai I'll go get the damn tools from the store room!" her irritated shriek was like a melody to his ears. He grinned at that.

Now he just needed to reach the storeroom before she did.

And then he'd show her.

The Hellfire was taking over him, he was the flame now.

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"Argh. Sanyukta. Pehle you got that drunkard back and now I'm your little errand boy. Just because you are the captain..." Vidushi shook her head, catching a breath.

Why the hell was the bloody storeroom such a long way away from the rest of the civilized parts of FITE?

"Thank god." she threw the door open and entered, running to the table and looking at the tools there.

"Nahi..yeh wala..nahi..yehi hoga.." she was about to reach for the screwdriver but then a thud and the sound of metal hitting metal filled the air.

She turned around hastily to find Parth leaning lazily against the door, a smirk on his face.

"Tum?" She accused him, her hand on her hip.

"Haan main." he grimaced "Namit ko expect kar rahi thi kya? Maine Kaha tha na! Door raho usse." Parth's eyes narrowed.

"Ha." Vidushi mocked him "Dekho Parth, tum mere mom ya dad nahi ho. I don't need to listen to your orders!"

"Oh but you do." his eyes darkened.

"Kyun? Kyun sunu main tumhari koi baat?" Vidushi raised her chin.

Parth walked closer, each footstep echoing in the storeroom that was empty save them both.

She glared at him defiantly, not moving away.

She'd never back down.

And this time neither would he.

His hand brushed back the long hair that covered her neck.

His eyes went to the place he knew he'd find it.

His assurance.

He found nothing.

"It's gone Parth. You broke up with me remember?" Vidushi brought her hair back to cover her neck.

"Then why are you covering it with your hair again?" Parth's nostrils flared.

His blood was boiling.

He knew her well enough to know she was lying

"Well it's my.." she couldn't finish her sentence.

Parth's hand was brushing back her hair.

"Leave me Parth!" she slapped his hand off and made a turn for the door.

Tools be damned. I need to get out before...

She felt herself be turned around.

Something hard against her back.

He'd pinned her to the wall.

His eyes were blazing with rage.

She leaned forward to bite his shoulder. It had worked the last time.

"Don't. Any mark you make on me I will recreate on you." he warned her.

She gulped.

His hand was touching the spot on her neck where his name was.

Under the concealer.

Parth rubbed at her skin.

"Clever trick." he hissed "But it doesn't change the fact that it's still there"

"I'll get it removed. No one needs to know of it's existence." she offered.

"I know. You know. And soon Namit will too. You are mine. You will not hide it" He rubbed harder.

It didn't come off.

Darn thing.

He lowered his lips to her neck and sucked at that spot

The stuff she'd applied there was bitter but watching his name reappear where it belonged on her skin was worth it.

"No more hiding love. I'm done with this game. You've won." He kissed her neck.

"It's not a game Parth. It's not about winning. I meant it. I...I'm d... done" her voice trembled.

She pushed him off and made a run for the door.

She wasn't done. Not by a long shot.

He grimaced.

He knew her too well.

She always stammered and stuttered when she lied.

You are right Vidu, it's not a game, it's not about winning.

He took a deep breath.

He couldn't lie anymore. Not to her.

Not to himself.

"But I don't want to lose you." he yelled, feeling lighter.

I won't lose you.

She was wearing her hair up.

And he couldn't see the tattoo.

She'd never listen.

She'd defy him.

She always did.

He wouldn't take it again.

Not this time.

This time she'd know.

"Mind your own business Parth!" she'd scoffed at him and walked back to the dream team car.

He'd show her he meant business.

Sneaking into her room was easy.

Too easy. Just like what followed after.

He looked at his masterpiece with a smirk.

Her lipstick was the colour of blood against the cold glass

He'd lick it off her lips later.

But right now, he wanted her to see he wouldn't let her get away with her games.

She wanted to play mind games didn't she?

He'd blow her mind with his one.

His kind of game didn't take prisoners.

Just her.

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