~SanDhir Ss-MisTakE~[Completed] - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: bolston

next abhi chahiye mujhe😭

pehle comment toh karo properly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-6Her eyes were shedding stars .They were twinkling enough


To twist my heart Her shivering was giving me Goosebumps .

.Wht I had done

I was the one who promised That her eyes will shine and smile But today there r saline drops



..Her curves were making hard for me I took step forward She took step backward...



And I leaned on her frame Her eyes were tightly closed My face was buried in her slender neck I chipped sanyu !


She simply hummed!I kissed lightly over her exposed shoulder

Resulting a gasp from her !

She was still glued to that wall ..

I loosen her bathrobe

Her beautiful valley was visible to me

..Her uneven breath.

She is simply so beautiful !

I licked her valley Kissed her flesh

Earning a moan from her


Suddenly she opened her eyes and

Pushed me !"Ron kyuu!?"Kyuuu!!She shouted I was numb .

! Listen ...No , I will never love u .

.Never ever randhir Singh shekhawat!!

U had hurt me to the core !!!!...


Sanyu's POV ...


I saw him .

Kssing my shoulder ! I went some sort spell

..His lips on my skin
Gave jitters to me ...

Suddenly he licked my Valley

Kissed it .And then I realised

He is attracted ...I was again hurt .

Iwant my ron back
I want my friend back .

..I asked him that day Also ...


Wht if he won't worked out
He said ! Trust me sanu


..And Now U had broken my trust I was loving u

From the day I understand the meaning of love
But today I don't want to love u
U had teared my soul
Edited by -Moon_beam- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
PArt-6
She shouted I will never ever love u .
RSS!
She broke my heart into pieces
Countless sharp pieces
Had I lost my wife !?
Or I had lost my friend !
I dunno !
Only thing I know
That I lost my sanyukta !!
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Sanyu's Pov
He was numb .
His eyes were having moisture I know
But I dunno this guy
He can't be my ron ...
That day when he slapped
Me .
I had lost my friend !
But today I had lost my husband too
I lost my Ron !!!
_______________
Diwali gone like a just an ordinary day ..
In night .
I went to my friends bar !!
Hi!Rd
Umm hi! Nikhil
Saale tune shaadi kar li!!
Haa! I smiled as sanyu in her bridal avatar flashed in front of my eyes !
Oh ho ! Koi blush kar raha h shaadi k naam s !!!
Nikhil teased me!!!
I suddenly felt sad and took 4 shots of vodka consecutively !
Rd ! Pagal h kya ?
Aaram s dude ! Nikhil some how stopped me!
Toh phir ho gyi tum dono Ki shaadi !
M happy for her!
I frowned listening his statement
Meri shaadi ! Kiss se!!
And for whom u r happy!?
I asked nikhil
Teri shaadi sanu s hui h right. !?
I was shocked .!!
Tujhe kese pta!? I asked nikhil ..
Pta h bus ! !Nikhil winked
Hmmm! But na she says k. She will never love
And by this I took another shot !
Who said ! Nikhil asked !
Sanyu said tears welled up in my eyes ..
Niki ! Kyu pyaar nhi karegi mujh s !
Coaching mai hi dhyaan rakhta tha na ...
Abhi bhi
I care for her !
Isliye apne paas laaya na !
Nikhil smiled weirdly !..
She is lying !
Huh! What !?I asked
Sanu love u randhir !
Nhi Niki she denied !
Sanu is in love with u
Baba! He again chipped
Nhi nhi nhi ! I started screaming !!
God dammit she loved u from
Starting
She is loving u from last 15 years rd !!
Nikhil concluded !
Huh! I was surprised !
Tujhe yaad hai
Tune mujhe dhamkaaya tha
To stay from sanu !! Nikhil asked
Ha ! Tu usse preshaan KR raha tha!
She never liked u !
I stated d fact !
Ahaa! Correction ..
Correction Ron !
Fact is she liked and loved u without ur knowing !
Tere dhamkaane s pehle !
I went to sanu
And told her k
I liked her but she refused saying.
That she liked someone else !
And her emotions told me that
U r d lucky one !
She had always loved u
And will always love u !!!
Nikhil brushed his tears away .
Stating his love for my sanu !!
But for now news is
Sanu loves Ron ...
I smiled amidst tears

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Last part
Sanu POV
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It was 2in night and he is still not at home !!!
But y m worried .
Jaha jaane h jaaye mujhe kya!!! ...
Suddenly I heard a sound
And der is my love standing ...
Umm! Baby he slurred!
And within a fraction of sec I was in his arms !
He was drunk ..
I pushed him to get free from his hold !
Itni nafrat apne ron s sanu ! He chipped
While his face was in my chest
And his eyes were damping my night wear !
He was crying ...
Ron !!!
I cupped his face
His eyes were red and had pain !
U will never love me ! He asked ...
No I said sternly !!
His grip on waist tighten.
But I toh love u ! He slurred
And I frozed !!...
Ron !!
Hmmm ! He chipped .
U love me ! I asked again
Not believing on my fate ...
Ha sanu ! But na
Fear engulfed me !?
But what ron !
Sanu u r a liar !
Huh! I was shocked v
U loved me ! From starting
Haina ! Baby
I was numb !
How hooow yu ...you know. .
So mtlab u loved me !
He smiled looking most adorable baby in the world !!
Hmm ! Woh umm!!
15 years sanu ..
Ek baar bol deti !.hmmm
U did a MISTAKE by not telling me
And make me deprived of u ! ...
I simply hugged him tightest
I love u
I love u ron
From the very first day .
Of our classes .
I had always loved u...
Hmmm! He smiled !
Chalo lemme gime u punishment for this ...
I will kiss u
I blushed !
And he kissed me 15 times as if filling lobe in those 15 years !!
Ron! Bus baba!
Sanyu! Umm let's have 15 babies na!!!
Haww!
I slapped him lightly ...
I m sorry jaan !
For hurting u !
It's ohk!.but phir mat krna !!
Hmmm ! Sanyu ...
I think I also loved u ...
But never realised it
But today I realised it !!
Chalo now u punish me !
And I took his lips for 16 th tym in one night !.hence
Compensating for our mistake !!

The end______
Edited by -Moon_beam- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
haye
beautiful ending

finally the realized their stupid mistake😛
awww...16 kisses☺️😆

kash yeh years thode jyada hote😛
toh thode jyada kisses milte☺️

do write more
love u somu baby🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Fabulous update
Awesome ending
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Congratulation...for sucessful completion of SS

Now update Kolaveri and Sanyukta Devi😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Superb update
Loved it

Misunderstanding
Sanyu so hurt
Cnt see sandhir like this
Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome ending 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Superb ending
Sandhir united finally
So happy and together

Very entertaining

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