~SanDhir Ss-MisTakE~[Completed]

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Dudh awesome story yaar. 😊
Lovely update. 😊
Loved it. ❤️
Hope everything will be fine between sandhir.
I think rd was just dreaming.
U r an awesome writer.

Continue soon.
Love,
Mahi ❤️

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Mahi2012
Dudh awesome story yaar. 😊
Lovely update. 😊
Loved it. ❤️
Hope everything will be fine between sandhir.
I think rd was just dreaming.
U r an awesome writer.

Continue soon.
Love,
Mahi ❤️

thanks dear ..still m sorry discontinued ...

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anu_anya

@anu_anya

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

gud decision eagar to know wat happen next
continue ASAP and plz send me pm

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

thanks everyone for appreciating my work !

Edited by -Moon_beam- - 10 years ago

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Part3
It had been a month till ,he had seen her face .
He had listened sanyuktas giggles .

Yeah but how!?
She wasn't present at home from last one month .
He had heard dem from video chat .

His whole family ,renarsh{Renuka+harsh}and shreyansh use to do video chat daily ..
In initial days , Renuka use to call her ,when they had a video chat
But ,due to his ego ..

He didn't showed much interest
And gradually Renuka stopped calling him ..
He knew that ,where she was .
She is happy and safe ..

But question is that y he is getting so restless , after what he had replied to harsh regarding sanyukta .
And showing his bipolar nature

Flash back

.Again harsh was accusing rd for the absence of sanyukta from their lives .
He was missing his daughter .

Rd had gone completely mad in rage, He said replied roughly to harsh "Dad ,Aap usse apni beti mante hai jisne aap mein ou mujh mein itne differences create kar de ,Dad saare fasaad Ki jadd h woh ,I hate her for this dad .."

There was pindrop silence in room suddenly a choked voice echoed in their home "Dad pls stop it and have your dinner "

Yes it was sanyukta ,who was on video chat with Renuka and heard all the stuff .
She was broken ,shattered .
His love was hating her ...

Harsh grabbed lappy and said"Sanyu baccha "
Dad mein aap s baad mein baat karti hu and screen gone blank ..!!

It wasnt harsh who saw her teary eye!

But rd was also curious to know about her ,he peeped in room through glassy window ,saw his sanu all red and teary eye ,He didn't felt right somewhere .
But his rage overlapped saying of his heart

Flashback Ends !

Even today when he arrived from office , his whole family was glued to lappy .

Their giggles were making hard for him to stop the urge of peeping in the room from window ,at least he would be able to get a glimpse of her wife ...

But again !why I m so restless .
She is alive and happy ...
Then y I m here all dull and gloomy .
He was asking this question from himself .

Suddenly shreyansh shouted !"Bhabhi !Sacchi I love u a lot"
Rd came out of his trance ..
Rd was confused on such gesture of his little sibling !

Suddenly Renuka shouted over him .Happiness from shreyansh face faded and he become upset .
He came out if der room and rd saw him ..
And asked "Chotey! Kya hua!? Upset kyu hai!?"
Rd was really concern for this baccha of him
Shreyansh

Shreyansh jerked his hand and said "Bhai! Aap k karan hi sab kuch ho raha hai " and went away

Here Rd felt bad by the harsh behaviour of his baby bro ...

Days passed ,tym passed away .
Thier video chats were full of giggles ,dripping happiness .
And was showing the,craving of renarsh for thier daughter .

Diwali was,about to arrive !
Every one was busy to this auspices day more special for their family ..

Even Renuka was busy in diwali preparations .
Everyone was really happy as the festival of lights will bring prosperity ,happiness ,enthusiasm and good luck in their homes .

A day before Diwali ,Rd come back from his office ..as usual der was no one much to talk to him ...
He entered his room ..
And thrown away his bag due to tiredness and,irritation ..

Yes he was,really irritated how his family is behaving with him...

He throw away his shoes in another direction ..
And looked his room more keenly ..

He realised that wasn't his room because it can't be so clean and tidy ..
But he again rolled his eyes analysing everything in that room ...
The belongings was showing that it was,his room only ...
But how it could be clean!? ..

His trance got broken by the click sound of door opening ...

And,der she was !!

Hello people ,I know it had been ages till I updated this ss last .
But now m all geared up to complete this SS :
So ,do u liked update !
I know thoda boring tha ..but kaam chala lo yaara ...
Love❤️
Shruti

Edited by -Moon_beam- - 10 years ago

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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

awesome update di😊
finally sanyuta is home...
and that too on diwali..
something is gonna happen bw sandhir😳
waiting for next...😃
thanks alot for pm

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CrazyOeuvrer

@Aurora2024

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

hey shruti i read your ss a time ago but suddenly you stopped updating i thought you discontinued it

i am soo happy that you are completing them

first continue this one

update is really amazing and rd's behaviour is jerk type.

keep smiling and writing😃

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Awsme update
Loved it

I'm so happy that u r continuing it

Rd missing sanyu bt his ego
Sanyu back on diwali

Excited to see what hppns nxt

Update soon

Keep smiling

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Alaukik

@Alaukik

Trailblazer

+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

awesome update

u continued it

but when did their marriage happened

now Sanyu is in some foreign location

but Randhir is not talking with her

Randhir's family is too fond of her and in regular touch with her

Randhir is missing Sanyu, then why he is not talking to her

please unfold the mystery soon

love u

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal
awesome update di😊
finally sanyuta is home...
and that too on diwali..
something is gonna happen bw sandhir😳
waiting for next...😃
thanks alot for pm

thanks ritz

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