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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi
hey yet another and awesome update dear.

d story is getting interesting after each updates.

lovely piece of writing.

it was very short update but as usual marvelous update.

so sandhir first meet in next part waiting for that.

do update soon.

thank u so much :)

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: nankulkarni
superb yaar
I love shriti
waiting for sandhir
update soon

thank u so much :)

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KAJAL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Okay! Now this chapter is something exquisite with two contradicting situations and blending of ironical emotions- Randhir taking a step towards parenting Sristhi, oblivious to the fact that she indeed is his daughter and Sanyukta devoid of her daughter, imagining her to be dead or so.
There wasn't any remorse or hard feeling in Randhir with the mention of Sanyukta's name, only gloomy. So, Randhir isn't regretful of his past with Sanyukta but only sad with the consequences of it, isn't it??
Hmm.. The precap sounds awesome!
I just really can't wait to know how they met and what happened that led them to this current scenario.
Flawless chapter with marvelous description of emotions.
It amazes me how you depict such vivid emotions, so beautifully yet using minimal words?? Kudos to you!!
Update the next chapter soonish!

Regards
Keya

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: -Kryptic.Keya-
Okay! Now this chapter is something exquisite with two contradicting situations and blending of ironical emotions- Randhir taking a step towards parenting Sristhi, oblivious to the fact that she indeed is his daughter and Sanyukta devoid of her daughter, imagining her to be dead or so.
There wasn't any remorse or hard feeling in Randhir with the mention of Sanyukta's name, only gloomy. So, Randhir isn't regretful of his past with Sanyukta but only sad with the consequences of it, isn't it??
Hmm.. The precap sounds awesome!
I just really can't wait to know how they met and what happened that led them to this current scenario.
Flawless chapter with marvelous description of emotions.
It amazes me how you depict such vivid emotions, so beautifully yet using minimal words?? Kudos to you!!
Update the next chapter soonish!

Regards
Keya

thank u so much for this lovely comment oxford 🤗 Deep guessing. 😃I'll update asap 😳

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: namya
Plz update soon
Lovely ff

thank u so much 😳

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Chandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

~Baarish ~ A SanDhir SS ~

Hello friends,😳 I'm here with a special Sandhir part... I have tried my best to make this part readable without getting bored to compensate for my late updates.. Kindly forgive me for being late and enjoy reading!! 😳😳Flash back in blue and present in grey fonts 😳

Recap: Randhir adopts Shristi as his daughter.On the other hand Sanyukta loses her mother and daughter...

Part 4

At the time of dusk, it was raining heavily, but not violently...Randhir stood in the terrace of their house admiring the beauty of rain...

He cried along with the rain, but not due to worry, due to happiness, Due to his long lost happiness which again emerged in his life! He now has a beautiful family with another name DAUGHTER... His presence became meaningful now...His life became meaningful...

The rhythm of rain played a melancholy strain in Randhir's life but also gave pleasures and happiness...He stood at one corner reminiscing how this rain played a wonderful game in his life...!

FLASHBACK
A few years before...!!
The news flashed "Heavy Rainfall all over India.., Schools and Colleges are shut down due to the heavy down pour!! Floods in Northern and Southern parts of India..."

A young handsome teenage boy accelerated his car to jet speed ... "Bye..."He bid bye to his closest friends Yoyo, Jiggy, Parth and Aister, Yoyo's girlfriend...

He was on a mission, Mission Kidnapping Parth's girlfriend...
Parth texted him the venue of the marriage and Randhir was ready to kidnap his to be Bhabhi Vidushi...

Vidushi and Parth were in a relationship for the past 4 years...She had completed her MBBS and wanted to study further but her father had planned to give her hand in marriage... The gang tried several measures to stop the marriage but in vain..At last, they planned to kidnap her on the day of her marriage...

But the irony is that Randhir, closest buddy of Parth have never seen his girl friend...

He was riding his car at jet speed and the rate of downpour was rapidly increasing which was inversely proportional to the speed of the car...

He finally reached Andheri, Mumbai... He took a turn and reached the Mandap, fully crowded, at one nook; a girl was standing and admiring the downpour, all wet, may be she was crying...

He was unable to see her clearly due to the heavy rain and more over she was covered with ornaments..."Girl for Parth, Ornaments for me..."He smirked...

He cursed himself for wasting the precious time and rushed to her, force downed the Chloroform filled cloth on her face and tied her up in a sack and managed to escape successfully...

He drove his car and reached the outskirts of Mumbai and untied the sack... He was spellbound looking at her...She was indeed an angel. The droplets of water were adorning her face and making her even more beautiful...

"Awesome choice Parth..." He thought and pulled up his collar proudly...!!
His mobile rang.. It was Parth..
"Hello Parth..." "Where r u..? I tried to call u several times but ur number wasn't reachable.." Parth seemed worried "Chill bro...Everything went well...You r indeed lucky to have me as ur friend...Kidnapped ur so called Gf... Tell me one..How did she accept Ur proposal..? She is beautiful and you.."Randhir giggled

"Oye .Stop stop...Vidushi is with me; she ran away from her house and reached here! And whom did u kidnap...Popat?"Randhir heard Parth chuckling

"What...? What the hell..? Who is this girl then...?"

He remembered the direction he took for the Mandap...He took a wrong turn due to BAARISH..."Oh shit!! What have I done...! K Parth I'll call u later...Bye" Randhir disconnected the call...
She slowly opened her eyes... And was terrified to see Randhir next to her and she hugged him tightly..!
He was horrified...

"Hello Miss.Watever...Sorry for kidnapping you! Come I'll leave u in the Mandap again" Randhir said these words which gained him a hard slap from Sanyukta..

"First, I'm not Miss.Watever...I'm Miss. Sanyukta, Sanyukta Aggarwal, Age 21...And don't even think of taking me to the Mandap again u Mr.Watever...My father is the Chief of Crime branch, CID"She told with a proud face but her face held a tinge of sadness

"You are Kishore Aggarwal's daughter..?"Randhir frowned...
"Yes...Mr.Watever"

"Oh hello..!! Call me Randhir, Randhir Singh Shekawat... Age 21"He imitated her!

A heavy thunder caused her to hug him again but this time she collapsed in his arms and started crying silently...!!!He too understood that she did not like the marriage and there was some bitter moment and he too hugged her with one hand and started driving the car to his place!

All thanks to the Heavy Rainfall, BAARISH which stood as the mere cause for Sandhir's meet and cancelation of Sanyukta's marriage!

To be continued

Thanks for reading.. Click the LIKE button only if u like it... Posted from my mobile, so Spare me for my mistakes and pathetic vocabulary... And kindly comment! It matters much... Constructive criticism welcomed
LoveChandu 😳

Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago

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pari1995

@pari1995

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

wow yaar awesome first meet

hehehe rd kidnapped the wrong one but right for him

pls pls update soon

love

pari

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Anushka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Unres
Marvelous update di
Rd so happy to have Srishti as his daughter 😊
Sandhir first meet was as unique as them 😉
Beautifully written
Update soon and thanks for the pm

Edited by anudoll - 10 years ago