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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5 (B)
Parth moved towards the broken laptop. He kneeled down and held the broken fragments of it in his hand. His blood was boiling. It had the details of his most important project! This clumsy girl was becoming a nuisance!
Vidushi was still standing, absolutely petrified.
Parth got up slowly and started walking towards Vidushi. He stopped 5 inches away from her.
"I had the details of my most profitable and important project in that laptop. Do you realise the damage you have done to me?" he said to Vidushi in a low, cold and dangerous voice which sent shivers up her spine.
He moved closer and Vidushi closed her eyes anticipating the worst...
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Parth pinned Vidushi against the wall and whispered in her ear..."Guess what, darling?"
"Shit! He's going to kick me out!" Vidushi exclaimed worriedly in her mind.
"It's ok," he whispered.
Then he step backwards and flashed a huge grin at her. "It's fine. You didn't do it on purpose!" he said.
Vidushi was shell shocked!! She still had her job, and he didn't scold her even a bit! How was that even possible??
"Gosh! You scared me, Parth!" she said, laughing nervously.
"Not Parth...you have to call me sir. We are at our workplace, not at home," Parth told her.
"You may leave," he said before Vidushi could reply.
She left the cabin and went back to her desk. Parth left her puzzled and perplexed with his sudden mood swings. From angry to all happy and understanding to formal. All in a matter of moments! Damn! She had never come across a more complex person.
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Parth relaxed on his chair. He had managed to control his anger somehow.
Otherwise, something very bad would have happened to that girl.
He had lost some really important work details and files but he had to tolerate and keep that girl with him till he got Natasha back.
She had been saved for now...but she would pay for the damage she had done.
She definitely would.
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Both of them went back home together.
Vidushi cooked some spaghetti and served it to Parth with ketchup, just as he liked it.
Both of them ate in silence. They were very tired.
After dinner, when all the plates had been washed, he yawned, wished Vidushi good night and went to sleep.
Vidushi got her pen drive out and sighed. She was absolutely safe.
It was smart of her to download the confidential files in the pen drive before the laptop broke.
Now she just needed to find those hard copies.
She smiled.
PRECAP- Why should I tell you??? Wait for the update! 🤣
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Hope you liked it! 😳
xoxo
Amreen 😉
Edited by Anamika2692001 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Like always very Nice amu.😊..but I think ..just my opinion story is going too slow may b bcoz of ur short updates😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: purepunjabi

Like always very Nice amu.😊..but I think ..just my opinion story is going too slow may b bcoz of ur short updates😛

I know...
I've got to decrease the font!!
It gives me the illusion that it's a long update!
Thanks for the constructive criticism. 😳
I'll improve.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
he want to get natasha back?i hate this parth:(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
So both parth and vidhu are using each other 😕😕😕😕😕

This has left me more intrigued ...plzzz update soon 😃😃😃😃😃😃

Eagerly waiting for the next part ...Great work Doll 😊😊😊😊😊😊

Agla update lamba hona chahiye 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
waiting 4 d nxt part..update soon nd plz is bar long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Reserved
I'm so sorry amu , I was busy with college ending stuff .
Will un res this soon 😃

FINALLY UN-RESED
Secretary ? That girl ? I wanted to hit him upside the face with the diapers . He baked cake for her , took her on a date , and she becomes some random chick? NO.
Earlier I felt bad for him, what with Parth being all cutie like , making cakes , being sweet an all. Now tho, I can't wait to see what she does *rubs hands together , hehehe*
I feel bad for her , she genuinely seems to like him .
He's using her , she's using him , and they both have no idea of the others intentions . FUN 😆😆

I have so many questions . How did she get into the company , why is she spying ? How did they get into a relationship , I can't wait.
The icing on the cake was a glimpse of Darth 😳😳😳
You've built the suspense very well . Can't wait for update 👏👏
Edited by IndianFariyTale - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Wow. They both are playing ugly games with each other. That makes me excited. 😆
Give longer updates Amu. Dil mange more!😛
Nice & Lovely updates. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey awesome update dear.

lovely piece of writing.

so vidharth r using each other.

now story has comes to interesting phase.
do update soon n give longer update dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Reserved.
will unress after 13th.


Now you update chica!



Yes. I know It's Like the 22nd. But I've been busy, batty and then sick.
I had my birthday twice (once by date, once by tithi.) and the second one was my Dad's so I haven't slept really well for the past 4 days. Late nights are taking their toll on me in a way, plus the god awful price of being a lady! 😆

Here I unres!

This clumsy girl was becoming a nuisance! Haww! Clumsy she maybe. But a nuisance! How dare you, Diaper Dayan?
Vidushi was still standing, absolutely petrified. Poor Vidushi, He better not harm her!!
Parth got up slowly and started walking towards Vidushi. He stopped 5 inches away from her. Run, run run for your life!
"I had the details of my most profitable and important project in that laptop. Do you realise the damage you have done to me?" he said to Vidushi in a low, cold and dangerous voice which sent shivers up her spine. And mine too!
He moved closer and Vidushi closed her eyes anticipating the worst... I bit my lip a little when I read this the first time, and I bit it again now
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Parth pinned Vidushi against the wall and whispered in her ear..."Guess what, darling?" *gulp* The hormones are not helping.
"Shit! He's going to kick me out!" Vidushi exclaimed worriedly in her mind.
"It's ok," he whispered. WHHHAAAT?
Then he step backwards and flashed a huge grin at her. "It's fine. You didn't do it on purpose!" he said. Diaper Dayan has a brain? Diaper Dayan can use logic?
Vidushi was shell shocked!! She still had her job, and he didn't scold her even a bit! How was that even possible?? I'm askiing the same questions girl! Unless he has some motive...he wouldn't...
"Gosh! You scared me, Parth!" she said, laughing nervously.
"Not Parth...you have to call me sir. We are at our workplace, not at home," Parth told her.
"You may leave," he said before Vidushi could reply.
She left the cabin and went back to her desk. Parth left her puzzled and perplexed with his sudden mood swings. From angry to all happy and understanding to formal. All in a matter of moments! Damn! She had never come across a more complex person.
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Parth relaxed on his chair. He had managed to control his anger somehow.
Otherwise, something very bad would have happened to that girl. Like what?😕
He had lost some really important work details and files but he had to tolerate and keep that girl with him till he got Natasha back. Something tells me I'm going to hate this Natasha thing.
She had been saved for now...but she would pay for the damage she had done. Oh God. This is darkening . Good. Very good!
She definitely would.
Details!
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Both of them went back home together.
Vidushi cooked some spaghetti and served it to Parth with ketchup, just as he liked it.
Both of them ate in silence. They were very tired.
After dinner, when all the plates had been washed, he yawned, wished Vidushi good night and went to sleep.
Vidushi got her pen drive out and sighed. She was absolutely safe.
It was smart of her to download the confidential files in the pen drive before the laptop broke.
Now she just needed to find those hard copies.
She smiled. I smirked. Haha. Both of them are keeping secrets. I wonder what will happen when the pussycats are out of the respective bags. Girl this is going to be damn fun!
PRECAP- Why should I tell you??? Wait for the update! 🤣
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Hope you liked it! 😳
xoxo
Amreen 😉
Edited by Burn_the_Ashes - 10 years ago

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