CAPTIVE HEART- A VidArth FF- part 8 B on pg 13

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shreyad27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

nice 1 😊 waiting for nxt part but bada likh haa iss baar :P

Edited by shreyad27 - 10 years ago

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Aimy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

The update was short. But was sweet.
Vidushi broke the laptop. I don't know how I feel about it. Lol.
Waiting for the next update.

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Anamika2692001

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

PART 5 (A)

The meeting for the diaper commercial had gone off well. Exceedingly well. Parth was practically beaming.

As he walked out of the conference room, his phone beeped. He saw something which made his day even better...

A missed call from Natasha!!

With a smug expression on his face, he patted himself on the back. "Well done, Parth," he said to himself, his voice laced with pride. So he was succeeding what he wanted to do. That secretary was making Natasha jealous.

The day just couldn't get better.

He walked to his office, euphoric- not so much from the fruitful and successful meeting as he was from the missed call.

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Vidushi was freaking out completely!

"Oh damn! I broke his laptop!" she cried. She was really worried. About her mission and about her job.

"Arrggghhh...why am I so clumsy?!" she whined and asked herself. She was in a soup.

All her hard work had gone to waste.

She heard footsteps and saw a shadow approaching the door of the cabin.

She was gone. Completely gone.

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Parth's feeling of euphoria didn't last too long.

Opening his door with a wide smile, he was shocked to see the broken laptop lying shattered all over the smooth marble floor.

The smile was wiped off his face immediately.

Vidushi looked apologetically at him, her forehead glistening with sweat beads, and her eyes wide with fear.

"I'm sorry- so sorry...I- um...I didn't...didn't mean to- do it..." she stammered nervously.

Parth tightened his fist.

He looked back at Vidushi. His jaw was tight.

And there was a storm in his eyes. A dark thunderstorm...

PRECAP- Guess...😈

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This was short, yet again, I know. But the next update will be fast. 😊

And as you can see, this part is divided into A and B.

Hope you liked it! 😳

xoxo

Amreen 😉

Edited by Anamika2692001 - 10 years ago

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Mukta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Amu ...you will kill me with your suspense 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

Now i am more eager for the next update 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Plzzz update soon 😃😃😃😃😃😃

Awesome job Doll 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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purepunjabi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Short and nice amreen..suspense.😛.ok waiting for ur fast update🤗

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

such a small update?

No,me want more..

update soon

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Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

whats that itta chota. nevertheless it was an awesome update dear. wonderful piece of writing dear. u hv penned down so beautifully that even though it was short but we can't stop ourself to read it dont know how many times. but what was in precap. do update soon. n this time give long update amreen. n thanks for d pm dear.

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cherrynicolem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Read all parts in a go

They are awsome

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gurvinder kaur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

nice..bt ittu sa update..dis is nt fair.. Plz update soon

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

So, I am finally done with my Psychology exam and as promised I will unres that res! 😆

I really wish I could have unresed sooner!

I laughed like hell at the diaper commercial meeting and beaming Parth. Bet he wouldn't beam if he had to change a nappy eh? 😆

Natasha!! 😕

That secretary was making Natasha jealous.

That secretary? Acha? Ab GF se that secretary? Woah. Someone make Parth change 1000 diapers.

I feel horrible for poor Vidushi and her panic about breaking that diaper douche's laptop. She is feeling scared and all that. Yes he is her employer and all but then again this d.d (diaper douche) is labelling her as that secretary. Karma, D.D!

I am glad his precious laptop was broken to bits. Serves him the right. But I won't want Vids to suffer!

Diaper Danav has entered and had his smug smile slapped off his smug diaper face.

Vids is really scared and I love how you did not explicitly use the word scared and went for:

Vidushi looked apologetically at him, her forehead glistening with sweat beads, and her eyes wide with fear.

The psychology lover in me who studied emotion for 8 days constantly was grinning! Emotion? Nailed it!

"I'm sorry- so sorry...I- um...I didn't...didn't mean to- do it..." she stammered nervously.

Full Marks!

Parth tightened his fist.

He looked back at Vidushi. His jaw was tight.

And there was a storm in his eyes. A dark thunderstorm...

Eeep! Dark Parth in the making huh?

PRECAP- Guess...😈