CAPTIVE HEART- A VidArth FF- part 8 B on pg 13

Anamika2692001

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I just started my first Vidarth SS and now...this is a Vidarth FF...which will obviously have more chapters and layers. 😉😆

PS- Credit for the superb title goes to the Title Specialist aka Ash di!😆

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So... get ready to ride on a treacherous rollercoaster of emotions. A vortex of love and hate. A vicious cycle of attraction, caring, guilt and denial. Meet two souls who are engulfed in a storm of mixed emotions.

Where will all this lead them to? Salvation...or destruction? Heaven...or hell? LOVE...OR HATE??

Find out with me. Follow me to a world of darkness.😈

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Ok! Enough of my deep and meaningful lines and superb vocabulary!!!!!!!! 🤣 (I'm such a show off! XD)

Here's the prologue...enjoy!! 😈

PROLOGUE

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She turned her face away and giggled coyly as he pulled her towards himself and entwined his fingers with hers.

'Oh! I just love it when you behave all girly and shy...', he said to her with a naughty glint in his eye. She blushed a deep shade of red. ☺️

'You should go back to your cabin...it will be highly scandalous if someone sees you being all romantic with your secretary,' she told him, gently pushing him away.

'Well...you should obey me since I'm your boss after all,' he replied. 😉

'How funny,' she sarcastically said, with a smirk.

And then they looked into each other's eyes as if nothing existed but the two of them.

'So...what would you do if I betrayed you?' she asked him jokingly.

The smile disappeared from his face and he grabbed her wrist tightly.

'You would regret it darling...I would make you regret it very badly,' he said, caressing her face with her wrist in a tight grip, with an evil look in his eye.

And then he let go of her hand and walked back to his cabin.

She was shaken up completely! She had never seen this dark side of his before.

'But it was just a joke...' she muttered to herself.

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So this was it guys! 😊

Hope you liked it!😳

I will continue soon...

xoxo

Amreen 😉

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INDEX

Prologue- Above 😆

Part 1- Pg 2

Part 2- Pg 5

Author's note- Pg 6

Part 3- Pg 6

PART 4- Pg 7

PART 5 (A)- Pg 9

PART 5 (B)- Pg 10

PART 6- Pg 11

PART 7- Pg 12

PART 8-A- Pg 13

PART 8-B- Pg 13

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purepunjabi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow amreen superb...plz jldi jldi update krna both ff and ss 😆..

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Happy_hippy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh lovely..too good yaar...

Pls continue soon...

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KAJAL

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Moi third...T_T
That's so not fair!!!!
I want that first position!...

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Someone pinch me please!!
No coherent words of mine can ever describe how enticingly tempting the prologue is. Moi speechless..
Agar Trailer aisa hai toh fir picture kaisa hoga... *drools dreamily*
Shit! A secretary- boss romance and that too such possessively dark theme. Moi ka heart is fluttering already.
The characterization of VidArth is fantastic. Moi always wanted to read such a theme on VidArth... Tune mere dil ki muraad puri kar di behna..*hugs tightly*
Moi want the first chapter asap!!

Regards
Keya

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Reserved.

I'm going to deflate my head now.

Unreserved.

Head deflated and I am back to normal.

Amu girlll!

You be setting my mind on fire!

Oh god.

I can't even!

1) Boss and secretary! Hotness!

2) Vidushi acting shyly

3) The sudden dark change in Parth when she jokes about betraying him.

I can tell this is going to be a wonderful ride

Cannot wait for more!

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Aimy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh My!! 2 works on VidArth in a row!!! So so awesome.
That was like a grand beginning.
The intro was superb,and the prologue even more superb.
I loved it. And I am eagerly looking forward for the story.

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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holy heavens!😲

girl this is awesome!👏

continue soon..

you know na,me love dark stories😈

soo,,update soon

can't wait

jiya:)

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Moony87

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wonderful start..

The prologue sets an exciting tempo for the next update.

Continue Soon.

PS:- I loved "Kaleidoscope" as title more. 😊 But this is also good.

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Anamika2692001

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Moony87
Wonderful start..
The prologue sets an exciting tempo for the next update.

Continue Soon.

PS:- I loved "Kaleidoscope" as title more.😊But this is also good.

I'll use it for another Vidarth work...promise. :)

Even I like that title a lot.

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