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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 6
A luxurious red Lamborghini stopped in front of the entrance of The Imperial, a 5 star hotel at Connaught Place which is famous for its Victorian style architecture and delicious high tea.
A young lady in her twenties stepped out of the car, and walked into the hotel.
She had a porcelain complexion, curly brown hair which reached her shoulders, a sharp nose, thin lips and high cheekbones. Wearing a sun dress and feathered cap with high heels, she looked like someone from another era altogether.
Walking gracefully, she went to a Chanel store and shopped for some make up.
Then, she went for high tea. Taking small bites of mushroom puff and eating scrumptious scones with raspberry jam and clotted cream, she was having a great time. She devoured cucumber sandwiches too, and sipped on Earl Grey Tea.
Luxury was synonymous with her.
After all, she was the stinking rich heiress, Natasha Rathore.
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Vidushi felt like she was being stabbed in the gut repeatedly.
"Ouch...aaahhh..." she groaned in pain. It was that time of the month again...yes...THAT time.
Apart from the unbearably painful cramps, she felt like eating junk food and watching a romantic film, for eg- The Notebook. And then crying while munching on popcorn. And then eating some more.
But it was impossible to do anything with these God-awful cramps!
"I wish I had someone to take care of me..." she said to herself. Sighing, she sat down on the couch in the living room.
Parth came to the room after 5 minutes. He saw Vidushi sitting and groaning with pain with her hand on her stomach. She was in pain...
"Need something?" he asked her.
She looked at him and shook her head. "Um...it's ok. I'm fine," she said, groaning in pain the very next moment.
"Yeah right," he said, walking to her. "Come with me," he told her and held her hand. "Where?" she asked. "Just come na!" he insisted. She got up and walked with him as he led her to the kitchen.
He got some Belgian chocolate ice cream out of the freezer. He put a spoon in the tub and took Vidushi to the terrace.
"What are you doing?" she asked him.
"Just relax and sit on the swing," he told her with a comforting smile. They sat down. Parth scooped out some ice cream and fed Vidushi. She instantly felt better and smiled. He continued feeding her.
"Feeling better?" he asked once the whole tub was over.
"Yes! It was yummy and the cramps are much better," she replied with a huge smile.
Parth looked at her happy face and childlike innocence. She was so cute.
And her chocolate stained lips...
He gently held her and kissed her sweet, chocolaty lips. Their lips moved with the perfect rhythm.
They broke apart after a while and looked away from each other. Vidushi was blushing a deep shade of scarlet.
Pin drop silence prevailed.
Parth broke the awkward silence. "Come, I'll put you to bed now," he told Vidushi. She nodded and both of them got up.
He took her to her room and gave her a hot water bag to ease her cramps as she slept.
She brushed her teeth, changed into her night clothes and lay down on the bed, with the hot water bag against her stomach.
"Good night," he said softly.
"Thank you for taking such good care of me, Parth," Vidushi told him.
He just smiled in return and left the room, switching off the lights.
Vidushi slept with a smile on her face.
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The next day was 20th April...a special day.
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PRECAP- A birthday celebration! 😃
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This was a bit longer than the previous parts!😆
Next part soon!
Hope you liked it!😳
xoxo
Amreen 😉
Edited by Anamika2692001 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Ammu Babe!
Firstly, I'm so bloody sorry it took me so long to review. I've been ill and busy (never a good combination) and today was a hot, long day, with no electricity and boredom. With the lights came your message to unress and i was hit by this truck of guilt. i'd promised to unress and I kept you waiting for so long. Babe I'm so bloody sorry!
I hope this review makes up for the ridiculously long wait!

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She had a porcelain complexion, curly brown hair which reached her shoulders, a sharp nose, thin lips and high cheekbones. Wearing a sun dress and feathered cap with high heels, she looked like someone from another era altogether.
I like the distinctive description. The thin lips and sharp nose made me smirk a little, I don't know why!.
Then, she went for high tea. Taking small bites of mushroom puff and eating scrumptious scones with raspberry jam and clotted cream, she was having a great time. She devoured cucumber sandwiches too, and sipped on Earl Grey Tea. Ah, one of those brats who make a ritual out of a commonplace thing like a meal. Ugh!
Luxury was synonymous with her.
After all, she was the stinking rich heiress, Natasha Rathore. Spoilt brat alert? Goddamn!
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Vidushi felt like she was being stabbed in the gut repeatedly.
"Ouch...aaahhh..." she groaned in pain. It was that time of the month again...yes...THAT time. I feel her pain. Literally. Right now! Ugh!
Apart from the unbearably painful cramps, she felt like eating junk food and watching a romantic film, for eg- The Notebook. And then crying while munching on popcorn. And then eating some more. Awwrr...This was so me today. Or anyday. Because I always bloody feel like eating. I downed a packet of oreos today!
But it was impossible to do anything with these God-awful cramps! *Hugs Vidu*
"I wish I had someone to take care of me..." she said to herself. Sighing, she sat down on the couch in the living room. Awwwie! Poor girl.
Parth came to the room after 5 minutes. He saw Vidushi sitting and groaning with pain with her hand on her stomach. She was in pain...
"Need something?" he asked her. She needs someone to take care of her doofus! Not call her a stranger and use her to get back a stinking rich ex girl! B-tard!!
She looked at him and shook her head. "Um...it's ok. I'm fine," she said, groaning in pain the very next moment.
"Yeah right," he said, walking to her. "Come with me," he told her and held her hand. "Where?" she asked. "Just come na!" he insisted. She got up and walked with him as he led her to the kitchen. Remember, the kitchen is where the knives are.
He got some Belgian chocolate ice cream out of the freezer. He put a spoon in the tub and took Vidushi to the terrace. *Grabs icecream*
"What are you doing?" she asked him.
"Just relax and sit on the swing," he told her with a comforting smile. They sat down. Parth scooped out some ice cream and fed Vidushi. She instantly felt better and smiled. He continued feeding her. Awww, feeding a stranger are we? Stop making me find Parth cute dammit! He's using her! I can't find him cute!
"Feeling better?" he asked once the whole tub was over.
"Yes! It was yummy and the cramps are much better," she replied with a huge smile.
Parth looked at her happy face and childlike innocence. She was so cute.
And her chocolate stained lips... Aww. Now she's cute! Kiss her!
He gently held her and kissed her sweet, chocolaty lips. Their lips moved with the perfect rhythm. 😳
They broke apart after a while and looked away from each other. Vidushi was blushing a deep shade of scarlet. Awwie. Poor Vids
Pin drop silence prevailed.

Parth broke the awkward silence. "Come, I'll put you to bed now," he told Vidushi. She nodded and both of them got up. Put her to bed? *damn hormones!*
He took her to her room and gave her a hot water bag to ease her cramps as she slept. Awie!
She brushed her teeth, changed into her night clothes and lay down on the bed, with the hot water bag against her stomach.
"Good night," he said softly.
"Thank you for taking such good care of me, Parth," Vidushi told him. Aw sweetie, you are so cute!!!!!
He just smiled in return and left the room, switching off the lights. They don't sleep in the same room??? But? Aren't they living together?
Vidushi slept with a smile on her face. Cutie!
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The next day was 20th April...a special day. 😳
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PRECAP- A birthday celebration! 😃 Update Quick!
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Edited by Burn_the_Ashes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
unress. omg what a cracking stunning update dear. it was an awesome amazing update it was short but lovely update dear. I haven't read any vidharth story before this n this is d best ever ff of this forum I hv ever read. fantastic piece if writing dear. do update soon.
Edited by Sarim.fatmi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Amazing amazing and amazing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

More curious to know what will happen next 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

Great work Doll ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Ah! My yummy aam ki guthli!! I seriously missed this FF.., you should update this more frequently.😃😃

Uh-oh! So we have a glimpse of Miss Natasha Rathore here.
Her description was awesome and interesting. I'm surely looking forward to see some twist with her in picture.
Gosh! Parth was really sweet and it kinda surprised me to see this understanding nature of his, specially after learning about the sinister games that he's been playing. Shall I consider that little gesture of companionship from Parth to soothe Vidushi as a step towards VidArth??
Seems like now things are gonna get intriguing with VidArth and Natasha in the same frame... I'm eagerly anticipating for more surprises.
This was a fascinating fantastic chapter with loads of cute moments.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come!!
Post the next chapter soonish!!

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Finally get to meet Natasha .
I hate her already for some reason .
Your description made me hungry . Scones ?puffs? *drools* Time of the month huh ?
Oh damn ,poor thing .
Does Parth have a split personality ? On one hand he's the perfect guy .
Chocolate ice cream ,kisses ,hot water bags ?
I want him for myself.
Tell me more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 7
Birthdays are special for a huge majority of the world's population. And you may think they were for Vidushi Kumar too.
But as she woke up on the morning of 20th April, she didn't feel any of the excitement or joy that people usually feel on the day marking their birth. What was so special about it anyway?
After all, we are all born to die.
Shrugging off negative thoughts and taking a deep breath, she went and got ready for work.
She was surprised to see Parth absent at the table when she went for breakfast. He never woke up so early. There was a Post-it note stuck on the fridge. It said-
"Going early for an emergency meeting. See you at work."
A meeting so early in the morning?
Checking her watch, she saw she was getting late. She grabbed an apple to eat on the way to office and caught an auto to reach there.
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On, off, on, off...the light kept flickering.
A servant knocked at the door and Natasha said, "Come in!"
"Madam, sir wants to meet you," the servant said. She curtly replied, "Tell him I don't have time."
"He said it is urgent, and-"
"Maine kaha na! I will not talk right now! I'm getting late for work. Tell him I will meet him directly in office," she said firmly. "Now go."
The servant left and shut the door.
She went inside the bathroom and slammed the door shut. Her eyes were still lined with kohl, which she had worn for the previous night's party. Tears leaked from her eyes.
Stuck in a pretentious and glamorous world, she wanted to break free and make real friends, meet genuine people. Not people who just gave plastic smiles and air kisses, and forgot who she was the next day.
She took out her phone and dialled a number.
"Hello. I am not coming to work today. Cancel all my meetings."
After she cut the call, she checked her notifications. She saw photos posted by Parth. on Facebook. He seemed to be quite happy with his new girlfriend...
She had given him a missed call the previous day.
Only because he was the only semblance of normalcy she had in her life. Parth.
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A dark hall welcomed Vidushi as she came back home. "Uff...I hope the electricity hasn't gone!" she groaned. She stumbled on something in the dark, but she found herself in strong, warm arms as she was about to fall.
The lights suddenly came on.
Parth was holding her. "Happy Birthday, Miss Clumsy," he said with a smile. She stood up. He handed her a package and said, "Wear this dress tonight."
"You remembered?" she asked him. "Of course I did. Now go change. Go!"
She went and changed into the lovely white dress Parth had gifted her. She curled her hair and wore minimal makeup with only a tiny silver pendant.
As she came out of her room, Parth led her to the terrace. When they reached, she saw a lovely sight. The whole terrace was decorated with fairy lights. And there was a huge butterscotch cake kept on the table in front of them.
"Butterscotch! My favourite!" Vidushi exclaimed happily.
They went and cut the cake, as Parth sang the birthday song and she blew out all the candles at once. They fed each other cake.
"I usually don't celebrate my birthday, but all this is lovely! Thank you Parth," she said.
He got out a bottle of red wine, and said, "Let's celebrate!" He popped the bottle open and poured wine into two goblets. As he was pouring some wine into Vidushi's goblet, it fell on her dress.
"Sorry!" he said.
"It'll stain..." she said with a worried expression.
"Chill, it'll be alright. Let's just enjoy for now," Parth said reassuringly. She smiled and they drank wine while talking.
But they forgot...a wine stain never goes...
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xoxo
Amreen😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Nice amu...yeah everyone loves birthday surprises😛...me too...😆...parth ka surprise bhi acha tha...the way u concluded this update.But they forgot...a wine stain never goes...
suspense and mystery...hmm...waiting for next part ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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But they forgot...a wine stain never goes...

😕 what is this suppose to mean ????

Eager for next part ...plzzz continue soon 😊

Fab work Doll 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamika2692001

PART 7

Birthdays are special for a huge majority of the world's population. And you may think they were for Vidushi Kumar too.
But as she woke up on the morning of 20th April, she didn't feel any of the excitement or joy that people usually feel on the day marking their birth. What was so special about it anyway?
After all, we are all born to die. *Shakes Vidushi* Stop being so pessimistic! It's going great! Cry when you get into a problem will ya?
Shrugging off negative thoughts and taking a deep breath, she went and got ready for work.
She was surprised to see Parth absent at the table when she went for breakfast. He never woke up so early. There was a Post-it note stuck on the fridge. It said-
"Going early for an emergency meeting. See you at work."
A meeting so early in the morning?
Checking her watch, she saw she was getting late. She grabbed an apple to eat on the way to office and caught an auto to reach there.
WHAT? No cards, wishes or flowers? Parthetic Boyfriend!
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On, off, on, off...the light kept flickering.
A servant knocked at the door and Natasha said, "Come in!"
"Madam, sir wants to meet you," the servant said. She curtly replied, "Tell him I don't have time."
"He said it is urgent, and-"
"Maine kaha na! I will not talk right now! I'm getting late for work. Tell him I will meet him directly in office," she said firmly. "Now go."
The servant left and shut the door.
She went inside the bathroom and slammed the door shut. Her eyes were still lined with kohl, which she had worn for the previous night's party. Tears leaked from her eyes.
Stuck in a pretentious and glamorous world, she wanted to break free and make real friends, meet genuine people. Not people who just gave plastic smiles and air kisses, and forgot who she was the next day.
She took out her phone and dialled a number.
"Hello. I am not coming to work today. Cancel all my meetings."
After she cut the call, she checked her notifications. She saw photos posted by Parth. on Facebook. He seemed to be quite happy with his new girlfriend...
She had given him a missed call the previous day.
Only because he was the only semblance of normalcy she had in her life. Parth.
I don't want to feel Sad for Natasha. Stop it. Parth is using Vidushi!
I'll feel bad for Vids!
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A dark hall welcomed Vidushi as she came back home. "Uff...I hope the electricity hasn't gone!" she groaned. She stumbled on something in the dark, but she found herself in strong, warm arms as she was about to fall. 😳
The lights suddenly came on.
Parth was holding her. "Happy Birthday, Miss Clumsy," he said with a smile. She stood up. He handed her a package and said, "Wear this dress tonight."
"You remembered?" she asked him. "Of course I did. Now go change. Go!"
Parth's bum is safe. If he'd forgotten...😡
She went and changed into the lovely white dress Parth had gifted her. She curled her hair and wore minimal makeup with only a tiny silver pendant.
As she came out of her room, Parth led her to the terrace. When they reached, she saw a lovely sight. The whole terrace was decorated with fairy lights. And there was a huge butterscotch cake kept on the table in front of them.
"Butterscotch! My favourite!" Vidushi exclaimed happily.
I'm glad he knows her favourite things. Good boy!
They went and cut the cake, as Parth sang the birthday song and she blew out all the candles at once. They fed each other cake.
😳
"I usually don't celebrate my birthday, but all this is lovely! Thank you Parth," she said.
Aww..she's adorable!
He got out a bottle of red wine, and said, "Let's celebrate!" He popped the bottle open and poured wine into two goblets. As he was pouring some wine into Vidushi's goblet, it fell on her dress.
"Sorry!" he said.
"It'll stain..." she said with a worried expression.
"Chill, it'll be alright. Let's just enjoy for now," Parth said reassuringly. She smiled and they drank wine while talking.
But they forgot...a wine stain never goes...
Gah...you are being so cryptic!
Wine stain of doom
*hides under desk*

Update fast babe!
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xoxo
Amreen😉

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