sandhir lines in my style :) i m hurt..

samridhigoodiez thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Sandhir

I m hurt...
Today .
More than those wounds given by anyone..

I m unhappy
today..

More than those gloomy days I had spent...

I m broken today .
More than some one broke me before..

I m angry today
More than ever...

I m annoyed today..
More than you are..

I feel betrayed today..
Coz you gave me wounds...

I feel possessive today..
Coz I cant see someone else touches you..

I feel alone today..
Coz u all left me..

I feel like an orphan today
Coz I have no support .

I feel lifeless today .
Coz I have lost all reasons to live ...

Sandhir

I tried to be your support..
But you discarded .

I tried to be your soul .
But you discarded..

I tried to be with you..
But you jerked me off..

I tried to move forward towards you..
But you stepped back..

I tried to explain to you that wat ever i did was for us..
I you turned around..

I tried to help you..
But you remained absent..

I tried to tell you that I didnt betray you n can never do..
But you didnt believe .

I tried to tell you that you are not alone..
You didn't believe..

I tried to tell you that I belong to you..
But you went away with me...

M hurt too..
M alone too..
Coz of you..

Still i m quiet..
Becoz I love you..

hope u all liked it.. Leave ur precious reviews below..

Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

17

Views

2.3k

Users

18

Likes

41

Frequent Posters

vani86 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
😊 awsome...u r simply superbbb...
i really love ur writings...
waiting to read alot from u ...😊

may god bless u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊...

anu_anya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
just superb awesome
u penned it very well
thanks for pm
keep doing
nd plz update ur ffs too :((
CrazyKupKakes thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
One more masterpiece di
It shows ur turning into a great poet too 👍🏼
Great going di
Really proud to read ur works
Keep writing and updating
Tysm fr the pm
pinkrose1 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
nice one...
your writing is great...
newmoon18 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Omg di so beautiful
Really di u write awsme

Moi toh fan hogi apki 😃

It was so beautifully written
Luved it to the core.


Keep smiling 😊
twni thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
it's not boring rather it's very beautiful
havi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
hey nice poems...
continue this
update dream or a nightmare soon
waiting
geeth
-chocoangel- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Omg omg someone is in poetic mood right now
Secret kya h boss I think inbhestigationwa kare k padi😉
Khair whatever be the secret moiko kya moiko to bas aise os milte rahe n moi happy
But jo bhi ho di someone is turning into a poet now good its good
Mogambo khushhh hui bwahahaha
Haaaye maar daala kaat daala katal kar ditta yaar
After reading ur os i m like this😃 n this too😭
Moi senti ho gayi ufff ye zaalim duniyaaa moike aasuo ka tank khaali karne k peeche padi h
Btw moine aasu nhi bahaaye bas senti ho gayi
Rds pov kya kahu moito rd k naam pe hi flat ho jaati phir yaha to uska pov itni acchi tarah se aapne likha h ki moi to uske land me almost pohoch gayi thi but yaha comment bhi to karna tha na plan postpone kar diya
Ufff rd eeeks uske pov ne mujhe maar daala itni acchi line kaha se search karte ho diii
Moiko bhi bata do moi kisi ko nhi bataaungi pakka
N sanyu ka pov awsummm
Kya kahu kaise kahu
A line here
Labz mere the zubaa pe aake ruke par ho na sake eooo baya
Aaye haaye kahi se udaaya hua ab khud ka invent karne ki energy nhi h mujhme
Ab moiko ko jaame do mere rd k land dont disturb reee
N yeah spoiler to de diya update karne ka kya iraada h aapka
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
2019_AnushkaM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
simple superb awesome fab lovely
superb amazing very beautiful
writing very very well
fab lovely fab.
love it.😃


Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".