Originally posted by: Moony87
Ohkkk.. I am here to comment..
Tu to sach mein HUNTING par nikal padi.. Pehle hi page par katl-e-aaam machaa di.. 👏
Are you a professional?.. Coz professionals write like this.
The starting description is itself mind blowing... The souls description. I am definitely in for some hard hitting dark stufff..
The chapter... Well plot is still hidden.. and the vocab.. Too good .. 👏
And the last line.. SURRENDER.. The perfect way to tease the reader... Superb.. write ASAP..
*squealing like a kid on getting her first toy*
Chandu baby!! *hugging you real tight* Thank you, Phulan Devi! Mwh..
What? 🤣 Professional?! *laughing like a Hyena* You are mad! *shaking my head in disbelief and laughing again* What is professional though? 🤣 As in I don't read to differentiate people's way of writing.. XD So please explain, mahaan Chandu Devi!
Hmm... Don't know if it's hard hitting, but I'll try.. *smiling sweetly*
Uff... Thankoo, thankoo.. 🤗
Heehee.. that was the aim! :* 😎
Love you!❤️