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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Sagl
Amazing Drabble dude it ws awsm d way u portrayed d emotions ws beautiful ..keep it up..nd pm me ur other works too

Heyy :)

Thank you so muchh! 😳

I'm so glad you liked it!!

Will definitely pm you! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Prizi
Once again an amazing os

Heyy (:

Awwh, hehe thanks so muchh <3

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MeherS
Beautiful...
sooo nice...i really liked it...
i felt d pain dat he must hv felt...
no words...just beautiful...

Hey Meher!!

Thanks a lot!!

I'm glad I was able to have such an impact 😳

Appreciate it (:

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
hinal!!! reswa

Anniee 😳

I'll be waiting (:

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MDKRM
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Will be waiting (:

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
hinal hinal hinal
omg it was so emotional n heart wrenching
the pain the hurt was so beautifully penned
it was like i was reading a heart out of a character
deeply hurt becoz of losing his love
i hav to say tis it was exceptionally gud
do write more 🤗

Heyy!

Wow.. Thank you sooo much!

That's really kind of you 😳

I'm really honoured to hear such a compliment seriously

Means so much <3

Thaank youu once again 🤗

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Na1na
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Sorry for the delay!

I loved this! :)
It was emotional and really touching.
And I loved how the whole thing was so poetic. Its so different and refreshing to read you know.
And I really like the choice of words too. The sentences conveyed the emotions subtly and in an understated manner, which made it even better. Because with monologues, emotions have to make a connection with the reader.
And that's what you did here.
Great job! :)
Love
Somya

Hey Somya!!

No problem at all! I don't mind (:

Wow thank you soo much! 😳

I'm glad you enjoyed the drabble!

It is a little hard to say what I want to say but keep it short, so I was unsure how it would turn out

But it's nice to see that it turned out well!

Glad you could connect to it! 😃

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KAJAL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

I really sorry for showing up so late. I opened my Inbox after what seems like ages and whioe rummaging through it I came across this.

This drabble is a finest piece of art sculpted so beautifully by moulding words and giving it such an exquisite form.
This was short, crisp and precise just the way I like it.
It had that mind-jolting impact on me rendering me speechless.
You have penned down the emotions so bewitchingly. Each phrase portrayed the same emotion although differently.
Randhir's state, then, had been really shattering and this Drabble perfectly portrays that.
I'm so in love with your writings...
Keep penning down more drabbles.
They are always a treat to read.
An eager reader is awaiting impatiently for another one...

Regards
Keya

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-
I really sorry for showing up so late. I opened my Inbox after what seems like ages and whioe rummaging through it I came across this.

This drabble is a finest piece of art sculpted so beautifully by moulding words and giving it such an exquisite form.
This was short, crisp and precise just the way I like it.
It had that mind-jolting impact on me rendering me speechless.
You have penned down the emotions so bewitchingly. Each phrase portrayed the same emotion although differently.
Randhir's state, then, had been really shattering and this Drabble perfectly portrays that.
I'm so in love with your writings...
Keep penning down more drabbles.
They are always a treat to read.
An eager reader is awaiting impatiently for another one...

Regards
Keya

Hey Keya!!

Don't apologize! I'm so glad that you read it and commented!

Appreciate it 😳

Oh man am I blushing right now!

You are too kind with your compliments!

Thank you so much!

I will definitely try to keep writing more of these (:

My semester finally ended so I will have time now!

Thanks once again <3

Love, Hinal 🤗