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MeherS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful...
sooo nice...i really liked it...
i felt d pain dat he must hv felt...
no words...just beautiful...

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rosy kohli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

hinal hinal hinal

omg it was so emotional n heart wrenching

the pain the hurt was so beautifully penned

it was like i was reading a heart out of a character

deeply hurt becoz of losing his love

i hav to say tis it was exceptionally gud

do write more 🤗

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Param_love
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UNRES

Hey! Hinal
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely drabble😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️

Very well you've described the scenario⭐️⭐️
lovely you've pinned the emotions👏⭐️
Nicely you've described each n every point👏⭐️
Really it touch my heart...
A big round of plague👏👏 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏
for writing such a lovely drabble
Ur an amazing, fantastic writer👏👏
U knew Very well how to pinned emotions😉😃

Keep it up👍🏼
Do write more
Love to read ur work
Love
Bushra🤗

Hey Bushra!!

Thank you so much darling :D

That's so sweet of you 😳🤗

I'm so happy after reading your comment!! ^_^

Thanks once again <3 😳

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Hey hinal

The drabble was so beautifully written

U portrayed rd emtns so well
Yes he so broken n shattered now he has no entry to be broke again

Bt i m sure in serial sanyu will again mend his broken pieces Bcz his real happiness is wid only her

Rite now they both r fighting under their ego once everything sorted they will be inseparable

Bt yaa dear hatts off 👏 👏

U write fab aese hi likhti raho r Hume entertain krti rho 😉

Keep smiling dear 😊

Heyy!

Awwh, thank you so much!! 😃

I really wanted to write something just based on his POV about the betrayal, and then this drabble happened :P

Glad you liked it!!

Definitely likhti rahungi ;)

Thanks once again!! 😳

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: samyukthakrish
awww.. poor randhir!!! i so love him. uss sanyukta ko chodkar mere paas ajao.. :P 😆

😆 Kya idea hai Samyuktha! Agar aisa hota toh main bhi available hu 😛😆

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres
oh my!
this is exquisite !

painfully perfect :D

keep writing ,
preeti <3 :*

Hey Preeti!! <3

Thank you so muchh!!

Glad you liked it! 😳

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basket_101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Zyra
This is so Perfect!
You wrote all the emotions so well. I could feel them so well. Its one of the best Drabble's I've ever come across.
My poor Randhir he's so broken. I wish I could help him.
Hinalll
You write amazingly!! I loved it to the core. Its so beautifully written. I felt the pain.
Keep Writing and Keep Smiling!!
You are a future writer. You might just give competition to Durjoy Dutta. Oh My God! His Dimples. <3
I'll stop here. Byee!

Hello Zyra!! :)

Oh man.. You're making me blush ☺️

You're too sweet Zyra!

That's a huge huge hugeee compliment!!

Thank you so muchh! <3

😳🤗