Shine in my Darkness *sandhir new TS* last part updated :)

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priiy

@priiy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awsm one...thanks 4 d pm

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Manal

@Thriller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Amazingly written plz continue soon eagerly waiting for next part😃

Love

Manal

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hey, awesome TS! I am glad you pm'ed me! Thanks for pm! Please update the 2nd part ASAP! Can't wait! :D

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pari1995

@pari1995

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice one dear pls update next part soon

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aduo

@aduo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

woww!!!! too good!!! plzz next part soon!!! 😊

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Anisha Chowdhury

@chowanisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

HEYA !!!!!

SOORY CUDNT COMMENT BEFORE!!!

U KNOW FACING SOME PROBLEMS!!!BRUSHING THOSE ASIDE!!!

UPDATE WAS REALY GUD !!

AND U LEFT CLIFFHANGING!!!KYA YAR!!PLS UPDATE SOON!!

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

behen thi.. behen thi.. behen thi... okay okay okay.. fir to thike.. darra diya bechari bacchi ko yaar.
n ye sanyukta bhi... kinna bhaao khaari he.. ek baar me bata ni sakti thi if she's married or not.. I hope not.
n how cud u stop there... like THERE... continue NOW...

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Alsha

@alsha.s.pradeep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

it was superb... the way u hav started it ..i rly thought sanyu was dead :P...update the next part soon and thnx for th pm

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Neha

@Fairystar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: cuteparsh
RES FOR UPCOMING PART😉
unres
me 1st 😊 congrats for coming first😃😃
ok so no more crap i m coming to update hahaha okay😆😆
hey bhagvan neha tumne kya likha hai thank u so much dear
its awesome dear thnxx a lotty
i love it so much i'm glad u liked it😳
thank you so much for pm me always welcome yaar😃
love you😊 love ya back

sakshi neha☺️