Sandhir -Three Shot (Pyaar Ka Ehsaas)- updated page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pyaar Ka Ehsaas

This is a Sandhir Two Part SS, if I get positive feedback I will write more if not then I will immediately stop. I hope you all enjoy and forgive me for any mistakes made.

She looked out to the horizon all she saw was the setting sun and the serene push of waves. Sanyukta was always a passionate girl who was confident, Talkative and intelligent, But today all of her confidence shattered

FLASHBACK
Dad: THAT IS ENOUGH!!! You are getting married next week I cannot tolerate you destroying my honour for the sake of your education...What is even the point of this engineering degree when all you will have to do is make food and serve your husband

Sanyu: If that is all I need to do he could get a maid...why do you always do this to me you let an Bhai study and I am much brighter and passionate then him Please Dad I've never asked for anything and for the first time in my life I wan...

Sanyuktas Dad slapped her across the cheek, his nostrils were flaring, his eyes aflame.

Dad: you shameless girl how dare you raise your voice in front of your parents...this is it I am calling Mr Mittal this wedding will take place in two days...I do not care if you cry or kill yourself just know that if you do not come to the mandap and get married to samir you will see my dead face.

SAYUKTAS ROOM

Sanyu had lost all sense of reason, every nerve in her body wanted to perish, if she could not fulfil her dream she was certainly not going to live as a lifeless soul all her life. She picked up the broken piece of glass and lifted it to her wrist. For a brief moment she relived all the important memories in her lifeall the important people. She saw her mother, her friend Kanika, She saw kaustuki, Jiggy,Parth and Even vidushi...But all her memories came to a standstill on that one face. The face that had sharp brown eyes, and a perfectly chiselled jaw, The face which she could recognise anywhere, the face that brought her so much pain but yet helped her every time, The face which oozed confidence but was covering a broken lonely little boy who only desired love. Yes she saw the face of Randhir , She relived each and every single moment spent with him, the good the bad and the ugly, she remembered how he had saved her every time she was in trouble she remembered how he once said that only he had a right to make her cry, She finally realised that he meant that no one should make her cry but Randhir as she can fight and take out her frustration only with Randhir. She realised that in this time of weakness she only needed one person by her side, which was Randhir. She cried out his name her eyes unwillingly were dripping with sorrowful tears, She once again lifted the glass to her wrist and was about to cut herself when someone grabbed her hand, The grip was tight almost suffocating her, like the person gripping her was angry, She slowly opened her eyes to once more see them sharp red eyes staring at her with immense pain and anger. Through clenched teeth he hissed "How dare you"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one👍🏼 plot is very interesting,
sanyu getting married ---randhir aa gaya hain to no tension..😕😲
hope we get some sandhirlacious scenes too.

continue ASAP 😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Almost forgot please PM me..
i have sent buddy request already..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written 👍🏼
This was seriously amazing & the way you described Sanyukta's pain was beyond perfection.
Please continue soon, I'll be waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manalee

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990099">Almost forgot please PM me..</font>[DIV]<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#990099">i have sent buddy request already..[:)][:)]</font>[/DIV]



Added and will PM you with the next part :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was mind blowing dear...sanyu's pain was intensely described ...update soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh God, this was actually amazing. And when she's about to slit ger wrist, somebody grabs hold of her wrist and he's clearly very angry. Ufff... you have to update soon... and please pm me when tou do so... lots of love xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its beautifully penned... continue soon & also pls pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... this is so interesting... plz continue n pm me also if thats ok wid u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
U have described sanyukta's emotions very well.

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