PROPINQUITY - SANDHIR OS (BASED ON 23MAY PRECAP)

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PROPINQUITY :- It refers to the physical or psychological proximity between people

P.S. - PMS after dinner 😛

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The floor was full of crumpled papers,.,,
It wasnt really hard to guess what was imprinted on them...

Just the 8 letters ,,, which had created a havoc in his life...
He wasnt sure of anything happening to him...
He was being acquainted with new emotions ...
The ones ,, he wanted to block so badly...

He wasnt even sure of what he felt for her.,..
Hatred was better ,..than that gut wrenching feeling which threatened to mangle him ,.. Expose him,...whenever he saw her with parth

Was he soo readable that ,,, even that minx vidushi had noticed his turmoil...??

'Huh .. No !! She s a pest! Who cares what she thinks!"

Another paper joined the floor...

''Aaargh'' he groaned,,,,

Was his life less complicated till now.,, ?

''Damn it ,.. '' and he punched the wall...

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He peeped ... From between the pillars,..,

She was sitting on the bench weeping her fate,..

Somewhere deep down he knew he was the one responsible for all this mess,..

He wanted to console her..., but he wasnt a pro in all this,,,

''Where are you parth... Jab nahi chahiye hota hai to aaj jata hai ,.. Aaj kaha mar gaya'' he thought,..

At least parth could console her,,,,

Her sobbing grew intense,,,

Randhir was baffled,,,,
The unknown feeling was getting the better of him...
His heart was beating wildly,,,,

Unable to stop himself anymore,,,
He put his hand on her shoulder...without even thinking as to what he would say or what her response would be,...

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She stiffened,,,,
Without even looking who the person was,.. She dragged him and put her head on his shoulder ...closing her eyes...,

She needed someone,,,,

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Randhir wasnt used to being in such close proximity with anyone,...
Being soft was not his quality ...

But he knew she thought he was parth...,

His heart was giving lurches,,,,

Somewhere deep down ,,, he was shattered,,,,
He knew sanyukta would never confide in him,..

She despised him,,,.

So many feelings creating a depredation in his mind ,.. He was speechless...

He knew she would push him the minute she would look at his face,..

He opened his mouth to say something ,... But nothing came out ...

He wanted to freeze this moment,,,,

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''Kuch to bolo '' she weeped ...not looking up

He was still struggling with his speech...

''Roz to itna bolte ho ,,.aaj kya hua'' she urged him say ,..
Tightening her clutch on his shirt ,...

Still not looking up,..she hadn't opened her eyes till now,...

Randhir thought it would be better to tell her that he wasnt parth,,,

He opened his mouth ...

''RANDHIR,. Bolo Kuch bhi'' she sniveled...

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He was shocked...

''I .,, you ...''

'' haan .. Bolo ...'' She said softly,,,

He made her look into his eyes,,,,

''How did you know it was me ...'' He whispered...

'' I can feel your presence as much as I can feel your absence...,'

Her reply made him suck in air ,...
So he wasnt the only one facing those unknown feelings...

Something changed ,,.
The air between them refashioned...

Her eyes were speaking volumes,..

And the exact thing he wished happened,,

THE MOMENT FROZE!
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OK done!

I know ..,,
Hamare mahan cvs ESA to saat janmo mai nahi hone denge...

Lol 🤣


What's wrong to imagine!

Do post your comments!
I adore them...

Love yous ,,
Preeti!
*muah*❤️


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HAPPY READING!
HOPE YOU FIND IT WORTH YOUR READ!😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow !! Preeti wat a Fab writer u are! Each and everything was just perfect!
I can't thank u enough for writing this 🤗 !! I wud die out of happiness if something like this happens in the show..
But as u said hamare mahaan CVs aisa 7 Janam mein nahi soch sakte! How I wish that they cud borrow ur brain for a few days..
Anyway, keep it up! Aakhir tere jaise talented writers ke wajah se hi toh hum jaise fans zinda hai abhi tak!
P.s.- I read it thrice already! Its so freaking amazing!!❤️

Love,
Megha
Edited by luvsandhir - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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correction: humare cvs esa saat nahi sau janmom mein hone nahi denge 🤣
do u read my mind? 😲
this was d only positive way i cud imagine d precap eventhough im sure its neva gonna happen!
i loved dat part wen rd was hoping for parth to cum and console her... u knw it felt lyk unconditional love!
as i always say i love your style of writing! its very easy to imagine d scenes!
dont you dare stop writing!
love u!

ps: thank u for d meaning! or else i had to look up in d dictionary 😆
Edited by tiara888 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i wish it happens!!!!!!!!!!!!
*fingers crossed*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaahhh...
Wwwooowww...!!!!!
It was a pure heavenly bliss...!!! 😳😳

Just so apt..
Everything felt like sooo perfect...!!! 😳😳
Loved it to the core..!! (And I seriously mean it😊)



Thanks a lot...!!!! 👏👏

Love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had thought earlier(just when I watched the Friday epi)., that i'll write a precap based OS on it...but when I read ur this OS of your's, I changed my deciesion of writing it...u knw whyyy???

coz i felt that their couldnt be any better OS for the current track after reading this one!!!

Its sooo awesommee... Ur creative mind works soo fast n soo goood always😉

Superbbb OS...👏
Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago
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Oh my god. Prizzi! :')
This is brilliant! I love this rey! OHMYGOD! You're amazing! You're simply amazing. You.I.I'm sorry I don't have words. My next Fiction update for you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Oh my god. Prizzi! :')
This is brilliant! I love this rey! OHMYGOD! You're amazing! You're simply amazing. You.I.I'm sorry I don't have words. My next Fiction update for you.

:*


Omg!!!
*faints* !!

Ri!!
Muah muah .,..
Bunch of kisses,...

...
Thanks ri ...
M glad you like it ,..

P.S : next update dedicated to me ??
Aewwh x*

Love yous,
Preeti! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was waiting for someone to write on the Precap!
Those thirty seconds of the precap made my day! I replayed it like, about twenty times. This is nicely written, BTW!

Was he soo readable that ,,, even that minx Vidushi had noticed his turmoil...?? Even that minx noticed! Randhir's losing his edge XD

'' I can feel your presence as much as your absence'' That's so cute! That's my favorite line :)

I can only wish that this is how it plays out! ❤️




Edited by AzureLicht - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AzureLicht


I was waiting for someone to write on the Precap!
Those thirty seconds of the precap made my day! I replayed it like, about twenty times. This is nicely written, BTW!

Was he soo readable that ,,, even that minx Vidushi had noticed his turmoil...?? Even that minx noticed! Randhir's losing his edge XD

'' I can feel your presence as much as your absence'' That's so cute! That's my favorite line :)

I can only wish that this is how it plays out! ❤️





Awwh ,.. Riddhi!

Thanks a tonne sweets!

Yr stories are awesome!
U like mine?

M on seventh heaven!!😳

Love yous,
Preeti:*

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