SanDhir OS: Forgetting That We Are Enemies - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Tanya...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

I don't know you much but yeah one thing I definitely know about you is that You are a superb writer. πŸ‘ While reading this OS my breathe was stuck in my throat literally. I just loved it to the Core. I was jumping and smiling like an idiot 😳 while looking towards my mobile screen seriously and my mom was like WTH? Are you mad? I am really pleased to read such a great OS. Thanks for the opportunity. Keep writimg such works. And do let me know about them. πŸ˜ƒ
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what a magical date and couple, loved the dialouges and how everything was displayed, the taking the hair out of clip/ hairtie was well done yet again, loved it
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Chutki,

This is injustice.
Ask why?
Coz I can't leave a long review for this!
But I will tell the genuine thing I can say right now.
This OS/Drabble whatever u call it was the best I have ever read till date on SanDhir! And I mean it!!!
In fact, I just copy-pasted the whole thing and saved it to relish later on!!! U outdid urself here kiddo!!!
Proud of just how well u write!
Loads of love,
Anuradha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res πŸ˜†

Edit 😎

Originally posted by: TashaForever





The colour of shirt he wore, the jeans, the shoes, and the tidiness of his hair...well she liked it messy.



"Try it out. You might enjoy. He's better than that Sameer atleast." A voice in her mind piped cheerfully.

"No way. Can't risk going with your enemy. Who knows what plans he's hatching. It could just be a simple prank." Another voice adviced.

"Well, you two always play pranks on each other. You played one on him, recently. Remember? He fell flat on your foot? So there's no harm facing a prank by him. It will be fun." The cheerful voice chirped.

...


"Let's Go." She said.

"Where?" he asked, pretending not to know.

"Don't pretend. You know it." She replied.

"You are actually agreeing to go on a date with me? Aah. Guess you couldn't miss the chance, huh? Good girl. Finally proved yourself to be intelligent, by not missing a change to go out with me. But what about your dear fianc?" he asked, chuckling.

"Shutup. I am going with you because I want to get rid of him. My fiance? You're the one who asked me out. You think of how to cancel my date with Sameer." She said, firmly.

"Well. I knew you weren't so intelligent after all. That's okay. I will figure out a way...with my Rank No.1 brain. You better get dressed well. Just because I am giving a bimbo like you, a chance to go on a date with me, I don't want to be seen with a typical saas-bahu-and-homescience girl. So please dress decently enough to be seen with me, the Rank No.1 hottie." he smirked.

"Oh hello. You're the lucky one here. I'm wasting my first date...with a jerk like you." She said proudly.

"First date? Wow. And you're wasting it with your enemy? Oh god. I pity you." He said, cackling with laughter.

"Whats there to laugh about? Besides, you're not my enemy. We are not each other's enemies for tomorrow, remember?" she said.

"Yeah okay fine. Bye. Meet me tomorrow outside the hostel, at 6 pm." He literally ordered.

"6 pm? We are going in the evening?" she sounded shocked.

"Yeah why? You want me to bunk my lectures to go out for a lunch date? With you? No chance Farzi." He smirked again.


...




"You proved yourself to be a heart stealer today Randhir." She said as they walked into the Dhaba.

..

"We are on a date. This is your first one. Let's make it the way it should be. The best." He'd said.


She felt his gaze over her as she stuffed a spoonful of raita, into her mouth.

"What?" she asked, when he did not avert his gaze even after five minutes had passed.

In response, he just lifted his hand up and dragged it across her pleated hair, bring it to the front.

His fingertips brushed across her neck lightly.

He pulled off the rubber band holding her pleats together.

She stared into his eyes questioningly.

She placed her hand above his, to prevent him from pulling off the rubber band completely.

He stared into his eyes, before removing her hand from above his and pulling off the rubber band completely.

He then ran his hands through her pleats, ever so slowly, untying them.

Her hair now lay unpleated.

Unpleated and open.

Dragged across one side of her neck.

Leaving her back exposed.

He noticed.

He noticed the low cut back of her suit. And the loose dori.

He also noticed the various cheap creatures in the corner of the dhaba, eyeing her.

He pulled her hair back, splaying it across her back.

His hand brushed across her neck again, sending electricity waves throughout her body.

She closed her eyes, arching her back unintentionally.

He pulled his hands back.

She missed his touch instantly.

She opened her eyes gently, to see him staring at her.

She blushed.

So did he.

And furiously too.

...

"Good Night." He said having dropped her off at the Girls Hostel safely.

"Randhir wait." She said as he turned to go.

"It was fun having dinner with you today. Umm...Thank you...for such a lovely evening." She said, hesitating a little.

"No problem Farzi. And same here. Today you were tolerable." He joked.

She punched him lightly on the arm.

"Okay Okay. I enjoyed your company ma'am. Can I have the pleasureof going out with you again sometime?" Randhir asked, smiling genuinely.

His smile. She really loved it. Although it was rare.

"Well yes you may. But are you sure you, the Rank No.1, won't mind being seen with a Farzi, once again?" she joked.

"No ma'am. Cause if you continue going out with me, you won't remain a Farzi anymore!" he laughed.

"Arghh. Randhir!" she pouted.

"What? Sach humesha kadva hota hai Aggarwal!" he said winking, and walking away.

"Randhir." She called out again.

"Ab kya hai?" he said, turning to face her.

"Are we to forget again...that we are enemies?" she asked.

"No. We aren't to forget it. We are still enemies." He replied.

She kept mum. She looked disappointed.

"But we are dating enemies now." He added.

She looked up and stared into his eyes.

A toothy smile spread across her lips.

A goofy grin spread across his lips as he waved Bye to her and walked away.



Okay done :D
Ofc, bold means the parts which I liked best 😳 Coding seems easier for me πŸ€” Ananya bohut nakhre karti hain isko leke πŸ₯±

Oh man this was sooo good πŸ˜† Like it's so perfect and complete and such a treat to read πŸ˜ƒ
And what's best was even though some parts were major OOC, some of the dialogues where just so much in sync with their characters :D The combination rocked 😎

Sanyukta, you lucky girl 😳 He took her to the dhaba And you'll understand mere ❀️ ka haal when he threads his fingers through her hair to loosen the braid ☺️

Dating enemies πŸ€ͺ Sounds legitly dreamy to me πŸ˜†

I love πŸ€—
Edited by themockingblue. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is just awesome dear...


And the date is so cute...
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Go unres in Recess -_-
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Go unres in Recess -_-


And Burning too, yeah
Bacche pe kitna zor de rahe ho tum log πŸ€”
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Originally posted by: themockingblue.


And Burning too, yeah
Bacche pe kitna zor de rahe ho tum log πŸ€”

I'm younger. 😳

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