SanDhir TS: Without You

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Dancindoll8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Do you hear the angels sing?

Cause I can while reading it...

This is flawless...

Thank you for writing it

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972633

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

res! ik purana bhi unres nhi kiya h abhi 😳

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Kab kab kab??? :D Jaldi se update karro Tanya! :)
This is so sweeet rey. I love your writing style. Great choice of words. :)

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

RES
Hi Tanz
So u have come up with a new TS!
Good!but I hope that u update remaining as well!

Will unres after ur 2nd shot!

Love u:*

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angel.thomas

@angel.thomas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

It was so nice to read about Randhir saving Sanyukta😃. So wanted to see this happening in the show😔. Yess now randhir will deefinitely prove that is Hero😳

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow

amazing first part

can't wait for the next part

update soon

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Omg this is seriously awesome one

Love to read u mentioned all points so well

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@santiagosentyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

res.

THIS IS SO LONG. HOW MANY PAGES? :O

unres since I promised.

Okay, I also promised I'll read CAG, we'll see about that aaj 😆 Because starts is a headache and I'm tired and I have so much of kaam AND I have to sleep too. :/

Coming to the TS, meri jaan, kitna lamba likthi hai tu? 😲 Isme toh mere 6-7 drabbles aaram se aajayenge. 🤔

Oh by the way, this TS of yours gave me an idea. BUAHAHA.

It's not lusty lonely baby, it's lost and lonely. 🤣 But hota hai, mera bhi toh hua tha. 🤣

But this shot was BEAUTIFUL. I literally have no other word to describe it.

All those flashbacks were mind blowing. :')

BUT YO, the code. 😎

The end left me wanting for more.

SAMEER KO PHOTOS BHEJE? KYUN? KISNE? YEH CHAL KYA RAHA HAI?

AND THEN HE SAID HERO *dies*

Basically, the last two line scream UPDATE SOON. 🤣

SO yes, update soon meri mirror. <3

Also, you're a wayyy better writer. <33 This shot is enough for that :')

-Your SoulSweetBitch ;)

Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Amazing TS..d way u hav protrait d emotions of randhir abt d precap..it was mindblowing..mazza aa gaya padke...waiting for next part!!
😆

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

res

unres

it was amazing👏

truly loved it😊

you know what I really pity that punching bag, even that wall (but its really a strong one still standing straight😛 after all the puches and all😉) and jiggy too bechaare🤢

randhir is such a confused😕 person always😡

and plz update soon cause u r such a late-lateef😛😆

Edited by AnuSweet - 11 years ago