|| Agape || ~ A Ts Collab !! - Page 6

2nd part! <3
And that song, I just love it. :)Very nicely written rey. Absolutely loved it.

Only one word that is escaping my mouth nd that is perfect. This TS deserves appreciation. Everything is written so flawlessly. Feelings, portrayal depiction is done perfectly with utmost precision. U two hav done a fab job. Looking forward to have another one from u both. -Riya

Originally posted by: purnima209

amazing yar awsme...

no words yar marvellous

thnks purnima di :)

even this much is enough
hugsss
:)

Kri & Gun, you guys did an amazing job. What a fantabulous TS... keep writibg more... SHQ is going great so reading such works lifts the mood even higher... Once again well done guys... keep rocking... lots of love xxx

Yaar main tumhe kyaa bolun... its vey rare ki main hindi mein comment karun.. the second part.. it just stole it man!!! n that song.. i have always been searching 4 it!! thnk u !! luvd ur ts!!!
👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

As predicted by me, this TS is worth every appreciation. It's far more better than what I've anticipated..

Gunseerat dear, you are the archetype of perfection. You are one of the finest writers on this forum along with Kriti.
You have done the splendid job of portraying Sanyukta's emotions flawlessly with great precision.
I loved the way how you have alternately penned down SanDhir's emotions. It made the story more appealing and beautiful. Every word used was coated with myriad hues of emotions, touching my soul. I'm spell-bound.
Awww.. the SanDhir moment at the end made my heart bloom with joy. It was so very enticing and bewitching. Both the lovers standing side by side, hand in hand, enjoying the first rays of the morning glory and sharing silent promises... So romantic!!!
Damn! I want something like this to happen in the show...
Reading this TS was a pure bliss... I enjoyed reading it to my heart's content.

I would love to read more of your stories and collabs.
Gunseerat and Kriti, you guys really make an amazing duo.. Do write soon...

--With love
Kajal

kajal...u know wat i was waiting for ur verdict and when i read ur reply... oh dear...
*faints*
really ... i m sooo glad and doing a happy dance reading so much of appreciation...firstly... i tried my level best to match kriti's level... and reading ur comment makes me content...
i still cant believe... u worte that much for me...
honestly this is ur modesty
i think i m far off perfection
even if i write infinte thank u' i wont be able to thnk u completely u make me feel good about thiss...
kajal ur wordsss Now i m spell bound...
means sooo much to meee... :)

Originally posted by: myrahh

beautifully penned down
dluvd it

thnkss a lot eans so much :)

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Kri & Gun, you guys did an amazing job. What a fantabulous TS... keep writibg more... SHQ is going great so reading such works lifts the mood even higher... Once again well done guys... keep rocking... lots of love xxx

aww... thnks amplesss...

loadss of love to you tooo
thnkss a lot fr appreciating

Originally posted by: Gitanjalitilak

Yaar main tumhe kyaa bolun... its vey rare ki main hindi mein comment karun.. the second part.. it just stole it man!!! n that song.. i have always been searching 4 it!! thnk u !! luvd ur ts!!!
👏

welll well well...thnkss to u tooo :)
fr being kind enough to lend ur words of praise :)
thnks a lot

Originally posted by: barauni

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Unres-------

Just read both the shots 😆

1st shot:
Miss Tunn, I.e Beli3ve, (ek baat boll tuune anjaane mein tere username mein e ki jaga 3 likhdi n u saw after u confirmed it n then couldn't do anything ya was it planned?)

Okay,.. Kriti! Omg! !! Tu kitthi romantic hain re!!!!
Sachchi mein... the quote just had me paused in front of it gaping at it for 10 mins!
I swear I read the quote 5 times in a go... it is so special for a different reason 😉 😛
N those lines, the introspection n then retrospection was perfect!
Chaa gyi! U are an awesome writer!
This one shot beat ur Memphis n twnbay! 😛
Hands down kudos to the last line!
Wah Kriti ye le meri gift.. 🤗 ❤️


2nd shot:

Gunseerat di,
This is the 1st time im talking to u I guess.. if not forgive me, im an stml patient 😆 😆
But trust me, this the 1st work of urs that im reading n im gonna get back to ur past works asap!
I just loved ur writing style n emotions n everything!
It was treat reading the collab!

Both of you... good job!
👏 👏
Keep writing 😃

Love u more Kriti :* n Gun di.. I love ya too n I said more cuz Kriti n I are so mad that we play this love u more game where ever we go on any ff!

Love,
Nikitha 😳

arey everything has a first time :)
niki my dear m a fan of urs and not ur fault yeh toh kriti ki kripa se mene kuch acha likha h lol
thnksss sooo much my dear... i
m glad i could make it worthy :)

love and hugs