|| Agape || ~ A Ts Collab !!

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Author's Note: Heya, People! Sup?

Okay, so here we are, two writers joining for two shots!!

Gunseerat - She is the kindest, the sweetest and the most polite girl I've met here. The first time we talked and I already liked her so ver much!! Thank you, di, for asking me to listen to this song which I'd be using in the first shot. Believe me; I'm listening to it constantly from the time it was downloaded!!

BeLi3Ve ( Kriti ) - Well, I am just me 😛


Agape means "unconditional love" in greek. I don't know why I chose this but I just did ( I Hope Gun Di Likes This Title)


This part is dedicated to Tanya ( Tashaforever) for always reading and commenting on my stuff. I love you so much, behena!! I hope you like this :*

So cutting off the bakwaas and presenting you the first shot !!

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I ~ Sajna re ❤️


"If love were a color, it would be green. At least for me. But her love is blue, and she's too cool to see that my envy is just amped up jealousness, and a display of how much I care about her and want to see her happy, alone, and imprisoned in the castle of my heart."
Jarod Kintz, Love quotes for the ages. And the ageless sages.

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Raat taaron ki hai
Moti sab seep ke
Chaand ki jis tarah chandni
Teri ban ke jiyun
Teri ho ke maroon
Main bhi bas isliye hoon bani


I punched my bag for the umpteenth time. Why? Why? Why always me? Earlier it used to be my mom and now her. Argh! I went towards the window of the room and stared outside. My room was empty; Parth was out for Tai-chi while Jiggy was talking to Kaustuki on phone, outside.

I stared at the moon. The moon has its light. The night has the stars. Jiggy has Kaustuki. Same way, we are destined together, Sanyukta. Not you and Parth. When will you finally understand?

Kab tak Parth ki defiance lawyer bak k ghumti ferogi?


Saajna re, saajna re
Pyaar se dekh to tu kabhi
Tu hai saagar wohi
Jiski main hoon nadi
Ant mera likha tujh mein hi
Saajna re, saajna re, saajna re...

"I thought I was the only lucky one who faces your behavior, but nahi, tumne to Parth ko bhi.." she said angrily, pointing her finger at me.

"Mae bhi kya? Kab tak uss Parth ko defiance karti rahogi? Every time you speak for him I feel like..." I grabbed her hand in anger. But I couldn't tell her. She kept staring.

"Feel like what, huh? Akhir main bhi toh jaanu" she challenged.

But, how could I tell her. I am scared. She'd leave me, too, just like my mom did. I cannot take the risk. I glared at her, one last time and left.

Ret sookhi main, saiyaan tu saawan
Tu jo maili kare, hongi paawan
Tujhko paa loon to Ganga bani main bahoon
Bin tere main adhoori adhoori
Tu jo apna le ho jaaun poori
Gham nahi phir rahoon ya na rahoon

I needed to get out. I was trying my best to avoid her thoughts and this certainly wasn't helping. I guess some books would help. I got up and left for the library. All the way I saw her, her memories played in front of me. The innumerous times she had hugged me, the kiss we had in the lab.

I was passing from the mechanical lab when my eyes fell on her table and another heartbreaking memory played.

Khaak ban ke piya
Udti bichhti phiroon
Tu guzarta hai jis jis gali
Main to bhookhi piya
Ik teri deed ki
Tujhko na ho kadar, na sahi

I was at my table, gathering my stuff. PKC was checking other students' projects. I had made hers; I didn't want her to fail. But, to my surprise, she asked PKC for extra time.

She was at her table, staring at me, angrily. Another moment and she had the project I had made for her in her hands. Seconds... it took her just some seconds to tear all my hard-work in front of me. Had it been Parth making it for her she would have been thanking him all throughout the day.

Am I that unimportant in her life?


Sajna re, sajna re
Pyaar se dekh to tu kabhi
Tu hai saagar wohi
Jiski main hoon nadi
Ant mera likha tujh mein hi
Saajna re, saajna re, saajna re...

Saajna re, saajna re, saajna re..


I looked away from the lab, only to see Sanyu, ogling on Parth who was doing Tai-chi. I was furious! I grabbed her wrist and pulled her inside an empty room.

"What the hell do you think you're doing?" I barked.

"What the hell are YOU doing?" she cried in pain. She struggled to get free.

"Dard ho raha hai na? Mujhe isse zyada hota hai jab jab tum uss Parth ko bhaav deti ho"

"Kyun? Kyun fark padta hai itna? Ho kon tum? Mae kya lagti hu tumhari?"

"Sab kuch! Sab kuch ho tum meri" I said, without thinking. She was shocked; she stopped struggling.

I looked at the ground. F**k!, I thought. I, hurriedly, left for my room.

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So this is part one! I hope you like it! It was too filmy right? Chalo, koi na, Let's have a change from my sad, realistic endings 🤣

Gun di, Ab aap banao inhe couple 😛

Waiting for your reviews ... 😳

For the lyrics and song, visit :
http://www.lyricsmint.com/2014/02/saajna-gajendra-verma.html#ixzz30xRsxy9Z

Loads of LoVe

Kriti ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello lovely readers...firstly I'm thankful to my dear Kriti for beaing a sweetheart to lend her words and idea for the song... Thank you and your work is really good which leaves me with loads to make sure I meet your standards...You are an awesome writer my dear...😳⭐️👏

Next I would wish to thank all the readers who appreciated our work...😳

This was my first attempt on a collaboration I hope i succeed...your precious criticism is most welcomed...It helps me perform better... 😆

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She stood there as if she had turned into stone, right there; right then...

Words failed her, she walked up wondering on all the events that her brain registered slowly, he held her, their conversation then HIS LAST WORDS... they echoed in her ears. She felt clueless to what he meant when he said

"Sab kuch! Sab kuch ho tum meri"

She entered her room only to find her roommates fast asleep, sleep which was rather far away from her. She quietly went to the windowsill and sat on it trying to balance herself, maybe her thoughts as she felt dizzy with his words. She felt an uneasy feeling inside her, she was the reason for his behaviour from last few days.

She couldn't digest the facts that suddenly came to her mind, she closed her eyes trying to eliminate these recant thoughts hoping he would return to his usual MCP self. But as soon she shut her eyes, memories of their past came rushing to her mind.

The way he held her every time she lost her balance, the way he secured her, made sure she was not hurt or in trouble...he was there to always help her perform better, like a trigger who always provoked her making sure she gives him a tough competition... Was she her driving force?

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He stood there at the highest point in FITE, feeling low as ever is this the irony of his life? "Always so extreme" he thought

as he gazed towards her hostel still wondering, what happened today...making sure if it was right or not?

Silent as he felt, calmer than ever a smile faintly escaped his lips as he felt content after that moment, finally he managed to calm his rage unknowingly.

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He pressed his lips against her, hers not ready to give in as well, but still she reacted with equal force not ready to lose her battle, even if it was this.

He left her maybe feeling he won, she pushed herself against him with her equal strength again to prove herself.

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She woke up suddenly with a jerk as the thoughts of their first kiss crossed her brain. She felt her cheeks getting warmer, her blood rushing, her heart racing through her chest. Sanyukta made her way to fetch some water to soothe herself. Maybe the remedy was not right...

She needed her answers now...

She was wandering in the dungeon like corridors of the building, not even caring about her fear of dark, escaping the wandering eyes of any watchmen who might catch her sneaking at this hour.

She gasped as she almost checked every place in the campus...

"Where are you, Randhir?" finally concluding the only place he might be at...

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Sun mere dil ki zubaan kahti hai kya tujhe jaane jaa ..
Baithi raho sunti raho seene pe sar rakhe jaane jaa..
Umar bhar bas yunhi saath ho tum mere..
Aur kya mujhe chahiye tum jo ho mere aaghosh mai..

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Over the railing as he finally glimpsed how serene, quiet the campus looked,

"Am I admiring?" he thought maybe it was much lighter now, his eyes saw world with a new perspective , his heart felt an unknown happiness inside...LOVE WAS BLOOMING

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Sanyukta stepped at the last stair as she managed herself over the top, she looked around only to find him engrossed in his thoughts. SHe softly walked up to him, making sure he didn't notice.

Softly she entwined her fingers into his, he didn't look at her...His smile grew wider...

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Mai rahu na tum raho koi kahi na hosh mai..
Umar bhar bas yunhi saath ho tum mere..

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4 am and they both were witnessing a new morning that marked a new sense of belonging in them as she softly leaned her head on his shoulder...converging their sight.

He pressed her hand assuring she finally got her answer...

"Tum bhi mere sab kuch ho"

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I hope I did justice...do leave ur views...i Love reading them :)

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Song...well you must have heard this track in channel v's earleir show ...Humse hai life...

Singer: Gajendra verma

Link: http://mymp3singer.com/download.php?id=16972

😊

Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago
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RES!
SHIT!
No SHIT :P
I am FIRST!!
Yayyy!!
Ummm I will unres tom? pakka!
Just throw a reminder :P
Now am sleepy actually :P
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*Peeks very guiltily*
Kritu I am sorry :'(
Mai bahut gandi hu...tomorrow kehke ek hafta hogaya comment unres nhi kiya :P
But you know I was so busy naa:/
Chal anyway ab mai aagayi!
Par bolu kya?
Gunseerat didi vaah vaah!
Kritu acha likhti hai, eh toh ptaa thaa...
Aap itna acha likhti ho aaj yeh bhi ptaa chal gaya :D
First of all i love the concept...the plot :*
Its damn osum!
And the part where Randhir bursts out, Kyunki tum meri sab kuch ho, sab kuch, was simply dreamy!
*Dreamland*
Hats off Kittu :D
Gunsi di, The way u portrayed feelings ws osum!
The dream sanyu had...aah! #DreamyBlissAgain
Loved it.
Especially the last line where Sanyu says, tum bhi mere sab kuch ho,
AAh!!
Total dreamland update :*
Love you both for this one <3
~Tanya
PS. Kriti, hope I made up for the delay xP
PPS. Krituuu Thanks so much for the dedication! I love you <33
Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Just read both the shots 😆

1st shot:
Miss Tunn, I.e Beli3ve, (ek baat boll tuune anjaane mein tere username mein e ki jaga 3 likhdi n u saw after u confirmed it n then couldn't do anything ya was it planned?)

Okay,.. Kriti! Omg! !! Tu kitthi romantic hain re!!!!
Sachchi mein... the quote just had me paused in front of it gaping at it for 10 mins!
I swear I read the quote 5 times in a go... it is so special for a different reason 😉 😛
N those lines, the introspection n then retrospection was perfect!
Chaa gyi! U are an awesome writer!
This one shot beat ur Memphis n twnbay! 😛
Hands down kudos to the last line!
Wah Kriti ye le meri gift.. 🤗 ❤️


2nd shot:

Gunseerat di,
This is the 1st time im talking to u I guess.. if not forgive me, im an stml patient 😆 😆
But trust me, this the 1st work of urs that im reading n im gonna get back to ur past works asap!
I just loved ur writing style n emotions n everything!
It was treat reading the collab!

Both of you... good job!
👏 👏
Keep writing 😃

Love u more Kriti :* n Gun di.. I love ya too n I said more cuz Kriti n I are so mad that we play this love u more game where ever we go on any ff!

Love,
Nikitha 😳
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A collab and that too by Kriti and Gunseerat!! This is gonna be so wonderful..!!
Why only TS? You guys should definitely write either an SS or an FF...

Agape, ne? The title is so enticing. Gosh! When the title is so alluring then the TS would be epitome of it. I'm so looking forward to it..

Oh! So the genius behind the first part is Kriti. No wonder why it is so magnificent and flawless.
Randhir !!! I feel in love with this guy again after reading the first part. Damn! How can Sanyukta be so lucky and blindfolded all at one??
I'm spell-bound after reading the confrontation. How can you be so creative and express all your thoughts so awesomely with such great precision??Why don't you give CV's a piece of your mind?
I think I'll have to search an apt word for your marvelous work in dictionary cause the more I praise you the more short of words I get.
An inspiration you are to me. With every story you write you only seem to get better..
Even after being the archetype of perfection you never falter to amaze me.
Though I've never heard the song but the lyrics compliments the write-up at its best.

Now, Gunseerat dear, though I might not have read your works but I surely am looking forward to it and expect so much... I really hope the second part comes soon..

--With love
Kajal
Edited by --ScarletRed-- - 11 years ago
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Awosame loved it thanks for pm
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Kriti and Gunseerat Di
VERY NICE TS
Loved it!
Kaash Sanyu ko samajhta ki Randhir has fallen for her!
The way you have penned down this chapter is AWESOME!
Will be waiting for next part
UPDATE SOON



-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates😉
and Love
-Prachi
😊

PS:At least I made it on first page YAY!😃
Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: azina

Awosame loved it thanks for pm


Thank you so much :)
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Kriti...
Really nice
Waiting for next part... .
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Originally posted by: sniggybabes

Kriti...

Really nice
Waiting for next part... .


Thank you so much, Snigdha :D

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