|| Agape || ~ A Ts Collab !! - Page 7

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

2nd part! <3
And that song, I just love it. :)Very nicely written rey. Absolutely loved it.

Originally posted by: anyania

Only one word that is escaping my mouth nd that is perfect. This TS deserves appreciation. Everything is written so flawlessly. Feelings, portrayal depiction is done perfectly with utmost precision. U two hav done a fab job. Looking forward to have another one from u both. -Riya

Originally posted by: barauni

Res

Unres-------

Just read both the shots 😆

1st shot:
Miss Tunn, I.e Beli3ve, (ek baat boll tuune anjaane mein tere username mein e ki jaga 3 likhdi n u saw after u confirmed it n then couldn't do anything ya was it planned?) It was planned..if i would kept it Believe it would have "lie" in it, I didn't want the lie so i kept it Beli3ve.. I'm eshmart, I know 😎

Okay,.. Kriti! Omg! !! Tu kitthi romantic hain re!!!!
Sachchi mein... the quote just had me paused in front of it gaping at it for 10 mins!
I swear I read the quote 5 times in a go... it is so special for a different reason 😉 😛 Hena? I loved that quote too ❤️
N those lines, the introspection n then retrospection was perfect!
Chaa gyi! U are an awesome writer!
This one shot beat ur Memphis n twnbay! 😛 Aww, Thank you so much, Nikki!! :*
Hands down kudos to the last line!
Wah Kriti ye le meri gift.. 🤗 ❤️ I love you more ❤️ 🤗


2nd shot: iske baare me gun di will reply xD

Gunseerat di,
This is the 1st time im talking to u I guess.. if not forgive me, im an stml patient 😆 😆
But trust me, this the 1st work of urs that im reading n im gonna get back to ur past works asap!
I just loved ur writing style n emotions n everything!
It was treat reading the collab!

Both of you... good job!
👏 👏
Keep writing 😃

Love u more Kriti :* n Gun di.. I love ya too n I said more cuz Kriti n I are so mad that we play this love u more game where ever we go on any ff! Lmfao, which looks kinda stupid right now when u put it into words!!

Love,
Nikitha 😳

Originally posted by: aciddaisies

AWWW :D

Originally posted by: priiy

awsmmm...

Originally posted by: suumi

Its too gud 😊

"Kyun? Kyun fark padta hai itna? Ho kon tum? Mae kya lagti hu tumhari?"

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

kriti !!!!!
awesome work yaar !loved it !
Randhir's frustration over Sanyukta is beautifully portrayed here !
and then randir's confession was just wow !!
i simply loved it !

these lines were superb !

<p align="center"><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Kyun? Kyun fark padta hai itna? Ho kon tum? Mae kya lagti hu
tumhari?"</font></p><font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"></font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Sab kuch! Sab kuch ho tum meri"</font>


i loved this quote !!!so beautiful !

<font color="#009966" size="2">"If love were a
color, it would be green. At least for me. But her love is blue, and she's too
cool to see that my envy is just amped up jealousness, and a display of how
much I care about her and want to see her happy, alone, and imprisoned in the
castle of my heart." </font>

awesome yaar !!

Originally posted by: BeLi3Ve

Kirti !!!!

Thank you so very much yar!! Means a lot !!

I'm glad you liked it :D

Loads of LoVe ❤️

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Part 2!

Firstly how I am glad you updated really quickly!!!!!

I love fast updates😆

Anyways, this song is also beautiful!! I have never heard of Gajendra Verma before, but I think you both might have just got me addicted...

I really loved how you managed to incorporate the song in the part 2! I didn't seem like an aside, it fitted it! Loved that!

Those bubbling of raw emotions and that concluding scene was just perffeeectt! Loved it!!

What a beautiful ending!

Love,

Pari