SanDhir FF In Ur Armz I Found Solace UPDATED Chapter-5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my 1st FF,infact i have never written even a small OS,this is the 1st time m writing any story/prose...😆
So this one is a small one.
will continue it only if itz liked by u all.plz ignore my silly mistakes in it.Hope u all like it.😊

Index
Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 2
Chapter 3 - Page 4
Chapter 4 - Page 6
Chapter 5 - Page 7
Chapter 6 - Page 8

In Ur Armz I Found Solace - Chapter 1

And there I was,standing on the edge of cliff...I didnt even knew i had reached there..lost in my own thoughts.

It was a foggy day,with zero visiblity around me.Filled with fog and clouds,the hills were barely visible.Yes I was at a hillstation,one of the most beautiful hill stations-Lonavala.
People there were enjoying the beauty,having fun quivering in the cold waves.The surroundings had utmost romantic veiw and the couples were hugging and cuddling so as to take the full enjoyment of the ambience.

Lost in my own thoughts,i had walked down the lane to a point where there was only fog and fog everywhere.no one could see me,nor i could see anyone.
Tears had filled my eyes and it ws even more difficult for me to see anything.Though there were so many people out there,my mind was in its own world and i couldnt even hear any voice.

I was not in a mood to enjoy anything and so was walking randomly alone anywhere on the Tiger's point.So much had happend in the past few weeks.Sudden death of my father,followed by drastic decrease in my grades.And then the one whom I had loved since my childhood broke my heart.all this in a span of hardly 20days.I,Sanyukta, a girl whom everyone thought to be a ever-smiling sweet simple yet matured girl,was shattered beyond control.My heart couldnt bear so much pain all at once.

Slowly and a kinda sub-consciously I was walking on that little wet ground,and thus had unknowingly reached there-at the edge .Suddenly i felt one of my feet was in air,there wasnt any ground below it.I had crossed the edge,and beyond it was a cliff which was atleast 600 feets deep.I couldnt understand what was happening.I was about to fall.I shut my eyes having the fear of falling.Within a fraction of a second the whole flashback of my life had come in front of my eyes.

All of a sudden a hand firmly grabbed my waist and dragged me up back to safety.
The hand was still there around my waist so as to assure that i was safe now.
By this time,my heart was beating at a speed beyond imagination,moreover I was falling short of breath.yet i slowly opened my eyes to see my who saved me.
And there he was - Radhir Singh Shekhawat - a collegue-a classmate - a Hi-hello-bye kinda friend..And now-my Saviour.

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moonkmh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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piya diii..u finally decided to post it..lovely.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...this is so so cute <3
I love the way you described everything.
Itni detail mei likhti ho its almost as if we are there standing and watching the scene.
lovely 👏
Sanyu's description 😭 bechari.
but then she found her saviour her solace 😃
enter randhir singh shekhawat.
i remembered the line hero ki entry humesha end mei hoti hai seeing his entry 😆

p.s sorry i didnt comment earlier :P was kinda busy elsewhere 😉

anyhow..this was a lovely read :) add me to the pm list and update soon :)

love,
ari:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

piya diii..u finally decided to post it..lovely.


Thnkz😊
well i was scared to post it,thinking there r soo many here ...
but then i thot i should give it a try here!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--

Awww...this is so so cute <3
I love the way you described everything.
Itni detail mei likhti ho its almost as if we are there standing and watching the scene.
lovely 👏
Sanyu's description 😭 bechari.
but then she found her saviour her solace 😃
enter randhir singh shekhawat.
i remembered the line hero ki entry humesha end mei hoti hai seeing his entry 😆

p.s sorry i didnt comment earlier :P was kinda busy elsewhere 😉

anyhow..this was a lovely read :) add me to the pm list and update soon :)

love,
ari:)


M glad u liked it!!!😊
Shall i update today itself???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow an awesome strting...
Many emotions r filled in ua writin...
Lukd it da way it is..
Would luv to read furthr..
Do continue..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey update soon nd will uh plz pm me...😃😊😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prarthana7

wow an awesome strting...
Many emotions r filled in ua writin...
Lukd it da way it is..
Would luv to read furthr..
Do continue..


will be updating today😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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In Ur Arms I Found Solace - Chapter 2


He had grabbed me in order to cease me from tripping out off the cliff..Now i was in his arms and even amidst of all this mess,i found solace.I in Randhir's arms,is it true,or is it just a dream!!!

Randhir had been my classmate since i had moved to Pune,when I was in 9th standard.and then in college too he was in my batch.We mostly sat on the adjacent bench.I had known him since past 6 years.But then,he was Randhir,a guy whom every girl would wanna date.He was rich,smart,handsome,a perfect prince charming of every girl's dream.N i knew i was almost invisible to him since i have known him.

But at this moment everything was absolutely different from the old days.He held me for a while,n then moved me to a more comfortable place...A tear had trickeled down my face on his hand.He gazed me for a while n then said -"Whats wrong with U,Sanyu?Are u in ur proper senses??were u just wandering and reached the edge accidently?or was it intentionaly?"..He had bombarded me with the obvious questions anyone would asked in this situation.He sounded concerned,his eyes narrowed and his eyebrows had formed crease between them.

I was dumbstruck at that moment.I had never thought that he,the Randhir Singh Shekhawat,would have ever saved me.Moreover his sense of concernedness was striking me.Gulping the feeling of shock I tried to speak.
"I dont remember how i reached here.I have come to Lonavala with my friends.Weather was nice n so everyone was having fun out there.I wanted to move away from the noise,so i drifted away from that crowdy place,but dont know how i reached here"
My hands were still trembling and my voice was shaking.Was it due to the cold weather,or it was due to shock of the inciedent..i too dint knew the answer...maybe it was due to both.

Sensing me in state of shock,he moved towards me n held my hands in his..I could feel their warmth.Looking into my eyes he gave a small nod and said "Dont worry,u are safe now,away from the edge.lets go back to where ur friends are". And still holding my hand in his,he took me to my friends.

Seeing us coming togather holding Hand-in-Hand,my friends were awestruck.ofcourse,how can a guy like Randhir roam with me at such a romantic place.My friends were moving towards me,n watching that i slowly left Randhir's hand n went to my friends."Where were u??we had been searching for u since so much time..Atleast u should have informed us that u are going away from this place." all my friends bulleted me tons of questions as to where i had been.And one of them whispered in my ear "lucky u Sanyu,roaming with Randhir in a romantic weather like this is worth getting lost in this beautiful valley " n she winked at me after saying this.I dint knew how to react.

Feeling that now m safe,Randhir started to leave from there.He gave a brief nod to me n started walking towards the other side so as to go to his friends.I thought for a while n felt that m forgetting something very important at that moment.All of sudden i realised what i had forgotten.I left the place where my friends were standing,and went to Randhir.Facing him I stared for a while n then said "I know words r few n can never be equal to what u did to me today.Yet i want to say Randhir - Thank You..Thanks for being there where even I was not in my own self" ...

He blinked at me,n smiled...oh his million dollars smile.. on which hundreds of girls had their head-over-heels.and for the 1st time after so many days,i smiled too.
He might not be my prince charming,but by now he had become my knight-with-the-shining-armour...Ofcourse,i owed my life to him now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
I just loved the beginning...
Randhir helped her... Uff..!!
And chapter two... Aww.. I love the way he was concerned for her..
Update the next chapter ASAP...
Will be eagerly waiting...
Love,
Shalini

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