$@NdHiR OS: That One hug..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys... Shalini here.. I'm back with another OS. I really don't know why I felt like writing this. I hope you guys like it.. And Yaa this OS is dedicated to all the sandhir fans...
Thank you so much guys.. Your comments always makes me smile. Happy reading..!!!



$@NdHiR OS: That one hug..!!



A girl who always dressed up in normal kurti and patiyala... All of sudden wore a tacky red chudidar with matching accessories and walked in the corridors of FITE. This was strange for everyone around who watched her go...From the top bindi...to the bottom anklets she had all those accessories a girl wears. But what was so special today... Nothing...!!! All the girls around stared at her like an alien from other planet. While all boys were gawking at her beauty. She looked extremely pretty. Wait something was missing... What was it..??? It was her smile. Her face looked pale and dull. But today she looked different. When every other boy was lost in her beauty only one noticed her being sad and dull. It was none other than parth her new-bestie. As she passed he followed her and stopped her.

" hey.. Sanyuktha..!!! Hmm... Is everything okay..?? You look sad.." asked parth.

"oh sorry..!! hi parth.. I didn't see you... Hmm... It's just that I'm not used to this kind of dressing.. Im filling suffocated with all this stuff..." replied sanyuktha in a low voice.
Parth knew about randhir's condition.. But he sensed something wrong. He felt leaving her alone for sometime is the only way she could find some peace.He decided to ask her later that what was troubling her so much.. That she looked so sad.. And kept quite without asking anything as She needs some time alone.

" oh..!! Okay... I gotta go.. I have to submit my assignment.. See you later.." said parth and left.

Soon she entered the mechanical lab where randhir was already working on her father's factory blue prints and those models. He heard the sound of the anklets and guessed it was sanyuktha. She slowly walked and stood beside randhir keeping her bag on the table. And stared at the model in front of her. Today she didnt even fight him or either taunted him. Randhir also sensed something wrong.. I mean how can Ms. Agarwal didn't taunt him or fight with him.

" now... You look like a girl... This is how you actually have to get dressed up and be calm... And behave like a girl. Its so pleasant.. When you don't shout and yell at others... This is how you should be agarwal..!!" said randhir expecting her to fight back on his taunt. But she neither fought back nor gave a angry look. She was just staring at the model in front of her.

" stop staring at this model Ms. agarwal and get to work..!!! " said randhir sounding a bit harsh. But still she react in anyway.

She came out of her deep thoughts and took a pencil and tried to Concentrate on the Blue prints. But she want able to oncentrate...She didn't know how to react she felt
Like crying at that moment... tears made their way out...

*FLASHBACK*One hour back:

She was getting ready in her room cursing randhir at the same time for this stupid condition. I mean seriously what is he upto..?? What will he get if i get dressed up like a typical girl and behave like girl..!! Uff..!!!She wore a red chudidar... Anklets... Matching bangles.. Slight make up and all the other accessories. She gave a final look and was about to go to her class when she heard her phone ring... She was so happy to see the caller ID. It was showing Maa Calling...

" hello maa... Kaissi ho..??? Acha maa.. Aap samaj lo ki papa ke factory ka problem solve hogaya... Ab Mein jaldi se sab kuch tekh kar dungi...!!" said sanyuktha in a go.

"maa.. Aap jawab kyun nahi de rahe ho..?? Kya hua maa..?? Maa.." asked sanyuktha... She heard her mom sobbing.

" maa.. Kya hua..?? Aap ro kyun rahe hai..?? Bolo maa..??" asked sanyu again going restless...

" woh... Sa..nyu.. Tumhare papa Bahut pareshaan teh aur sab office log bar bar call karke tang kar rahe teh.. Aur Tumhare papa ko heart attack aa Gaya...!!!" said her mom still sobbing.

" wat...??? Heart attack..!!"

He dropped her phone. Immediately she started crying... She realised her mom was on line and picked her phone and spoke..

" maa..!!! Papa tekh hai na... Kuch serious toh nahi na... Maa.. Mein Abhi pouhach thi houn...!!" said sanyu and was about to cut the call when she heard her mom say

" nahi.. Nahi sanyu.. Kuch serious nahi hai.. Bas thoda minor heart attack tha.. Par tum yaha math aao.. Kyun ki papa ne bola ki tujhe kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye.. Bas tu joh bhi kar Rahi hai.. Jaldi kar..."

" tekh hai... Mein jald se jald Kaam pura Karoongi.. Aur maa.. Papa ka dyaan rakna.. Aur aap bhi..!!" said sanyu and hanged out.

She cried and cried... Immediately got up washed her face got ready and started to mechanical lab.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*


Her tears made their way out and started sobbing silently. Tears drops fell on the papers in front of her. Randhir pulled those papers from her and spoke.

" what's wrong with you Agarwal..?? Kuch toh Kaam karo.. I'm helping you it doesn't mean that you won't do any work.. Now hurry up... " and started to draw on the paper.. Just then he observed tear drops on the paper and looked at sanyuktha to conform whether she is crying. And was shocked.. She was actually crying.. Infact literally crying... Her eyes were blood red.. Her nose and cheeks be came red.

" sanyuk..." he tried to call her.. When suddenly she hugged him tight. He felt her warm fresh tears wetting his shirt. He slowly embraced her in his arms trying to console her by caressing her back... She felt some secure feeling in his arms as if assuring her that everything is going to be okay.. He too hugged her tight.

" sanyuktha... Kya hua why are you crying is everything okay..??" asked randhir still hugging her.

" rand..hir.. Woh... Papa ko heart attack..!! I'm scared randhir.. Papa is very tensed..." said sanyuktha still crying badly.

" oh my god..!! Sanyuktha first you stop crying.. And tell me is your dad okay..?? Is anything serious.." asked randhir.

" no.. Randhir.. Luckily it was just a minor attack.. Par papa... Woh.."

" sanyuktha relax... I said please relax kuch nahi hoga..." said randhir breaking the hug.

" woh.. I'm sorry randhir..!! I'm very sorry mein thoda..." only when she was cut by him.

" ssshhh...!!! Don't be sorry.. Relax..!!" saying this randhir kissed her forehead and cupped her cheeks.

" sanyuktha.. Nothing will happen.. Your papa will be fine.. We both will work together and solve your dad's factory problem.. Don't worry I'm with you"

Sanyuktha couldn't believe her ears... Randhir Singh shekawath was consoling her and is ready to work with her for the first time. Actually randhir Singh shekawath... THE MCP..!! Was this caring towards her. For the second time again sanyuktha realised that randhir had a soft corner towards her. She immediately wiped her tears and got back to work.first time was when randhir helped parth in his personal problem.

" Accha.. Wait I'll just be back.. I have to get some papers.." saying this be excused himself and came out of the mechanical lab.

" oh god..!! Wat was wrong with me..?? I consoled sanyuktha... I mean why wasnt I able to control my emotions.. Why can't I see her cry...??" he thought and went ahead to his room to get some important papers.


~THE END~
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Phew..!! I really don't know I felt like writing this... I couldn't see sanyuktha crying like that in yesterday's episode.. I hope you guys like it... Pls do like n comment... Eagerly waiting for your response..

Lots of love,
Shalini

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Harita1309 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayayayayayay!!!!!!
dis is definitely my lucky day...coz shaluuu gt to cmnt first on ur os😛
i jus luv dat title..."dat one hug"❤️...awww i wanna hug u fr hundred times fr dat title🤗
n huh d red dress😃..actually shalu urs is a very gud choice u know coz honestly i felt it wud hav been gud if sanyu wore red on show lso..but its okie she luked really beautiful today😳
n Parth he is truly a frnd of Sanyu👍🏼...i hope there won't be any hurdles in their relation😕
n omg!!! heart attack😒 i pity sanyu's mother😭...
n here comes my most fav fav fav part😉
dat one hug...
i still can't believe she hugged him...which means his presence was a solace to her😊
she felt safe in his arms...awww u sent me to sandhir land at once wid dose lines honey
n wattt he kissed her???...u know wat i read it thrice to confirm if i read it correct n yes it is true🥳...this is awesome,shalu u really imagine such sweet things dear❤️
n thank goddd...he questioned himself in d end...now he shud definitely answer to dat question!!!
but seriously Randhir Singh Shekhawat claims to be a genius all d time but couldn't he figure out such small thing...😡
shalu tell dat idiot dat he is in love wid Sanyukta Agarwal...😛
u hav jus outdone urself shalu👏

Edited by Anamika1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...sit !! me second harita ahhh😡
hey shalu...
wow!!! awesome update dear...
and HUG was damn cute...and sweet...
loved the way randhir consoled her...
hmm language..is fab as usual...
u penned it beautifully and perfectly...
overall an amazing update...
thanks for the pm!!!
love,harika..keep smilng..it looks good on you...
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jsnxhs

^^^Well mujhe ress likhna chaiye tha
Lekin itna tym nai tha 🤣
Lagatar commnt aajate
Thank god m atleast Third

N the os!!!
Haawww'!!!!
So awesome!!!
Loved it so much!! 😳

At the start the way you described sanyu
Was too easy to imagine!

And then parth n sanyu scene!
I was so happy she was not able to share with parth
But she did it with randhir 😃 😊

The flashback was also good !

Den sandhir scene!!!

Sanyu started crying n randhir consoled
Her !
Their hug .
Beautiful!!
N at last randhir wondering why he consoled
Sanyu 😆

I wish aisa kuch hota show mein 😆. 😛

U describe it efficiently !
It was damn easy to imagine!!! 👏
Ur os made my day 😃

Do write more shalini ⭐️
Edited by Awesome-blossom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What would I do to see that one hug in the show !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aaar, these troubled children with their egos🤪... Lol, rant aside!

Amazing OS! And realistic tooo!!!

Do write more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shalini right? Wow simply wow! This was so amazing! I loved it! The way you described sanyu's pain was really heart wrenching! I liked the fact that she didnt confide in to parth but told randhir immediately! Loved this OS! Do write more! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kash aisa kuch show mein hota...but ur OS fulfilled my wishes!
Fantabulous!!!!
Language, emotions perfect!
And the hug made me drool! Dying to see a sandhir hug...so reading abt it made me calm!
Well done sis!
Love u <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing os ...
well done :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so so so beautiful one...

Awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey shalu di!!
Wat an os di!! It's really awesome!!
The way randhir consoled sanyu was really awesome!!
Great work di!! Nd very well written!!
I also liked d hug!!
Keep writing di!! U r one of my fav writer!! Keep writing!!
Thanks 4 d pm di!! Really it was a very nice os!!

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