SanDhir Collab FF: Hum Tum*Chapter One Updated* - Page 5

Originally posted by: Gargi.swaron

Damn my stupid net!!!😡I was really hoping AND hopping to grab d first position...

Anyway, another collab on d forum, not to mention from two very adorable n proficient writers😃Wonder girl,u surely r showering us with updates these days (not that v complain)Sandhir stuck up in a library at night,gives ur mind hell lot of ideas, does it not??😉let d sparks fly unreservedly n I'll b more than happy!!!

Brilliant concept, m bursting with curiosity to c how u guys execute it,without stretching d story much...only a few hours of a night put into a FF is very intriguing n even more of an arduous task I must say...waiting for d first chapter, update soon😊

Originally posted by: barauni

Hey nice prologue.
Update soon n do pm me.
Ty for d pm.

Originally posted by: Drama_Writer

hey bhagwanji... please let the sparks fly.. JALDI!!!!

sparks toh hone hi hein... update karne ki duty ab tumhari1😛

update soon! waiting!

Originally posted by: anyania

Its an awesome one. The story seems mind blowing. Their convo was quite hilarious. And we know sandhir are the best so we can imagine the whole situation infront of us being dramatised. Fabulous writing. Update soon.

I am so confused...why does os of the week winner underestimate herself so much? is this some new trick to gain compliments? you'll get that anyways sweetheart 😆[ I know this irked you a lot. haha and I loved doing it 🤣]

Coming to the collab. I seriously loved the idea.! Amazing job both of you. Firstly I loves the title hum tum. no haddi. only hum tum 😳 and then the prologue was penned down very creatively. sanyus craziness for machines and their first meet was interesting very interesting 😆 koi kitna bhi badal jaye MCP remains MCP only *sighs*

Originally posted by: --Ari--

I am so confused...why does os of the week winner underestimate herself so much? is this some new trick to gain compliments? you'll get that anyways sweetheart 😆[ I know this irked you a lot. haha and I loved doing it 🤣]

Coming to the collab. I seriously loved the idea.! Amazing job both of you. Firstly I loves the title hum tum. no haddi. only hum tum 😳 and then the prologue was penned down very creatively. sanyus craziness for machines and their first meet was interesting very interesting 😆 koi kitna bhi badal jaye MCP remains MCP only *sighs*

Overall fab job with the story and the prologue so far. Very curious to see what they both do ;) ;) Update soon.

Love,

ari :)

*phew* one down..god knows how many more to go 🤣

p.s one problem though. too short it was. aage se bada bada likhna 😉

Originally posted by: KReyAS

awsom strt

loved it

thnx fr pm

cont soon

Originally posted by: Awesome-blossom

Awesome prologue 👍🏼
Seems intrsting :D
Update asap ⭐️

everyones turning into a sadist *sighs* kuch karna padhega before this forum turns into sadism forum from SH forum 🤣

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Hey awesome prologue tanya and zoya..!!!
I love to read more...
Loved the title...
Abhi jaldi se first part update kardo..
Love
Shalini