SanDhir OS : Jee Le Zaraa - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
hey!!!
it was awesome and emotional😭
u penned it perfectly and the song was just awesome 😃😃
loved the song
no words spell bound!!!👏👏👏
thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank god this time u pm me😉...it was really a emotional OS😭...i especially liked the Background song's idea...the song was giving the actual response...i didn't cry but my eyes became teary...
your stories has something which always forces me to comment as I don't comment easily( u can say that rarely things can impress me or i am lazy🥱)...In nutshel I loved ur OS😳...please do write a hot OS especially for me☺️...please...I just simply want a lot of romance or a High Voltage romance😉...hope u will write😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Nice... be back with detailed comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
love u 2 dear!! 🤗 🤗 n its all ur efforts!! 😊 keep writing n exams r nt cumng now...i was ol always but u were off..:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MitraAvinash

Sonia, let me start off by taking a deep breath, otherwise I might choke in the middle.

Ohk :) am waiting ... lol

When I got your PM, I thought I'd read it later but something, some unnameable instinct, struck me and I opened the link.

Hawww 😲 you thought of reading MY PM later :x
See, isse kehte hai dil ka connection ... you simply can't avoid me 🤣

I had tears in my eyes even before I started reading the story because I read the first line and it had my name in it. An OS, dedicated to me. There started my tears and they still haven't stopped.

Awe ... i had no intention to make you teary *sorry*

This happens to be my all-time favourite song and Aamir-Rani are my favourite actors from the world of movies. I paused before I read the OS, switched on my playlist which has the song on loop and then started.

Same pich 😵 Jee le zaraa is mine too favorite. But Aamir and Rani aren't 🥱

How is it that a child changes lives? Why does a memory of happy times bring tears to our eyes? Such questions have no answers and still you managed to answer them through this OS. I know that you are a happy person, and I'm really glad about that, but there was a flow of personal anguish in your words this time. I felt as though you were writing about something you are actually a witness to.

Waise i haven't witnessed anything such till date ...
But i have read something similar "
TR OS ~*~ Cant Afford To Loose U ~*~ "
My OS is nothing compared to hers ... i literally cried after reading it ...


I know that Talaash had a similar theme and the song sequence is magical as it is but I don't give a damn. This is YOUR work and I will remember it only for you.

Thank you Mitra 🤗 it means a lot *hugs and kisses* ;)

Some friends bond over a decade of memories, some over a memory of decades. I feel that we have bonded over words, love and care. That is enough for me. If the virtual world were real, I would have declared you as my Maid of Honour for whenever the day comes. Since it is not, all I can say I that I love you too <3
- Love
Mitra



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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
As promised I am back with my detailed comments.

It was really beautiful. You portrayed both of their emotions n pain very nicely. I have not seen the movie 'Talaash'. But it looks lik to me the reverse version o old classic Abhimaan starring Amitabh and Jaya... the difference is that in your story hero felt himself guilty for loss of their child and in movie heroine felt herself guilty. And another difference was that Randhir Sanyukta had lost grown up kids of 4 years but in movie the couple had still born. But the pain of losing the child... feeling one partner guilty and distance himself/herself from his/her spouse... everything I felt was same. Too good to put in words.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awesome OS Di !!! 👏

Poor SanDhir Lost their SanDhir 😭

Loved it ❤️

But hoping to read a longer Os next time !!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
I was jotting down ideas for an OS a few days ago and then this song started to play on my iPod so I derived an idea from it too. :p I loved yours, it was beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Talash movie I like it...

Imaging sandhir in the place of rani, and amir..awesome


I can imagine their faces their emotions...their hiddend tears from each other...

But at last when u mention randhir in hospital and sanyu running like hell to reach him is just amazing dear...

The confession was lovely...I wish sandhir couldmbe see the parents like missing him so much...


Just make me emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome update...
Loved the song inspired OS
love the short but hearttouching story

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