SanDhir OS : Jee Le Zaraa

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This One Shot (OS) is dedicated to Safrena ( forevermine ) and Mitra ( MitraAvinash )

Happy Reading 😊

SanDhir OS : Jee Le Zaraa



Randhir and Sanyukta were married and were blessed with a boy child Sandhir. The small sweet family were leading a happy go life, till that dreadful incident in which they lost their child Sandhir happen.

[MUSIC]

Randhir and Sanyukta both are working in a renowned Motor Company. After that accident both never spoke much. Both live in same house, work in same company... but still behaved like acquaintances.

Main Hoon Gumsum Tu Bhi Khaamosh Hai
Sach Hai Samay Ka Hi Sab Dosh Hai

Dhadkan Dhadkan Ik Gham Rehta Hai
O.. Jaane Kyun Phir Bhi Dil Kehta Hai..

Jee Le Zaraa.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Kehta Hai Dil.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Aye Humsafar Aye Hum Nawaan
Aa Paas Aa Jee Le Zaraa

[MUSIC]


Randhir 's life is in turmoil since his 4-year-old son, Sandhir, met with an accident recently during a family outing. Sanyukta is still grieving and Randhir has developed a guilt complex. Randhir blame himself for the death of his son. He believes it was cause of his carelessness, they lost Sandhir.

Hai Zindagi Maana Dardbhari Phir Bhi Issme Yeh Raahat Bhi Hai..

Main Hoon Tera Aur Tu Hai Meri Yun Hi Rahein Hum Yeh Chaahat Bhi Hai..

Phir Dil Ke Dil Se Pool Kyun Toote Hain
Kyun Hum Jeene Se Itne Roothe Hain

Aa Dil Ke Darwaaje Hum Kholen
O.. Aa Hum Dono Jee Bhar Ke Ro Le..

Jee Le Zaraa.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Kehta Hai Dil.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Aye Humsafar Aye Hum Nawaan
Aa Paas Aa Jee Le Zaraa

[MUSIC]


Randhir remembers all those moments spent with Sanyukta and Sandhir. The days spent laughing and hanging around. He remembered his happy wife ... who always carried a smiling face. Lately, he always find her crying in remembrance of Sandhir. He wanted to console her, take her into his arms ... but his guilt ... he had no guts to face her.

Gham Ke Yeh Baadal Guzar Jaane De Ab Zindagi Ko Nikhar Jaane De

Chod De Ab Yaadon Ke Dukh Sehna
O.. Sun Bhi Le Jo Dil Ka Hai Kehna

Jee Le Zaraa.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Kehta Hai Dil.. Jee Le Zaraa..
Aye Humsafar Aye Hum Nawaan
Aa Paas Aa Jee Le Zaraa..


Sanyukta was standing near the window looking at the dark sky. It reminded her of something; something her life had turned into Dark . But at least the sky wasn't alone. It had stars that shined, that made it's beauty glow. Their was no light or glow that shined her life. She walked silently downstairs wiping her tears. She knew he wasn't here. She could have felt if he was. But he wasn't.

She felt the sudden mood of the room change. She felt a sudden fear. Her heart started aching, and without her permission tears started to flow. Her heart started beating at a unpredictable rate. She felt something was wrong. Her heart was yelling at her. Something's wrong!!!

Her sobs got louder when she answered the call she got. Before she knew it her feet was dragging her. Sanyukta ran as fast as she could but she felt it wasn't fast enough. She ran down the isolated road. Her cries and wails loud in the dark quiet road. She was running up the steep and curvy road. Her feet was giving up. She couldn't see anymore. She wiped the tears, but they kept flowing. As she ran, she tripped, her shoes broke but that didn't stop her from running. No one can stop her. Their was no taxi to be found, all Sanyukta could do was run. She finally reached the hospital.

She saw him sleeping there on the bed peacefully. He was bandaged on his head. She was having tears in her eyes seeing his condition. She felt some peace knowing he is safe. She went near him... sat beside on the chair.

Randhir opened his eyes feeling her presence. He saw her teary eyes and felt like someone stabbed him with knife. He slowly raise his hand and wipe her tears.

Randhir : I'm sorry Sanyukta ... for my behavior till now. But i promise you I will never leave u alone from now.

She looked at him.

Sanyukta : I love you Randhir!

Randhir saw Sanyukta smiling with tears in her eyes.

Randhir : I Love you too Sanyukta!

Saying that Randhir hugs Sanyukta. They hug for a long time. Randhir broke the hug and took her face between his palm. He kissed her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks and nose. Her eyes were tightly closed. In no time, he sealed her lips with his. First he kissed her softly. As Sanyukta responded the kiss turn to passionate one. He held her from her waist and Sanyukta moved her hand into his hairs. They kissed each other so passionately making each other feel that how much they loved each other.

::Done::

OS inspired from the song Jee Le Zaraa from the Movie Talaash staring Aamir Khan, Rani Mukerjee sung by Vishal Dadlani.

For a long time i wanted to write on an emotional stuff. After reading Safrena's ~love never fails~ A SanDhir OS and followed by Mitra's Daffodils:SanDhir OS ... i couldn't stop myself from writing this.

I very much know this is nothing in front of those amazing OS which i love to my core ❤️

Saffy and Mitra ... this is for you. *hope you at least Like this*
Love you both ❤️
🤗 Miscellaneous

And at this moment, i would also like to Thank Ayesha < Ayesha_Kreya > (My best n first friend in IF). She is the one who insisted me to write on SanDhir...

Ayesha
, my Sony... we don't talk much these days, as you are busy with your exams...
I miss you a lot and i love you ❤️ 🤗
Miscellaneous



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Hearts SanDhir OS : Honeymoon

Hearts SanDhir OS : Falak Tak Chal

Hearts SanDhir OS : Kiss of Love

Hearts SanDhir OS : Dream or Reality ?!?

Hearts SanDhir OS : A night out from FITE

Hearts OS : A Day with Param aka Randhir

Love ❤️ 🤗 Miscellaneous
Sonia 😊

Edited by Anysia - 11 years ago


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ronojoy_ria thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
hi
the os is really touchy
sanyukta and randhir both are a couple but they were parents of a boy
who they lost
the pain the agony though kept them away from each other but finally their emotions l came out

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sonia, let me start off by taking a deep breath, otherwise I might choke in the middle.
When I got your PM, I thought I'd read it later but something, some unnameable instinct, struck me and I opened the link. I had tears in my eyes even before I started reading the story because I read the first line and it had my name in it. An OS, dedicated to me. There started my tears and they still haven't stopped. This happens to be my all-time favourite song and Aamir-Rani are my favourite actors from the world of movies. I paused before I read the OS, switched on my playlist which has the song on loop and then started.
How is it that a child changes lives? Why does a memory of happy times bring tears to our eyes? Such questions have no answers and still you managed to answer them through this OS. I know that you are a happy person, and I'm really glad about that, but there was a flow of personal anguish in your words this time. I felt as though you were writing about something you are actually a witness to. I know that Talaash had a similar theme and the song sequence is magical as it is but I don't give a damn. This is YOUR work and I will remember it only for you.
Some friends bond over a decade of memories, some over a memory of decades. I feel that we have bonded over words, love and care. That is enough for me. If the virtual world were real, I would have declared you as my Maid of Honour for whenever the day comes. Since it is not, all I can say I that I love you too <3
- Love
Mitra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!! i.d.k. wht to say...i mean...it was FABULOUS!!!! kya bg music diya hai...wah!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS was great. Really cool.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i actually played d song and imagined sandhir nd sandhir in white
so cute os
lovd it
u r amazing
gud job
aww poor sandhir...dere bby is dead sad
Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such An Emotional One sonia Di
It was lovely reading it
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey sonia...u wouldnt believe just a few days i ws reading a novel, about a couple, who had a miscarriage, n after that their love, their care for each other...just...disappeared! The guy thought it ws his responsibility now to stand strong for his wife, n so, didnt shed a single tear for their unborn angel...he didnt share his grief with anyone, let alone his wife...it ws like, nothing happened...he just became silent...almost like a stone...but he ws always there for his wife, be it medicines, or the hospital rounds...but this had an opposite effect on his wife...she thought he blamed her for their childs death...she started living in guilt, n as a result, went into depression...they had a divorce...after which, not being able to bear the pain of losing both her child n husband, she committed suicide!! But before going away, she kept a letter for her husband where she shared her pain, her tears, her sadness, her fears...everything!! N then, the dam of his tears broke, then he realized his folly...n though he performed her rites, he ws in oblivion of everythn happening around him!! One could see the storm in his eyes...n though he remarried, that too coz that ws his wifes last wish...he ws always hers...he shared his body, his house, his wealth, everything wid his new wife...but his heart, his mind, his soul, n everythn that ws of substance...belonged to his princess, who ws buried six feet under!!
N now, this os...call me a sadist, if u will...but i wanted a similar ending...i loved both the above mentioned os's...n couldnt help wanting a similar tragic ending...not that i dnt like this one...i love this one...thank god, both came out of their haze of losing sandhir, n instead of wallowing in grief alone, n decided to help the other one to get over this tragedy!! Thats what love is!! Brilliant os!!👏

P.s. If u can find it in u to write a tragic os, plz plz pm me, cz im a sucker for tragedies...n u gotta believe it, some of the worlds greatest love stories are tragedies...romeo n juliet, heer ranjha, antony n cleopatra...so, plz write one!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES

kamini u too joined d list of sadist...lol!! Will pakka unres tom!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i felt like crying...its mindblowinggg...

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