SanDhir OS : Jee Le Zaraa - Page 3

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya

nyc one :)

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Kreya

love u 2 dear!! 🤗 🤗 n its all ur efforts!! 😊 keep writing n exams r nt cumng now...i was ol always but u were off..:(

Originally posted by: forevermine

Sonin i know i have resed somewhere but i don care...coz rite now it taken me so long to think of a possible commment..!!!
coz honest i love the song... i hv connect with this song...and it reminded me of shit..!!! 🤣

but ur writtenn... hw cum u improve everytime i read something written by u?

this OS went exactly along with the song...and the song playin in the background was like an icing on the cake..!!
finally i got the time to pen down my tot about this OS..!

not exactly something that would have made me cry !!!
but this track was a perfect mixture of both the memories and pain of death that one face losing some one...!!!

the tot of that makes one feel nothn around them is happy!! the dying Sanyukta...not literally ur smart enough!!🤣 beautifully portrayed...!!!

the Guilt of Randhir and the Sad Sanyu makes him unable to even console his wife...!!
the trauma and guilt and sadness...all in one...but this one had a story which was definately different for all the other OS i have read.. so hats off for thinking of such a brillaint and outstanding idea...!!!

Ohmygod i donno wad to say babes srsly...i love u for this dedication honest... not only because of the song u wrote it one but because of the awe-struck words penned it with..>!!!
make me want to an OS but in my own dreams 🤣 🤣 🤣 hahahahah!!!!

absolutely made my day...and ur such a sweet heart advertising my crap work as well!!!

Yours was an awesome OS ...
Trust me, i loved it to my core ❤️

I want you to write more ...
not now, after your exams ...
Remember? you have promised me to try one for me...

hahahahaa!!!!! do writemore and keep dedicating lol!!!! jk!!! 🤣 🤣 like i said i hv a ego huger than all of us put togther!!!! 🤣 🤣

regards

safrena!!!!

Now its time for me think wat to reply ...lol

Am so so glad that you liked it ...
This was my first try on this genre ... and possibly will be my last too ...
don't know Mitra asked me too try once more... am not kinda sure about it ...

love you ❤️ 🤗

Originally posted by: forevermine

Soni...u hv STML so u were supposed to forgt abt it...!!!!
I never tot im gnna write sumthnn ever agen!!! :P

Well yea u should try agen... u didnt actually mke me senti bt ur writin was beautiful...it was d song dat did!!

Nt ever genre is gnna be ur strenght... u cn be a perfection in every gerne... and sad stories need time...

bt neithertheless i luved it!! :)